备战2020年中考英语书面表达考前押题冲关解析版 真题回眸之其它部分文体

02 真题回眸之其它部分文体 备战 2020 年中考英语书面表达考前押题冲关 图表、开放类 【2019 •山西省】 阅读是同学们未来参与社会应具备的关键能力，无论你喜欢哪种阅读方式，它都能让你增长知识，开 阔眼界。最近，某出版社在两万人中，针对人们喜欢的阅读方式做了一项调查，下图是相关的统计结果， 其中包括电子阅读和纸质阅读的人数。 请你用两段话写一篇短文，第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容，第二段从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅 读方式，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种阅读方式的好处。 要求： 1. 词数不少于 80 词； 2. 首句已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇仅供参考； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 WORD BANK reading on mobile phones others books reading paper ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】 这篇作文要求我们对一个人们喜欢的阅读方式的调查结果进行介绍，并结合实际，谈一谈自己喜欢的 阅读方式。审题可知，短文应主要包括两部分内容：首先仔细观察图表，用百分比简要说明图表内容；然 后选择其中一项你喜欢的阅读方式，结合自己的经历，谈一谈这种阅读方式的好处。短文应以一般现在时 为主，根据表达需要选择适当的人称，第二部分内容应以第一人称为主叙述。写作时应注意：文章应包括 题目中的所有内容，尤其注意仔细观察图表，将图表中的信息表达清楚、准确。其次应注意英语表达习惯 和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译。应从句子的整体结构考虑，选择适当的句型、短语和词汇， 语句通顺，表达清楚。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句和复合句，以及其他复杂结构，提升文章 档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使上下文意连贯、自然。 【参考范文】 Recently, a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading. Here is what we have learned from it. 60% of the people like to read on mobile phones or e-readers, while only 38.4% choose to read paper books. So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books. However, whatever way of reading we choose, it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes. As for me, I am still used to reading paper books. Whenever I open a paper book, the smell of paper reminds me of the stories in the books from my mom when I was a little kid. Just because of this, I got into the habit of reading. So when I read paper books now, they always bring me the old feelings. On the other hand, compared with the electronic devices, reading paper books is good for eyes. So you see, I believe e-books won’t take the place of paper books in my heart. 这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了图表中的统计结果，并谈论了自己喜欢的阅读方 式。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰，短文分两段，第一段介绍了图表中的调查结果； 第二段结合自己的经历谈论了自己喜欢的阅读方式。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用 词准确，表达清楚。句式结构文章，以简单句结构为主，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句、表语从句等复合 句结构，长短句结合，调整了文章节奏，提升了作文档次。文章中较好的句型有：Here is what we have learned from it.、So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books. 、However, whatever way of reading we choose, it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes. 、Whenever I open a paper book, the smell of paper reminds me of the stories in the books from my mom when I was a little kid.、On the other hand, compared with the electronic devices, reading paper books is good for eyes.等。 利弊选择类 【2019 •浙江省绍兴市】 学校是否有必要设立“无作业日”？对此，你在班中进行了调查。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文在英语课 上交流，并阐述你的观点和理由。 Opinions Reasons most students Yes ◆have free time ◆feel relaxed some students No ◆waste time ◆get bad grades I … … 注意：①短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节； ②词数：80-100； ③短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：无作业日 Homework-free Day 短文首句：I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. Here are the results. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】 这是一篇材料类作文。着重通过调查对“无作业日"学生的看法：赞成与反对及理由。主要以第三人称和 一般现在时。写作中应适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻切关系。 【参考范文】 I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. Here are the results. Most students think it necessary to have Homework-free Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like, such as reading their favorite books, going swimming and so on. They will also feel relaxed and join their friends in playing different games. Some students, however, don't like it. They're afraid that they may waste time or even get bad grades. They prefer to do homework as usual. In my view, Homework-free Day will certainly help a lot. I can choose to watch some interesting English programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills. 文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。such as ，例如； Homework-free Day ，无作业日； prefer to do sth.更喜欢做某事。I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. （介 词后接宾语从句）；Most students think it necessary to have Homework-free Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like.（宾语从句；不定式做主语和结果状语从句）；I can choose to watch some interesting English programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills. （非限制性定语从句）。 还运用了 or， however 等使上下文衔接的更好。 图画提纲类 【2019 •江苏省连云港市】 减负之后，同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义？”展开了讨论，大家 各抒己见。请你根据下图提示，以“How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?”为题，用英语写一篇短 文。 注意：(1) 短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； (2) 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； (3) 短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息； (4) 参考词汇：提升素养promote literacy。 How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful? Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful? ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】 本文属于材料作文，要表达如何让课外生活更有意义。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下 文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。 【参考范文】 How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful? Nowadays we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful? My schoolmates give the following suggestions. First it's good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves. In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What's more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need. In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy. 这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓 一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如a good chance to do, get close to, in my opinion, what’s more, take an active part in, in a word, make full use of, spare time以及“比较级and比较级”等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯， 用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 写作时可以从以下几个方面做起： 认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。 构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是 开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。 初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性 以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔 接自然。 修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构 是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 图画提纲类 【2019 •广州市】 广州某电台英文频道将开设 Welcome to Guang zhou 栏目，目前面向全市中学生征集“微州”英文介绍。 请你写一篇英语短文，向栏目投稿。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。 注意：1. 词数：80 词左右(短文的开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数)； 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. ________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Guangzhou is waiting for you. 【写作思路】 这篇作文要求我们用英语介绍广州这座城市。题目中用图示展示了短文中应包括的内容：广州市的位 置、历史、特色、气候特点以及广州的一个好去处，并阐述理由。学生们应根据这些提示进行写作，为时 内容丰富、充实，应对每个话题进行拓展，详细地对广州进行介绍。短文应使用一般现在时，第一人称和 第三人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先短文中应包括题目中要求的所有内容，不要遗漏要点。各个内 容应叙述清楚、内容具体。同时注意文章结构，要分清主次，合理安排各个写作内容。其次应注意英语表 达习惯和汉语的不同，不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，可以简单句结构为主，穿 插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式，提升作文档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连 贯，表达流畅。 【参考范文】 Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. Located in the south of China，Guangzhou, with a history of more than two thousand years, plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China. With moderate as well as comfortable climate, Guangzhou is famous as a flower city for its distinctive food. I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot. First of all, Canton Tower is so grand and beautiful especially in the evening that you can't help being fascinated by it. In addition, when you arrive at the top of Canton Tower, you have such a valuable chance to look down at the full view of Guangzhou. Last but not least, you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower. As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou. Guangzhou is waiting for you. 这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了广州这座城市。短文有以下几个优点：首先短文 内容完整，包含来了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。作者从五个方面对广州进行了介绍：第一段 中介绍了广州的位置、历史、气候和特色，简单的几句话包含了大量的信息；第二段是主体段，主要给读 者推荐了一个好去处，并阐述了自己的理由；第三段和第四段是一个结尾，对自己的介绍进行总结。文章 层次清晰，叙述条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合 英语的表达习惯，简单句与复合句结合，使文章富有节奏的变化。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型， 如 Located in the south of China，Guangzhou，with a history of more than two thousand years，plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China、I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot.、 Last but not least. you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.、As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.等等。 提纲类材料作文 （五）【2019 •湖北省黄石市】 假如你是国际学校的学生李华，你的同学 Tom 写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排，请给 Tom 回封邮件，告知你的计划，并邀请他来黄石游玩。 内容包括：1. 读几本好书； 2. 参加社会实践活动； 3. 帮父母做家务； 4. 和朋友一起锻炼； 5. 邀请 Tom。 注意：1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现与本人相关信息； 4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词忙：有意义的 meaningful 经典文学作品 classic literature works 社会实践活动 social practice activities Dear Tom, I'm very happy to hear from you. _____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】 本文属于材料作文，写信告诉汤姆你的暑假计划并邀请汤姆来黄石玩。根据要表达的内容确定并准确 运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。 【参考范文】 Dear Tom, I'm very happy to hear from you. How are you going these days? Summer vacation is coming soon. Here I’d like to share my holiday plan with you. First of all, I am going to read some good books to open up my mind. What’s more, I’ll take part in some volunteer activities to raise awareness of serving the society and improve my social communication ability. Of course, exercise is must. I will run, play basketball, ride a bike and so on. Last but not least, I am about to invite you to visit my hometown, Huangshi and I really want to meet you. How about yours? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓 一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 would like to do, share sth with, be going to, open up one’s mind, take part in, awareness of serving the society, of course, and so on, be about to do, invite sb to do, look forward to doing 以及 first of all, what’s more 和 last but not least,增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文 连贯。 半开放类 电子邮件 （六）【2019 •吉林】 假如你是李华，想参加 China Daily 举办的以”梦想职业体验”为主题的 2019 年夏令营活动。请给主办 人 Mr. Smith 写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。内容包括：1.个人信息与兴趣爱好 2.梦想职业与个人计划 写作要求；1.词数 90 词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。 Dear Mr. Smith, It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you. ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【写作思路】 本文属于申请信，给主办人史密斯先生写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件，包含个人信息与兴趣爱好和 梦想职业与个人计划。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加 内容。 【参考范文】 Dear Mr. Smith, It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you． My name is Li Hua．I like reading and writing．I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school．And I have a habit of keeping a dairy．I want to be a writer when I grow up．So After knowing your summer camp，I feel very excited because it's about dream job experience．If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chance．After work，I will spend more time making a summary． I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply． Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓 一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 like doing, spend+时间+doing sth, keep a diary, grow up 以及 If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chance 中 if 引导的条件句用一般现在时，主句用 一般将来时，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。