满分写作训练-热门话题
环境保护
环境保护
“环境保护”是当前的热门话题。环境
保护包括人类生存环境保护和野生动植
物保护。有关“环境保护”的英语作文
多要求描述下列四方面的内容：一、环
境保护的重要性；二、关于环保的宣传
活动；三、关于如何保护某一种动植物；
四、关于应对环境污染的某项具体措施。
从语法的角度看，有关“环境保护”的
英语作文中经常要使用被动语态的句式。
单词
pollution
n. 污染
fur
n. 毛皮
emission
n. 排放
decrease
v. 减少
wildlife
n. 野生动物
endanger
v. 使遭危险
extinction
n. 灭绝
threat
n. 威胁
mammal
n. 哺乳动物
habitat
n. 栖息地
protect
v. 保护
conservation
n. 保护
hunt
v. 捕猎
reserve
n. 保存
ecosystem
n. 生态系统
species
n. 生态系统
dinosaur
n. 恐龙
bamboo
n. 竹子
短语
give out
放出，发出
in peace
平静地
put up with
忍受
die out
灭绝
suffer from
遭受
national park
国家公园
turn into
变成
protect...from...
保护…不受…
in danger of
处于…危险中
endangered animals
濒危动物
优秀例句
☛ If their habitat is threatened or they cannot find enough food, their number may decrease.
如果它们的栖息地受到威胁，或者它们找不到足够的食物，它们的数量可能会减少。
☛ As a result, these endangered animals may even die out.
结果这些濒危动物甚至可能灭绝。
☛ It shows the importance of wildlife protection, but I'd like to help you as the World Wildlife
Fund suggests.
这体现了野生动物保护的重要性，不过，我还是想按照世界自然基金会的提议来帮助你们。
☛ They lived on the earth tens of millions of years ago, long before humans came into being and
their future seemed secure at that time.
千百万年前，恐龙就在地球上生活，比人类的出现要早得多，当时它们的前景好像也很安全。
☛ When scientists inspected the bones, they were surprised to find that these dinosaurs could not
only run like the others but also climb trees.
当科学家观察这些骨头时，他们惊奇地发现这些恐龙不但跟其他恐龙一样能够奔跑，而且还会爬树。
句式仿写
句子一：
With the development of science and technology, more and more cars are produced in China.
随着科学和技术的发展，中国生产了越来越多的小轿车。
仿写：随着我们生活的改善，越来越多的家庭拥有了小汽车。
With the improvement of our life, _________________________ their cars.
句子二：
In big cities, such as Beijing and Guangzhou, the air quality is becoming worse and worse.
在北京、广州这样的大城市，空气质量变得越来越差。
仿写：在我国的有些地方，环境正在恶化，空气中弥漫着雾霾、大山被荒废、河流被污染。
In some places in our country, _______________________ with the air filled with heavy
smoke, many mountains turning deserted and rivers polluted.
the environment is worsening / the environment is becoming worse and worse
1. more and more families have
句子三：
Water in the river has already been polluted by the factories on both sides of it.
河水已经被河两岸的工厂污染了。
仿写：到处散布着垃圾。
______________________ here and there.
句子四：
I strongly insist that no one be allowed to kill birds or buy them for food.
我强烈地建议不允许任何人捕杀鸟，也不允许任何人买鸟吃。
仿写：我强烈建议政府应该采取有效措施制止这一现象。
I strongly suggest that _____________________ measures to stop this.
1. Waste is scattered
1. the government take effective
句子五：
So much waste water was poured into the river that all the fish were
killed in it.
如此多的废水排进了河流，导致河中的鱼全死掉了。
仿写：应该通过更多的法律手段来保护环境。
_____________________ to protect the surroundings.
句子六：
Factories are prohibited to send out waste water into the rivers directly.
禁止工厂直接将废水排入河流。
仿写：禁止工厂将烟尘和有毒气体排放到空气中。
Factories are forbidden _______________ into the air.
More laws should be passed
send out smoke and poisonous gases
句子七：
Every month the river water should be examined in order to stop the
water pollution.
为了防止水污染，每个月都应对河水进行检查。
仿写：每年都要在山上栽更多的树。
Every year ___________________ on the mountains.
句子八：
No one is allowed to kill the endangered animals.
不允许任何人捕杀濒危动物。
仿写：不允许任何人砍伐树木和向河中排放废水。
No one __________________ any trees or pour waste water into the
rivers.
is allowed to cut down
1. more trees should be planted
句子九：
People should be educated to know the significance of the environment protection.
应该告诫人们环境保护的重要性。
仿写：公众应该清楚乱扔垃圾是可耻的行为。
The public should be clear that ________________ to throw rubbish around.
句子十：
Only when everyone is aware of the importance of the environment protection can we
solve the problems completely.
只有当每一个人都意识到环境保护的重要性，我们才能彻底地解决这些问题。
仿写：只有全社会行动起来，天才会蓝，山才会绿，水才会清。
Only when the whole society takes action, ______________ blue, mountains green and
rivers clear.
1. it is a shame
will the sky become
串句成文
In some places in our country, the environment is worsening with the air
filled with heavy smoke, many mountains turning deserted and rivers
polluted. Waste is scattered here and there.
So I strongly suggest that the government take effective measures
to stop this. Firstly, more laws should be passed to protect the
surroundings. Factories are forbidden to send out smoke and poisonous
gases into the air. Every year more trees should be planted on the
mountains. No one is allowed to cut down any trees or pour waste water
into the rivers. Anyone who breaks the law should be punished
accordingly. Secondly, the public should be clear that it is a shame to
throw rubbish around.
Only when the whole society takes action, will the sky become
blue, mountains green and rivers clear. Thus our home will become more
beautiful.
话题训练
6月5日是“世界环境保护日”，李平和他的同学经过讨论，觉
得有必要向《21世纪报》写一封信，呼吁人们齐心协力，保
护环境，提出有效的保护措施。要点如下：
1.不要乱扔垃圾，应该保持环境清洁；
2.植树造林，保护环境；
3.保护海洋，禁止过度捕鱼；
4.充分利用自然资源。
注意：1.词数100个左右；
2.可适当发挥，但不要逐句翻译。
范文
Dear editor,
Nowadays, pollution is getting worse and worse. The damage to the environment
is getting serious. In my opinion, we should take some measures to protect the
environment.
To protect the environment, I think we should do the following things. Some
useful garbage can be recycled, while the harmful things should be put in a safe
place. Smoke and gas should be cleaned before they go into the air. If too many
trees are cut down, forests will disappear.We should do our best to take good care
of the environment. For example, we should plant trees and stop using wooden
chopsticks and stop throwing garbage everywhere. With modern fishing methods,
more and more fish are caught. If too many fish are taken from the sea, there will
soon be none left. If the rivers are polluted, we will die from the poison. We
should make full use of natural resources, or we will be in great danger very soon.
Yours，
Li Ping
解析
本文是一封呼吁信，要求根据6月5日是“世界环境保护日”，李平和他的同
学经过讨论，觉得有必要向《21世纪报》写一封信，呼吁人们齐心协力，保
护环境，提出有效的保护措施。本文用一般现在时来写，主要分两部分。先
写污染的严重性，我们必须采取措施。然后写保护环境的具体措施，要点包
括：1.不要乱扔垃圾，应该保持环境清洁；2.植树造林，保护环境；3.保护海
洋，禁止过度捕鱼；4.充分利用自然资源。
写作时要注意条理清楚，观点明确。要点要全面，把我们所能做的写出来。
还要尽可能使用 一些高级词汇和句型，比如：不定式To protect the
environment表目的，情态动词的被动语态can be recycled, should be put,
should be cleaned等，条件状语从句If too many trees are cut down, If too
many fish are taken from the sea, 和If the rivers are
polluted等。词语take some measures, do our best, take good care of, die
from, make full use of等。
满分写作训练-热门话题
外语学习
外语学习
有关“外语学习”的英语作文在高考中出现
的频率极高。有关这一话题的写作通常从以
下几个方面着手：一、人们重视英语学习的
原因及英语学习的重要性；二、对英语学习
方法的探讨；三、描写学校里的外语课外活
动；四、个人的英语学习情况。
单词
idiom
n. 成语
dictionary
n. 字典
phrase
n. 短语
pronounce
v. 发音
usage
n. 用法
spell
v. 拼写
dialect
n. 方言
shy
adj. 害羞的
accent
n. 口音
fluent
adj. 流利的
grammar
n. 语法
official
adj. 官方的
tense
n. 时态
linguistic
adj. 语言学的
voice
n. 声音
vocabulary
n. 词汇
mood
n. 语气
expression
n. 表达方式
短语 spoken English
英语口语
as much as possible
尽可能多
written English
英语书面语
may as well
不妨；还是…为好
believe in
相信，信任，信赖
look for
寻找
make a mistake
犯错误
turn to sb for help
向某人求助
laugh at
嘲笑
keep on doing sth
继续做某事
have trouble with sth
在某方面有麻烦
remember...by heart
用心记住…
advice on/about
关于…的建议
be sure to do sth
一定做某事
优秀例句
☛ Here is my advice on how to improve it.
这里我有一些改进的建议。
☛ First of all, you should believe in yourself.
首先，你应该相信自己。
☛ Don't be afraid of making a mistake.
不要害怕犯错误。
☛ It's necessary to speak English both in and after class as much as possible.
有必要在课堂上和课后尽可能多地讲英语。
优秀例句
☛ I suggest that you listen to English more and imitate more.
我建议你多听英语多模仿。
☛ You may as well look for a classmate whose spoken English is good to
practice speaking English together.
你不妨找一个口语好的同学和你一起练习口语。
☛ You can ask your English teacher for help.
你可以请英语老师帮助你。
☛ If you keep on speaking English, you are sure to improve your spoken
English.
如果你坚持讲英语，你一定能提高你的英语口语。
句式仿写
句子一：
You should listen to English more and imitate more.
你应该多听英语多模仿。
仿写：你应该多记英语单词以提高英语阅读能力。
You ___________________ as possible in order to improve your reading.
句子二：
At present, English is playing a more and more important part in our life, for which many
people are trying hard to learn English.
目前英语在我们生活中起着越来越重要的作用，因此，许多人在努力学习英语。
仿写：英语是世界通用的工作语言，现在越来越多的人在学习它。
At present, ___________________ English, which is commonly used as working language in the
whole world.
more and more people are learning
1. should remember as many English words
句子三：
We must have come across many problems in learning English, such as
vocabulary and grammar.
我们一定在英语学习中遇到过许多困难，如词汇和语法方面的困难。
仿写：你可能已经学习三年英语，但是你在英语学习方面仍然有一些困难。
You ___________________ for three years but you still have difficuties in
learning English.
句子四：
We should make full use of every opportunity to practise English so that we
can eventually have a good command of English.
我们应该充分利用每一个机会练习英语以便最终掌握英语。
仿写：我们应该充分利用每一篇阅读文章来开阔我们的视野。
We ___________________ every passage of reading material to open our
horizons.
may have studied English
should make full use of
句子五：
In order to improve our English, we are going to hold an English party in our school's
new gym.
为了提高我们的英语水平，我们打算在学校的新体育馆举行一次英语晚会。
仿写：为了提高我们的英语口语，我们打算在学校的新体育馆举行一场英语演讲比赛。
In order to ___________________ , we are going to ___________________ in our
school's new gym.
句子六：
Professor Green will give us a lecture about the differences between American
English and British English and how to learn English well.
格林教授会给我们作报告，讲解英美英语的区别和如何学好英语。
仿写：李教授要给我们作报告，告诉我们如何扩大词汇量。
Professor Li will give us a lecture about ___________________.
improve our spoken English; Hold an Englishspeech contest
1. how to enrich our vocabulary
句子七：
The lecture will be interesting and you will find ways of learning English well.
这个报告很有趣，（听了报告）你会找到学好英语的方法。
仿写：这个故事很有趣，从这个故事中你可以学到很多东西。
The story is very interesting and you ___________________ it.
句子八：
Learning English, just like learning other language, is hard work so I spend lots
of time on it every day.
学习英语，正像学习其他语言一样，是一件难事，因此我每天在英语学习上花许
多时间。
仿写：学习一门外语正像学习数学一样需要大量的练习。
Learning ___________________ mathematics, needs plenty of practice.
1. can learn a lot from
1. a foreign language, just like learning
句子九：
We study spoken English so as to make oral communication.
我们学习英语口语是为了与别人进行交流。
仿写：我们学习英语为的是打开另一扇知识的窗口。
We learn English ___________________ knowledge.
句子十：
Don't refer to the dictionary every time you come across a new word as
sometimes its meaning may be brought out clearly in a given context.
不要每次一碰到生词就查词典，因为有时上下文可能已明确地给出这个词的意义。
仿写：当你讲英语时，不要害羞，也不要怕犯错误。
___________________ making mistakes, either, when you speak English.
1. so as to open another window of
1. Don't be shy and don't be afraid of
串句成文
At present, English is playing a more and more
important part in our life, for which many people
are trying hard to learn English. However, we
must have come across many problems in learning
English such as vocabulary and grammar. we
should make full use of every opportunity to
practise English so that we can eventually have a
good command of English.
话题演练
假如你是李华,加拿大籍教师Smith于一年前来到你班上任教英语｡在他
的帮助下,你的英语学习有了很大进步｡现在他工作结束,即将离任回国｡
请你写一封电子邮件对他的工作表示感谢,并预祝他旅途愉快｡
要求:邮件内容需含以下要点:
1.过去学习英语困难(英语单词记不住;害怕开口说英语等)
2.Smith老师建议 (课余多读英语杂志书籍,
多听英文歌曲;多用英语交流等)
3.现在学习情况(对英语很感兴趣;口语交际能力也得到了提高)
注意:1. 根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,
2. 词数100左右｡
Dear Mr. Smith,
范文
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you for your great help with my English
learning during the past year.
I can well remember that once I had much trouble in learning English. I couldn't
remember new words and phrases. What's worse, I was afraid of speaking English.
However, you advised me to read more English magazines and books in my spare
time, and listen to English songs. At school, I try to communicate with my teacher
and classmates as often as possible. With your help, I have made rapid progress in
learning English. At present, I show great interest in it and my oral English has been
improved a lot. In a word, as long as we practice speaking English more, we will
have a good command of it.
I feel sorry that we have to say goodbye now. Thanks again and wish you a pleasant
safe journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇是一篇电子邮件:假如你是李华,加拿大籍教师Smith于一年前来
到你班上任教英语｡在他的帮助下,你的英语学习有了很大进步｡现在他工作结束,即将离
任回国｡请你写一封电子邮件对他的工作表示感谢,并预祝他旅途愉快｡
要求:邮件内容需含以下要点:1.过去学习英语困难(英语单词记不住;害怕开口说英语等)2.
Smith老师建议 (课余多读英语杂志书籍,
多听英文歌曲;多用英语交流等)3.现在学习情况(对英语很感兴趣;口语交际能力也得到了
提高)｡
第2步:根据写作要求确定关键词,如:express my sincere thanks to
you(表达我对你真诚的感谢);had much trouble in learning
English(在学英语上有很多困难);try to communicate with my teacher and classmates
as often as possible(尽可能经常地和我的老师和同学交流)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态语态问题｡
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的｡
满分写作训练-热门话题
志愿工作
志愿工作
新时代的年轻人更加注重追求精神享受
和实现个人社会价值，参加志愿工作就
是他们实现社会价值和追求精神享受最
重要的途径。这也就是为什么“志愿工
作”会成为近年高考英语写作的热门考
点的重要原因。有关“志愿工作”的英
语作文可以写志愿工作的价值和意义或
一次志愿活动经历及其感受。
单词 volunteer
n. 志愿者
outgoing
adj. 爱交际的；外向的
offer/provide
v. 提供
opportunity
n. 机遇
satisfy
v. 使…满意
assistant
n. 助手
service
n. 服务
appreciate
v. 感激；欣赏
kindness
n. 好意；仁慈
application
n. 申请；申请表
obtain/gain
v. 得到
applicant
n. 申请人
worthy
adj. 值得的；有价值的
participate
v. 参加
donate
v. 捐献；捐赠
organization
n. 组织
短语
voluntary work
志愿工作
play a role in
起…作用
work as
担任
be admitted as
被接受为
act as
充当
serve as
充当；起…作用
live up to
不辜负；做到；实践
a helping hand
帮手
in public
公开地；当众
get along with
进展；相处
apply for
申请
have a good command of
精通，对…熟练掌握
get involved in
涉及；卷入
devote one's time to doing
sth
把时间用于做某事
make an effort to
努力去做
be ready to do
乐意做
优秀例句
☛ In the city like Shanghai, an increasing number of graduates find
it hard to make a living on their own.
在上海这样的城市，越来越多的大学毕业生发现自己缺少独立生活能力。
☛ It is increasingly popular that young people volunteer on
weekends in the local community service center to help the people
in need.
地方社区服务中心的年轻的志愿者在周末帮助有困难的人们，这一现象
已经越来越普遍了。
☛ If all the youngsters do it in a regular way, the benefits are
obvious to both the community and these young people.
如果所有青年人都定期这样做，社区和这些青年明显都能从中受益。
优秀例句
☛ When an old person feels sick, the volunteers could offer first aid
before the doctor or the ambulance arrives.
当有老人生病，志愿者在医生或救护车到来之前可以实施急救。
☛ If a disabled person has difficulty doing some daily activities such as
shopping, the assistance from young volunteers is indispensable.
如果残疾人在日常生活如购物中有困难，来自青年志愿者的帮助是必不可少
的。
☛ As far as the young people are concerned,they could develop the
sense of responsibility, independence as well as
interpersonal skills in the process of helping others in the neighborhood.
青年人认为他们在邻里间帮助他人的过程中能够培养责任感、独立性，也能
发展社交能力。
句式仿写
句子一：
Recently, voluntary work has been increasingly popular with the young people in
China.
最近志愿工作越来越受中国青年的欢迎。
仿写：最近几年，在中国人尤其是中国青年中志愿者精神已经传开。
In recent years, ________________ has spread among the Chinese people,
especially among youngsters.
句子二：
There are some old and disable people who need help in our community.
在我们社区有一些老年人和残疾人需要帮助。
仿写：根据2008年的一份调查结果，有170万志愿者参加奥林匹克运动会的服务工
作。
According to a survey in 2008, there were about 1, 700, 000 volunteers
_______________ the Olympic Games.
1. volunteering spirit
1. who offered service for
句子三：
On the other hand, voluntary activities are also of great benefit to the volunteers
themselves.
另一方面，志愿活动对于志愿者本人也是大有好处的。
仿写：志愿行动对于那些需要帮助的人和社会都有巨大作用。
Volunteering actions are of tremendous benefits to both __________________
and the society.
those in need
句子四：
The part-time unpaid jobs that the young adults are doing are playing an
important part in improving our community surroundings.
那些青年人所做的无报酬的兼职工作对改善我们社区环境正起着非常重要的作用。
仿写：众所周知，志愿者在北京奥林匹克运动会中起到了积极的作用。
As is known to all, volunteers _______________ in Beijing Olympic Games.
played an active role
句子五：
Without their help, the elderly people in the nursing home would not live so comfortably.
没有他们的帮助，养老院里的那些老人不会过得这样舒适。
仿写：没有那些志愿者，举行这次空前的奥林匹克运动会将是一项艰巨的任务。
Without the volunteers, it _______________ to hold this unprecedented Olympic
Games.
would be a tough job
句子六：
It was in the voluntary work that I made friends with several foreigners.
就在那次志愿工作中，我交了几个外国朋友。
仿写：我们可以说就是那些志愿者保证了这次运动会的成功举行。
We can say that _______________ who ensured the success of these games.
it was those volunteers
句子七：
Some people think students should concentrate more on their studies rather than
voluntary work.
一些人认为学生应该集中精力学习而不是做志愿工作。
仿写：作为当代学生我们应该积极参加志愿活动。
As modern students, ________________ involved in volunteering activities.
we should get actively
句子八：
By cleaning the city park, we learnt that the dustmen were working hard every day.
通过打扫市政公园，我们了解到清洁工每天的工作非常辛苦。
仿写：通过参加活动，我们可以学会如何做团队工作，如何改进人际关系，如何提高
组织能力。
By participating, we can learn _____________ in a team, how to improve our
interpersonal skills and organizational abilities.
how to work well
句子九：
What we are doing is useful because the world will be more colorful if
everyone helps out a bit.
我们所做的一切是有用的因为如果每个人贡献一点点，世界将变得更加多彩。
仿写：所有这些志愿活动的经历对于我们个人成长是非常必要的。
All these experiences in the voluntary activities _____________ our personal
growth.
are necessary for
句子十：
We should learn a foreign language will so as to serve the foreign visitors
during the Winter Olympics.
我们应该学好一门外语以便在冬奥会上为外国友人服务。
仿写：我们应该抓住机会学习并成长。
We should _______________ to learn and to grow.
take this chance
串句成文
In recent years, wolunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people,
especially among youngsters. According to a survey in 2008, there were about
1,700,000 volunteers who offered service for the Olympic Games. Actually, an
increasing number of people become volunteers every year in China.
Volunteering actions are of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the
society. The Olympic Games are a good example. As is known to all, volunteers
played an active role in Beijing Olympic Games. Without them, it would be a tough
task to hold this unprecedented Olympic Games.
Therefore, we can say that it was those volunteers who ensured the success of
these games.
As modern students, we should get actively involved in volunteering activities. By
participating, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our
interpersonal skills and organizational abilities. Undoubtedly, all these are necessary
for our personal growth. So we should take this chance to learn and to grow.
话题演练
Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words
according to the instructions given below in
Chinese.
马拉松（marathon）比赛需要志愿者发放矿泉水
，学校校庆需要招募引导员。请你从中选取一个
感兴趣的志愿者岗位,
写信给负责老师完成报名，并在信中具体谈谈你
的理由。
范文
Dear Sir,
I've heard that our school is recruiting guides for the celebration of school anniversary
and I am writing to make a self﹣recommendation. （申请事由）
First of all, an acute scene of direction and my familiarity with all the locations on
campus put me an advantage. Considering that some of our alummus may take a long
and tiresome journey to attend our celebration, I am sure that my air of delight will
sweep them off tiredness in no time. （高分句型一）Besides, informing them of the
changes in recent years and sharing anecdotes about the school can remind them of
their precious memories here so that they will no longer be shrouded in a sense of
unfamiliarity. （高分句型二） Furthermore, it is my outstanding communication skills
and ability to articulate that distinguish me. I wouldn't forget to leave them private
space for nostalgia after fulfilling my obligations. （个人优势）
I would be greatly obliged if you would allow me this golden opportunity to enhance
my social skills and to contribute to the celebration as a volunteer. （恳切希望）
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
本篇书面表达属于开放式作文，
根据提示信息学校校庆需要招募引导员，写信给负
责老师完成报名，并在信中具体谈谈你的理由，
写作时注意以下几点：1.仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试
题提供的所有信息，要点包括：具体谈谈你的理由。
2.要在合理的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.
要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3.
根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。4.
注意使用高级词汇和句式, 以增加文章的亮点。
亮点
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑, 层次分明, 而且使用了多种表达：
Considering that some of our alummus may take a long and tiresome
journey to attend our celebration, I am sure that my air of delight will
sweep them off tiredness in no time.
（高分句型一）此处Considering理解为连词, 其后跟句子,
意为“考虑到”，句意为“考虑到我们的一些校友是长途坐车来参加我们的庆
典,一定十分劳累。我相信我高兴且活力的样子，将一扫他们的疲劳。”Beside
s, informing them of the changes in recent years and sharing anecdotes
about the school can remind them of their precious memories here so that
they will no longer be shrouded in a sense of unfamiliarity.
（高分句型二）动名词informing在句中做主语， so
that引导结果状语从句。此外，告诉他们最近几年有关学校的变化和分享一些
趣事，可以让他们想起在这里的珍贵回忆，在这里,
他们不会被笼罩在一种不熟悉的感觉中。
Thanks
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