英语写作训练
• 英语看图类作文：
• 1.记叙文
• 2.议论文
• 3.说明文（含图表）
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
2种方法：（1）同义替换
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
(1）这人很变态：
BT?
be different from normal people
strange/odd/peculiar
（2）难民
• difficult people？
• the people who suffered from a disaster
X √
√
X
√
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
四喜丸子
four happy meatballs
meatballs
X
X
√
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（2）上义词或下义词代替
上义词是对事物的概括性、抽象性说明
下义词是事物的具体表现形式。
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）铁锹、锄头、镐：
the tools which are used to plant trees
拐杖：
• The tool which is used to help the
disabled to stand/walk
• 二氧化碳： carbon dioxide
• 一氧化碳： carbon oxide
• poisonous gases
spade, hoe, pick
stick
没有不会写的，只有不会想的！
残疾人：
• the people who can not move/speak/think
normally
大众媒体
大众媒体的具体表现形式是TV，radio,
newspaper, internet
the disabled
mass media
• 北京很迷人 。
• Beijing is so beautiful that many people come
here.
• Beijing is so beautiful that many people come
here every year.
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people
come here every year.
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people
come here every year from all around the world.
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people,
no matter young or old, men or women, come
here every year from all around the world.
• 高考英语看图作文五步曲
• 一“抓”为抓主题。
• 二“列”为列要点。
• 三“变”为变要点为句子。
• 四“连”为连句成篇。
• 五“检”为文章检查。
假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公
园野餐。你们的英国朋友 Peter 也应邀参加。请根据下面
的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。
注意：词数 80-100 。开头语已为你写好。(’95)
Dear Peter,
We’re so glad that you are coming to join us on Sunday.
Here is how you can find us.
Li Hua
一“抓”为抓主题。
• Type:
• Person:
• Tense:
• What:
• When:
• Where:
说明文 （书信）
第一人称
一般现在时，一般将来时
通过看示意图来野餐
星期天
人民公园
the key points to be included
1. 在人民公园野餐
2. 从公园正门进
3. 进门后朝前走
4. 到小河过桥
5. 向右拐后朝前走
6. 绕/爬过小山
7. 我们在（湖畔）小树林里
1. have a picnic, in People’s Park
2. enter park, by main gate
3. walk straight
4. cross stream
5. turn right
6. to the other side of hill
7. in small woods, by lake
二“列”为列要点。
Expand the key points
have a picnic, in People’s Park
We will have our picnic in the People’s Park.
We are going to the People’s park for a picnic.
We are going to the People’s park, where we
will have a picnic.
•三“变”为变要点为句子。
enter park, by main gate
• Enter the park by the main gate.
•Go through the main gate of the park.
walk straight
• Walk straight on till you come to a stream.
•Walk along the road until you get to
a bridge over the stream.
cross stream
• Cross the stream.
Go over the bridge.
turn right
• Turn right.
to the other side of hill
• Walk round to the other side of the hill.
Climb the hill.
in small woods, by the lake
• We’ll have our picnic in the small woods
by the lake.
确定提示要点的益处：
4）便于使用恰当的连接词。
1）不丢重要信息点。
2）避免中文式英文。
3）连词成句时能够注意到时态、语态等
问题。
连句成篇
Dear Peter,
We’re so glad you’re coming to join
us on Sunday.Here is how you can find us.
We’ll have our picnic in the People’s Park.
You know where that is , don’t you? After
you enter the park by the main gate, walk
straight on till you come to a stream. Cross
the stream and turn right. After walking for
a while, you will come to a hill.
Walk round to the other side of the hill.
There you will see a lake. We’ll have
our picnic in the small woods by the
lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble
finding us. Do come!
Possible versionDear Peter,
We’re so glad you’re coming to join
us on Sunday.Here is how you can find
us. We’ll have our picnic in the People’s
Park. You know where that is , don’t you?
After you enter the park by the main gate,
walk straight on till you come to a stream.
Cross the stream and turn right. After
walking for a while, you will come to a hill.
Possible version
Walk round to the other side of the
hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll
have our picnic in the small woods by
the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no
trouble finding us. Do come!
Li Hua
• 仔细观察下面一幅图画，根据图画的内容，写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。
情景：假定你叫李红，家住香港。你和几个朋友约定星期六在中心公园
(Central Park)聚会。现请你写封信邀请Brown女士参加，并根据下图告诉她
来中心公园的路线。
•
• 参考词汇：have a gathering party(聚会)
这是一篇图画说明文，根据图画，指明路线，如何到达中心公园。注意观察
图画，确定出发点、行走路线、目的地，灵活使用表达路线的表达语。
• Dear Mrs Brown,
We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday. Here is
how you can find us.
• Type:
• Person:
• Tense:
• What:
• When:
• Where:
• Dear Mrs Brown，
• We are so glad that you're coming to join us
on Saturday. Here is how you can find us. We'll
have our gathering party in the Central Park.
Maybe you've been there，haven't you？ Go
straight on when you get out of the school gate
and come to the street. Then turn right at the
second crossing and you'll find a hospital. Just
opposite it is a No. 7 bus stop. Take a bus and
get off at the fourth stop. Central Park is just in
front of it. We'll have our gathering party in a
boat on the lake. What a funny thing！ Do come
on time. We'll wait for you at the park gate
• Yours，
• Li Hua
2009年高考全国卷II英语作文
• 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信
询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：
• 1. 简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺；
• 2. 位置：天安门广场南面；
• 3. 交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线；
• 4. 特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。
• 参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street
• 当当车 trolley car 地铁 subway
• 注意：
• 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
• 3. 开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。
• Dear sarah.
• Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt
Qianmen street. Here is something about it.
• Dear Sarah,
Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt
Qianmen Street. Here is something about it。
Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years
old. Along this 800-metre street, there are more than
300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just
to the south of Tian’anmen Square, it’s very
convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses
No.17, 69 or 59.subway Line 2 has a stop there too.
Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are
trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also
to theaters and teahouses where you can experience
a truly Chinese way of life, I’m sure you’ll like it。
• (06·湖北)
• 受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了
一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇100左
右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。
• 调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章
中，学生最喜欢哪一种。
• 调查范围：湖北省的10所中学
• 调查对象：高中生
• 调查人数：1000
• 调查方式：访谈
• 调查结果：（见下图）
• 【参考范文】
• Reading Interests of Senior Middle School Students
• Recently a survey has been done to find out the
reading interests of senior middle school students. In
this survey, one thousand senior middle school students
from ten in Hubei Province were interviewed. They were
asked which they liked reading most among the four
categories of English articles: news, stories, popular
science articles and articles about learning methods.
• The survey shows that more than half of the
students like to read news most. Twenty-six percent of
the students say that English stories are their favorite.
Only seven percent of the students are most interested
in reading articles about learning methods. However, the
number of students who enjoy reading popular science
articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles
about learning methods.
• 最近，你校组织高三学生进行了一场讨论。
主题是：要不要集中进行晚自习。根据下
图提供的信息，写一篇140字左右的英语短
文，客观地介绍一下讨论的情况，注意要
涵盖所有要点。
• 【参考范文】
• Recently there was a heated discussion among Senior 3
students in our school. The students were questioned whether
they were willing to have the evening self-study at school or not.
Here is the result according to the survey.
• 60 percent of the students think it’s a good idea to have the
evening self-study at school. They think they can do better in
their study with the help of the teachers. Also, they can
concentrate on their lessons better in the classroom and with
company of their fellow classmates.
• There are 25 percent of the students who think they prefer to
study at home. They suppose that they may get disturbed by
others and there are possible dangers on their way home alone.
• At the same time, still 15 percent of the students don’t have a
clear answer to the question. They say they will go to school to
have evening self-study if they are asked to, but they promise
they can also do well at home.
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