【短文改错】增分攻略五-赢战2020届高考英语重点难点增分攻略（解析版）

赢战 2020 届高考英语重点难点【短文改错】增分攻略五解析版 高考英语短文改错答题技巧点拨 － － 从语篇入手， 理解大意， 着眼时态和语态 － － 从句子入手， 逐句分析， 推敲语法 －－－－ 连词类 连词类－ － － 从行文逻辑入手 兼顾上下 审查连代 赢战 2020 届高考英语重点难点【短文改错】提能训练五 Test 1 Our class organized visit to the Joy Nursing Home, that is next to our school, last Sunday. On our arrival, we begin to help the senior people do the cleaning. After that, some of my classmate put on interesting performances, 第一步 短 文 改 错 答 题 攻 略 第二步 第三步 时态误用：主要是一般现在时与一般过去时 语态误用：主动语态与被动语态 混用过去式、过去分词 动词类错误－－主谓一致错误 非谓语动词错误 单复数误用 －名词类错误－ 所有格的误用 混淆形容词、副词的词性 －形副类误用－－原级、比较级和最高级的误用 误用 ing 结尾和 ed 结尾形容词 a 与 an 的误用 －冠词类错误－－不定冠词与定冠词的误用 冠词的缺失与多余 及物动词后多用了介词 －介词类错误－－不及物动词后少用了介词 搭配中介词的错误 从句关联词 － 三大从句连接词的误用、多余 类的错误 连词与介词误用 when 与 during Although 与 despite 误 用 连词类错误－ 连词的误用，如 and 与 but 等 连词的多余，如 although 后不应用 but 代词类错误－ 前后指代是否一致 人称是否一致，单复数是否一致 逻辑类错误－ besides,however,therefore 误用but then we played games with them. All of them were amusing and laughed happily. We were such lost in the activities that we forgot the time. At noon, we were all had to say goodbye to them. And they were extreme grateful to us for their visit. 答案： Our class organized ∧ visit to the Joy Nursing Home, that which is next to our school, last Sunday. On our arrival, we begin began to help the senior people do the cleaning. After that, some of my classmate classmates put on interesting performances, but and then we played games with them. All of them were amusing amused and laughed happily. We were such so lost in the activities that we forgot the time. At noon, we were all had to say goodbye to them. And they were extreme extremely grateful to us for their our visit. Test 2 When I was in high school, I wanted to get a scholarship to a university. I liked singing, so I try out for a scholarship for music. But I failed to get one. I was real upset. I felt like failure. I just kept feeling sorry for me. However, after a few day, I decided not to let one single loss to keep me from doing what I love. But I cheered up and devoted myself to sing again. I think that accepting failure is that we need to do first before we success eventually. 答案： When I was in high school, I wanted to get a scholarship to a university. I liked singing, so I try tried out for a scholarship for music. But I failed to get one. I was real really upset. I felt like ∧ a failure. I just kept feeling sorry for me myself. However, after a few day days， I decided not to let one single loss to keep me from doing what I love. But So I cheered up and devoted myself to sing singing again. I think that accepting failure is that what we need to do first before we success succeed eventually.Test 3 I once had a bad experience. One day several years ago, I went shop with my friends. As I entered a small shoe store, but I saw two women selecting shoes. Suddenly they raise their voice and began to talk loudly about how beautifully the shoes were and how low the price was. Just then an old couple walked onto the shop. The two women urged her to buy a pair. When the couple left a store with the shoes, I noticed the shop owner gave the two women some cashes. He also promised offer them more unless more people bought his shoes. 答案： I once had a bad experience. One day several years ago, I went shop shopping with my friends. As I entered a small shoe store, but I saw two women selecting shoes. Suddenly they raise raised their voice and began to talk loudly about how beautifully beautiful the shoes were and how low the price was. Just then an old couple walked onto into the shop. The two women urged her them to buy a pair. When the couple left a the store with the shoes，I noticed the shop owner gave the two women some cashes cash . He also promised ∧ to offer them more unless if/when more people bought his shoes. Test 4 This morning, when I was walking on the streets, I saw two traveler reading a map, looked puzzled. It seemed that we were lost. I went up them and asked how I could help them. They told me that they were looking for the Temple of Heaven. I lead them to a nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No. 20, that could take them there directly. They appreciated my help great. Before long, the bus came. They got on a bus and waved goodbye to me. Seeing them on the bus, and I felt a kind of satisfaction. 答案： This morning, when I was walking on the streets street ， I saw two traveler travelers reading a map， looked looking puzzled. It seemed that we they were lost. I went up ∧ to them and asked how I could help them.They told me that they were looking for the Temple of Heaven. I lead led them to a nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No. 20, that which could take them there directly. They appreciated my help great greatly. Before long, the bus came. They got on a the bus and waved goodbye to me.Seeing them on the bus, and I felt a kind of satisfaction. Test 5 I have always been doing volunteer work, so I had never really thought about doing work abroad until I found some informations on this specific trip. There was a picture attaching to an e­mail, which was sent regarding a trip. It showed two little girls that they needed volunteers. The image makes me fall in love with the idea of going somewhere complete different from my home. What attracted me about the trip was it was to a place I’d never visit by myself. I wanted to go nowhere that would make me step out into my comfort zone. 答案： I have always been doing volunteer work, so but/yet I had never really thought about doing work abroad until I found some informations information on this specific trip. There was a picture attaching attached to an e­mail, which was sent regarding a the trip. It showed two little girls that they needed volunteers. The image makes made me fall in love with the idea of going somewhere complete completely different from my home. What attracted me about the trip was ∧,that ) it was to a place I’d never visit by myself. I wanted to go nowhere somewhere/anywhere that would make me step out into of my comfort zone. Test 6 Challenges of life are of great importance in our grow. They remind me my days in senior high school which I joined in the military training. It was the first time I have lived away from my home，so I found it difficult to fit in. And the training officer was strict in me. I once thought I couldn’t stick to the end. But anyway，I was succeeded. The trials made it much easy for me to adapt to life，but the difficulties I came across have now become a precious memory in my life. In short, learning to regard the challenges of life as the stepping stone to future success and make the best of them. 答案： Challenges of life are of great importance in our grow growth.They remind me ∧ of my days in senior high school which when I joined in the military training. It was the first time I have had lived away from my home，so I found it difficult to fit in. And the training officer was strict in with me. I once thought I couldn’t stick to the end. But anyway, I was succeeded. The trials made it much easy easier for me to adapt to life，but and the difficulties I came across have now become a precious memory in my life. In short，learning learn to regard the challenges of life as the a stepping stone to future success and make the best of them.Test 7 It was raining hardly outside, which made it difficult for me to go home for lunch. Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon, I saw a familiar figure passed by our classroom. I rushed out and found it was my mother, already in fifties, which brought me lunch in spite of the heavy rain. In China, many parents make great sacrifices for our children. But what had the children done in return? All too often, most children just take it for granted that their parent should serve for them unconditionally. My dear mum or dad, thank you very much for bringing me up. How shall I do for you? 答案： It was raining hardly hard outside, which made it difficult for me to go home for lunch. Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon, I saw a familiar figure passed passing by our classroom. I rushed out and found it was my mother, already in ∧ fifties, which who brought me lunch in spite of the heavy rain. In China, many parents make great sacrifices for our their children. But what had have the children done in return? All too often, most children just take it for granted that their parent parents should serve for them unconditionally. My dear mum or and dad, thank you very much for bringing me up. How What shall I do for you? Test 8 Our school encouraged us to experience some future careers last vacation. Some students choose to work as either cashiers in a store and waiters at a restaurant. I was one of the 500 student to join in the activity. I decided be an assistant in a photo studio because of I love taking photos. With the help of a advanced photographer in the studio, I opened my imagination in my daily work. I also developed practically skills which are necessary for them to face future challenges. The most important thing I’ve learned are to improve myself after I get my dream job. 答案： Our school encouraged us to experience some future careers last vacation. Some students choose chose to work as either cashiers in a store and or waiters at a restaurant. I was one of the 500 student students to join in the activity. I decided ∧ be an assistant in a photo studio because of I love taking photos. With the help of a an advanced photographer in the studio, I opened my imagination in my daily work. I also developed practically practical skills which are necessary for them me to face future challenges. The most important thing I’ve learned are is to improve myself after before/until I get my dream job.