专题05 消费排名（课件）-【延期不延学】江苏2020高考英语书面表达模拟课件讲评(共26张PPT)

消费排名 2018年江苏高考书面表达 Part I 如何避免语言错误 英语里面的动词形式变化多样，从 功能方面讲英语动词有谓语动词和 非谓语动词之分，而谓语动词是句 子的核心成分，它说明了主语的状 态和动作！它有时态、语态和数方 面的变化！所以说英语句子是由谓 语动词的性质所决定的！ 实义动词 一、行为动词： 及物动词：like，buy 不及物动词：work, live (补给物动词不可带宾语，也 不可用于被动语态。但后面跟某个介词之后就可以带宾语， complain unfair treatment(X), 应改为complain about unfair treatment！ 连系动词 be, seem, remain, appear get, become, turn, grow, go sound, taste, feel, look, smell 谓语动词（实义动词）的性质决定了英语句型的走向。 Practice： 1. 上面筑有鸟巢的树枝弯了！ The branch with a nest in it has bent.（现 在完成时、主动语态、第三人称单数） S+V 友情提醒：写句时先要确定谓语动词，然后确 定主语，并保证谓语动词的时态、语态和数的 准确性！ 2. 这些年来网络短视频很红火。 These years online short videos are becoming popular.( going viral)---- have become popular (现在进行 时或现在完成时、主动语态、复 数 S+Link.v) 3. 随着网络的发展，人们越来越喜欢 拍摄短视频来促销产品或提高自己的 公众形象。 With the development of the Internet, people increasingly prefer to shoot online short videos to promote the sales of products or improve their public image. ( 一般现在时、主动语 态、复数形式 S+V+O） 4. 每个人要尽力让我们的社区更美丽和谐。 Each of us is supposed to make our community increasingly beautiful and harmonious.(一般现 在时、被动结构、第三人称单数 S+V+O+Oc） 人们普遍认为人与自然应该和谐相处。 People think it necessary to live in harmony with nature. It is universally acknowledged that human should live in harmony with nature. (此句更 好） 5. 应该给孩子更多的时间自主 学习。 Children should be given more time to learn freely on their own.(一般现在时、被动语态 S+V+O间宾+O（直宾） Part II: Point out the following mistakes in the following sentences. 1. Why short video industry is popular these years?(主谓搭配和时 态有问题） Why have short videos popular been popular these years? Why has short video industry been thriving these years? 2. There are some reasons about the popular of short video. 3. That leads more and more people become famous. 词法和固定搭配有问题 There are some reasons for the popularity of short video. (句子有三 处错误） That leads more and more people becoming famous 3. I think people need know a lot about laws. 词法掌握不到位 I think people need to know a lot about law. 5.What’s more, government needs to improve the charge of virtual gifts system. (表达部分不通） What’s more, the government needs to improve to raise the charge standard for virtual gifts.(修改此句 时我还是不太明白这位同学所表达 的意思） Conclusion: 语言要准确地道，并 符合英语句型要求的几点： 1.要研判谓语动词：是及物还是不 及物，有什么固定搭配形式？谓 语动词的形式是否准确无误！ 2. 不能受汉语的负迁移影响将英 语写成中式英语！ 请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。 【写作内容】 1. 用约30个词概括上述利用排名 （ratings）进行消费的现象； 2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然 后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看 法。 概括部分：(审题：人称、时态) 1. 提取关键句、词或短语 Li Jiang Our family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase. Two days ago, Mom asked me to find relevant information on the Internet. But the information I got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. Confused, I simply based my decision on the ratings. Within five minutes, we ordered the one we were satisfied with. This afternoon, Mom received the case and told me she liked it very much. Su Hua This morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. We found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them. We spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complained a lot, and said that despite its high ratings the food was not to our taste, I was puzzled. Should I believe in these ratings, or should I not? 提醒：概括部分如不能认真审题，第一部分内容 是很容易写偏的 find relevant information on the Internet We found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them a major channel/source for people’s purchase of daily goods Within five minutes, we ordered the one we were satisfied with. This afternoon, Mom received the case and told me she liked it very much. We spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complained a lot, and said that despite its high ratings the food was not to our taste, I was puzzled. Should I believe in these ratings, or should I not? people like purchase their necessities by referring to the ratings online However, the degree of their satisfaction seems to be opposite. Various ratings related to people’s daily consumption have gained widespread concern among consumers. Views on this vary from person to person. Some consumers are for them, while others are annoyed with them.（31words） Summary 理由 （Reasons）主题句：I don’t think the ratings on consumption may do good to us consumers. Some shops often organize various activities claiming to the public that the sales of their products rank the first an increasing number of customers pour in to purchase their products their profits roar sharply. fail to focus on the quality of their products in endless pursuit of “so-called” ratings. the quality of their products doesn’t correspond with what is described I don’t think the ratings on consumption may do good to us consumers. Some shops often organize various activities, claiming to the public that the sales of their products rank the first. By this means an increasing number of customers pour in to purchase their products so that their profits roar sharply. Much to consumers’ disappointment, these irresponsible businessmen fail to focus on the quality of their products in endless pursuit of “so-called” ratings. As a consequence, the quality of their products doesn’t correspond with what is described. Summary（总结） not believe blindly the ratings, mislead us to purchase undesirable products we would suffer a lot from the loss of our interest. As consumers, we are not supposed to believe blindly the ratings, which may mislead us to purchase undesirable products. If we did so, we would suffer a lot from the loss of our interest.