英语道歉信和求职信写作模板
(一)英语道歉信写作模板
道歉信通常是在因自己的过失或疏忽给别人带来了麻烦或损失并发觉的情况下,为了向
对方表示歉意而写的信件。具体写作结构如下:
[典例悟法]
(全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)假定你是李华,与留学生朋友 Bob 约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。
请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意; 2.说明原因; 3.另约时间。
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分范文
Dear Bob,
I am sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.I have just
found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause
you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we will have more time to
read and select books.If it's convenient for you, let's meet at 8:30 outside the school gate.If not,
let me know what time suits you best.I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文赏析
(1)文章开篇表明写作意图,表达歉意。随后说明道歉的原因并解释不能赴约的原因。
“再次相约”部分,情节适当发挥,情真意切。
(2)范文中使用了 convenient, available 等高级词汇,并运用了较多的语法结构,如宾语
从句 that I cannot go to the bookstore ...和 that I have to attend ...; so that ...引导的目的状语从句; If it's convenient for you ...为 if 引导的条件状语从句; If not ...状语从句的省略等。这展示了
作者对复杂句式较强的运用能力,增加了文章得分的亮点。
[增分佳句]
1.道歉信开头常用语
①I am writing this letter to apologize to you for ...
我写这封信是因……向你道歉。
②I would like to express my deepest apology/regret for not being able to/my failing ...
因为没能……我向你表达最真诚的歉意/悔意。
③I must apologize for any inconvenience it may have caused you.
为此事可能给你带来的任何不便,我深表歉意。
④I must make a sincere and humble apology to you for ...
我必须为……真诚地向你道歉。
⑤I regret to inform you that I can not/am unable to ...
我遗憾地告知你我不能……
2.道歉信结尾常用语
①Please allow me to say sorry again.
请允许我再次道歉。
②Will you please accept my apology?
请你接受我的道歉,好吗?
③Please accept my sincere apology for ...once more.
请再次为……接受我真诚的道歉。
④I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.我衷心希望你能宽容地接受我
的道歉。
⑤Once again, I'm sorry for my inconvenience caused.
对于造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。
实战练习一:
假定你是李华,上周你向外教 Janet 借阅了一本 Reader's Digest 杂志,但你却因故未能
妥善保管好这本书,请给外教写封信向她道歉,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.提出弥补措施。
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Dear Janet,
I'm writing to express my sincere apology, because the magazine, Reader's Digest,which I
borrowed from you last week was torn up.
Yesterday afternoon, I was reading the magazine in my study while my pet dog was sleeping
beside me.Before dinner, my mom asked me to buy some salt for cooking, so I went to a nearby
store.Not until I arrived at the store did I realize I had left the magazine with my dog.Then I
rushed back home after paying for the salt without hesitation, only to find it was bitten into pieces
by my dog.
Learning that you are a big fan of the magazine, I decide to buy a new one for you.Please
accept my sincere apology.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(二)英语求助信写作模板
写英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难,需要请求对方帮助。因此整篇文章应
用一般现在时表达文意,当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。具体写作结构如
下:
[典例悟法]
(全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人
简历(resume)。给外教 Ms Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分范文
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I'm Li Hua and I plan to take a parttime job in a foreign capital company during the summer
holiday.I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it.However, I'm
not sure about the words and format.Therefore, I'm writing to ask for your help and professional
advice.Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you
mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, I'd like you to correct the
mistakes found in the materials.I'd be most grateful if you could do me the favor.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文赏析
(1)文章开篇自我介绍并表明写信意图。随后说明求助的具体内容(请对方帮你修改所附
材料的文字和格式)。最后表达希望和感激。
(2)范文中使用了大量亮点词汇和句型,如 therefore 关系明确,因果适当,不但使上下
文融会贯通,而且突出了写信目的。Would you please do ...?是请求别人帮助的句型,用得
恰到好处,符合说话者的身份;过去分词 attached 作定语,使句子更加简练地道,增加了文
章的可读性。Would you mind doing ...?不同的句式表达了相同的意思,避免了表达形式的
单一化,语气委婉。这是文章提档次的句子。most grateful 道出了作者希望得到帮助的迫切
和感激之情,也展示了作者较高的语言运用能力。
[增分佳句]
1.求助信开头常用语
①My name is ...I'm writing to you for some help.
我叫……,我写信是向你寻求一些帮助。
②I'm writing a letter to you to ask you to do me a favor.我给你写信想请你帮我一个忙。
③I have some difficulty in doing ...which bothers me a lot.So I have no choice but to turn to
you for help.
我在做……方面有困难,这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。
④Faced with/Facing so many difficulties, I have to ask you for help.面对如此多的困难,我
不得不向你求助。
2.寻求帮助常用语
①I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.我想让你给我介绍一些
学习语法的好方法。
②I wonder how to deal with the problem.我想知道如何解决这个问题。
3.求助信结尾常用语
①I'm sure with your help I can make great progress.
我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。
②I will appreciate any of your help.
我将非常感谢你的一切帮助。
③I would greatly appreciate your timely help.
我将非常感激你及时的帮助。
实战练习二:
假定你是李华,前不久听了美国文学教授 Mr.Smith 关于“读英语文学作品,提高英语
运用能力”的讲座,受益匪浅,但仍有一些问题不是很清楚,所以写信向他求助,内容包括:
1.自我介绍;
2.请教读文学作品时要注意什么;
3.请他为你推荐几本适合阅读的英语作品。
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Dear Mr.Smith,
My name is Li Hua, a senior 3 student.The other day, I attended your lecture on “Read
English literary works to improve your ability to use English” which has benefited me a lot.But in
some aspects,I still need your help, so I'm writing to you today.
First, could you please tell me what I should mainly focus on when reading English literary
work, vocabulary, grammar, culture or something else? Besides, what's the correct order to deal
with the different aspects? What's more, I was wondering whether you could recommend some
good works which are suitable for senior 3 students.
I'd appreciate it if you could do me a favor!Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua