2020届高考英语大题狂刷突破高分:书面表达 提纲类作文（含解析）

1.【2019·全国卷 I】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做 志愿者，内容包括: 1.写信目的； 2.个人优势； 3.能做的事情。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.结束语已为你写好。 I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Yours, 精 选 大 题 书面表达 提纲类作文大题狂刷十四Li Hua 2.【2019·全国卷 II】假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友 Chris 球队近期将参加比赛，内 容包括: 1.比赛信息； 2.赛前准备； 3.表达期待。 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 1.【2020 届重庆市一中高三上学期摸底】假设你是李华，你和外国朋友 Tom 约好这个周五晚上去体育馆看足 球赛，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件： 1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.另约时间。 注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________ 模 拟 精 做_______________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.【黑龙江省大庆市铁人中学 2020 届高三上学期开学】假定你是李华，在某英文网站上看到一家国际文化机 构招聘中学生暑期志愿者。请根据以下提示，用英语写一封自荐信。要点包括：（1）表达兴趣；（2）阐述自 己的优势；（3）希望得到回复。 注意：1.词数 100 左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Sir/Madam, _______________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua答 案 与 解 析1. 【答案】 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua, an outgoing boy, who is studying in London. I am writing to apply to be a volunteer of your team, having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city. I have some advantages for the job. First of all, having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child , I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. Besides, having a good knowledge of Chinese paintings because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture, I can get foreigners and the locals to know more about it. Last but not least ， through my introduction and efforts, I believe, I can strengthen the friendship between China and England. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类写作。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在 式。书信格式，结束语文中已经给出。首段应开门见山，表明写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最 后一段总结。根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，local city，advantages，a good command of，beneficial for，familiarity with，appreciate，take my application into consideration。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在 拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如 First of all, Besides, to begin with，moreover，as for me， Last but not least 等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。 【亮点说明】本文首段开门见山，表达了写信的目的；第二段详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情。an outgoing boy, who is studying in London.此处使用了同位语和非限制性定语从句；having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city.使用了分词做状语和宾语从句及被动语态；having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child, I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用了分词和非限制性定语从句。另外 First of all, Besides, Last but not least 的使用使文章富有条理性。此外，还使用了高级句式结构，如 I would appreciate it if you could take my 精 选 大 题application into consideration（条件状语从句）。 2. 【答案】 Dear Chris, I’m Li Hua, captain of the school volleyball team. I’m writing to inform you of the upcoming tournament that you should prepare for. The three-week tournament is scheduled to be held in the newly built stadium early next month. You being a member of the team, proper preparation on our part would be appreciated. For starters, please come up with a workout schedule and stick to it so that you can get in shape soon. Secondly, you should attend team training sessions and meetings to study our opponents together with the teammates. Since the school attaches great importance to this tournament, I hope we can devote ourselves to becoming a stronger team and a qualified champion. Sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】本文为通知队友做赛前准备的应用文。题目中比赛可以是一场比赛（the upcoming volleyball game）也可以是多场比赛（the upcoming volleyball tournament）本文选取多场比赛进行写作。在开头说明写 信意图后，按照文章要点展开写作。 【亮点说明】 1. I’m Li Hua, captain of the school volleyball team.（同位语从句） 2. I’m writing to inform you of the upcoming tournament that you should prepare for. （inform sb. of sth.结构；定语从句） 3. is scheduled to be held （be scheduled 被动语态） 4. You being a member of the team （独立主格结构） 5. so that you can get in shape soon （结果状语从句）。6. devote ourselves to becoming （devote oneself to doing 结构） 1. 【答案】 Dear Tom, I’m so sorry to say that I can’t go to watch the football match with you as scheduled this Friday night. This afternoon, I suddenly received the news that my grandfather fell down and broke his left leg. Since my father is on a business trip and won’t come back next Monday; my mother needs to look after my little sister at home, so I have to take the responsibility of taking care of my grandfather in the hospital these nights. I have heard that there will be a match which is more exciting next Friday night. I wonder whether you are available then. If you are free, we can make an appointment to watch that football match. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。 第 1 步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件，时态应为一般现在时。 第 2 步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：suddenly(突然)，responsibility(责任)，available(有空的)，exciting(精 彩的)，appointment(约定)及 wonder(想知道)等。 第 3 步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第 4 步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁 美观。 【亮点说明】本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很 高的驾驭英语的能力。范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级 词汇有 as scheduled(如期)，fall down(跌倒)，be on a business trip(出差)，look after(照顾)，take the responsibility of(承担……的责任)，take care of(照顾)以及 make an appointment(约定)，而且还使用了宾语从句（I’m so sorry to 模 拟 精 做say that I can’t go to watch the football match with you as scheduled this Friday night.及 I wonder whether you are available then.）；同位语从句（This afternoon, I suddenly received the news that my grandfather fell down and broke his left leg.），状语从句（Since my father is on a business trip and won’t come back next Monday 及 If you are free, we can make an appointment to watch that football match.）；定语从句（I have heard that there will be a match which is more exciting next Friday night.）。全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。 2. 【答案】 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I’m writing to apply for the job as a summer volunteer that you have advertised on the Internet. I’ve been learning English for ten years, so I can communicate with other members in fluent English. Besides, I’m outgoing and warm-hearted, which makes it easy for me to make friends with students from other countries. On top of that, I would be able to tell students from other countries about Chinese culture and learn about their culture as well. I would appreciate an interview at your convenience. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】这是一篇提纲类写作。要求写一封电子邮件。 第 1 步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件。 第 2 步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：apply for(申请)，summer volunteer(暑期自愿者)，communicate with(交流)；make friends with(交朋友)，be able to(能够)等。 第 3 步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第 4 步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的 卷面是非常重要的。 【亮点说明】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如定 语从句（I’m writing to apply for the job as a summer volunteer that you have advertised on the Internet.）；并列句（I’ve been learning English for ten years, so I can communicate with other members in fluent English.）。全文中没有 中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文 章增色添彩。