书面表达之咨询建议类
假定你是李华,请你以初三毕业生的身份给学弟学妹们写一封电子邮件。要求如下:
1. 重点分享你在处理学习困难方面的经验以及你下一步学习或生活的打算;
2. 邮件不少于 80 词,开头与结尾已给出,不计入字数;
3. 不得出现真实的个人信息。
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【写作思路】
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适
当的短语表达中心思想,增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查
验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【参考范文】
I'm going to graduate from junior high school. Looking back on three years of junior
high school life, there are many gains and difficulties. I have many difficulties in
learning English. At the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I
have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV
programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to
learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English
club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible
if you put your heart into it. I am about to start high school life, I will continue to work
hard, I hope you bravely face junior high school life, have a happy junior high school life.
假设你某英语报社的编辑 Rina, 收到 Li Wei 同学的来信,诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼,
并向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给 Li Wei 回信。要求:1. 须包括所有要点提示并适当补充,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 词数:100 词左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇:laugh at; care about; high- fat food; the more... , the healthier...
Dear Li Wei,
I’ve received your letter and I can understand you.
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Yours,
Rina
【写作思路】
假设你某英语报社的编辑Rina, 收到Li Wei 同学的来信,诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼,并
向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给Li Wei 回信。本题给出了主要写作要点,动笔前要先认真阅读要点,
确定写作内容,并适当发挥。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态,写作中注意标点符号及
大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。【参考范文】
Dear Li Wei,
I have received your letter and I can understand you. You must feel bad when being
laughed at use of your over-weight. Here is my advice for you.
Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important
thing is to be confident, as it will help you have courage to face and overcome your
trouble.
Secondly, try to eat healthily keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and
vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight.
Thirdly, I strongly advise you to exercise more often. You'd better get up early in the
morning and do some sports regularly. The more you exercise, the healthier you'll be.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Rina
假如你是林涛,你的笔友 Sam 在学校和同学发生了一些矛盾.现在他来信,请你给他一些关于怎样与
他人相处和自我保护的建议.请根据下面表格提示,用英文给他写一封回信
学会相处 学会倾听;
互相帮助;
不在网上交友;
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自我保护 学会和同学沟通;及时求助老师和父母
对学习、生活的影响 ……(不少于 2 点)
写作要求:1.短文内容必须包含所给要点,并适当发挥
2.语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范
3.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名;
4. 词数 80 左右.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数.
参考词汇: respect 尊重
Dear Sam,How is it going? I'm happy to tell you how to get on well with others and protect
ourselves.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Lin Tao
【参考范文】
Dear Sam,
How's it going ? I'm happy to tell you how to get on well with others and protect
ourselves.(开篇点明题意)
First,We should study how to listen to others.We could be quiet when others are talking
with you.Just listen carefully,then you can describe your opinions.Second,We also should be
ready to help each other(高分句型一).Helping others will improve the relationships with your
friends.Third,Please don't make friends via the Internet.It's not truthful and you can't judge
the truth by yourself . Therefore , we can protect ourselves via communicating with
classmates.Meanwhile,We can ask teachers and parents for help.(从如何与人相处和保护自己方
面提出建议)
I understand why you are worried,since the friendship also plays an important role in
studying, even sometimes in your daily life.Please take above advice,Hope you will deal with
it soon.(高分句型二)(对学习,生活的影响以及给出期待)
Best wishes!
Yours,
Lin Tao"人生没有彩排,生命没有重来",你平安、健康、快乐地成长是父母最大的心愿.今年 6 月下旬学校
将举办一场以" Keep away from the danger!"为主题的英文演讲比赛.假如你是王雷同学,大家推选你参
加这次比赛.请根据以下思维导图提示,写一篇英文演讲稿.
写作提示:
写作要求:1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名;
2.所有的提示词都须用上,包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3.字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清楚;
4.词数 100 词左右。(演讲稿的开头和结尾己给出,不计入总词数。)
Hello! Everyone.I'm Wang Lei.The danger is around us. So we must learn how to keep away
from the danger . First , we mustn't go swimming without our parents' or teachers'
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In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger!That's all. Thank you for listening!
【参考范文】
Keep away from the danger!
Hello! Everyone.I'm Wang Lei.The danger is around us.So we must learn how to keep away
from the danger . First , we mustn't go swimming without our parents' or teachers'
permission.When we swim in the water,we must wear life jackets.(游泳安全) Second, it's
important for us to follow the traffic rules.【高分句型一】We mustn't go across the street when
the traffic light is red.While crossing the street, never use mobile phones.We must walk on
the pavement.(交通安全)Third,we have to be careful when we make friends, especially
online.We mustn't meet net friends alone.(交友安全)Fourth,we are supposed to eat healthily
and safely. Eating the food that goes bad will do harm to out health.【高分句型二】Remember
to wash hands before meals.(饮食安全)What's more,we have to follow the school rules.Don't
run in the hallways,or we'll be hurt easily.We should get on well with our classmates.Don't
fight with them.If we are threatened, we should call the police for help in time.(校园安
全)Last but not least,we must say no to the drugs.Never try them.When you see someone sell
drugs,remember to call 110.(远离毒品)
In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger!
That's all. Thank you for listening!
每年的 6 月 6 日是我国的"爱眼日",可见保护中小学生的视力非常重要,为此,学校将在英语文化节
期间举行一场"爱眼日"英语演讲比赛.请你写一篇英语演讲稿,谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识和建议.
内容:1.保护视力的重要性(请写 1 点)
2.对保护视力的建议:
(1)阅读时注意用眼卫生;
(2)少用电子产品;
(3)常看绿色植物;
(4)做眼保健操;
(5)多做户外运动.
要求:1.结构完整,表达通顺,语言规范,书写清晰; 2.文中不得出现任何真实的人名,学校名等信息;
3.词数 80 左右.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
参考词汇:
Sight Day"爱眼日"; electronic products 电子产品; eye﹣protecting exercises 眼保健操
Dear friends.
June 6 is our country's Sight Day
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【参考范文】
Dear friends.
June 6 is our country's Sight Day.As we know,"Eyes are the windows of the soul". Everyone
understands the importance of the eyes.(保护视力的重要性)But now more and more students are
getting near﹣sighted.So how can we protect our eyes ?Here is some advice on how to protect
our eyes.
First,we should be cautious on the health of using eyes.We should not keep your eyes working
for a long time. While reading ,we should keep the book about a foot away from us.After reading
for an hour or two,we had better have a rest by looking at the plants in the
distance.Second,using less electronic products is a good way to protect our eyes.【高分
句型一】 Besides,we should see green plants as often as possible.Finally, remember to do
eye﹣protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports, which will help us keep good
eyesight.【高分句型二】 (对保护视力的几条建议)据悉,我国青少年的近视率居全球第一,70%的学生有视力方面的问题.为引起广大青少年的重视,某
英语报刊正在开展以" Saving Our Eyesight"为题的征文活动.请根据以下
提示写一篇短文投稿,分析造成青少年近视的原因并提出保护视力的合理建议.
要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范.
2.所有提示须全部用上,并作适当发挥.
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名.
4. 80 词左右(文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数).
Saving Our Eyesight
As the saying goes, "Eyes are the window to the soul(心灵 ) "However, 70% of us have poor
eyesight . What has caused this problem ?
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In a word, lets take care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future.
【参考范文】
Saving Our Eyesight
As the saying goes, "Eyes are the window to the soul(心灵 ) "However, 70% of us have poor
eyesight. What has caused this problem? The main reason is the bad habits of using eyes.For
example, many of us read in wrong positions,such as reading in bed or keeping our eyes too close
to the book.Besides,taking less exercise can also cause poor eyesight. What's more, some of us spend too much time playing computer games or watching TV. It's bad for our eyes. So how
can we protect our eyes ?Here is some advice on how to protect our eyes.(造成青少年近视的
原因)
First,we should be cautious on the health of using eyes.We should not keep our eyes working
for a long time. While reading ,we should keep the book about a foot away from us.After reading
for an hour or two , we had better have a rest by looking at the plants in the
distance.Second,using less electronic products is a good way to protect our eyes.【高分句
型一】 Besides,we should see green plants as often as possible.Finally, remember to do eye
﹣protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports, which will help us keep good eyesight.【高
分句型二】 (对保护视力的几条建议)
In a word, let's take care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future.