高考英语备考专题课件 作文得分策略课件 24张PPT

高考英语写作得分策略 影响得分一：卷面的整洁性 漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点 Compare them, why? 影响得分二：文中所采用的语言材料 A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜； B. 句型结构运用灵活多变; Practice Find some similar words or phrases of the followings 1. good 2. think 3.clever perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent in one's opinion/view hold the view that … it is widely shared that … wise bright smart intelligent cute 影响得分三：行文的流畅 上下贯通、一气呵成 正确而巧妙地使用好连接词 and,then,also,besides,morever,what's more furthermore,in addition,more than that... 1.表递进 ２.表转折  ３.表因果 ４.表目的 ５.表归纳 but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on the other hand... because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of... in order that,so that,for the purpose of... in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion, in a word,on the whole... 高考作文类型： A. 数据说明类文章 B. 提示议论文类文章 C. 看图说话类文章 影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个 因素 1.语篇信息是否完整 2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。 3.是否使用高级词汇 4.是否使用复杂句 5 .卷面整洁,书写工整 写作基本步骤： 1 . 仔细审题，列举大纲。 ２．围绕要点，写出句子。 ３．添加过度，确保连贯。 ４．先求正确，再求灵活。 ５．认真眷写，卷面整洁。 现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不 要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一 篇短文。 ６５％的学生认为 ３５％的学生认为 １．应该春游 １．不应该春游 ２．接触大自然，呼 吸新鲜空气，有利健 康 ２．高考临近，没有心 情玩 ３．活动是精神放松， 大脑休息，有利于学 习 ３．春游耽误学习 Introduction (topic) Body (supporting ideas) Conclusion The outline of the writing: Conclusion paragraph: … Introduction paragraph: … Point 2… Body Point 1… supporting idea 1 supporting idea 2 supporting idea 1 supporting idea 2 Key words: 1.introduction(topic): 高三学生（senior 3 students） 春游 (go spring outing） 讨论 （discussion） 2.body(supporting ideas): 接触自然 （be close to nature） 呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air ） 精神放松 （relax themselves ） 大脑休息 （rest their brains ） 高考临近 （ with college entrance examination drawing near ） 没心情玩 （don’t feel like going ） 耽误学习 (waste the time) 3.conclusion: in my opinion;as far as i am concerned... Key words: 中学生middle school students 身体差in a poor state of health;In bad condition 充足的睡眠enough sleep 加强锻炼，增加户外活动 take more exercise and do more outdoor activities 定时吃饭少吃零食 have three meals regularly,eat less non -staple food. 讲卫生Form/develop the habit of hygiene Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question.  Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and what’s more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies. 表示观点对比类写作套语 A.总起:  Opinions are divided on this question.  Different people hold different / opposite opinions.  People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards …  People have different opinions on this problem.  People take different views on this question. B.表达观点一:  …of them hold the opinion that ….  …of them are in favor of the idea that…  People who are for the idea think … C.表达不同观点之间的衔接:  However, …of them hold a different view. / …of them hold the opposite opinion.  People who are against it don’t think so.  However, every coin has two sides.  Different from those…., …people think ….  On the other hand, … people think …. D.结尾常用套语:  In my opinion/Personally, …  As far as I’m concerned, … In short/ in brief/ in a word, … Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question.  Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and what’s more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. 表列举说明的关联词: • Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, .... Secondly… Thirdly… • In the first place… In the second place… In the third place… • Finally/ Last but not least/, .... 表示递进、强调的关联词 • .... Besides/Apart from/ What’s more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/worse still/ to make matters worse… Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question.  Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and what’s more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. 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