海淀区高三年级第二学期期中练习
英语试题
本试卷共 10 页,120 分。考试时长 100 分钟。考生务必将答案答在答题纸上,在
试卷上作答 无效。考试结束后,将本试卷和答题纸一并交回。
第一部分:知识运用(共两节,45 分)
第一节 语法填空(共 10 小题;每小题 1.5 分,共 15 分)
A
阅读下列短文,根据短文内容填空。在未给提示词的空白处仅填写 1 个适当的单词,在给出
提示词的空白处用括号内所给词的正确形式填空。
At 8, 1 started taking art lessons ___1___ (improve) my painting skills. However, later, I found
that I focused too much on mastering different techniques. Eventually, I became more distressed when
my expectations weren't matched.
So, in the 11th Grade, I returned to the basics. On ___2___ sketchbook I forced myself to draw
whatever interested me. Over time, I have been released from the tight control. I have learned that a
good painting is not about having perfect technique. In fact, all I need to do is trust my ___3___
(create) talents and find moments of joy in life.
【答案】1. to improve
2. a 3. creative
【解析】
这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了,作者小时候太专注于绘画技巧,画技却未提高让作者很痛苦,
在 11 年级时,作者画自己喜欢的东西,这让作者明白要相信自己的创造性天赋和找寻生活中
快乐的时刻。
【1 题详解】
考查动词不定式。分析语境可知,此处表目 ,意为“为了”,所以用动词不定式(to do)。故
填 to improve。
【2 题详解】
考查冠词。分析语境可知,此处指“在一本素描本上”,表泛指,用不定冠词a。故填 a。
【3 题详解】
考查形容词。名词 talents 需要形容词修饰,所以此空用形容词。故填 creative。
的B
阅读下列短文,根据短文内容填空。在未给提示词的空白处仅填写 1 个适当的单词,在给出
提示词的空白处用括号内所给词的正确形式填空。
In recent years, trampolining (蹦床) has become a new craze among Chinese youths. Short
videos ___4___ (show) people's excitement about jumping back and forth on the colourful
trampolines are regularly uploaded to social media. Most videos feature teenagers, but adults too have
jumped on the trend, hoping to relive their childhood.
Compared with soccer, basketball, tennis or any other competitive sports, ___5___ various
injuries occur from time to time, trampolining is relatively ___6___ (safe). However, preparation and
safety always come first. You must do warm-up exercises before playing and you can't lose
concentration during the movements.
【答案】4. showing
5. where 6. safer
【解析】
这是一篇说明文。文章讲述了,蹦床运动在中国青少年中很受欢迎,但在玩蹦床时还是要提
前热身并注意安全。
【4 题详解】
考查现在分词。此句已有谓语 are regularly uploaded 且无连词,此空用非谓语动词,名词短语
Short videos 和动词 show 是逻辑上的主动关系,所以用现在分词(doing)表主动做名词 Short
videos 的后置定语。故填 showing。
【5 题详解】
考查定语从句关系词。此处是非限制性定语从句,先行词是 any other competitive sports,指地
点,在从句中做状语,所以用关系副词 where。故填 where。
【6 题详解】
考查比较级。由语境可知,此处指蹦床与足球、篮球、网球或任何其他经常发生各种伤害的
竞技运动相比,它相对地更安全,所以用形容词比较级。故填 safer。
C
阅读下列短文,根据短文内容填空。在未给提示词的空白处仅填写 1 个适当的单词,在给出
提示词的空白处用括号内所给词的正确形式填空。
A news report shows that China's urban pet consumer market ___7___ (expect) to break through the 200 billion yuan threshold this year. Young people in big cities are the main contributors.
Nowadays, with the cost of living rising, young people ___8___ (suffer) from greater loneliness
and pressure. They are busy working all day in a competitive environment, leaving little time for fun
and friends. That may explain ___9___ more and more young people are choosing to keep pets
___10___ companionship. Apart from relieving loneliness, many scientific studies have shown that
keeping a pet reduces stress and may even improve overall health.
【答案】7. is expected
8. are suffering
9. why 10. for
【解析】
这是一篇新闻报道。文章讲述了,因为孤独、压力和没时间交朋友,中国年轻人养宠的越来
越多,养宠可以排解孤独、减轻压力和改善健康状况。
【7 题详解】
考查时态和语态。此处缺乏谓语动词,讲的是客观事实,所以用一般现在时,主语 China's urban
pet consumer market(单数)和动词 expect 是被动关系,所以用一般现在时的被动语态,be
expected to do 意为“被期望做……”故填 is expected。
【8 题详解】
考查时态。此处缺乏谓语动词,由 Nowadays 和语境可知,此处指中国年轻人正在承受着更大
的孤独和压力,所以用现在进行时(am/is/are doing),表“正在……”,主语young people 是
复数。故填 are suffering。
【9 题详解】
考查宾语从句引导词。explain 后面接了一个宾语从句,由语境可知,此处指原因,所以用引
导词 why。故填 why。
【10 题详解】
考查介词。由语境可知,此处指“为了陪伴”,表目的,所以用介词for。故填 for。
第二节 完形填空(共 20 小题;每小题 L 5 分,共 30 分)
阅读下面短文,掌握其大意,从每题所给的 A、B、C、D 四个选项中,选出最佳
选项,并 在答题纸上将该项涂黑。
I was 11 when I asked my mum for piano lessons. We were in an economic crisis and she'd
recently been ___11___ off. She said a polite “no”.That didn't ___12___ me. I drew a keyboard onto a piece of paper and stuck it on my desk. I
would ___13___ notes on an online keyboard and “play” them back on my paper one — keeping the
sound they made on the computer in my head. I spent six months playing without ___14___ a real
piano. As my mum found I was ___15___ about it, she bought me 10 lessons with borrowed money.
I still remember the first one. I was ___16___ by how organic the sound of the piano was, as I had
become familiar with the ___17___ electronic sound. The teacher was trying to explain where middle
C was, but I could ___18___ play all the major and minor scales.
I ___19___ my grade one after eight lessons and got distinction. By the time I started secondary
school, we couldn't ____20____ lessons again, so I returned to my paper keyboard. I passed grade
three, then grade five, practising only on my piece of paper.
For the grades above that, there was an ____21____ that you add a certain sensitivity into your
playing. The music teacher at my school said I could practise on the school's grand piano. I would
wake up at 5:30 am to get there in time and play until lessons started. I'd ____22____ lunch and then
practise after school until the caretaker kicked me out. At home, I'd have dinner, do three hours of
revision, and then ____23____ practice until 1:00 am.
My school didn't offer music A-level. I found the Purcell School for young musicians. The
audition (试镜)was extremely ____24____ and I felt overwhelmed. To my amazement, I was
offered a ____25____.
I had been told I had started playing too ____26____ to reach conservatoire (音乐学院)level
but when I left Purcell, I was awarded the senior piano prize. That was the point when I realized I
wasn't behind everyone else. I am now at the Guildhall School in London, where I was offered a
scholarship. I feel ____27____: it’s been 10 years since I drew my paper piano and I'm at one of the
world's ____28____ conservatoires.
The irony is that I continue to do a lot of my practice away from the piano: what we call mental
practice. It ____29____ key areas of the mind that are less readily accessed by piano playing alone.
The paper piano helped stimulate my ____30____ about how music works.
11. A. laid B. pushed C. dropped D. knocked
12. A. annoy B. bother C. embarrass D. discourage
13. A. take B. sign C. click D. compose
14. A. seeing B. touching C. enjoying D. choosing15. A. serious B. careful C. hesitant D. nervous
16. A. struck B. puzzled C. comforted D. inspired
17. A. natural B. artificial C. practical D. magical
18 A. only B. still C. hardly D. already
19. A. sat B. joined C. failed D. repeated
20. A. offer B. teach C. afford D. observe
21. A. attitude B. expectation C. opinion D.
opportunity
22. A. avoid B. miss C. save D. skip
23. A. social B. mental C. mechanical D. physical
24. A. fascinating B. motivating C. frightening D.
challenging
25. A. course B. reward C. place D. certificate
26. A. soon B. late C. hurriedly D. suddenly
27. A. proud B. lucky C. ambitious D. grateful
28. A. grand B. strict C. leading D. expensive
29. A. builds B. covers C. defines D. unlocks
30. A. prediction B. memory C. curiosity D.
imagination
【答案】11. A 12. D 13. C 14. B 15. A 16. A 17. B 18. D 19. A
20. C 21. B 22. D 23. B 24. D 25. C 26. B 27. A 28. C 29. D
30. C
【解析】
这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了,作者因家中经济困难买不起也学不起钢琴,就自己画纸钢琴
练习,加上精神练习,作者自学成才,获得了高级钢琴奖和高级学术音乐奖,现在身处一所
世界领先音乐学院。
【11 题详解】
考查动词词义辨析。句意:我们正处于经济危机中,她最近被解雇了。A. laid 放置;B. pushed
推开;C. dropped 掉落;D. knocked 敲。由前文的 We were in an economic crisis 和后文的 She said
a polite “no",可知妈妈因经济危机被解雇了才说“不”,lay off 意为“解雇”。故选A 项。【12 题详解】
考查动词词义辨析。句意:这并没有使我泄气。A. annoy 使恼怒;B. bother 打扰;C. embarrass
使尴尬;D. discourage 使泄气。由后文的 I drew a keyboard onto a piece of paper 可知,作者在纸
上画钢琴键盘学习钢琴,说明作者没泄气。故选 D 项。
【13 题详解】
考查动词词义辨析。句意:我会点击在线钢琴键盘上的音符,然后把它们“播放”回我的纸
上——把它们在电脑上发出的声音留在我的脑子里。A. take 拿走;B. sign 签名;C. click 点击;
D. compose 作曲。由 on an online keyboard 可知,网上在线钢琴键盘是要点击才能播放的。故
选 C 项。
【14 题详解】
考查动词词义辨析。句意:我花了六个月的时间弹钢琴,没有碰过真正的钢琴。A. seeing 看见;
B. touching 触摸;C. enjoying 欣赏;D. choosing 选择。由上文可知,作者一直在纸钢琴上学钢
琴,说明作者没有触摸过真正的钢琴。故选 B 项。
【15 题详解】
考查形容词词义辨析。句意:因为我妈妈发现我是认真的,她借了钱给我买了 10 节课。A.
serious 认真的、严肃的;B. careful 仔细的;C. hesitant 犹豫的;D. nervous 紧张的。由上文可
知,作者在没有触摸钢琴的情况下,学习钢琴 6 个月,说明作者对学钢琴是认真的,be serious
about 意为“对……是认真的”。故选A 项。
【16 题详解】
考查动词词义辨析。句意:我被钢琴声音的有机性所打动,因为我已经熟悉了人造电子声音。
A. struck 打动、打击;B. puzzled 使困惑;C. comforted 安慰;D. inspired 激励。由后文可知,
作者已经习惯钢琴的人造电子音,所以听到真正的钢琴声,被它的有机性所打动。故选 A 项。
【17 题详解】
考查形容词词义辨析。句意:我被钢琴声音的有机性所打动,因为我已经熟悉了人造电子声
音。A. natural 自然的;B. artificial 人造的;C. practical 实际的;D. magical 神奇的。由上文可
知,作者通过把在线钢琴键盘上的声音“播放”回纸上并记在脑子里,说明作者是用人造电
子音学习的,作者习惯人造电子音。故选 B 项。
【18 题详解】
考查副词词义辨析。句意:老师试图解释 C 中音在哪里,但我已经可以弹奏所有的大调和小
调了。A. only 仅仅;B. still 仍然;C. hardly 几乎不;D. already 已经。由语境可知,but 表转折,老师试图解释 C 中音在哪里是,作者已经可以弹奏所有的大调和小调了。故选 D 项。
【19 题详解】
考查动词词义辨析。句意:八节课后,我坐在一年级,并获得了优异成绩。A. sat 坐下;B. joined
加入;C. failed 失败;D. repeated 重复。由后文的 got distinction 可知,作者坐在了一年级班上
并成绩优异。故选 A 项。
【20 题详解】
考查动词词义辨析。句意:当我上中学的时候,我们再也上不起课了,所以我回到了我的纸
钢琴键盘。A. offer 提供;B. teach 教育;C. afford 承担得起、买得起;D. observe 观察。由后
文的 so I returned to my paper keyboard 可知,作者承担不起钢琴课了,所以又用纸钢琴键盘学
习。故选 C 项。
【21 题详解】
考查名词词义辨析。句意:对于以上的成绩,有一个期望,就是你增加了一定的敏感性到你
的演奏中。A. attitude 态度;B. expectation 期望;C. opinion 观点;D. opportunity 机会。由语境
可知,作者一直通过纸钢琴键盘学习钢琴获得了以上的成绩,但纸上练习不比实际练习,所
以作者期望纸上练习带来的敏感性能加进演奏中。故选 B 项。
【22 题详解】
考查动词词义辨析。句意:我略过午饭,放学后再练习,直到管理员把我踢出去。A. avoid 避
免;B. miss 想念;C. save 节约;D. skip 跳过、略过、不参加。由语境可知,作者略过午饭,
省下时间在学校练习钢琴。故选 D 项。
【23 题详解】
考查形容词词义辨析。句意:在家里,我会吃晚饭,做三个小时的复习,然后一直精神练习
到凌晨一点。A. social 社会的;B. mental 精神的;C. mechanical 机械的;D. physical 物理的。
由上文可知,作者只能在学校练习钢琴一会儿,回家了没钢琴只能在脑中练习(精神练习),
最后一段中提及了 mental practice。故选 B 项。
【24 题详解】
考查形容词词义辨析。句意:试镜非常有挑战性,我感到不知所措。A. fascinating 迷人的;
B. motivating 激 励 的 ;C. frightening 可 怕 的 ;D. challenging 挑 战 性 的 。 由 后 文 的 I felt
overwhelmed 可知,试镜很具挑战性。故选 D 项。
【25 题详解】
考查名词词义辨析。句意:令我惊讶的是,有人给了我一个位置。A. course 课程;B. reward奖品;C. place 位置;D. certificate 证书。由 To my amazement 可知,作者通过了试镜并获得了
Purcell School 的一个位置。故选 C 项。
【26 题详解】
考查副词词义辨析。句意:有人告诉我,我开始演奏已经太晚了,无法达到音乐学院的水平,
但当我离开 Purcell School 时,我获得了高级钢琴奖。A. soon 很快;B. late 晚;C. hurriedly 匆
忙地;D. suddenly 突然地。由上文语境可知,作者多数是用纸钢琴键盘和精神练习来学习钢
琴,可知作者很晚开始钢琴演奏,所以很难达到音乐学院的水平。故选 B 项。
【27 题详解】
考查形容词词义辨析。句意:我感到自豪:自从我画纸钢琴键盘以来,已经 10 年了,并且我
身在一所世界上最顶尖的音乐学院。A. proud 自豪的;B. lucky 幸运的;C. ambitious 有志向的;
D. grateful 感激的。由语境可知,作者在伦敦 Guildhall School(一所世界上最顶尖的音乐学院)
并获得了奖学金,可知作者感到自豪。故选 A 项。
【28 题详解】
考查形容词词义辨析。句意:我感到自豪:自从我画纸钢琴键盘以来,已经 10 年了,并且我
身在一所世界上最顶尖的音乐学院。A. grand 宏伟的;B. strict 严格的;C. leading 一流的、领
先的;D. expensive 昂贵的。由语境可知,伦敦 Guildhall School 是世界上最顶尖的音乐学院之
一。故选 C 项。
【29 题详解】
考查动词词义辨析。句意:它揭开了大脑中不太容易被钢琴单独演奏所触及的关键区域。A.
builds 建立;B. covers 覆盖;C. defines 定义;D. unlocks 揭开、解锁。由语境可知,作者通过
不触摸钢琴练习,在脑中练习,即精神练习,揭开了钢琴独奏不能触及的大脑关键区域。故
选 D 项。
【30 题详解】
考查名词词义辨析。句意:纸钢琴激发了我对音乐如何工作的好奇心。A. prediction 预料;B.
memory 记忆;C. curiosity 好奇心;D. imagination 想象。由语境可知,作者早期通过纸钢琴和
精神练习来学习钢琴,没有真正钢琴来练习,会让作者对音乐如何工作产生好奇心。故选 C
项。
第二部分:阅读理解(共两节,40 分)
第一节(共 15 小题;每小题 2 分,共 30 分)阅读下列短文,从每题所给的 A、B、C、D 四个选项中,选出最佳选项,并在答
题纸上 将该项涂黑。
A
What are some of your favourite memories of the University?
In preparation for each 50th reunion, members of the milestone class are asked to recall campus
memories for an annual Memory Book.
Here's a small selection of some memories from the Class of 1969.
Phyllis Jo Baunach
“...I cannot forget the endless hours studying, researching, and learning in the middle of the
musty books in the stacks. We did everything by hand! But the joys of ideas coming to life and
understanding thorny concepts are priceless.
Additionally, I cannot forget the joyful hours of Co-Kast rehearsals for student-written-and-
directed plays, and the thrill of audiences’ responses to our efforts. Nor will I ever forget taking voice
lessons at the Eastman School of Music. This course gave me confidence to try new musical
approaches and to think on my feet.”
Paul Boehm
“... many sweet and lasting memories—five feet of deep snow, getting stranded on the Thruway,
music at Hylie Morris's Alley, and, of course, I met my wife of 48 years, Ellen Blazer Boehm from the
Class of 1972, when she was a freshman and I was a senior. As a five-year chemical engineering
major, I had one elective to spare, and Ellen said, “How about oceanography?” So, I enrolled in
oceanography with Dr. Taro Takahashi(the famous climate scientist), which awakened my
environmental justices, and changed my professional direction.”
Farel Vella McClure
“...I truly loved my four undergraduate years at the University of Rochester. In fact, I loved it so
much that I stayed an extra year to get a master's degree! I was very fortunate to have been totally
immersed in student life on campus. My memories include campaigning and winning a seat on the
student government during my freshman year. Other memories include the Susan B. Anthony banquet,
and sleeping in the comfy chairs in the library. I was also privileged to be selected as a student
representative on the design team for the new Wilson Commons. I. M. Pei, the famous architect who
designed the Louvre Pyramid, was the architect for Wilson Commons. We even visited his offices in New York to see the “master” at work.”
31. According to the passage, Paul Boehm ______.
A. married Ellen Blazer in 1972
B. disliked his major in university
C. became a famous climate scientist later
D. discovered his interest in environmental science
32. What can we learn about Farel Vella McClure?
A. She was a world-famous designer.
B. She was active in school activities.
C. She had a hard time getting her master's.
D. She once met I. M. Pei at the Louvre Pyramid.
33. The three people all talked about ______.
A. their beloved professors B. their great friendship
C. their learning experiences D. their beautiful campus
【答案】31. D 32. B 33. C
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了,里程碑班的 3 位成员回忆自己最喜欢的校园记忆是什么。
【31 题详解】
细节理解题。由题干关键词 Paul Boehm 可将答案定位于倒数第二段。由倒数第二段中的“So,
I enrolled in oceanography with Dr. Taro Takahashi ( the famous climate scientist ) , which
awakened my environmental justices, and changed my professional direction.”(所以,我和著名的
气候科学家高桥太郎博士一起注册了海洋学,这唤醒了我对环境正义的兴趣,改变了我的专
业方向。),可知 Paul Boehm 发现了他对海洋科学的兴趣。故选 D 项。
【32 题详解】
推理判断题。由最后一段中的“My memories include campaigning and winning a seat on the
student government during my freshman year. Other memories include the Susan B. Anthony banquet,
and sleeping in the comfy chairs in the library. I was also privileged to be selected as a student
representative on the design team for the new Wilson Commons.”(我的记忆包括在大一时竞选和
赢得学生会席位。其它记忆包括 Susan B. Anthony 宴会和睡在图书馆舒适的椅子上。我也很荣幸被选为新威尔逊公地设计团队的学生代表。),可推断出她在学校活动中很积极。故选 B 项。
【33 题详解】
推理判断题。由第二段“Here's a small selection of some memories from the Class of 1969.”(这里
有 一 些 1969 届 学 生 的 记 忆 。),第 三 段 中 的 “...I cannot forget the endless hours studying,
researching, and learning in the middle of the musty books in the stacks.”(……我无法忘记在书堆
里发霉的书中间没完没了地学习、研究和学习。),倒数第二段中的“So, I enrolled in
oceanography with Dr. Taro Takahashi ( the famous climate scientist ) , which awakened my
environmental justices, and changed my professional direction.”(所以,我和著名的气候科学家高
桥太郎博士一起注册了海洋学,这唤醒了我对环境正义的兴趣,改变了我的专业方向。)和最
后一段中的“...I truly loved my four undergraduate years at the University of Rochester.”(……我真
的很喜欢我在罗切斯特大学的四年本科生活。),可推断出 3 个人都在讲他们大学的学习经历。
故选 C 项。
【点睛】在高考中,细节理解题为频繁常考题型,集中考查文中细节。在做此类题型时,同
学们可以先从问题中找到关键词,然后以此为线索,运用略读和查阅技巧迅速在文中找到这
一细节,把这部分内容仔细读一遍,比较所给选项与文中细节的细微差别。如在第 1 小题中,
分析问题,得到关键词 Paul Boehm,迅速定位到倒数第二段下,找到句子“So, I enrolled in
oceanography with Dr. Taro Takahashi ( the famous climate scientist ) , which awakened my
environmental justices, and changed my professional direction.”可知,可知Paul Boehm 发现了他
对海洋科学的兴趣。故选 D 项。
B
Early February, I was flying up to Ohio. Well prepared, I had everything in my favour—fuel for
five hours, charts in order, my flight plan on my lap, and a beautiful clear sky.
I was wrong.
I had heard about Alberta Clippers coming out of Canada. I knew all about them―how an entire
air mass was streaming along at over sixty miles an hour.
That morning, the Weather Briefer informed me that an Alberta Clipper was going over Chicago
about the time I got to the airport. Chicago was some 400 miles from my destination—not a factor, or
so I thought. That was the first hint I missed.
The controller called and asked if I wanted to adjust my flight plan. I did the check and everything
was in the green. So I told him no. Twenty minutes later the controller called again asking whether I wanted to adjust my flight plan. I checked everything. All was fine. I ignored that hint. I was fooled by
the smooth air and limited experience with a rapidly moving air mass that was not changing violently.
The Alberta Clipper was clipping along.
The first blast of turbulence(气流)struck my plane. I got slammed into the roof, and then
slammed sideways hitting the window with such force up my nose that I started bleeding.
After a 2-hour flight of 100 miles, I realized fuel was now an issue. So was landing. I called Flight
Following. We figured out the airport I could land.
The engine stopped. So did my heart. There is no quiet as quietly stunning as this one at such an
altitude. I had run out of fuel in the left tank, and only a little in my right tank. The engine quit for a
second time. I declared an emergency. I was told that I might get another few minutes of fuel if I gently
banked the airplane. Luckily, it worked. Then, the engine quit for the last time. I was a glider now. I
made a long lazy spiral descent. Down I went. I stopped at the very end of the runway.
I made so many mistakes, missed so many clues, and showed my ignorance so much that I beat
myself up over and over again in my mind. I learned textbook descriptions of Alberta Clippers and
real-life experience with one are totally different. I will never forget the sound of that silence.
I flew home the next day Older. Wiser. Humbler. Lucky.
34. We can know from the passage that Alberta Clippers ______.
A. can bring snowstorms
B. are quick-moving air masses
C. are violently changing air pressure
D. can lead to a sudden temperature drop
35. What mainly led to the author's missing all the hints?
A. His lack of flying experience.
B. His poor preparation for the journey.
C. His misjudgement about the air mass.
D. His overconfidence in his piloting skills.
36. Which is the right order of the events?
a. I declared an emergency.
b. My airplane was running out of fuel.
c. I insisted on carrying on my flight plan.d. I was thrown to the roof by the violent air mass.
e. I slightly banked my airplane and made a landing.
A. dcbea B. dceba
C. cdabe D. cdbae
37. The passage describes ______.
A. a rewarding training B. a narrow escape
C. a painful exploration D. a serious accident
【答案】34. B 35. C 36. D 37. B
【解析】
这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了,作者在糟糕的天气条件下,坚持飞行,错估天气状况,又遭
遇飞机没油和飞机引擎不转,经历了一次死里逃生的飞行经历。
【34 题详解】
细节理解题。由第三段中的“I had heard about Alberta Clippers coming out of Canada. I knew all
about them―how an entire air mass was streaming along at over sixty miles an hour.”(我听说
Alberta Clippers 从加拿大来了。我对它们了如指掌——整个空气团以每小时 60 英里的速度流
动。),可知 Alberta Clippers 是快速移动的气团。故选 B 项。
【35 题详解】
细节理解题。由第五段中的“I ignored that hint. I was fooled by the smooth air and limited
experience with a rapidly moving air mass that was not changing violently.”(我忽略了这个暗示。
我被平稳的空气和有限的经验愚弄了,认为快速移动的空气团没有剧烈的变化。),可知是作
者对气团的错误判断使他忽略了暗示。故选 C 项。
【36 题详解】
细节理解题。按事件顺序,c——第五段中的“So I told him no.”(所以我告诉不调整飞行计
划。),d——第六段中的“I got slammed into the roof, and then slammed sideways hitting the
window with such force up my nose that I started bleeding.”(我被摔在顶上,然后侧身撞在窗户上,
鼻子上的力量太大,我开始流血。),b——倒数第三段中的“I had run out of fuel in the left
tank, and only a little in my right tank.”(我的左油箱没油了,而我的右油箱只有一点油。),a——
倒数第三段中的“I declared an emergency.”(我宣布了紧急情况。),e——倒数第三段中的“I
was told that I might get another few minutes of fuel if I gently banked the airplane. Luckily, it
worked.”(有人告诉我,如果我轻轻地把飞机倾斜起来,我可能再得到几分钟的燃油。幸运的是,它成功了。)及“I stopped at the very end of the runway.”(我在跑道的尽头停了下来。),可知
事件的正确顺序为 cdbae。故选 D 项。
【37 题详解】
主旨大意题。由第六段中的“The first blast of turbulence(气流)struck my plane. I got slammed
into the roof, and then slammed sideways hitting the window with such force up my nose that I started
bleeding.”(我的飞机受到了第一次气流的冲击。我被摔在顶上,然后侧身撞在窗户上,鼻子
上的力量太大,我开始流血。),倒数第三段中的“I had run out of fuel in the left tank, and only a
little in my right tank. The engine quit for a second time. I declared an emergency.”(我的左油箱没
油了,而我的右油箱只有一点油。发动机又一次熄火了。我宣布了紧急情况。)及“I stopped at
the very end of the runway.”(我在跑道的尽头停了下来。),和最后一段“I flew home the next day.
Older. Wiser. Humbler. Lucky.”(第二天我就飞回家了。年纪大了。要更聪明的,更谦卑。真幸
运。),可知文章讲的是死里逃生的一次飞行经历。故选 B 项。
C
There is certainly evidence that actors experience a blending of their real self with their assumed
characters. For instance, Benedict Cumberbatch said, “My mum says I'm much more impatient with
her when I'm filming Sherlock.”
Mark Seton, a researcher at the University of Sydney, has even coined the term “post-dramatic
stress disorder” to describe the lasting effects experienced by actors who lose themselves in a role.
“Actors may often prolong habits of the characters they have embodied,” he writes.
A recent finding doesn't involve acting, and it indicates that merely spending some time thinking
about another person seemed to rub off on the volunteers’ sense of self led by Meghan Meyer at
Princeton University. Across several studies, these researchers asked volunteers to first rate their own
personalities, memories or physical attributes, and then to perform the same task from the perspective
of another person. For instance, they might score the emotionality of various personal memories, and
then rate how a friend or relative would have experienced those same events.
After taking the perspective of another, the volunteers scored themselves once again: the
consistent finding was that their self-knowledge was now changed—their self-scores had shifted to
become more similar to those they'd given for someone else. For instance, if they had initially said the
trait term “confident” was only moderately related to themselves and then rated the term as being
strongly related to a friend's personality, when they came to rescore themselves, they now tended to see themselves as more confident. Remarkably, this morphing of the self with another was still
apparent even if a 24-hour gap was left between taking someone else's perspective and re-rating
oneself.
“By simply thinking about another person, we may adapt our self to take the shape of that person”
said Meyer and her colleagues. That our sense of self should have this quality might be a little
discouraging, especially for anyone who has struggled to establish a firm sense of identity. Yet there is
an optimistic message here, too. The challenge of improving ourselves—or at least seeing ourselves in
a more positive light—might be a little easier than we thought. By roleplaying or acting out the kind of
person we would like to become, or merely by thinking about and spending time with people who
embody the kind of attributes we would like to see in ourselves, we can find that our sense of self
changes in desirable ways.
“As each of us chooses who to befriend, who to model, and who to ignore” write Meyer and her
colleagues, “we must make these decisions aware of how they shape not only the fabric of our social
networks, but even our sense of who we are.”
38. The first two paragraphs mainly ______.
A. state that acting requires skills
B. explain the stress that an actor faces
C. show that a role leaves a mark on the actor
D. stress the importance of devoting oneself to a role
39. What does the underlined phrase “rub off on” in Paragraph 3 probably mean?
A. Influence. B. Strengthen.
C. Confuse. D. Determine.
40. According to the study, taking the perspective of another person ______.
A. brings changes to one's self-knowledge
B. motivates one to better understand himself
C. helps people deal with their identity problems
D. produces temporary effects on one's character
41. What is the significance of the study?
A. It offers instructions on making friends.
B. It proposes a means to improve ourselves.C. It gives advice on adjusting one's emotions.
D. It presents a way to deal with stress disorder.
【答案】38. C 39. A 40. A 41. B
【解析】
这是一篇说明文。文章以演员们的“戏剧后应激障碍”为导入,以科学研究为基础,讲述了
角色扮演对个人自我意识和行为的影响和塑造,通过对自我意识的积极的影响,人们能提升
自己。
【38 题详解】
主旨大意题。由第一段中的“There is certainly evidence that actors experience a blending of their
real self with their assumed characters.”(当然有证据表明演员们经历了真实的自我和他们假想
的角色的融合。)和第二段中的“Actors may often prolong habits of the characters they have
embodied”(演员经常会延长他们所塑造的角色的习惯。),可知前两段向读者表明:一个角色
在演员身上留下了印记。故选 C 项。
【39 题详解】
短语猜测题。由第三段中的“A recent finding doesn't involve acting, and it indicates that merely
spending some time thinking about another person seemed to rub off on the volunteers’ sense of self
led by Meghan Meyer at Princeton University.”(最近的一项发现并不涉及表演,它表明,仅仅花
一段时间去思考另一个人,这个人似乎会影响志愿者的自我意识,这是普林斯顿大学 Meghan
Meyer 领导的一项研究。)和第四段中的“Remarkably, this morphing of the self with another was
still apparent even if a 24-hour gap was left between taking someone else's perspective and re-rating
oneself.”(值得注意的是,即使在接受别人的观点和重新评价自己之间还有24 小时的间隔,
这种自我与他人的变化仍然是显而易见的。),可知另一人会影响自我,此处 rub off 意为“影
响”。故选A 项。
【40 题详解】
细节理解题。由第四段中的“Remarkably, this morphing of the self with another was still apparent
even if a 24-hour gap was left between taking someone else's perspective and re-rating oneself.”(值
得注意的是,即使在接受别人的观点和重新评价自己之间还有 24 小时的间隔,这种自我与他
人的变化仍然是显而易见的。),可知接受别人的观点会给自我认识带来变化。故选 A 项。
【41 题详解】
推理判断题。由倒数第二段中的“Yet there is an optimistic message here, too. The challenge of improving ourselves—or at least seeing ourselves in a more positive light—might be a little easier
than we thought. By roleplaying or acting out the kind of person we would like to become, or merely
by thinking about and spending time with people who embody the kind of attributes we would like to
see in ourselves, we can find that our sense of self changes in desirable ways.”(然而,这里也有一个
乐观的信息。提高自己或者至少从一个更积极的角度看待自己,可能比我们想象的要容易一
些。通过扮演或表现出我们想成为的那种人,或者仅仅通过思考和花时间与那些体现出我们
想在自己身上看到的那种特质的人在一起,我们可以发现我们的自我意识以令人满意的方式
改变。)和最后一段中的“we must make these decisions aware of how they shape not only the
fabric of our social networks, but even our sense of who we are.”(我们必须做出这些决定,意识到
它们不仅塑造了我们社交网络的结构,甚至塑造了我们的自我意识。),可知在社交活动中通
过角色扮演或表现出我们想成为的那种人,人们的自我意识能得到积极地改善,说明研究的
重要性在于它提出了一种改进我们自己的方法。故选 B 项。
D
In college, I was taught an elegant theory of chemical combination based on excess electrons
going into holes in the orbital shell of a neighbouring atom. But what about diatomic compounds like
oxygen gas? Don't ask; students aren't ready to know. In physics, in biology, in any other science
classes, students frequently get that answer too.
It’s time to trust students to handle doubt and diversity in science. Actually, students are starting
to act. They have shamed their seniors into including more diverse contributors as faculty members
and role models. Young scholars rudely ask their superiors why they fail to address the extinction
crises clarified by their research. The inherited authoritarian political structures of science education
are becoming lame—but still remain largely unchanged from the old school days.
A narrow, rigid education does not prepare anyone for the complexities of scientific research,
applications and policy. If we discourage students from inquiring into the real nature of scientific
truths, or exploring how society shapes the questions that researchers ask how can we prepare them to
maintain public trust in science in our “post-truth” world? Diversity and doubt produce creativity: we
must make room for them, and stop guiding future scientists into narrow specialties that value
technique over thought.
In science, even foundational building blocks can be questioned. The unifying patterns of the
periodic table are now questioned under closer examination. Some scientists now wonder whether the concept of biological “species” contributes more confusion than insight, and whether it should
therefore be abandoned. However, such a decision would affect conservation policy, in which
identification of endangered species is crucial—so it is not just an issue for basic science.
Science students generally remain unaware that concepts such as elements and species are
contested or are even contestable. In school, college and beyond, curricula highlight the technical and
hide the reflective. Public arguments among scientists often presume that every problem has just one
solution.
Nonetheless, uncertain advice on complex issues should be a warning that, from a future
perspective, today's total scientific consensus on some policy issue might have been the result of
stubbornness, a conflict of interest or worse. Just as a healthy democracy accommodates dissent and
dissonance, the collective consciousness of science would do well to embrace doubt and diversity.
This could start with teaching science as a great, flawed, ongoing human achievement, rather than as a
collection of cut-and-dried eternal (永久的)truths.
I recall a legendary chemistry professor who was not skilful at getting classroom demonstrations
to work—but discussing what went wrong helped his students to thrive. A mathematician friend let
pupils discuss every statement in the textbook until all were satisfied. They did very well in exams,
and taught themselves when he was absent. Treating people at all levels as committed thinkers, whose
asking teaches us all, is the key to tackling the challenges to science in the post-trust age.
42. The problem of current science training is that ______.
A. students cannot become specialists
B. it goes against established science education
C. students lose trust in their teachers and professors
D. it fails to provide students with what they need in future
43. The periodic table is mentioned to prove that ______.
A. even the widely accepted can be challenged
B. students are generally ignorant of science
C. most previous researches are out of date
D. science has been developing with time
44. It can be learnt from the passage that ______.
A. students may be more innovative if they are allowed to doubtB. science students do not contest elements or species
C. students should not trust established science
D. diversity prevents progress in science
45. Which of the following statements best represents the writer’s opinion?
A. Our curricula highlight the technical and hide the reflective.
B. Science should be a collection of cut-and-dried eternal truths.
C. Teachers should treat people at all levels as committed thinkers.
D. The concept of biological species brings more confusion than insight.
【答案】42. D 43. A 44. A 45. C
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇议论文。文章探讨了,在科学领域,我们要信任学生来处理科学中的怀疑和多样性,
多样性和怀疑产生创造力,如果我们不鼓励学生探究科学真理的真实本质,或者不鼓励他们
探索社会如何塑造研究人员提出的问题,那么我们如何让他们做好准备,在我们的“后真理”
世界里保持公众对科学的信任。
【42 题详解】
推理判断题。由第一段最后两句“Don't ask; students aren't ready to know. In physics, in biology, in
any other science classes, students frequently get that answer too.”(别问,学生们还没准备好知道。
在物理学、生物学、任何其他科学课上,学生也经常得到这个答案。),第三段第一句“A
narrow, rigid education does not prepare anyone for the complexities of scientific research,
applications and policy.”(狭隘、僵化的教育不能使任何人为科学研究、应用和政策的复杂性做
好准备。),可知当前科学培训的问题在于它不能为学生提供他们未来进行科学研究所需要的
东西。故选 D 项。
【43 题详解】
细节理解题。由第四段中的“In science, even foundational building blocks can be questioned. The
unifying patterns of the periodic table are now questioned under closer examination.”(在科学领域,
甚至基础的构成要素也可能受到质疑。现在元素周期表的统一模式正在更仔细的检查下被质
疑。),说明元素周期表即使是被广泛接受的,也可能会被质疑。故选 A 项。
【44 题详解】
推理判断题。第三段最后一句“Diversity and doubt produce creativity: we must make room for them, and stop guiding future scientists into narrow specialties that value technique over thought.”
(多样性和怀疑产生创造力:我们必须为它们腾出空间,并停止引导未来的科学家进入狭隘
的专业领域,即重视技术而不是思想。),可推断出如果允许学生怀疑,学生可能更具创新性。
故选 A 项。
【45 题详解】
推理判断题。由最后一段最后一句“Treating people at all levels as committed thinkers, whose
asking teaches us all, is the key to tackling the challenges to science in the post-trust age.”(把所有层
次的人都当作坚定的思考者,他们的询问教会了我们所有人,这是在后信任时代应对科学挑
战的关键。),可知教师应该把所有层次的人看作是坚定的思考者,这能最好描述符合作者观
点。故选 C 项。
【点睛】推理判断题不仅要求考生读懂文章中的每个句子的意思还要推理它们之间的关系,
结合自己的生活常识和经验,再通过逻辑推理和判断,理解文章的言外之意,从而揭示文章
的深层涵义。推理判断题的答案不可能在文章中直接找到,因此推理时我们务必要忠于原文,
在文章中寻找并确定可推论的依据,即:已知部分——推论的前提,从中推测出未知部分——
推理的结论,切忌妄加评论,把自己的观点当成作者的观点。如在第 3 小题中,第三段最后
一句“Diversity and doubt produce creativity: we must make room for them, and stop guiding future
scientists into narrow specialties that value technique over thought.”,是已知部分,通过结合原文进
行合理地逻辑判断,可推断出如果允许学生怀疑,学生可能更具创新性。故选 A 项。
第二节(共 5 小题;每小题 2 分,共 10 分)
根据短文内容,从短文后的七个选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有
两项为多 余选项。
Is there a link between social media and depression? Do social media have a negative impact on
your mental health? It’s complicated.
In a recent study, the investigators compared social media use and depression between teens.
___46___Specifically, for every hour per day that one teen spent on social media more than her
peers, she likely had a 0.64 point higher depression score.
A different study published in 2018 identified five distinct types of social media users. The
finding was that "problematic social media use" was one of the main themes for people whose mental
health was affected by social media. You can have alcohol in your life without it being a problem, or
your alcohol use may become problematic. ___47___There's one important thing to remember about survey research just because two things happen
together, it's not necessarily true that one causes the other. ___48___For all we know, it could be that
people who are already more depressed choose to spend more time on social media.
___49___If you think that we shouldn't paint social media with one broad brush, you're on the
right track. On the one hand, participants often described social media as a valuable way to cope with
stress. On the other hand, cyberbullying via social media was also a common experience for
participants. Some also said that constantly checking their own social media profile was stressful.
It’s certainly possible that experiences like cyberbullying, comparing yourself to idealized
images, and constantly monitoring your profile, are bad for your mood. It's also true for many that
social media offer community support and positive messages. Given the inconclusive research, it's
safe to say that at least we shouldn't write off social media altogether. ___50___Anyway, you cannot
use it as a crutch for coping with other stressors and mental health problems.
A. It's the same with social media.
B. Social media can be a double-edged sword.
C. People get more opinionated about the potential problems of social media.
D. They found that those who used social media more had higher depression scores.
E. They reviewed all existing research and found that there were both benefits and drawbacks.
F. The key to benefiting from social media may lie in using it in moderation and staying socially
connected.
G. For example, just because higher social media use co-occurs with higher levels of depression
doesn't mean social media use causes depression.
【答案】46. D 47. A 48. G 49. B 50. F
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇说明文。文章讲述了,社交媒体是一把双刃剑,它对使用者的心理健康有影响,比
较抑郁的人选择在社交媒体上花更多的时间,人们应该适度使用社交媒体并保持社交联系。
【46 题详解】
由下一句“具体来说,一个青少年每天花在社交媒体上的时间比她的同龄人多 1 个小时,她
的抑郁得分可能高出 0.64 分。”可知,承接下文,D 选项“他们发现使用社交媒体越多的人
抑郁得分越高。”切题;该选项中的 higher depression scores 对应下文中的 a 0.64 point higher depression score。故选 D 项。
【47 题详解】
由上一句“你可以在你的生活中拥有酒精,不让它成为一个问题,或者你的酒精使用可能成
为一个问题。”可知,承接上文,A 选项“社交媒体也是如此。”切题;该选项表示社交媒体
使用和酒精使用一样,可能变成问题,也可能不是问题。故选 A 项。
【48 题详解】
由上一句“调查研究有一件重要的事情要记住,因为两件事同时发生,不一定一件事导致另
一件事。”可知,承接上文,G 选项“例如,仅仅因为较高的社交媒体使用量与较高的抑郁水
平并存并不意味着社交媒体使用量会导致抑郁。”切题;该选项是对上文“it's not necessarily
true that one causes the other.”的举例说明。故选 G 项。
【49 题详解】
由下文“一方面,参与者经常将社交媒体描述为应对压力的一种有价值的方式。另一方面,通
过社交媒体进行网络欺凌也是参与者的常见经历。”可知,B 选项“社交媒体可以是一把双刃
剑。”切题;该选项中的 a double-edged sword 对应下文所提及的社交媒体的好坏两方面。故
选 B 项。
【50 题详解】
由下一句“不管怎样,你不能把它作为一个依靠来应付其它的压力和心理健康问题。”可知,
承接下文,F 选项“从社交媒体中获益的关键可能在于适度使用社交媒体并保持社交联系。”
切题;该选项中的 using it in moderation and staying socially connected 对应下文中的“不能把社
交媒体作为应对压力和心理健康问题的一个依靠”。故选F 项。
【点睛】第一、通读全文,了解文章大意。这是一个泛读的过程,目的是了解文章大意,为
以后的理解做铺垫。
第二、明确关联关系。任何句子都是要么和上文有联系,要么和下文有联系,要么和上下文
都有联系。例如第 2、3 小题都与它们的上文有联系。
第三、带入通读,复查。
做完题目切忌直接离开,这时我们很有必要将自己修正好的文章通读一遍,将其看做一片行
文通顺语意连贯的文章来读,这时如果感到有含义不连贯的地方,很有可能是我们填错了空,
就要复查了,注意:七选五的特点在于,错一道,往往还会错另外的一道或几道,我们叫做“连
错”,所以当你发现自己有一处填的有问题时,一定要同时检查其它空。第三部分:书面表达(共两节,35 分)
第一节(15 分)
51.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国朋友 Jim 得知你对探月感兴趣,发来邮件和你
讨论该话题。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 月亮在中国文化中的寓意;
2. 你对人类探月活动的看法。
注意:1.词数不少于 50;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:探月 moon exploration
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I am glad to share with you more details about my passion for moon exploration.
It started with what I had been told about the moon as a kid and grew stronger with time. As you
can guess, there is rich cultural meaning behind the faithful companion of the earth. In Chinese
culture, as opposed to the masculinity of the sun, the moon is often compared to a quiet and elegant
lady. Also, it reminds people of their family and friends far away. People feel reassured knowing that
they are watching the same moon as if the moon could serve as their messenger.
Human beings have never stopped exploring our closest neighbor. I believe it is of great
significance. The development of relevant technology facilitates the progress of science in general,
which benefits our everyday life. What’s more, I think moon exploration shows an important human
trait, that is, curiosity about the unknown, which is the driving force that has brought our species this far.
I hope you find what I‘ve mentioned above interesting and reasonable. By the way, what do you
think of when you gaze at the moon? Write back and tell me about it!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给美国朋友 Jim,和 Jim 探讨有关探月的话题。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
人称:第一人称为主
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 月亮在中国文化中的寓意;
2. 你对人类探月活动的看法。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
moon exploration;be compared to;remind sb. of sb./sth.;as if;serve as;gaze at
第三步:连词成句
1. I am glad to share with you more details about my passion for moon exploration.
2. the moon is often compared to a quiet and elegant lady.
3. Also, it reminds people of their family and friends far away.
4. People feel reassured knowing that they are watching the same moon as if the moon could serve as
their messenger.
5. By the way, what do you think of when you gaze at the moon?
(根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。)
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At
last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing,
On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5 表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择:either…or…,or
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,结构严谨,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意
思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如 It started with what I had been told
about the moon as a kid 这句话中用了 what 引导的宾语从句,如 which is the driving force that
has brought our species this far 中用了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句;使用了非常好的短语,
如 be compared to,remind sb. of sb./sth.,serve as,gaze at 等,为文章增色不少;并注意了句子
的衔接,如 Also,What’s more,By the way。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾
驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
第二节(20 分)
52.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据下面四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述
你确定大学志愿的过程。
注意:词数不少于 60。________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
【答案】The past week was by no means ordinary, for I had finally decided on my major.
This Monday, the topic was brought up again by my parents during dinner. I had asked myself the
same question many times, but still couldn’t make up my mind. Seeing my hesitant look, mom patted
me on my shoulder, her smile encouraging me to do more research.
Later that evening, I turned to the Internet for help. Faced with so many choices, I seemed to be
lost. Law could be a good choice. Business and computer science were also attracting top students. I
noted down one after another major, but crossed them all off, for what I wanted was a profession that
could make a difference in people’s lives.
The inspiration came unexpectedly with the CCTV News yesterday. The moment “Role Models
of Our Time” appeared on the screen, I was awed. The news story focused on superheroes without a
cape — police officers, healthcare workers, delivery men, city cleaners — who guarded us and ensured our life ran normally. Suddenly, I realized my life’s purpose — relieving pain and saving
lives. And to pursue this call, I decided to specialize in medical science.
I jumped excitedly at this idea. Mom and dad were also happy that I had found the compass for
my future life, and said they would be so proud to see me in white. Now, determined to become a
healthcare worker, whenever I start my schoolwork, I know I am studying for a noble cause.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给的四幅图写一篇周记,记述自己确定大学志愿
的过程。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般过去时
人称:第一人称为主
结构:总分总法
总分总法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,结尾再重申一下自己的主题,并以
这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 挖掘四幅图所给出的信息:图 1——和父母讨论大学志愿选什么,图 2——自己网上
查找大学志愿资料,图 3——看电视新闻给自己选大学志愿的启发,图 4——确定了自己的大
学志愿;
2. 自己确定大学志愿过程中的感悟。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
by no means;make up one’s mind;encourage sb.to do sth.;turn to…for help;make a difference;
focus on
第三步:连词成句
1. The past week was by no means ordinary, for I had finally decided on my major.
2. I had asked myself the same question many times, but still couldn’t make up my mind.
3. Seeing my hesitant look, mom patted me on my shoulder, her smile encouraging me to do more
research.
4. Later that evening, I turned to the Internet for help.
5. for what I wanted was a profession that could make a difference in people’s lives.6. The news story focused on superheroes without a cape.
(根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。)
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At
last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not
only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing,
On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5 表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择:either…or…,or
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,结构严谨,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意
思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如 for what I wanted was a profession
that could make a difference in people’s lives 这句话中既用了 for 引导的原因状语从句,又用了
that 引导的定语从句;文章多处用了非谓语动词结构,如 Seeing my hesitant look 和 Faced with
so many choices 在句中做状语;使用了非常好的短语,如 by no means,encourage sb.to do sth.,
turn to…for help,make a difference 等,为文章增色不少;并注意了句子的衔接,如 but,
either…or…。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思
路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。