十年高考真题分类汇编(2010-2019) 英语
专题 26 文字提纲式书面表达
(2010﹒广东)
以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。
内 容:公共场所禁烟
实施时间:2011 年 1 月 1 日起
实施范围:全国
目 标:所有室内公共场所无烟
措 施:张贴禁烟标志
相关数据:
(1)吸烟人数:约 3.5 亿
(2)分 布:男性 75%;女性:25%
(3)受二手烟影响人数:约 5.4 亿
(4)因二手烟死亡人数:超过 10 万/年
二手烟:second-hand smoke
[写作内容]
请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯,内容包括:
1.禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围;
2.目标和措施;
3.相关数据。
[写作要求]
只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
【参考范文】My country begines to carry out the policy that prevents smoking in public
buildings since January 1st,2011.The main aim is to make every public rooms have no
smoke by posting the sign of preventing smoking. There are 350 million people smoking
recently, in which the male hold 75 percent and the female hold 25 percent. Because of these
smokers, about 540 million non-smokers are influenced. More than 100 thousand people
per year die because of the second smoke.
试题分析:符合题目要求、语法正确、文字连贯通顺,条理清晰
高考考点:5 句话写作 复合句及并列句的应用
(2010﹒辽宁)
你校学生会需招聘一名留学生做英语学习顾问,请你以短文形式写一则招聘启事。内容主要
包括:
——母语是英语,汉语流利者优先
——解答用语学习问题,协助组织英语活动
——每周 4 小时,报酬面议
——联系人:李华(Tel:13011223344)
注意:1。词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.启事标语和结尾已为你写好。
One Possible Version
English Advisor Wanted
The Student Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an
English Study Advisor next term. The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students
to practice their oral English. Answering their questions, and helping organize activities such as
singing English songs, English evenings, or lectures on interesting topics.
The applicant should be a native speaker of English. Fluency in Chinese is preferred. The
advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week.
If you are interested, please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview. Payment for the
service will be discussed during the interview.
Student Union
(2010﹒浙江)
最近,李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。请你根据她的事迹(在上周六下午,不顾天气的
炎热,为班级选购歌咏比赛服装),用英语为班级板报写一篇 100—120 个词的短文。
你的文章应包括下列要点:
1. 李越的事迹及其对同学的影响;
2. 你的评论。
注意:1. 文章的标题和开头已给出(不计词数)。
3. 参考词汇:singing contest 歌咏比赛
costume 服装
Star Student of the Week
Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class.
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One possible student version
Star Student of the Week
Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class.
On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another,
looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying
our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and
selecting. Finally, she found the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and
won the first prize in the contest.
Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class. Besides, she often devotes her
spare time to helping others. She deserves the honor and we should learn from her.
(2010﹒陕西)
假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫 TigerMom 的学生家长的博客上,你看到如下内容。
请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5
students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some
friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?
写作要点:
1.表明自己的看法;
2.陈述自己的理由(可举例说明);
3.提出至少两条建议
要求:
1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2.短文词数不少于 100(不含已写好的部分)。
3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。 4.书写需清晰、工整。
Hi,TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not
quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating syudents and their future
university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude school never be
ignored.There are many examples around us.Some all-A student in school have turned out not to
be ac successful in society as they were expected.The reason is often that the pressure from their
parents alloes them almost no time for other activities.Furthermore,purishment is by no means a
wise choise to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends’advice.More importansly,let her live like a lovely
girl;let her have more friends and social activities;and let her make takes of her own as we
teenagers often do.
(2011﹒全国Ⅱ)
书面表达(满分 30 分)
假定你是李华,你所喜爱的 Global Mirror 周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见.请
你依据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括:
1.说明你是该报的忠实读者
2.赞赏该报优点:
1)兼顾国内外新闻
2)介绍名人成功故事
3.提出建议:
刊登指导英语学习的文章
注意:
1.词数 100 左右,开头语己为你写好;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on,the,5'h anniversary,of Global Mirror!
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on,the,5'h anniversary,of Global Mirror!
I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two
reassons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages,
I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the
success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to
make the world a better place.
As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English
leaarning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
(2011﹒四川)
书面表达(满分 35 分)
最近,某中学生英文报开设了“After-class Activities”的栏目,请你根据以下提示,为该栏目
写一篇英文稿件,并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。
1. 你校开展课外活动的情况;
2. 你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处
3. 为同学选择课外活动提出建议
4. 为学校开展课外活动提出建议
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 文中不得提及人名、校名及地名‘
3. 稿件的开头以为你写好(不计入总词数)
After-class Activities
Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.
One Possible Version
After-class Activities
Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. In our
school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very
much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides
building my body and enriching my knowledge, they also free me from the heavy work of study.
Here I have some suggestions. To students, you’d better choose the activities which interest
you and suit you; to schools, they should organize more activities for students and leave students
more time for activities by giving them less homework.
Dear friends, please actively take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your
school life colorful, but also impr ove you learning.
(2011﹒天津)
书面表达(满分 25 分)
假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于 6 月 26 日接待来自于美国某中学的学生
访问团。你受学校委托,负责安排在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示,用英语给该团的领队
Smith 先生写一封电子邮件,介绍活动计划并简要说明理由,最后征求对方意见。
上午与我校学生座谈(话题如校园生活、文化差异等);
中午与我校学生共同进餐(午餐包括饺子、面条等);
下午与我校学生游览海河。
注意:
1. 次数不少于 100;
2. 可是当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数。
参考词汇:
海河 the Haihe River
Dear Mr Smith
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School. __
此处不能答题 ________
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
(2011﹒江西)
写作(满分 25 分)
假设你是星光中学的李华,将参加主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一
份演讲稿,主要内容包括:
1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题。
2.骑自行车的益处,如能环保有利健康等。
参考词汇:低碳生活(low-carbon life)节能(energy saving)
注意:1.词数:120 词左右;
2.演讲稿开头和结尾已给出,请将其抄写在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数。
Good morning,everyone,
I am Li hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.
(2011﹒广东)
写作(共两节,满分 40 分)
第一节:基础写作
以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道
基本信息:
⑴书名:Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother
⑵作者:Amy Chua,美籍华人,耶鲁*大学教授
⑶出版时间:2010 年
⑷内容:作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事
⑸效应:引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论
相关报道:
⑴中文版:2011 年初开始在中国销售
⑵意外反应:多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法
⑶最新消息:17 岁的大女儿已被哈佛**和耶鲁录取
*耶鲁:Yale 哈佛:Harvard
[写作内容]
根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍,内容包括:
1.图书的基本信息
2.图书的相关报道
[写作要求]
只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯
【参考范文】
Published in 2010, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, whose wrtier is Amy Chua, a Chinese
American professor in Yale University, is about a story that the author applied the Chinese
traditional educational method to instruct her two daughters. The books with Chinese edition were
sold in China at the beginning of the 2011. As a result, it caused a heated discussion on which is
better, the Chinese way or American. Accidently, most of the Chinese mothers are not in favour of
what the writer did. However, the latest news shows that her 17-year-old daughter was admitted
into Harvard and Yale University.
2011 年广东省高考英语基础写作是一篇说明文,让考生对 Battle Hymn of the Tiger
Mother 这本书进行介绍。今年的基础写作题材较新,有些考生可能不知道虎妈教育孩子的
事情,但不影响本文写作,考生只把它当作一本图书介绍即可。
试题详细地给出了内容要点,为控制性写作。在文章结构方面,一定要紧扣考题已给出的写
作提示:1.图书的基本信息;2.图书的相关报道。要写好此文,考生需要注意四点:一、要
认真审题,确定体裁、人称和时态等;二、要运用适当的句型,合理地组织文字;三、切忌
照译,要适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。四、在句型方面,为了
用五个句子表达全部内容,复合句的使用依然是考查的重点。
(2011﹒全国新课标卷)
书面表达(满分 15 分)
假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中
心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定,你须书面预约,请按下列要点写一封信:
1.本人简介; 2.求助内容; 3.约定时间;
4.你的联系方式(Email:lihua@126.com;Phone:12345678)
注意:1.词数 100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.结束语以为你写好
(2011﹒浙江)
书面表达(满分 30 分)
假设你是高中生李越,有感于校园中存在的随意涂写(to scribble) 和乱丢垃圾(to litter)
的行为,请用英语给校长写一封 100-120 个词的信。信中应包括以下内容:
1. 说明写信目的;
2. 对这些行为进行批评;
3. 提出建议。
注意:信的抬头、落款及信得第一句已给出(不计词数)。
June 8 , 2011
Dear Mr. Headmaster ,
I am Li Yue ,a student from Class 1 ,Senior II .__________________
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Yours faithfully
Li Yue
【答案】
One possible student version:
June 8, 2011
高考资源网 Mr. Headmaster,
I am Li Yue, a student from Class 1, Senior II. I am writing to draw your attention to some
improper behaviour among us students: littering and scribbling. It makes our school dirty and
unpleasant, and does hard to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It
is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could
place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time,
students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that,
with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place
in the near future.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Li Yue
【点评】
浙江省高考英语作文命题继 09 年和 10 年连续两年的新闻报道形式作文后,今年高考写作回
归了书信的形式。体裁虽然发生一定的变化,但题材上仍然是贴近高中生日常生活。本文仍
属于提纲式半开放性体裁的作文,选材贴近学生实际,有利于考生的正常发挥,考生只要按
照所给要点的思路来写即可。
(2011﹒山东)
写作(满分 30 分)
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友 Tom 上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参
加暑期中
学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest),你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请
根据以下
要点给 Tom 写一封电子邮件:
1.询问 Tom 的生活和学习情况;
2.谈谈你的困难并请 Tom 帮忙;
3.告诉 Tom 你打算赛后去看他。
注意:1.词数:120—150;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【评析】今年的作文题目仍然是电子邮件,仍然突出了英语语言学习中语言运用和交
际的目的。题目给出语言运用的情境,还有写作的要点提示,但注意了所给出的要点仅是文
章应包括的内容,而非具体的语言信息,所以考生便不能做逐句的翻译。由此可看出山东省
作文的命题趋势还是热点在应用文体裁,内容更贴近中学生的日常生活和交际的需求,因此
学生写起来更为有素材,形式上给出要点但又有相当的写作的自由度和给学生想象和创造的
空间。
(2011﹒重庆)
书面表达(满分 25 分)
某国际动物关爱协会面向全球中学生招募“动物代言人”,希望申请者选择一种自
己喜欢的动物,为之代言(speak for)。假设你是重庆新华中学的学生李华,有意
参与该活动。现请您用英文在线填写申请表(仅需填写“申请陈述”部分),内容
如下:
● 表示有意参加
● 说明自己富有爱心、关爱动物
● 打算为何种动物代言,并说明理由
● 希望申请成功
Application Form (申请表)
Name(姓名) Li Hua Sex() F/M Age() 18
Email Add.(电子邮件地址) lihua@xinhuaschool.com
【评析】重庆高考英语作文自 2005 年来就摒弃了看图作文的体裁,采用记叙+议论的形式。
从前 5 年的高考真题看来,作文均是提供背景,给出 3-5 条主要语言点,并提供一定程度的
自由发挥空间,今年的作文也不例外。大家的老朋友李华此次申请担任国际动物保护协会的
代言人,需写一篇申请书。与近几年的高考英语作文一脉相承,此次英语作文从体裁、内容、
要求上均与以往相同。其中李华选择的动物可由学生自行决定,给了广大考生相当的自由度,
相信考生们不会为字数等基本问题烦恼。
(2012﹒重庆)
某国际网站提供个人闲置物品交换服务。现在,你打算通过该网站将自己的一件闲置
物品与他人交换(exchange)。请你用英文在该网站上发帖,发布物品交换信息。内容应包
括:
·你将拿出什么物品进行交换
·具体介绍该物品
·你希望换回什么物品
·请愿意交换的朋友给你留言
注意:
(1)词数 100 左右;
(2)格式不限;
(3)文中不得使用考生真实姓名和学校名称。
【考点】问题解决型—提纲作文
【写作指导】在试题材料中给出了四方面的内容要点,考生需要在此基础上进行适当地发挥。
试题虽然已经对写作内容进行了界定,但是仍然具有一定的开放性,给考生留有一定的自由
发挥空间。写作时,应该以一般现在时为中心时态,内容充实,积极健康,应尽可能多运用
学过而且熟练的词汇、短语和句型,尽量变换句式,长短句交错使用,并且恰当地穿插一些
过渡性词语,以使短文上下连贯,行文紧凑,如,and, or, but, then, in a word, after all,
neither…nor…, so… that…, in other words 等。考生在有把握的情况下,才可以使用较高级的
词汇、短语或者句式。否则,为此出现了大量的错误,是得不偿失的。而且考生在书写时,
还需要注意书写工整,卷面整洁,尽可能避免出现典型性错误。
(2012﹒广东)
基础写作 (共 1 小题;满分 15 分)
你接受了一项写作任务,要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。
【写作内容】
请根据以下信息,介绍一位传奇人物
姓 名:Allan Stewart
国 籍:澳大利亚
出生日期:1915 年 3 月 7 日
世界纪录:2006 年获硕士学位时年龄最大
学习态度:挑战自我,永远为时不晚。
第一个学位:1936 年获得
第二个学位:医学博士
第三个学位:80 多岁时决定学习法律,2006 年获得硕士学位。
第四个学位:2012 年通过网络学习获得,善于合理安排学习时间,受到老师表扬。
*硕士学位:master’s degree; **博士:doctor
[写作要求]
只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。
分析 高分句型一:
Mo Yan,who was born in Shandong Province on February 17th,1955,is a Chinese writer.
高分句型二:
He spent his childhood in his hometown going to primary school but later dropped out.
句型一 who was born in Shandong Province on February 17th,1955 该句是一个由 who 引导
的非限制性定语从句,who 在从句中作主语,替代前面的先行词 Mo Yan.
句型二 He spent his childhood in his hometown going to primary school but later dropped out 该
句的谓语部分使用了一个重要的固定句型:sb spend time (in ) doing sth 某人花时间做某
事,应注意介词 in 可省略
解答 Mo Yan,who was born in Shandong Province on February 17th,1955,is a Chinese
writer.(高分句型一)He spent his childhood in his hometown going to primary school but later
dropped out.(高分句型二)After working in the fields and then in a factory in the countryside
for many years,he joined the army.Since his beginning to write stories in 1981,he has published
a number of works such as Frog.(个人简介)Finally,in 2012,he became the first Chinese
writer to win the Nobel Prize in Literature.(成就展示)
点评 本文是一个图标类书面表达,写作时应注意观察图表所提供的信息,尽量要将其所列
内容清楚表达;另外考生平时应注意积累相应的词汇,用准确的、简介的语言将作文表达清
楚.
(2012﹒四川)
第一节 书面表达(满分 35 分)
假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初,你的英语老师 Ms Li 希望了解
每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封
信。
1. 对英语学习的认识;
2. 自己目前的英语水平;
3. 自己英语学习存在的主要问题;
4. 对英语教学的两点建议。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Ms Li,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
Thank you!
Li Hua
One Possible Version1:
Dear Ms Li,
I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.
As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more
important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it
difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English.
I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.
Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can
make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you!
One Possible Version2:
There is no doubt\denying that our world is becoming a global village and having a good
knowledge of English benefits us in that we can know more about it, as a result of which English
is getting increasingly important.
However,I don’t have a good command of English. And I have found that my problem lies
chiefly in two aspects. To begin with, there are too many new words and expressions in the texts,
which may hold us back from having a better understanding of them. Though I try hard to
remember them, I still have great difficulty in keeping them in mind. Besides, I keep writing
diaries in English, which turns out to be an efficient way to improve my written English, forcing
me to set down in English what has happened every day. However, what I am sometimes upset
about is that I often make foolish mistakes when I write.
I am wondering if you could give us some practical tips on how to memorize English words.
Besides, it can’t be better if you can instruct us on how to write good English compositions.
(2012﹒山东)
写作(满分 30 分)
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你
写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上,介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇
短文:
1. 参加英语角的益处;
2. 坚持写英语日记的作用;
3. 英文阅读网站(EnjoyReading)对你的帮助。
注意:1. 词数:120-150;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
One possible version:
As a high school student, I consider English a very important subject. In order to learn
it well, apart from English class, I took an active part in English corner and other after-class
English activities, which benefit me a lot.
In the English corner, I meet many friends, who share the same interest wi th me.
Besides, sometimes, some foreigners are glad to join us. By talking with them, my oral
English improved a lot. I also find it useful to keep English diaries. I keep on doing it these
years and it is helpful to my English. As a saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by
practice will we make more progress. Finally, some good English study websites contribute a
lot to my improvement. Through these websites, I can read some classic English passages,
poems and stories. What’s more, I can learn some learning skills and methodologies, which
play an important part in my study process.
All in all, every road leads to Roma, but I believe hard work pays off.
【命题透视】今年的写作难度平稳,秉承了“让学生有话说”的原则,学生写起来并不觉得
无话可说,但是要想写好并不是很容易。首先必须要有逻辑性,这三个要点必须条理清楚
地都列出来;其次里面的某些词句和句型要表达正确,运用恰当的句型,而且注意衔接词
的使用。只有这样,才能写出流畅地道的文章。
(2012﹒湖南)
Section C (25 marks)
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
生活中,你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历,期间有烦恼、有惊喜、有
感慨……请就此写一篇英语短文。
主要内容包括:1)丢失的物品;2)物品失而复得的经过;3)你的感 想。
注意:
1. 词数不少于 120 个;
2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
解答
One possible version:
Oh,my God!Where is my iPhone?I made a call just now on the bus.Suddenly I remembered I’
ve put it on the seat next to me.It’s my birthday present from my father.He would be sad if he
knew it.(丢失的物品)
I go to school as usual this morning,trying to stay calm.【高分句型】The first two classes
ended quickly because I was absent-minded.During the break,my math teacher asked me to visit
him.I am very uneasy because I didn’t know what I had done wrong.Seeing me standing
there , my teacher showed me my iPhone .【高 分 句 型 】 Overjoyed , I grasped it back
quickly.It turned out that the driver of the bus that I often take saw the picture of me in my
iPhone and knew that I was a student of×××school.(物品失而复得的经过)
I am very moved that the driver took so much trouble to send it to my school.The event will
always remind me to be kind and helpful.(感想)
解析
本文是一篇提纲作文.要求根据所提供信息写一篇短文.要点包括:丢失的物品;物品失而
复得的经过;你的感想.可见文章的中心和重点要放在“经过”的描写之中,但是也要描写
自己的感受,写出作者自己的烦恼、惊喜、感慨;尤其要包含失而复得的复杂过程,是一篇
夹叙夹议的作文.写作时应以过去时为主.人称以第一人称为主.重要短语:made a call
(打电话),as usual(如通常一样),be absent-minded(心不在焉),take trouble to do(不辞
辛劳地做某事),It turned out that (结果是,证明是),remind sb to do (提醒某人做某
事).
(2012﹒辽宁)
第一节 书面表达(满分 25 分)
假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社会的编辑写封信,表达你对现在使用的英语
材料的看法,内容主要包括:
优点:1. 话题广泛;
2 图片丰富;
3 有助于提高 学习兴趣。
建议“适当降低词汇难度。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使用文连贯;
3. 开头语已您写好,不讲总词数。
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your
house. These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics,
such as science, culture and history. These topics, 1 think, arc very popular with us students.
What's more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help
us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be
interested in the subject. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions
which are hard for us. Therefore, I'd like to suggest changing them into easier ones.
Best regards,
Li Hua
(2012﹒天津)
假设你是李津,你的美国朋友 Chris 就读于天津某国际学校。他熟悉中国文化,特别是戏曲
文化。8 月 5 日下午 2:00 在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧《梁山伯与祝英台》。请你根
据以下提示,用英语给 Chris 写一封电子邮件,邀请他一起观看演出。
*提出邀请并简述原因;
*提出观剧后活动建议(如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等)
*请求对方回复
注意:
1.请使用规范英语,词数不少于 100;
2.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
越剧:Shaoxing Opera 《梁山伯与祝英台》 Butterfly Lovers
天津大剧院 Tianjin Grand Theater
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell
you.___________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
(2012﹒江苏)
生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请
你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向学校英文报“Happy Teens冶专栏投稿。
注意: 1. 对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2. 词数150 左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.
【参考范文】
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday
afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then the y started
shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.
To be honest, it was Su爷s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and
both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of
fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.
To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying
aharmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and
stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves
in others’place.
Don’t be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly
andwisely.
(2012﹒陕西)
书面表达(满分 30 分)
假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记,记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次
经历。
写作要点:1.做家务的理由;2.做家务的过程;3.你的感受。
注意:
1.短文词数不少于 100;
2.开头部分已写好,不计入总词数;
3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
I am an 18-year-old middle school student,
简要描述事情的经过 打篮球、碰撞、争执,等等
分析发生冲突的原因 1. 遇事不够冷静2. ……
谈谈避免冲突的做法 (请考生根据自己的经历或感想,提出至少两种做法)
【参考范文】
I’m an 18-year old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped
my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to
help.
Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the
rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered
in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept
and mopped the floors.
At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy
and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I
was, I never felt so happy.
(2013﹒全国新课标Ⅰ)
书面表达(满分 25 分)
假定你是李华。请你给笔友 Peter 写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带
去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明:
李明:高个子,戴眼镜
航班号:CA985
到达:8 月 6 日上午 11:30
注意:1. 词数 100 左右
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语和介绍语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?___________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve
asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take
him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!
His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am. August 6. My uncle is tall and he
is wearing glasses. And he will be in blue jacket.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2013﹒安徽)
书面表达(满分 25 分)
假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明,从我做起”为主题的征文活动,请你以“On the
Way to School”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容主要包括:
1.遵守交通法规;
2.注意举止文明。
注意:1.词数 120 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.短文的题目已为你拟好,不计入总词数
One possible version:
These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to
life and the environment. Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of
everyone. As for me, it should start on the way to school.
I will ke ep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bicycle, I’ll always keep to the right
and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the
pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, I’ll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and
healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the
roadside litter whenever possible. I hope my behavior will make a difference.
(2013﹒重庆)
写作二(满分 20 分)
调查显示, 中国长江江豚(finless porpoise)受人类活动影响而濒临灭绝,目前总数不足 100
只。假设你是李华,现请用英文给 WWF(世界自然保护基金组织)写一封信, 请他们关注这
一状况并提供帮助。内容应包括:
●说明写信目的
●简述江豚现状
●希望 WWF 如何帮助(比如资助江豚保护项目等)
●表示感谢并期望回复
注意:(1)词数不少于 80;
(2)在答题卡上作答;
(3)书信格式及开头语已给出(不计入总词数)。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m a student from Chongqing, China. _________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m a student from Chongqing, China. I’m writing this letter to you to report you the
emergent situation of the Chinese Yangtze finless porpoise. Because of the human beings’
destructive influence, the number of this precious species has promptly dropped to less than 100.
As far as I know, your foundation can help those species that are at the edge of distinction,
I’m writing this letter to you to ask for your generous donation to our project to protect this
endangered species. If it is not too much inconvenient, would you please come to China to have a
close observation of the poor porpoises and give us aid and direction to prevent them from dying
out completely?
Thanks for reading my letter and anxiously anticipating to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(2013﹒全国新课标Ⅱ)
书面表达(满分 25 分)
假定你是李华,自制一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友 Tom 写
封信,请他代卖,要点包括:
1.外观(尺寸、颜色、材料)
2.象征意义
3.价格
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好。
【参考范文】
Dear tom,
How are you? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red
silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about
5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In china, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck.
People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99
US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let
me know if you need further information. Thank you!
Li hua.
(2013﹒山东)
写作(满分 30 分)
假如你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友 Tom 一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑
假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件:
1. 未及时回信的原因;
2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)
注意:1. 词数:120-150;
2 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
How are you doing? You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer
vacation. I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay. How I wish I would read and reply your
email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time,
which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study, for which I
am very sorry. I hope you can understand me.
During the holiday, I am going to do a part-time job. On the one hand, I can earn some money
to reduce the burden of my family. On the other hand, I accumulate the social experience, which
does good to my future life. At the same time, I will not forget to go over my lesson. I will spend a
instructive holiday. How will you spend your holiday? I hope you have a good time.
These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your
earliest reply.
Yours,
Lin Hua
(2013﹒四川)
书面表达(共 35 分)
某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏,讨论学习习惯问题,请你结合自身学习实际,按一下提
示,用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。
1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系;
2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议;
3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施
注意:
1. 词数 120 左右,开头语已为你写好
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称
It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits._______________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
________________________________
【参考范文】
It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. As we all know, good learning habits
can make your study go to succeed. As a student, we should pay more attentions to our habits
which we develop in our study.
I’m sure “repeat” is a best habit. Do you develop the habit? If we want to improve our
study, we should repeat what the teachers taught us again and again, and then we can understand
or remember the knowledge which the teachers demand us to master. How to develop the habit?
the first step, set a timetable, and stick to carry out the plan, don’t stop.
When I do my homework, I often make mistakes with carelessness, how to overcome the
shortage? I think I should think about it over and over as long as I do my homework. And then I
do it little by little. Maybe in this way I can correct my mistakes.
(2013﹒天津)
书面表达
61.假设你是某大学的学生李津,你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席,负责规划、组织俱
乐部的相关活动,你欲参选,请按以下提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。
个人的优势介绍(如性格、特长等)
组织校内的活动的设想(如举办讲座、英语晚会等)
组织校际交流活动的设想(如举办辩论赛、演讲比赛等)
表达竞选的愿望。
注意:
1. 词数不少于 100;
2. 请勿提及真实学校姓名
3. 可适当的加入细节,以使内容充实,行文连贯;
4. 开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
副主席:vice president
竞选: run for
Good afternoon, my dear friends,
My name is Li Jin,
Thank you.
答案
Good afternoon, my dear friends.
My name is Li Jin. I’m outgoing, and get on well with my classmates and teachers. I am
skilled in organizing all kinds of activities. I’d like to run for the vice president of the English club
in our school. I know, as the vice president, I must do the following things for the club: I will try
to make it known to every student and more students involved in the activities organized by the
club. Also, to improve our English and get more students interested in English, I intend to
organize some activities at school like lectures and English parties and inter-school ones such as
English debate competitions and speech contests. I hope all of you will vote for me.
Thank you.
解析
这篇文章要用正确的时态,这里需要用将来或一般现在时态。其次要注意词汇的多样性。
这里我们要用到一些相关词汇:be skilled in…对……熟练/擅长,vote for sb 投票选举某人。
【考点定位】考查学生语言应用能力。学生要从基本句型入手(S+V, S+V+O, S+V+P 等),
然后扩充。当然,他们还必须掌握一些文体知识,即说明文该用什么句式,议论文该用什么
句式等。
(2013﹒江西)
书面表达(满分 25 分)
星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记
者,请写一篇短文,报道此次活动。内容包括:
1. 时间与地点:4 月 10 日,大青山(Daqing Mountain);
2. 活动的过程;
3. 你对于这次活动的评论。
注意: 1. 词数 120 左右。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a
mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.
It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the
top in high spirits. Al the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and
the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours
later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation
from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!
(2014﹒安徽)
为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEARTTOHEART”专栏。假设你
是该栏目的编辑 Jamie,收到一封署名为 Worried 的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的
困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
2.提出建议并说明理由。
注意:
1.词数 120 左右;
2.信中不能出现与本人相关的真实信息;
3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:temper n. 脾气,情绪
Hi Worried,
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the
moment.________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Jamie
【思路点拨】 本篇作文为写回信,为一篇应用文,但其格式已经给出,格式问题无需
考虑。主要要求考生写出正文。
审题时,需要解决好如下问题:
一、写什么?这一信息包括在试题的背景介绍和内容要点两个部分之中。写信的背景:
署名为 Worried 的同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到
了影响。内容要点:1. 表示理解并给予安慰;2. 提出建议并说明理由。
二、如何写?这包括两个层次的问题:首先,文章的布局谋篇,哪个先写,哪个后写。
按照常理,应该先“表示理解并给予安慰”,然后再“提出建议并说明理由”。其次,解决好
形式与内容的统一。“表示理解并给予安慰”主要是论述,为说理。“提出建议并说明理由”
主要是说明,建议或指导别人如何做,通常使用祈使句等表示建议的句型。本篇作文兼有议
论和说明。
三、时态、人称、词数等。本文的基调为现在范畴的时态,人称以第二人称为主。注意
在行文中使用一些高级句型,提高作文档次。词数要求为 120 左右。
【参考范文】
Hi_Worried,
I'm_sorry_to_know_that_you_are_having_such_a_bad_time_at_the_moment. The truth is
everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to
worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or
say anything you'll regret. Here are three useful tips:
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger
out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends
as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of your anger. And third, remain optimistic
about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours,
Jamie
(2014﹒江西)
假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华,母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in
senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动,特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以
下提示准备一份英语发言稿。
1. 学会学习:方法、习惯等;
2. 学会做人:真诚、友善等;
3. 其他方面:考生自拟。
注意:1. 词数 120 左右;
2. 发言稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! It is my honour to be here to share with you my opinions on what
to learn in senior high school.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
【思路点拨】
今年的书面表达仍然属于半开放型作文试题,话题为学生所熟悉,要求考生以“高中阶
段学习什么”为主题写一篇 120 词左右的发言稿,要求向高一学生传授高中三年的学习和生
活体会。写作前要注意审题,由作文的要求可知,此篇文章首先应该抓住三个主要内容来展
开写作,即如何学习,如何做人及其他方面;然后确定时态,由本文的内容可判断,本文应
该以一般过去时为主,兼有一般将来时。考生同时应注意使用各种句式以及衔接词,尽量使
文章语言丰富,表达流畅。
One possible version:
Good_morning,_everyone!_It_is_my_honour_to_be_here_to_share_with_you_my_opinions
_on_what_to_learn_in_senior_high_school.
In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly, we should learn to
learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals.
Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get
actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.
In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers
and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a
harmonious atmosphere.
Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really
helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
No pain, no gain. I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colourful and fruitful
life here.
Thank_you!
(2014﹒新课标全国卷Ⅱ)
一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成
短文。
1. 家庭;
2. 工作;
3. 业余生活。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语已为你写好。
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
【思路点拨】 本文的话题是“十年后的我”,要求考生从家庭、工作和业余生活三方面
来畅想十年以后的自己。文章应该使用将来时和第一人称。
参考要点:1.十年以后的生活和现在完全不同,会成为一个成年人,有了自己的家庭,
甚至有了可爱的孩子。2.希望自己能够在自己喜欢的计算机行业工作,做一名程序设计师。
工作顺利,和同事相处融洽。3.在业余生活中经常参加锻炼,如游泳、登山等。假期里出去
旅游,生活多姿多彩。
本文要求考生充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要
点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁。考生要根据情景的发
展,按顺序安排好材料,同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。考
生必须认真检查是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【参考范文】
I_often_imagine_what_my_life_will_be_like_in_the_future. I think my life will be very
different in ten years. I will be twenty eight years old by then. I will have my own family,
probably with a lovely child. I hope I'll work in a computer company as a program designer. I'll
enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I'll do a good job in whatever I do. In my
free time, I'll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games.
On my holidays, I'll travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more
colourful.
(2014﹒陕西)
假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。
请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。
写作要点:
1. 表示对客人的欢迎;
2. 介绍此项活动(如活动目的、内容等);
3. 表达对客人的祝愿。
写作要求:
1. 词数不少于 100;
2. 称呼已经给出,请写欢迎词正文;
3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear American guests,
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
【思路点拨】本题是应用文写作,体裁是写欢迎辞,是篇材料作文,且文体格式已经给
出,因此在审题环节主要从以下几点着手:(1)主体时态:一般现在时;(2)主体人称:第三
人称或第二人称;(3)写作要点:①欢迎客人;②“英语周”活动;③活动目的;④活动内
容;⑤祝愿。在审题结束后要注意表达的准确性,行文的逻辑性和句式、词汇的多样性,尽
量使用多样化的词汇和句式,并注意写作的层次,恰当地使用连接词和过渡性词汇,以增强
文章的逻辑性和可读性。最后就是要注意书写的美观和标点符号的准确使用,避免拼写、标
点等较低级的错误。
【参考范文】
Dear_American_guests,
On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to
have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.
As scheduled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this programme is to
develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The
programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and
so on. The show will begin at two o'clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you
are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence.
I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.
(2014﹒四川)
假设你是李夏,你的美国笔友 Sam 来信关心你参加高考的情况,请根据以下要点回信
告知:
1. 考试日期与科目;
2. 考试准备情况;
3. 考试时的状态;
4. 对试题的感受;
5. 可能的考试结果。
注意:
1. 词数 120 左右;
2. 开头语和结尾语已为你写好;
3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
4. 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇:高考 college entrance examination
Dear Sam,
Thank you for your concern.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Xia
【思路点拨】 今年四川省的写作仍沿用往年的半开放式作文形式。本次写作以信为载
体,要求考生介绍自己参加高考的相关事宜。信的开头和结尾已经给出,不需要考虑信的格
式,只需审出此文要点:1.考试日期与科目;2.考试准备情况;3.考试时的状态;4.对试题的
感受;5.可能的考试结果。考生在写作过程中可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯并满足词数的
要求。考生还可以根据行文的需要进行分段。
One possible version:
Dear_Sam,
Thank_you_for_your_concern. Well, I'm now taking the onceayear college entrance
examination. We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th, on the first day of which
Chinese and maths will be tested, the second day geography, history, politics and English.
Over the past ten months, we have been busy in preparing for this examination. Besides
listening to teachers carefully in class, we often study deep into the night. Therefore, I believe I
can succeed.
At first, I felt a little bit nervous but soon I calmed down because Chinese and maths, I came
to realize, were very easy and English is my favourite subject. So I suppose I can get a good mark
which will enable me to enter my ideal college.
Best_wishes!
Yours,_
Li_Xia
(2014﹒天津)
假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津, 得知美国学生 Chris 作为交换生, 下学期
将到你班学习。 请你根据以下提示, 给他写封邮件:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、 饮食等);
3. 介绍本班情况;
4. 希望 Chris 做哪些事情, 以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊。
注意:
1. 请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息;
2. 可适当加入细节, 使内容充实、行文连贯;
3. 词数不少于 100; 开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇:交换生 exchange student
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade
Eleven.________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
【思路点拨】 随着时代的发展,电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎,所以写电子邮
件是中学生经常做的事,这种形式的写作贴近学生生活,使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注
意:
1. 结构上:采用三段成文,第一段表示欢迎,第二段介绍本地的生活,第三段介绍本
班情况,以及为促进友谊 Chris 要做的一些事情。第二、三两点是作文的重点内容,需要多
用一些笔墨。
2. 时态:以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
3. 人称:第一人称。
4. 注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅。
5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
【参考范文】
Dear_Chris,
I'm_Li_Jin,_monitor_of_Class_One,_Grade_Eleven. I'm very delighted to learn that you're
coming to our class to study with us next term. I, on behalf of the whole class, welcome to China
warmly.
It is a great honour for me to tell you some information relevant to the local life. First, our
traditional foods are steambread and rice. I hope you can get used to them soon. In addition, the
climate here is very similar to that in the USA, so there is no need for you to worry about it.
Now I'll introduce our class to you. Our class is made up of 52 students, all of whom are
hardworking and friendly. There is no doubt that you can get along well with them. Our teachers
are kind to us and treat us as their friends. Last of all, I would appreciate it if you can do
something, such as helping us practise our spoken English, and introducing something about
American culture, to promote the understanding and friendship between the students of the two
countries.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li_Lin_
(2015﹒新课标全国 II) 书面表达(满分 25 分)
86.假如你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们国重阳节(the Double
Ninth Festival)。请给外教 Lucy 写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容包括:
1. 出发及返回时间;
2. 活动:包饺子、表演节目等。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 结语已为你写好。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Lucy,
I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the
Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings
and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing
and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in
the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the
gate at 9 in the morning.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
(2015﹒新课标全国 I)
第二节 书面表达(满分 25 分)
假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的
短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:
1. 栏目介绍;
2. 稿件内容;
3. 稿件长度:约 400 词;
4. 交稿日期:6 月 28 日前。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯的;
3. 开头语已为你写好。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It
carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you
please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would
especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life
of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and
informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于英文书信,根据提示信息要求写一封给美国朋友彼得写信的约
稿,为学校校英文报“外国文化”栏目刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的文章。写作时
注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确三个要点:首先,
简单介绍校英文报栏目的情况。2、建议 Peter 介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活。3、稿件的
要求及时间。写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。就本文而言应该用一般现在
时态。 4、注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
(2015﹒北京)
假如你是红星中学高三李华,请给你的美国朋友 Jim 写一封信,告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练
营,希望他一起参加,邮件的内容包括:
1. 介绍训练营的相关内容(例如;时间,地点,参加者等);
2. 说明你打算参加的原因;
3. 询问对方的意向。
注意: 1. 词数不少于 50;
2. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
提示词:龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training Camp
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat
Training Camp. I wonder if you’d like to go with me.
This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and
learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more
information.
Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇文章重点是李华邀请英国朋友 Jim 参加龙舟训练营,属于典型的邀请信,只
需按照邀请信的写作流程就可轻松写出。即发出邀请— 介绍活动(时间,地点,内容,参加
原因)—期待和感谢。
(2015﹒广东)
基础写作(共 1 小题,满分 15 分)
你接受了一项写作任务,为英语校报写一篇科技报道。
[写作内容]
请根据以下信息,介绍国外医疗行业出现的一项新技术。内容包括:
技术名称:DNA 检测
检测方法:唾液样本分析
检测费用:125 英镑
检测时长:4 到 6 周
检测用途: 1. 预测重大疾病
2. 预知食物偏好
3. 提示合适的锻炼方式
检测影响: 1. 增强健康意识
2. 易引起过度焦虑
*唾液样本:saliva sample
[写作要求]
只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容;
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。
【答案】
第一节 DNA Detection
We can use saliva sample to detect whether people have major illnesses, predict whether people
are particular about food and remind people to take proper exercise. People should pay 125
pounds for it. It takes four to six weeks to finish the report. After detection we can realize we
should strengthen our bodies. It may cause too many worries.
【解析】
试题分析:对于基础写作用 5 个句子概括医疗新技术,要求必须用上所有的要点,不能遗漏。
对于概括短文大意,要抓住要点。叙述自己的班级情况时:1.仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题
提供的所有信息。2.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在
时态及一般将来时。 3.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
(2015﹒陕西)
书面表达(满分 30 分)
假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事,请阅读启事,
并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20
student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you
are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at
chenlaoshi@aef.com.
写作要点:
1.表示写信意图;
2.陈述应征目的;
3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。
写作要求:
1.邮件词数不少于 100;
2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;
3.可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯
4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear MS Chen ,
I’mLi Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear MS Chen ,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student
volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able
to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking
English in public.
As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command
of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping
hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers
and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be gratefull if you could give
me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于英文书信,根据提示可知需要结合“英语文化节”的一则招募启
事写一封应征邮件。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读招募启事,弄清招募职位所有信息
和要求;2、根据写作要点从三个方面写应征邮件。写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、
根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用
高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
(2015﹒天津)
书面表达(满分 25 分)
61.
假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津,你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。
请根据以下提示,写一封邮件与中文班班长 Chris 联系,并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参
加夏令营时带去赠书。
(1)自我介绍;
(2)拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等;
(3)询问对方的其他需求。
注意:
(1)词数不少于 100;
(2)请适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇:学生会 the Student Union
Dear Chris,
此处不能答题
Yours,
Li
Jin
【参考答案】略
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面要求写一封电子邮件。写作的时候要注意以下几点:一、动笔前,一定
要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。内容要点包括:1.自
我介绍及写信目的;2.拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等;3. 询问对方的其他需求; 4.告
知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。二、写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文
意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高
级句型使文章显得更有档次。
(2015﹒重庆)
写作二(满分 20 分)
Bookcrossing. Com 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参
与方式:一是自由分享(wild release),即把书放在指定地点,由其他参与者自由获取;二
是定向分享(controlled release),即直接传递给另一位参与者。假设你是李华,请用英文写
信申请参加。内容应包括:
· 表明写信目的
· 选择一种分享方式
· 简述作出该选择的理由
· 希望了解更多信息
注意:(1)词数不少于 80;
(2)在答题卡上做答
(3)书信格式及开头已给出(不计入总词数)
【参考答案】
Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply
for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.
You’ve introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release. Of the two,
the latter wins my favor. By the means of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other
participants, not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from
different parts of the world as well.
If you could provide more specific information, I would be well grateful. Looking forward
to your reply.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,
一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的
要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,
尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
(2016﹒全国新课标 III) 书面表达(满分 25 分)
假定你是李华,与留学生朋友 Bob 约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,
内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.另约时间。
注意:
1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just
found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not
cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read
and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let
me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:题目要求写- -封道歉信,就不能如约一起去书向 Bob 道歉,使用第一人
称和一般现在时进行写作。写作内容包括:表示歉意;说明原因;另约时间。注意使用连接词,
使作文内容连贯。
(2016﹒北京) 书面表达(共两节,35 分)
第一节(15 分)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友 Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很
感兴趣,并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给 Jim 回信,内容包括:
1. 该人物是谁;
2. 该人物的主要贡献;
3. 该人物对你的影响。
注意:
1. 词数不少于 50;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
________
_____________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.
As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late
Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Mps and Records of the World), introduced modern
technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to
major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.
Cheers!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】题材新颖,要求介绍中国历史人物,内容包括喜欢的历史人物、他的贡献和对你的
影响。不少于 50 词,使用一般过去时和一般现在时以及第一人称和第三人称进行写作。
(2016﹒四川) 书面表达(满分 25 分)
某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿,内
容包括:
1. 你最喜欢的季节;
2. 你喜欢该季节的两条理由(如:气候、景色、活动、感受……)。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目已为你写好;
3. 行文连贯,语篇完整;
4. 文中不得透露个人真实信息。
The Season I Like Best
Spring, the symbol of beauty and hope, is the season I like best.
I am fond of spring because it treats me poetic scenery of nature. Blooming
flowers add vivid colors to my sight. Also, the symphony of all kinds of insects and
birds brings aesthetic (美学的) harmony to me. What’s more, the gentle rain makes
spring a fantasy world.
And it’s because spring arouses everyone’s hope that I’m keen on spring most.
Look! The frozen ice is melting. Listen! All living creatures are waking up. Spring
pictures a world where cold and death are fading away while warmth and life are
coming back. Thus, everyone is bound to be filled with hope and love.
I love spring, which can’t be too admirable and cherished.
(129 words)
(2016﹒浙江) 书面表达(满分 30 分)
“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇 100-120
词的短文。
要求如下:
1.简述你对这句名言的理解;
2.用一个具体事例加以说明;
3.给出恰当的结尾。
注意:1.文章的标题已给出(不计词数):
2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息,否则按作弊行
为认定。
Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better
【答案】One possible student version
Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better
Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without
being actually carried out.
My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the
event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set
out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful
pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize
winner.
I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.
【解析】试题分析:本文为-篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目判断作文主要介
绍要将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写,不能走题。提纲部分还要求三个方面:
1.简述你对这句名言的理解; 2 用一个具体事例加以说明; 3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定作文
的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后,还要注意文章使用第一人称和- 般现在时,一般过
去时。 写作时发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地
表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁,同时应选用合适的连接词或过
渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点
误用等。
(2017﹒新课标Ⅰ)
假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友 Leslie 学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的
计划。内容包括:
1. 时间和地点;
2. 内容:学习唐诗;
3. 课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Leslie,
I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested
in Chinese culture. Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to
learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign
learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore,
before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better
appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2017﹒新课标Ⅱ)
假定你是李华,想邀请外教 Henry 一起参观中国剪纸(papercutting)艺术展。请给他
写封邮件,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.展览内容。
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
分析 本篇书面表达属于英文书信,是很常见的考查写作能力的形式,写作难度不大.根据
提示信息要求给外教 Henry 写信,邀请他参观中国剪纸艺术展.写作时注意以下几点:首先
需要注意信件的写作格式规范,注意抬头和信尾的署名;其次要注意不能遗漏信件的要
点.信中明确两个要点:1.展览的时间和地点;2.展览的内容.第三,写作时根据要表达
的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时和一般将来时两种时态.最后,
注意尽量避免使用没有把握的单词和句子,保持字迹工整、卷面整洁.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:be delighted to do 很高兴
去做某事;As is well-known to us all 众所周知;be interested in 对…感兴趣;plan to
do 计划做某事;show sb around 领着某人参观;enjoy yourself 过得愉快;look forward
to 盼望
I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese
paper-cutting exhibition,which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall
and last for a week.(高分句型一)
As is well-known to us all,Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and
I'm sure you will be interested in it,so I plan to invite you to pay a close
visit.(高分句型二)
I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.(高分句型三)
解答
Dear Henry,
I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese
paper-cutting exhibition,which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall
and last for a week.(高分句型一)(展览时间、地点)As is well-known to us all,Chinese
paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I'm sure you will be interested in
it,so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit.(高分句型二)The exhibition is
a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in China.(展
览内容)During the activity,I will show you around our school and this is a good
chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Chinese traditional culture.
Would you please have a look at the exhibition with me?I'd appreciate it if
you could accept my invitation.(高分句型三) I'm looking forward to receiving your
reply as soon as possible.(殷切希望)
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 提纲类在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文
意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意高级词汇和高级句
型使文章显得更有档次,平时需要积累短语和重要句型.
(2017﹒新课标Ⅲ)
假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友 Eric 写封
邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:
1.球队活动;
2.报名方式及截止日期。
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear Eric,
I was informed that our school Pingpong Team is looking for new members among
us students. I know you show great fancy in ball games, especially pingpong.
As you know, playing pingpong can not only build up your body but also shape
your character. Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially
beneficial to you.
Would you like to join? If so, please go to sign up at the Student Union office,
which is on the second floor of the Teaching Building. You can go there any time
this Saturday afternoon. If you want me to accompany you, please let me know. I will
be available any time.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2017﹒天津)
假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师 Mrs Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近
况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
1.简要介绍自己的学习和生活;
2.告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备
(如深入了解天津等);
3.希望她有机会重访天津。
注意: 1.词数不少于 100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:第十三届全运会 the 13th National Games
Dear Mrs Green,
I'm so glad to hear from you.
_________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
One possible version:
Dear Mrs Green,__
I'm so glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me about my study
and life. I'm very pleased to tell you that I have made great progress in my spoken
English since you left. As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor
activities, which builds up my body and character as well.
I have good news to tell you that I have been chosen to be a volunteer in the
coming 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. To be a
qualified volunteer, I made some preparations. I interviewed many people from all
walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin.
I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance. Looking forward to seeing
you again.
Yours,
Li Jin
(2017﹒浙江)
第一节 应用文写作(满分 15 分)
假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友 Chris 写封邮件邀请他参加。内
容包括:
1. 参加者;
2. 时间、地点;
3. 活动:登山、野餐等。
注意:1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
How are you doing? I am writing to invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this
Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7:00 am at the school gate. About
two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a picnic by
the lake at the foot of the mountain.
Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team. I do hope that you could
join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a
great time. However, if you don't have spare time for this trip, it is fine. It's
just up to you.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2017﹒北京)
你的英国朋友 Jim 所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之
行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim 来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1. 你建议的线路;
2. 你的理由;
3. 你的祝愿。
注意:1. 词数不少于 50;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
1. I am delighted to learn that…
2. Of the two routes given by…, I strongly recommend that…
3. immersed in the grandeur and splendour of the landscape
4. I promise that the trip, both fruitful and rewarding, will turn out to be
a memorable experience for you.
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I'm happy to receive your letter and know you're coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended.
Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the
mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China
and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many
wellknown sightseeing spots. That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze will
be a better choice.
Hope you'll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2018﹒全国Ⅰ)
假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友 Terry 将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。
请你回复邮件。内容包括:
(1).到达时间;
(2).合适的礼物;
【答案】略
点睛:本文虽然看起来比较容易,但学生真正动起笔来,还是比较困惑的。原因为:1.看起
来中国餐桌礼仪很熟悉,但内容很多,一时间不知道该写什么;2.100 单词左右,写出到达
时间;合适的礼物;餐桌礼仪三个内容,信息量大,选择有困难;
应对方法:近年来高考写作的命题常用的思想就是高起点低落点。高起点题目很高,中国文
化,中国故事,中国礼仪等等,但最终都把它们落在应用文的框架里,这就是低落点。写这
样的作文,一定要注意不能写过于具体的内容,要找最重要的,最熟悉的写,不要面面俱到,
中国餐桌礼仪内容太多,100 单词无法写。找重点,以点带面。但选择重要内容本身就是一
种能力。
(2018﹒全国Ⅱ)
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英语短片 Growing
Together,内容包括:
(1)短片内容:学校的发展;
(2)放映时间、地点;
(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:
(1)词数 100 左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】略
【解析】英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主,多使用被动语态、简单句。在通
知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。
第二个注意点:层次一定要清晰,一个层次要表达一件事情,使人看起来一目了然。
(2018﹒全国Ⅲ)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包
括:
1. 学校的体育场馆;
2. 主要的运动项目;
3. 你喜欢的项目。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右:
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Peter,
【解析】本题作文为提纲式作文,形式依然是书信,即给英国朋友 Peter 介绍学校体育运动
情况,属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际,学生并不陌生,有话可说。
(2018﹒北京)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友 Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化
感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:
(1) 表示欢迎;
(2) 推荐他上哪所大学;
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意:(1). 词数不少于 50;
(2). 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like
to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable
experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one
of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be
completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading
in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese
can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing
when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点说明:文章中巧妙使用非谓语 Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, 使句子结构
紧凑。
使用定语从句 Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely
soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. 使句子表达更完美;巧妙使用连接词 while
引出来中国前的准备,使句子结构对称。
(2018﹒浙江)
第一节 应用文写作
66. 假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内
容包括:
(1). 口语能力:
(2). 相关经验;
(3). 应聘目的。
注意:
(1). 词数 80 左右;
(2). 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our
school English association.
I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can
communicate well with native speakers of English. What's more, I am kind and friendly
to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.
I' m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve
my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills. Hopefully I
can receive your acceptance.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写应聘信。
(2018﹒天津)
书面表达(满分 25 分)
61. 假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友 Chris 就读于天津某国际
学校,他普在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于 7 月底在天
津举行的世界青少学机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
(1)比赛的时间、地点;
(2)邀请他的原因;
(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。
注意:(1)词数不少于 100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【范文】
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. Targeted at cultivating the teenagers' interest in scientific
exploration and encouraging more students to throw themselves into research, a competition, titled
the World Adolescent Robotics Competition, will take place in the Children's palace Tianjin in the
late July. The competition offers adolescents a good chance to show their talents and initiative and
learn from each other meanwhile.
I am eager to invite you to join our team for the upcoming event, in which you will demonstrate
your ability and make acquaintance of more friends with the same interest. As far as I know, you
have proved yourself by carrying off some prizes in the previous competitions. Impressed by your
teamwork spirit and talent in this field, I am confident that you will love the challenge and our team.
By working in a group, we are able to overcome our weaknesses by acquiring others' strong points
as well as double our achievements.
If you are interested in it, please let me know and I will deliver the training program to your
online mailbox. It would be fantastic if you could bring up your advice, which is bound to be of
great use for us. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达
出来。动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。
本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误,看
能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句,当然,没有把握的句子不要写。
(2019﹒全国卷Ⅰ)
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做
志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.能做的事情。
注意::
1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.结束语已为你写好。
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【写作指导】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。
1.审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信,人称使用第一人称和第二人称,时态用一般
现在式。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式,称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段,写信的目的,中间段写个人优势和能做的事,
最后一段总结。
3.关键词
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有:volunteer,a
Chinese Painting Exhibition,local city,advantages,a good command of,beneficial for,familiarity
with,appreciate ,take my application into consideration。通过词汇铺垫,我们就很容易地行
文了,文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误,并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇,
如 First of all, Besides, to begin with,moreover,as for me,Last but not least,等,使全文衔
接自然,语义流畅。
【范文】
Dear sir or madam,
I am a Chinese student named Li Hua, who is studying in London during the summer vacation. Knowing that
the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings, I am writing to apply for volunteering. As a
student who has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old, I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce
Chinese paintings to foreigners. Besides, my fluent spoken English and rich knowledge about Chinese paintings
will help visitors understand the meaning behind each painting deeply. I will appreciate it if I could be given the
opportunity.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【点睛】
本文首段开门见山,表达了写信的目的;第 2 段详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情,
an outgoing boy, who is studying in London.此处使用了同位语和非限制性定语从句。having
heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city.使用了分词做状语和宾语
从句及被动语态。having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a
child, I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese
paintings.使用了分词和非限制性定语从句。另外 First of all, Besides, Last but not least 的使用
使文章富有条理性。此外,还使用了高级句式结构,如 I would appreciate it if you could take my
application into consideration 条件状语从句。
(2019﹒全国卷Ⅱ)
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友 Chris 球队近期将参加比赛,内
容包括:
1.比赛信息;
2.赛前准备;
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will
take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4th. We will play against the team from
HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard.
So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after school every day. Please come to the
school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.
You’re an excellent player. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game.
Let’s try hard together!
Cheers,
Li Hua
【分析】今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁,仍旧是应用文。本次书面表达要求考生写
一封邮件告知队友有关比赛的信息。
本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的;然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、
地点以及赛前的准备事项,注意事件信息的三要素:时间、地点、人物,要交代清楚;第三
则要表达对队友的期待和鼓励。
【点睛】本文内容完整,详略得当,并运用了高级句式。I’m writing to let you know that we will
have a volleyball match next month.宾语从句;In order to win the match 不定式作目 状语。文
章语言流畅,上下文转换自然。
的
(2019﹒全国卷Ⅲ)
假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友 Allen 参加,内容包
括:
1.时间;
2.活动安排;
3.欢迎他表演节目。
注意:
1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【范文】
Dear Allen,
How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the
school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then
there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely
welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】
今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件,告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。
【详解】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的,之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息,
最后欢迎他表演节目。
第二,根据提纲,确定关键词语,如:How is everything going? a music festival,in the school
hall,The opening ceremony 等。
第三,注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。
【点睛】本文内容完整,详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如:You are definitely welcome to show
up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.定语从句。提升了文章档次。
(2019﹒北京)
第一节 (15 分)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim 打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海
旅游,发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.交通出行;
2.必备衣物。
注意:
1.词数不少于 50;
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m pleased that you’re coming to tour in China.
I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around. Tianjin will be your next
stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed
trains to both cities. Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella
with you.
Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本文是一篇应用文,要求给朋友写回信。
【详解】红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友 Jim 打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游,发
来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件,内容包括: 1.交通出行; 2.必备衣物。本文时态
应采用一般现在时和一般将来时,用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写:
首先表达欢迎 Jim 来中国;然后交代交通出行和必备衣物;最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用
高级词汇和句式,为文章增添色彩;注意使用连接词、衔接词,使文章自然、流畅。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型。that you’re coming to tour
in China.和 that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around.是宾语从句。 where you can
stay for a week.是非限制性定语从句。
(2019﹒浙江)
第一节 应用文写作(满分 15 分)
假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友 Alex 即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封
邮件,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.回顾 Alex 对你的帮助;
3.临别祝愿。
注意:
1.词数 80 左右;
2 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【写作指导】
这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.动笔前,一定要
认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能选漏要点,跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比
较具体,故需要准确表达,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽
量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.
特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记
忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
【范文】
Dear Chris,
I am so regretful to know that you are going to return to your home before long. We get
along well during your stay in China and you offered me lots of help. I would like to express my
gratitude to you for your help with my English. While studying in China, you always spent your
free time in helping me polish up my oral English. It is you who shared me with rich knowledge of
English and English culture. Never will I forget you and your kindness. It is my hope that you can
remember me as often as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua