十年高考真题分类汇编(2010-2019) 英 语
专题 28 开放式书面表达
(2010·安徽)
假设你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动,征文的内容要求你在电视、手机(cell)
和网络三者中,放弃其中一个并陈述理由。请你以“Which would you give up:TV,cell,or Web?”
为题,写一篇英语短文。
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
We are now living in an information age ,in which TV,cells and the Web are widely used.It
seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them.
However, if I had to give up one of them . I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my
cell or cut off the internet.I could do without TV because few shows my fancy , and there’re too
many commercials.Besides. most programs on TV are available elsewhere.
As for cells and the Web ,they are more necessary to me .I need a cell to keep in touch with
my friends and family,and almost all information can be gathered on the Internet.
(2010·湖北)
请你根据以下提示,结合生活中的一个事例,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈微笑的作用。
The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile.A smile can
help us get through difficult situation and find friends in a world of strangers.A smile can open
doors and tear down walls.
注意:①无须写标题;
②内容只需涉及一个方面;
③词数为 100 左右。
【参考范文】
(2010·北京)
请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked
to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
基本分析:
1. 三分之一描写要点:阳光,楼(很靠近),弯曲的树。(the sun, two apartments/ flats
closely-located, the winding/ twisted tree)
2. 三分之二议论着眼立意:
—— 1.人生角度:在成长的道路上(树的成长),有曲折,有困难,(建筑的阻挡,弯曲)但
是只要向着光明和希望(太阳)去努力拼搏,坚持不懈,还是能够冲破桎梏取得成功(树在
楼的夹缝中长高了,超出建筑)。
—— 2.和谐角度: 城市的发展(建筑)和环境的可持续发展(树的成长)要协调,要平衡,
才能欣然共存(在阳光下)
3. 立意与现实生活关系:1. 引导 90 后要具有积极的生活态度,生活非一帆风顺的。2. 扣
住低碳生活的环保热点,城市和环境的和谐发展也是低碳生活的必需。
4. 参考范文(官方):
In the picture, between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree. Unlike most trees, this one
bends in the middle, struggling all the way up to get more sunshine. The picture reminds me of
those who succeed in unfavorable condition. Faced with difficulties, they never give up but try
their best to find a way out. Life can be hard. But if we have the courage and determination, we
will finally get the sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does。
(2011·广东)
阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文
When Sam first got to his boarding school with his parents, he was very happy. He thought
he would be able(http://www.unjs.com) to go home every weekend. When he was told he
would not, he started crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy.
He was given uniforms and all other things that he would need for the term. He started crying
when it was time for his parents to leave. He was then taken to the dorm, where he saw other
children happy. He tried as much as he could to fit in but could not because his mind was at home.
He started feeling homesick (想家) 安定 wanted to go homes as soon as possible.
He got sick soon because he could not eat the school food. He could not concentrate in the
classroom. All he could think was being at home with his family. He had no mobile phone or other
means to get in touch with his parents. He was angry and felt lonely. He thought his parents hated
him and that was why they left him in a boarding school.
[写作内容]
1. 以约 30 个词概括上文的主要内容。
2. 以约 120 个词讲述一次你(或你的朋友)想家的经历,内容包括:
⑴时间、地点和起因;
⑵想家给学习和生活带来的影响;
⑶你(或你朋友)是如何应对的。
[写作要求]
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引
用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容何时,语句连贯。
【参考范文】
The story is about what Sam felt about his first boarding school life. As a child, he never left
his parents, so he didn’t get used to dealing with everything in school independently.
Once I had a similar experience. I finished my junior middle school in a boarding school. At
the age of 13, I never delt with the daily things, such as washing clothes, taking care of money etc.
especially I felt lonely because I hardly knew any people. At first, I could not get on well with my
classmates and I always looked forward to being on holiday to meet my parents. I could not
concentrate on my subjects. As time went by, I gradually adapted myself to the school life. I made
several friends with our classmates and often took part in the activities, in which I improved my
communicating skills. As I had a lot of interesting things to do, I finally enjoyed my school life.
Now, whenever I think of my first boarding school life, I think it instructive and
unforgettable.
【解析】
1.这是一篇记叙文写作。此话题贴近生活,因为几乎每个学生都进过寄宿制学校,所以真实
的经历让学生有话可写;
2. 本写作具有一定的开放性。它要求考生充分发挥自己的想象力并运用熟练的语言知识将
其表达出来。这充分考查了考生的能力。
3. 注意文章的写作内容要齐全,按要求该文章应分为二段。第一段:以 30 词概括记叙文的
主要内容;第二段:结合自己或朋友的实际情况描述自己想家的经历。内容包括:(1)时间、
地点和起因;(2)想家给学习或生活带来的影响;(3) 你(或你的朋友)是如何应对的。
4.文章应以过去时态为主。
(2011·安徽卷)
【解析】
从出题形式来看,今年的书面表达仍然和去年文体一样,属于开放性类的文体,话题上选择
了考生非常熟悉话题:谈论下考生学习上的困境。
此类文章和 09 年的一样属于"solving problems"的写作类型,其写作步骤为:提出问题-
分析问题-解决问题。虽然题目中没有给出提纲,但是这类文体通常是这种写法。
开放性的作文对高考学生的思路整理是个挑战,很多学生在看到作文的时候头脑里是没
有什么思路的,不知道从和何处写起,其实考生只要从自身想起,想到一个困难,然后再想
出解决方法就可以,比如英语学习中的单词不熟悉,就是一个很贴合生活和学习的方面,此
外想拿到高分重在"设计",最简单的捷径就是适当选用复合句和关联词,对文章进行连接和
润色,同时多多准确使用高级词汇和高级语法。
(2012·安徽)
书面表达(满分 25 分)
假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流,主题是高中生对文,理科的选择。请你用英语
写一篇发言稿,向他们介绍你所做的选择,并说明选择的理由。
注意: 1.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.词数 120 左右;
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。
参考词汇:文科 arts;理科:science
Good afternoon ,everyone.
Welcome to our school !______________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
Thinks!
解答
Good afternoon,everyone.
Welcome to our school!High school students are faced with a choice between art and science.It
was not an easy choice for me to make.After careful consideration,though,I decided on science
as my main subject of study.(自己的选择)
First,science graduates are in greater demand than arts ones in China.Second,the science major
can help me achieve my childhood’s dream of becoming a scientist.Third,my parents wish me to
study science at college because they believe I will have a brighter future as a science
student.Last but not least,my physics teacher is my role model whose influence on me had a lot
to do with my decision.【高分句型】(选择理由)
It is for these reasons that I finally made my choice.【高分句型】
Thanks!
解析
本文为应用文---写一发言稿,介绍自己对文理科的选择并阐述选择的理由,开头和结尾已写
好,既属于半开放式作文又类似于提纲作文.在写作时应使用第一人称,时态主要为一般现
在时为主.重要短语:be faced with (面临),make a choice(做出选择),decide on…..(决
定,确定…),be in greater demand (需求大),achieve one’s dream (实现梦想),role model
(榜样,典范),have an influence on sb(对…..有影响).
“
点评
开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.写好这类作
文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据
关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络 3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级
句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误
用等.
(2012·湖北)
短文写作(共 1 题;满分 30 分)
请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。
You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.
注意:①无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;
②除诗歌外,文体不限;
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
④词数为 120 左右。
【参考范文】
One Possible Version
Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary
school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found
the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided
to make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates.
Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in
my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.
My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that
determines who you are.
(2012·江西)
书面表达(满分25分)
某英文报社举办以“I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动,你打算投稿。请根据以下要点写
一篇短文:.
你为什么喜欢读书;
你喜欢读哪一类的书(例如:历史、科学、文学等)?请给出至少两个理由。
注意:词数120左右。
范文:
I Like Reading
Reading is my favorite hobby. I can never stop the love for reading because books are
likewise teachers as well as good friends in my life. As we know, books are the source of
knowledge. I benefit a great from reading.
There are a variety of books for us to choose from, like history books, science books, literary
books and so on. But what interests me most is literary books, especially those by famous writers.
For one thing, they hope to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizon. For another, they
can enrich my life and provide me with great fun.
Isn’t it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading?
在这个多媒体盘踞的年代,读书可谓已经渐渐淡出了我们的生活。
江西省选择了“读书”这个话题,非常普通,可谓是延续了去年的保守作风。依旧是单观
点话题,对于给出论点“爱读书”论述合理理由即可。高考话题主流都和学生、和校园相关,
江西和以往不同,今年青睐了这个主流。考题给出了明确的提纲,使得内容方面更加不容易
产生偏差。结构可以采用“总分”或者“总分总”,总述喜欢读书的原因,再分述喜欢书类的理
由,最后可以一句话结论。
(2013·北京)
第二节 开放作文(15 分) 请根据下面提示。写一篇作文。词数不少于 50.
You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him
how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.
【参考范文】1
I think the picture is telling us that there is usually a difference between one’s dream and
reality. People need to learn to face it. Everyone has his dream. However, it is not so easy for
people to realize their dreams every time. Just like the man in the picture, instead of the big fish he
wishes for, he actually catches a small one. In my opinion, people need to learn to accept the
reality and keep on trying. With another try, they may gain what they dream of.
【参考范文】2
Hi, Jim, there is an interesting picture conveying a message vividly that a difference between
reality and dream may as well be recognized in our life. Evidently, realizing this difference and
trying to shorten this gap is the key to achieving our accomplishment, otherwise nothing will be
gotten in the end.
In our daily life, some people are aware of their ability, making great efforts to improve
themselves, while others ignore the disparity between their earnest wish and poorest actuality,
doing nothing but complaining. Conceivably, the confused man in the picture is exactly the latter
one. In this picture, a man is fishing on a big stone, waiting and waiting. However, the small fish
he has caught is totally different from the big one he is longing for. Now, there are two options in
front of him: face the reality and keep trying till get the dreamy fish, or drop his fishing rod and
feel desperate. Apparently, he chooses the second one. Such a situation seems fairly common in
our society. We are faced with this kind of intriguing question all the time, and every choice we
make has great influence on our way to success. Making an accurate estimate of our realities and
dreams, then sparing no efforts to approach the tip is the only option for us to make, provided that
we are in great want of achieving our goals.
Based on the above statement, a conclusion will be arrived at that learning to accept the
reality and adopting a positive attitude towards the dream is what we are supposed to do, when
confronting our less-satisfying situation.
(2013·重庆)
写作一(满分 15 分)
请结合材料,按要求用英文写作。
A mother said, “My son is always on the phone, sleeping, out with friends, or in his room. He
never has time to talk to me.”
【参考范文】
I must say that I have been behaving this way to some degree. Though I know Mum is the
most important person in my world, I just can not do what she likes me to do. It seems that I quite
often stay away from my dear mum in playing my phone, sleeping, hanging out with my friend, or
just shutting out my mum in my room.
Having read about the above common complaint from so many mothers, I feel ashamed and
guilty. From now on, I shall try my best to stay with my dear parents as often as possible. I must
confess we young generation must realize that our parents care for us as well as hoping to share
what we have been doing with them.
(2013·湖北)
请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。
We all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”, but we should also be aware that
words can hurt people, too.
注意:①无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;
②除诗歌外,文体不限;
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
④词数为 120 左右。
【参考范文】
One possible version:
My classmate admires my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his
compliments.
One day, when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class, we were asked to make a
sentence with it. I volunteered to do it by saying “My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes
never fit him.” Hearing this, the whole class burst into laughter and my deskmate’s face turned red.
After class, I learned from the teacher that my deskmate would have dropped out of school if he
hadn’t been helped by others. My mindless words must have hurt him deeply.
Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative. We should
avoid hurting others if we can’t always be encouraging when we speak.
(2013·湖南)
Section C (25 marks)
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.
请以下列词语为关键词写一篇英语短文。
内容:
1.自己或他人的一次经历;
2.你的感受。
注意:
1.必须使用所给 4 个关键词;
2.词数不少于 120 个;
3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
One possible Version
Last week, a football match was held between we Class One and Class Two.
The players from both sides are all excellent basketball players, so the match went on fiercely
at first. At last the result is: the winner is Cass Two, and we were the loser.
We didn’t win the match, but we didn’t lose heart. One the one hand, we think that friendship
comes first, and match comes second. On the other hand, since we all tried our best, we had no
regret. In our life we may meet many failures, as long as we try our best, there’s no need feeling
regret for these failures. What’ more, we should analyze the reasons of failure to get success for
the next time.
In a word, success is important, so is failure, because it’s the mother of success.
(2013·浙江)
请以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题,用英语写一篇100---120个词的短文,记述一件你自己认
为得意的事情。要求如下:
1.记述事情的经过;
2.简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。
注意:文章的标题已给出,不计入词数。
One Thing I’m Proud of
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________
【参考范文】
match winner loser result
(2014·湖南)
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.
学校正在组织科技创新大赛,你想为日常生活中某件物品(如钢笔、书包、鞋子……)设
计添加新功能来参赛。请以“My magic________”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你的创意。
内容:
1.说明设计理由;
2.介绍新功能。
注意:
1. 词数不少于 120;
2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
【思路点拨】 题目中的英文提示虽然提到两个词,但是给考生自由发挥的空间却非常
大,它的主要要求是介绍科技创新方面的发明,并就此说明设计理由,介绍其新功能。因此
本文的体裁是说明文。考生首先应该确定文章的标题,然后说明设计理由和介绍新功能。
One possible version:
My magic pen
Pens are necessities for every student. So we are all familiar with them.
I designed my pen. On the one hand, it's easy to carry. On the other hand, it's used not only
for writing but also for other important aspects.Firstly, I put some batteries in the pen and fix a
light bulb, so when it is dark on my way home or to school, I can use it for a flasher. I won't be
afraid of darkness any more. Secondly, I fix a tiny clock in the pen, so I can know the time and I
don't have to wear my watch. At last, I put a sharp knife on the top of the pen. I can either use it
for cutting things or even protecting myself when I come across danger.
Such is the pen which I designed. Isn't it useful and attractive?
【亮点点击】 本文语言规范,条理清楚,脉络清晰。过渡性词汇,如 firstly, secondly, at
last, on the one hand, on the other hand 等的贴切使用使文章意义更连贯,逻辑更严密。 本文
总体上讲不失为一篇优秀的习作。
(2014·浙江)
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越,你认为学校图书馆
最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图
书馆王老师写一封 100~120 个词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由。
注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。
Dear Mr Wang,
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Yue
【思路点拨】 从文章体裁分析,这是较典型的推荐信写作,主要让考生就图书馆需要
的两种书展开叙述,同时写出推荐的理由。所以考生要根据自己的思路,先要表明写信的目
的在于推荐书,然后补充一定的推荐理由,最后还要提出希望得到图书馆的认可和赞同。文
章可以从三方面入手:第一部分说明写信的理由;第二部分重点讲述推荐书目的理由;第三
部分简要地进行感谢,希望得到认可。
在写作过程中,要注意好词好句的运用,如使用 give some suggestions, arouse the
curiosity, in addition to, recommend, not only…but also…等重要的词汇词组。句式要多样,如
可以用独立结构 Knowing that our library is going to…;主语从句 What we need most are
popular…;表语从句 That is why I recommend another…;状语从句 I’ll be glad if you can…等。
One possible version:
Dear_Mr_Wang,
Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.
What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic
principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects
better and arouse our curiosity about science discoveries.
In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspirations. That is why I
recommend another category of books, literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present
great thoughts, fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but
also encourage us to think critically.
I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.
Yours_sincerely,
Li_Yue
(2014·福建)
如何理解“成功”,不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation),按要求
用英语写一篇短文。
“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.”
—Sir Winston Churchill
内容要求:
1.你对该引语的理解;
2.你的相关经历;
3.恰当的结尾。
注意:
1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息;
3.词数 120 左右。
This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us
that________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
【思路点拨】 本文要求表达出“对成功的理解”,属于议论文,同时还要求写出“相关经
历”,故可以理解为这是一篇夹叙夹议的文章。
根据提示和要求可知,文章应分为三个部分,也就是三个段落,分别为:一、如何理解
该引语;二、相关的经历;三、切题的、恰当的结束语。
考生们写作时还要注意:1. 第一、三段的时态应以一般现在时为主,第二段以一般过
去时为主;2. 注意恰当使用连词,使文章自然、流畅。3. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以
提高文章档次。
One possible version:
This_quotation_from_Winston_Churchill_tells_us_that we shouldn't get discouraged right
after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to
continue efforts through failures.
At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn't
wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy
and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my
father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better.
Looking back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.
Actually, we can't succeed in everything we try. What's important is that we should
stick at it.
(2014·湖北)
请根据以下提示,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇短文。
Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible
member of the society.
注意:1.无须写标题;
2.除诗歌外,文体不限;
3.内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例;
4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
5.词数不少于 120,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。
【思路点拨】
我们所做的微小的事情对我们的社会能产生很大的影响,这告诉我们要关注生活中的小
事。该作文属于夹叙夹议文,在描述的过程中注意使用合适的事例。考生成文时应注意:
1. 结构上:采用三段式,第一段根据提供的句子提出自己的观点;第二段通过事例证
明自己的观点;第三段再用一两句话回归主题。第二段是本文的重点内容,需要多用一些笔
墨。
2. 时态:以一般过去时为主,辅以一般将来时;
3. 人称:第一人称;
4. 注意恰当地使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅;
5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文的档次。
【参考范文】
It isn't hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society.
I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my
way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten
years old was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately
rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly
injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of
what I did.
As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a
better society.
(2014·山东)
某英文报社组织题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动,你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中
任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文,内容须包括:1.该谚语的含义;2.体现该谚语含义的个
人经历。
①A friend in need is a friend indeed.
②Where there's a will, there's a way.
注意:1. 词数 120~150;
2. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇: 谚语 proverb
【思路点拨】 本篇写作要求是根据谚语写一篇短文,对于山东的考生来说是个新的题
型,类似于湖北的高考写作,是半开放的文章,所提供的信息内容贴近学生的生活,学生有
内容可写,难度不大。
写作该文章时应用第一人称,时态可用过去时和一般现在时。文章可分三段来写。第一
段解释谚语的含义;第二段描述体现谚语的个人经历;第三段总结你对谚语在生活中的理解。
注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅。适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
(2015﹒安徽)
某英文杂志正在举办以"Fancy yourself as an interviewer"为主题的征文活动,请你以“A
Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview" 为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容包括:
1. 采访的对象;
2. 采访的原因;
3. 想提的问题。
注意:
1. 词数 120 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4. 短文的标题已给出,不计人总词数。
A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】
A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.
I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but
also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration
and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.
If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was
trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun
as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be
very interesting.
【解析】
试题分析:题目是一篇命题材料作文。作文的写作要点已经给出,需要考生根据提示进行写
作,作文必须涵盖所有要点,还要注意语篇的连贯性。注意使用高级词汇和定语从句、倒装、
强调等重点语法知识。词数在 120 左右,标题不计入总词数。注意行文的连贯性,不能出现
与本人有关的信息。
(2015﹒湖北)
短文写作
请根据以下提示,并结合具体事例,有英语写一篇短文。
Questioning is a bridge to learning. When you begin to doubt something and search for an
answer,you will learn.
注意:1.无须写标题;
2.除诗歌外,文体不限;
3.内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例;
4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
5.词数不少于 120,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】
Questioning can lead to searching for an answer. If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to
whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.
Two years ago, our teacher offered us an answer to a difficult math problem in class.
Although the answer seemed a little strange, nobody but I doubted it. Thinking that his solution
might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way. Half
an hour later, I managed to find the correct answer. When I showed my answer to him, the teacher
praised me for my independent thinking.
From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek
the truth.
【解析】
试题分析:本文是一篇“提纲类开放式”作文,沿袭了近几年的高考模式,要求根据提示,并
结合具体事例,完成一篇英语短文。考生写作之前必须认真审题,注意描述具体事例时要用
过去时态,人称用第一人称,内容紧紧围绕所给的主题,最后要有总结,形成首尾呼应。
(2015﹒江苏)
书面表达 (满分 25 分)
81.请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章.
[写作内容]
1. 用约 30 个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;
2. 结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;
3. 根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不
少于两点)。
[写作要求]
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不必写标题。
[评分标准]
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
【答案】
The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also
threaten people’s lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.
Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large-scale construction of
roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing
number of cars these years. What’ s worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it
vital to obey traffic rules.
In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order.
Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone
don’t secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody’s
duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track. (150 words)
【解析】
试题分析:今年江苏高考英语采用了“材料类+图形+提纲类”形式,综合考查考生阅读材料,
识图和写作能力,较往年有所创新,也增加了难度。材料分为三部分:第一部分讲述了一位
老奶奶阻止车辆停放引发的争议。第二部分讲述了行人和自行车不遵守红绿灯,导致交通事
故发生的现象。第三部分是图表和文字,
反映近几年车辆的数量激增现象。要求第一段用 30 个单词概括材料内容;第二段分析导致
交通问题的原因;第三段从社会规则和个人行为谈谈启示(不少于两点)。
(2015﹒浙江)
书面表达(满分 30 分)
在班级活动中,当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时,你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人,
还是尊重大多数同学的意见?请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题,用英文写一篇
100~120 个词“短文。要求如下:
1.从以上两种做法中选择一种;
2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。
注意:短文中,不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则,按考试
作弊行为认定。
When I Have a Different Opinion
【参考答案】
When I Have a Different Opinion
We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to
deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it . By doing so, I
can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.
Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a
park while I had an idea of going to a nicer peace. I managed to persuade my classmates into
accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day . Good opinions are worth sticking to
because they can benefit us all.
An alternative student version:
When I Have a Different Opinion
We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion,
I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.
The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism;
I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to
have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my
classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have
lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达陈述观点及理由。
写作时注意以下几点:
1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确从以上两种做法中选择一种,是坚
持自己的观点并说服别人还是遵从大多数同学的意见。
2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或
词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。
3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。但是在以
具体事例阐述的时候使用过去时
4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
(2015﹒重庆)
写作一(满分 15 分)
请就以下话题,按要求用英文写作。
If you could give your younger self one piece of advice, what would you say?
要求:
(1)作出回答并说出理由;
(2)词数不少于 60;
(3)在答题卡上做答。
【参考答案】
Were I three years younger than I am now, I would strongly recommend that I set more
practical and specific goals. As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim is
like sailing without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring
us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward. If only I could go back and
reset my goals.
【解析】
试题分析:本文属于考查开放性作文写作,给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能
力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,
首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为
这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
(2016﹒全国新课标 I) 书面表达(满分 25 分)
假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外
教 Mr Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation
and I also want you to do me a favor.
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign
capital company. I havealready finished my application and resume. But this is the first time that I
have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t know if there are something to
pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. I will be very
grateful if you can do me the favor.
Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[试题分析]本文是一篇考生们熟悉的书信类体裁的书面表达, 内容贴近学生生活,
所以人人有话可说。文章没有给出开头和结尾,所以考生要注意书信的格式,包括称呼语,
正文以及结束语等。在写作时要注意先列出写作要点,而且要注意将来时、现在时以及现在
完成时的交错使用;注意高级句式和多种结构的
使用,而且语气要委婉礼貌。
(2016﹒江苏) 书面表达(满分 25 分)
81.请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。
In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only
cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most
Beautiful Teacher” and the “ Cutest Baby”.
Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “ Best Police Officer 冶 competition,
organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers’
daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their
glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.
Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “ Future Singer 冶 competition. He
has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins
the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much,
but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that
troubles him very much.
【写作内容】
1. 用约 30 个单词写出上文概要;
2. 用约 120 个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法,并用 2 ~3 个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
【答案】
On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in
it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.
In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed,
since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary
voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes
surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on
the Internet makes instant feedback possible.
To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they
are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some
participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting.
(150 words)
Possible version two:
Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled at the
negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, and active in doing it.
In my opinion, internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society.
Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don’t want to. Secondly, voting
of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many
social-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases
are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.
In short, internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted.
Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help
those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.
(150 words)
【名师点睛】
本篇范文很好地完成了所有任务。文章结构合理,层次分明。第一段总结归纳短文内容提出
网络投票很流行,给人们带来好处同时也有不利之处。第二段提出个人观点并给出理由,两
篇范文中正反观点明确,论据有力;第三段中提出合理化建议;时态和人称运用准确无误无
误,全文无中国式英语思维,体现出很高的运用语言的能力。从写作技巧来看,文章中使用
了较多的复合句,如定语从句..... in which candidates go around to seek supports.状语从句.....if
we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.同时文章中串联词运用较为合理,
如 in my opinion、in addition、furthermore、to be honest 等等。
考点:考查任务型读写
(2017﹒浙江) 读后续写
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from
his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but
they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedalled
(骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to
show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought.
But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn't a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly
catching up with him.
Mac's heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired
the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back,
shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's
bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to
quickly restart the chase(追赶).
Mac was pedalling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to
slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he'd be easy
caught up and the wolf's teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn't
think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later,
they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got
closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in
front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2. 应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
The car abruptly stopped in front of him.________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________ _
_____________________________________________________________________ ___
【解析】 本文主要讲述了 Mac 在骑自行车前往阿拉斯加的途中,被一只狼追赶的故事。
时态要考虑以一般过去时为主,人称以第三人称为主。同时要兼顾字数的要求,不要过多,
关键词列出 5 个以上,需要均匀分布在两段中。考生要注意几个关键信息和情节变化并结合
给出的内容提示进行合理构思。
【参考范文】
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to
give the help. With nothing on the hand, they didn't dare to fight against the wolf. However, they
still approached to the wolf bravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its
head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky. Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was
ready to fight against the wolf. Then came the deadlock.
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where
three men circled the wolf. Mac's friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with
the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some
took out the knives, even the guns towards the wolf. In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the
people's threats around, so it began to step back slowly. Soon, it ran away off the road and
disappeared in the distance.
(2018﹒浙江)第二节 读后续写
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
67. It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He
decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached
Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and
drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My
dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water
rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.
"The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the
chickens. while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was
impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a hose ride, and he said yes, as long as my
dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on
our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t be late
for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!" "OK! " my dad
cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and
quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun
mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon
the ground just for us.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
注意:
(1)所续写短文的词数应为 l50 左右;
(2)至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语:
(3)续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
(4)续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. ____________
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【答案】Suddenly a lttle rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the 1eft to
avoid the ittle rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall. Then my dad turned around and
shouted, Hoid on! All of a sudden the horse began to run My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a
few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and
realized that we were way off the track.
We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little
light when we were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several
hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses
towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us
over. What a night!
根据第一段所给首句 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.这一句是故
事发展的转折点,可从 rabbit 出现后带来的反应扩展开,可以写马的反应,也可以写人的反
应,但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。
第二段首句是 We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.这一句呼应前文
Uncle Paul 的叮嘱——不要误吃晚饭,可从如何寻路返回农场去写。
续写时注意要使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语,我们要熟悉所给划线词语,恰当
的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;续写完成后要用下划线标
出你所使用的关键词语。
(2018﹒江苏)请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。
【写作内容】
1. 用约 30 个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象;
2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用 2-3 个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
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【答案】Possible version one:
As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of
information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have
different influences on different consumers.
I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means
the higher quality of the product, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved
backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. Secondly, ratings can save time to
make decisions in shopping. For example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am
often confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy books
according to the ratings.
There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The
advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an
objective attitude towards ratings.
Possible version two:
Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings,
easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision.
However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.
There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are
often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’
judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a
unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own
judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a
careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay
for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.
Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.
【解析】今年作文仍然是读写作文,即先用 30 词概括阅读材料,然后针对材料中的话题写
一篇议论文谈看法。首先要认真阅读两段有关消费排名现象及观点的纯文字材料,然后进行
比较和分析,表明态度,作出价值判断。
文章首段要简要介绍两段材料,第一段材料为一对母子买旅行箱看了网上的评论,结果
买回来的旅行箱质量很好。第二段材料为一帮人去餐馆吃饭,看了 on-line rating,结果饭菜
很不好吃,从而凸显出 online rating 的不靠谱。
然后写你对 online rating 的看法,表明观点,注意用 2-3 个论据来支撑自己的看法。
文章属于议论文,要注意主题句的使用,论点之间要注意有条理。文章可主要采用一般
现在时,第三人称来写。
(2019﹒浙江)第二节 概要写作 (满分 25 分)
67.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。
Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising
Happy and Confident Kids, says, "We've gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when
parents tended to be more strict." By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they're building their
children's confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and,
when given in a way that's insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of
not being able to stay on top where their parents' praise has put them.
Still, don't go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging
gas giving too much. Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and, as a
result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.
So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important
than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as
often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward." We should especially recognize
our children's efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal, "says Donahue, author
of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. "One
thing to remember is that it's the process not the end product that matters."
Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he's out there every day
and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses.
Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has
worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise
should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的)to the amount of effort your
child has put into it.
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【思路点拨】
这是一篇概要类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前,一定要
认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比
较具体,故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽
量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,
特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化,平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记
忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【范文】
Currently, contrary to what people did in the past, many parents think highly of their kids too
often. It is not proper to praise children too much, but they can't do the opposite. It is said that
what matters is not the quantity but the quality of praise. All in all, parents are supposed to praise
their children in promotion to how much effort they make.
(2019﹒江苏)请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。
Li Jiang:Have you heard this?A group of exchange students from the UK are visiting our school
next month.
Su Hua:Yes,I have. Some are already recommending the traditional Chinese dress for the
welcome ceremony.
Li Jiang:But it seems people have different opinions.
Su Hua:What do you think?
Li Jiang:I think it's a good idea. It's an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known to
international students.
Su Hua:I agree. But we don't have to dress that way. That's not our daily style. Besides,it's not
very convenient.
Li Jiang:You see. It's the Chinese culture that the British friends are coming for. Just the right
occasion.
Su Hua:I prefer the school uniform. It's nice. It's also a better display of our school culture.
【写作内容】
1.用约 30 个词概括上述信息的主要内容;
2.在上述场合,你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装?请说明理由(不少于两点)。
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
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【范文】
Possible version one:
Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students next
month. Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress while Su prefers the school uniform.
I would be happy to wear traditional Chinese clothes at the welcome ceremony. Firstly, this
is precisely what the British visitors are expecting. They come to learn about Chinese culture with
their own eyes. Their Chinese peers in the typical Chinese dress would be highly impressive. The
school uniforms are fine, but not special enough to give a unique Chinese flavour. Secondly, the
inconvenience is not a problem if our purpose is to share Chinese culture. It is just the so-called
inconvenience that displays the richness, delicacy and great fascination of Chinese culture with a
history of thousands of years.
The traditional Chinese clothes, it seems to me, will make the occasion very Chinese and
inviting to the British guests.
Possible version two:
Li Jiang and Su Hua don't agree on what to wear when greeting the British students Li
suggests traditional Chinese clothes while Su thinks the school uniforms are more suitable.
I prefer the school uniform to the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome ceremony next
month. Although the traditional Chinese dress may look more beautiful and stylish, it is a little bit
strange to walk around in it. We feel at ease in our school uniforms every day. What's more, the
.
traditional Chinese dress can't reflect the unique culture of our school. From the design and colour
of our uniforms, the British friends will learn more about our school. Besides, the choice of the
traditional Chinese dress means extra money, and extra time, for we have to change it back after
the event.
So the school uniforms are a better choice than the traditional Chinese dress for such an
occasion.