专题限时集训(二十九) 读后续写(Ⅱ)
A (2019·浙江绍兴质检)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
When I arrived at 6 a.m.in the large hospital kitchen,Rose was already checking
name tags on the trays(托盘).
“ Hi , I'm Janet ,” I tried to sound cheerful , although I already knew Rose's
reputation for being impossible to work with. “ I'm scheduled to work with you this
week.”
Rose stopped what she was doing and peered over her reading glasses.I could tell
from her expression that she wasn't pleased to see a student worker.
“What do you want me to do?Start with the coffee?”I asked.
Rose coldly nodded and went back to checking name tags.
I filled the 40cup pot with water and began making the coffee when Rose yelled,
“That's not the way to make coffee.”She stepped in and took over.
Nothing I did pleased her.All morning , her eagle eyes missed nothing and her
sharp words hurt me.
Totally exhausted,I trudged the six blocks home late that June afternoon.As a third
year university student working my way through school,I had never before met anyone
like Rose.
Fighting back tears,I wrestled with my dilemma alone in my room.“What shall I
do?”The answer caught me completely by surprise—I needed to love Rose.
Working with Rose the next morning,I ignored the hurtful remarks thrown in my
direction and did things in Rose's way as much as possible.As I worked,I silently began
to surround Rose with a warm blanket of love.Over the next few days,an amazing
thing began to happen.My focus shifted from what she was doing to me and I started
seeing Rose as the hurting person she was.Then her icy tension began to melt away.
Throughout the rest of the summer , we had numerous opportunities to work
together.Each time,she seemed truly happy to see me.Her bitterness gave way as she
started opening up.As I worked with this lonely woman, I listened to her,something no
one else had done.I learned that she was burdened by elderly parents who needed her care and her own health problems.
The days slipped by quickly as I finished the last several weeks of my summer
job.I soon would be returning as a fulltime university student and say goodbye to Rose.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2.至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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One day,while I was working alone in one of the hospital kitchens,Rose entered
the room.
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Although I never saw Rose again,I still remember her vividly.
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One day,while I was working alone in one of the hospital kitchens,Rose entered
the room.Instead of her blue uniform,she was wearing street clothes.I looked at her in
surprise.“Aren't you working today?”“I've got another job and won't be working
here any more,”she said as she walked to me and gave me a quick hug.“I just came to say goodbye.You are the one person I will truly miss.You are the one person I wish I
could take with me.”Then she turned abruptly and walked out of the door.
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Although I never saw Rose again,I still remember her vividly.That summer,I
learned a lesson I've never forgotten.The world is full of people like Rose:annoying,
demanding,unlovable on the outside,yet hurting inside.Just as the saying goes,every
rose has its thorn,and every man's character has a part that you can't stand.I've found
that a warm blanket of love is the best way to nurture a rose.
B (2019·浙江高考模拟)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a beautiful morning.I was in the middle of a busy day,with my mind on
what I had to do next.As I drove along a busy street,I noticed a young boy walking out
from the entrance of an apartment complex(公寓大楼) on the other side of the street.
I couldn't see beyond the entrance with trees and bushes shading it but I hoped that
his family was there,about to appear behind him.The boy was young,maybe four years
old,and it was a strange sight to see him alone near this busy street,even if just for a
little while.I continued to look behind him but I didn't see anyone else coming out to
join him as cars ran swiftly past him.Then,I saw him turning around and running back
toward the entrance.I smiled in relief,as I hoped that he was heading back toward his
family.
Still,I felt I should check to be sure he was safe and did a Uturn as soon as I was
able to.As I drove back to where I first saw him,I was expecting to see him safe,with
his family around him.Instead,as I got closer,I saw that he had changed directions
again , crossed the median( 中 央 分 隔 带 ) and was quickly running in the opposite
direction of the apartment buildings.I pulled my car over quickly and as I did so,all the
cars on both sides of the street suddenly stopped as well,as if just realizing the potential
danger of the situation.
I crossed the street and went up to him.He stopped as I approached,looking at me
cautiously and backed away slightly toward the road.I didn't want to scare him so I bent
down a bit.Seeing a piece of paper in his hand,I asked him where his parents were and why he was there but he did not answer.Instead ,he ran away from me along the median.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2.至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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At this point,a man in another car asked if I needed help and I said yes.
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I saw his dad racing toward us and heard him calling out the boy's name.
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At this point,a man in another car asked if I needed help and I said yes.The man
got out of his car to help the boy.We stopped the cars on this busy street to reduce the
dangers so that the boy could be safe when running on the street.In the meantime,I
caught sight of the piece of paper in the boy's hand,on which was his father's address
and phone number.Without hesitation,I made an immediate call to his father to tell
what was happening now.The boy's father said that he would come here as soon as
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I saw his dad racing toward us and heard him calling out the boy's name.When
hearing his father's voice , the boy felt very happy and crossed the median to meet
him.At last,the father and the son hugged tightly.We felt relieved.The father told us the
reason why the boy left home alone.Soon the boy's mother also came to the spot.They
thanked us very much.And we were happy to see the family got reunited in the end.
C (2019·浙江高考模拟)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
When a tornado(龙卷风) touched down in a small town nearby,many families
were left completely ruined.One Sunday,a particular picture especially touched me.A
young woman stood in front of an entirely ruined home.A young boy,seven or eight
years old,stood at her side,eyes downcast.Clutching(紧握) at her skirt was a tiny girl
who stared into the camera,eyes wide with confusion and fear.The article that went
with the picture gave the clothing sizes of each family member.With growing interest,I
noticed that their sizes closely matched ours.This would be a good opportunity to teach
my children to help those less fortunate(幸运的) than themselves.I taped the picture of
the young family to our refrigerator,explaining their difficulty to my sevenyearold
twins,Brad and Brett,and to threeyearold Meghan.
“These poor people now have nothing,”I said.“We'll share what we have with
them.”
I brought three large boxes and placed them on the living room floor,encouraging
the boys to go through their toys and donate( 捐 赠 ) some of their less favorite
things.Meghan watched seriously,as the boys and I filled one of the boxes with canned
food and goods that they no longer needed.
Meghan walked up with Lucy , her much loved doll , hugged tightly to her
chest.She stopped in front of the box,gave her doll a final kiss,then laid her gently on
top of the other toys.
“Oh,honey,”I said,“you don't have to give Lucy.You love her so much.”
Meghan nodded seriously,“Lucy makes me happy,Mommy.Maybe she'll make
that other little girl happy,too.”注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2.至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The boys had watched,openmouthed,when their sister
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I looked my children for a long moment.
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The boys had watched,openmouthed,when their sister placed her favorite doll in
the box.Without a word,the boys rose and went to their rooms and came back carrying
their favorite toys to the living room.Astonished,I realized that the boys had also
recognized what little Meghan's action meant.I think all of them want to make these
poor people who have nothing happy like them.Swallowing back tears,I pulled all three
of them into my arms.
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I looked my children for a long moment.I removed my old jacket from the box of
clothes,too.I replaced it with the new hunter green jacket that I had found on sale last week.I hoped the young woman in the picture would love it as much as I did.What
Meghan did taught me a lesson that the true spirit of donating is to give with your heart.