2020 届浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”
模拟练习(三)写作指导
一、概写原文
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。
According to a study at the University of Marland Medical Center in
Baltimore, researchers found that people who had a good sense of humor and
laughed a lot, not only at home but also at work, had fewer heart problems than
people who laughed less, and laughing people tend to live a longer life than the
ones who are not.
After reading plenty of information about the benefits of laughing and a
careful study of previous papers in this area, a doctor in India started a laughter
club. Dr. Mandan Damaris's laughter club quickly grew into 1 800 groups
throughout India and over 6 000 around the world. The laughter club had even
inspired World Laughter Day, which people celebrate on the first Sunday of May
every year. Instructors at the clubs get people laughing not only through jokes
but through simple laughing exercises. For example, instructors and participants
repeat the chant" ho- ho-ho" and "ha-ha-ha" together. What's more, participants
also do the "Lion laugh" by sticking out their tongues and waving their hands
around their ears. Other exercises focus on breathing and simple yoga exercises.
In a word, all the activities that can cause laugh are included in the clubs.These laughter clubs are very popular in hospitals and nursing homes
nowadays in India, where participants can forget about their aches and pains
while laughing. It seems that laughing may be just as important as eating right
and exercising.
Not everyone can join a laughter club, but we all can take part in the same
practice. According to the doctor, besides taking part in the clubs, everyone can
do something o make themselves laugh. How can you make laughing a part of
your daily routine? If you feel funny about joining a laughter club, you can rent a
funny movie, remember a funny experience, do some sports, go to the zoo,
watch the monkeys or even, just make yourself laugh. You will not be able to
keep a straight face all the time.
So, don t worry; be happy. Laugh a little and live longer.
二、概写步骤
第一步:通读理解全文,了解文章结构,明确各段落之间的逻辑关系,提取全文中心
词(尤其是名词与动词)。第二步:细读原文,划出各段的主题句与关键词,关键词以动词与名词为主,涵盖段
落全部要点与次要点。
第三步:根据所划内容,结合理解,重新组织语言。可用中文概括出段落大意,然后
用一句话翻译出来。
第四步:通读修改。修改是一个重要的环节,要考虑连接词的使用;高级词汇的替
换;句式的多样;语法是否正确以及字数的多少。第五步:用自信衡水体抄到试卷上,力求清楚美观。
三、分段概括
关键词句已在原文标出,结合理解,用中文概括出一句话并译成英文。
❶研究表明会笑的人得心脏病的可能性比较少,因而能长寿。
Research indicated that laughing people were less likely to get heart disease,
thus living longer.
❷因此,印度成立了笑声俱乐部,通过做各种发笑练习使人大笑。
Therefore, laughter clubs were established in India to make people laugh by
doing various laughing exercises.
❸最近,俱乐部甚至受到医院与养老院的喜欢,因为那样的练习有助于忘记疼痛与
痛苦。Currently, they are even liked by hospitals and nursing homes because such
exercises help neglect aches and pains.
❹事实上,为了使自己开心,可以在日常的生活中做同样的练习。
Actually, to make yourself happy, just do the same in your daily routine.
❺总之,多笑,你会活得更长寿。
Anyway, laugh more, and you'll live longer.
四、下水范文
Research indicated that laughing people were less likely to get heart disease,
thus living longer. Therefore, laughter clubs were established in India to make
people laugh by doing various laughing exercises. Currently, they are even liked
by hospitals and nursing homes because such exercises help neglect aches and
pains. Actually, to make yourself happy, just do the same in your daily routine.
Anyway, laugh more, and you'll live longer.【69 字】