漫画作文写作指导
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Lead-in
1.Have you ever written an essay of
argumentation?
2.How many parts do we usually divide
it into?
3.What is the basic steps of cartoon
writing? Do you have any difficulty
in writing about cartoons?
漫画作文写作步骤:
---1.仔细观察图片 2. 认真阅读提示句子
--- 联系生活,辨明褒贬,反映现象
解意 dig implied meaning
谋篇 organize a composition
读图 interpret the picture
漫画的 画面 细节
漫画的 夸张 寓意
(与现实矛盾之处)
Interpret the picture & dig implied meaning
Judge the themes of the following
pictures as quickly as possible!
People need face-to-face communication.
If only I
could keep
a real bird!
We should protect our environment and
live in harmony with our animal friends.
Mind your behavior in public places.
漫画作文写作步骤:
解意 dig implied meaning
谋篇 organize a composition
读图 interpret the picture
What is the basic structure of
cartoon writing?
简要描述图片内容,
结合生活实际,
就图片的主题谈谈自己的想法。
Structure
As is seen in the picture, a girl is riding a bicycle,
with the help of her families. All of her families are so
nervous about her while the girl wants to ride on her own .
The picture is the exact reflection of today’s Chinese
families . As many Chinese families have only one child,
parents and grandparents can’t help caring about
everything in their child’s life. Meanwhile, children are
used to depending on their families.
In my opinion, what parents do will do harm to their
children. They needn’t be so nervous in that they can’t
help their children all the time. And if they do everything
for their children, the young won’t achieve anything in
their own life. They might miss success for laziness and
lack of courage. So it is important for children to do
everything by themselves. To sum up, parents shouldn’t
care too much about their children and children shouldn’t
depend on their parents for everything.
Describe the picture briefly
Interpret its implied meaning
Analyze the reasons or results
Give your own
comments/suggestions/solutions
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Do you know some useful
expressions of cartoon writing?
Part 1 Describe the picture briefly
*The picture (above) is about/shows…
* In the picture, there are/is …/…(are) /is
doing…
* In the picture, we can see…
* As is vividly shown/indicated/seen in the
picture, …
* As can be seen in the picture, …
(with the details and for the theme)
Part 2 Interpret its implied meaning
(analyze the reasons or results)
* It seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind
of story is performed everywhere.
* The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection
of…
* The picture indicates a common phenomenon
that…
* Apparently, the picture reflects a major social
problem that…
*What the picture reflects sets me thinking a lot.
Part 3 Give your own comments or opinions
Only in this way can we….
* As far as I’m concerned, what we have to do is …
* We can learn from the picture that…
* Consequently, it is high time that measures
should be taken to avoid this phenomenon from
happening again.
* In my opinion, something must be done to solve
the problem, such as…
Describe the following picture and explain how
you understand it .
Practice
Describe the following picture and explain how
you understand it .
Practice
As can be seen in the
picture,
__________________________
__________________________
__________________________.
The picture vividly indicates
that______________________
__________________________.
What’s the
theme of this
cartoon?
What parents do has a great
influence on their children.
Discussion
1. What problems do this video reflect?
2. What influence do the parents have
on their children? Why?
3. What should parents do to help their
children become a better person?
• 请根据所给漫画,按内容要
求以 “Parents’ influence on
children”为题写一篇词数不
少于120的短文,给某英文报
社投稿。
• 内容要求:
1.简要描述漫画内容
2.分析漫画所揭示的问题
3.说明这幅漫画对你的启示
Consolidation
Parents’ influence on children
As can be seen in the picture,______________
_________________________________________
_________________________________________
What the picture reflects sets me thinking a
lot. It indicates
that____________________________
_________________________________________
_________________________________________
_________________________________________
We can learn from the picture that_________
_________________________________________
_________________________________________