应用文写作专题
浙江省嘉兴市 2021 届高三英语 9 月教学测试试题
第一节：应用文写作（满分 15 分）
46. 假定你是高三（7）班学生李华，上周日你班部分同学到阳光儿童福利院开展志愿者活动。
请你为校英语报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.时间、地点、参与者；
2.活动内容；
3.简要评论。
注意：
1.词数 80 左右（文章标题已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Volunteering in the Sunshine Children's Home
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【答案】One possible version:Volunteering in the Sunshine Children's Home
Last Sunday, some students from Class 7, Senior 3 went to the Sunshine Children’s Home for
voluntary work.On arrival, they presented the kids with gifts. Then they involved the kids in activities.
Some taught the older to draw pictures. Others told stories to the younger. Later they held a party,
playing games, singing and dancing together. All day the kids were immersed in happiness.Voluntary
work of this kind is significant. Not only does it enrich students’ life experiences, but it inspires their
social responsibility.
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇报道，说明部分同学到阳光儿童福利院开展志愿者
活动情况并做出相关的评论。
详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.说明志愿者活动的时间、地点及参与者。
2.介绍活动内容
3.说明活动的意义。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
present sb. with. sth., involve sb in, be immersed in, enrich one’s life
第三步：连词成句
Later they held a party, playing games, singing and dancing together.
Not only does it enrich students' life experiences, but it inspires their social responsibility.
Then they involved the kids in activities.
All day the kids were immersed in happiness.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not
only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On
the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
作者在范文中使用了倒装句，如：Not only does it enrich students' life experiences, but it inspires
their social responsibility. 以及非谓语作状语，如：Later they held a party, playing games, singing and
dancing together.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思
路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
“超级全能生”浙江省 2021 届高考英语 9 月联考
第一节 应用文写作(满分 15 分)
假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校将举办英文名著阅读比赛，每位参赛者需要提供一篇英
文名著读后感(book report)。请你给外教 Mr. Johnson 写一封邀请信，请他担任该比赛的评委。
内容包括：
1.发出邀请；
2.比赛的具体安排；
3.期待回复。
注意：
1.词数 80 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
浙江省名校新高考研究联盟 Z20 名校联盟 2021 届高三英语第一次联考
第一节 应用文写作（满分 15 分）
假如你叫李华，你的英国笔友 jack 在你因病住院期间经常在网上帮你辅导英语，鼓励你积极面
对病情、学习和生活。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 回顾帮助并感谢；
2. 邀请来中国游玩；
3. 表达期待。
注意：
1．词数 80 左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一节：应用文写作（满分 15 分）
Dear Jack,
I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for your help and encouragement during my stay in
hospital.
Undoubtedly, without your help with my English online every day, I couldn’t have made my
English study go smoothly as usual. And it’s your frequent encouragement and positive attitudes
towards life that guide me out of low spirits to deal with my illness, study and life in such a sound
way.
Many thanks to you again. I hope you will come to China to have a nice trip where you can
eyewitness in person the perfect combination of culture and nature. I’m right here waiting for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
2020-2021 学年浙江省学军中学高三年级英语模拟测试卷
假定你是高中生李华，你的美国笔友 Jack 热爱中国传统文化，最近打算来中国工作一段时
间，但是不确定应该去往哪个城市，写信向你咨询。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 你推荐的城市 2. 推荐的理由（不少于两条） 3. 美好祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数 80 词左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
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浙江省新高考研究联盟 2021 届高三英语上学期返校联考试题
第一节 应用文写作（满分 15 分）
假定你是李华，你的朋友 Adam 最近很苦恼，因为不善于表达，与同学交流出现诸多问题。请
你给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1.表达安慰；2.分析现状；3.提出建议。
注意：
1.词数 80 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.：应用文写作（满分 15 分）
Dear Adam,
Sorry to learn that you are having trouble in communicating with classmates, Tm writing to give
you a helping hand.
I quite understand your depression, since ifs quite common for a shy student like you to have
difficulty associating with others. Probably, your classmates just feel unsure whether you’re interested
in their topics. To help you out, I highly suggest you step out of comfortable zone and take an active
part in after-class activities where you can naturally establish a closer relationship and find common
talking materials.
Hopefully, you can find your problem solved soon! (95 words)
浙江省金色联盟-百校联考 2021 届高三 9 月联考英语试题
第一节 应用文写作（满分 15 分）
2020 年 8 月，安徽省多地遭受特大洪水袭击，无数孩子失去家园。为此，校学生会号召大
家本周日上午 9：00 在主教学楼前面为灾区孩子捐款。假定你是学生会主席李华，请你以学生
会的名义写一则书面通知。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一节 应用文写作
One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
In August this year, catastrophic floods hit large areas of Anhui Province. The flood destroyed
people’s homes and villages, leaving tens of thousands of people homeless, including little children.
It was a great sorrow for every Chinese people. Therefore, we call on all the students to donate
money to the children in disaster areas who are desperate for help. The donation activity is scheduled
to be held in front of the Main Building at 9:00 on Sunday a. m.
We are looking forward to your active participation and your love!
The Students’ Union
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