应用文写作之求助信【要点梳理】
一、求助信高考选取概率
二、求助信题型分析
三、求助信关联词汇和短语
四、求助信锦句
五、求助信示例分析（以2016全国卷I为例）
六、求助信写作建议
七、求助信模板推荐
八、求助信巩固练习一、求助信高考选取概率
应用文体裁被高考选中的概率排列顺序如下：书信（各种信件及电子邮件）、
通知、演讲稿、报道等。以下是最近几年高考卷选取的求助信例子：
2016全国卷I：假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和
个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms
Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：词数1
00左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2013新课标全国卷II：假定你是李华，自制一些中国结（Chinese
knot）。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：1.
外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）；2. 象征意义； 3. 价格。注意：1.
词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好。 一、求助信高考选取概率
2011全国卷I：假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困
难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning
Center）的帮助。根据学校规定，你须书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1.
本人简介；2. 求助内容；3. 约定时间；4. 你的联系方式（Email:
lihua@1236.com; Phone: 12345678）。注意：1. 词数100左右；2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 结束语已为你写好。
2007全国卷I：假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一位英语笔友。请写
一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友，具体
条件包括：1. 年龄； 2. 性别；3. 爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。 注意：1.
词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 二、求助信题型分析
[Brainstorming]
1. How many paragraphs?
2. What will you write in each paragraph?
3. What tense and person will you use?
4. Useful words, phrases and sentence patterns? 二、求助信题型分析
[题型分析]
题型解读 人称 时态
要
点
结
构
图
开头点题（
说明写信目
的）
交代求助的
背景及写信
的目的求助信是写信人向收信
人寻求帮助或建议的信
件，此类信件往往需要
写信人介绍自己并描述
具体的请求内容，在提
供足够信息的同时尽量
做到简明扼要，语气要
委婉真诚，最后要表达
诚挚的谢意。
第一人称（I
／We
）第二人称
（You）
一般现在时
为主（叙述
得到帮助后
自己有可能
产生的变化
时要用一般
将来时）
主体段落（
要点一个也
不能少，可
适当拓展）
详细描述求
助的内容（
有时题目会
要求告知联
系方式）
尾段
（表达感谢
）
表达希望得
到对方的帮
助并致谢三、求助信关联词汇和短语
1. adj. 焦虑的 ______________ 2. n. 指导 ______________
3. n. & v. 困扰；烦扰 ______________ 4. n. & v. 麻烦 ______________
5. adj. 困惑的 ______________ 6. adj. 令人困惑的 ______________
7. n. 困难 ______________ 8. adj. 不安的 _____________
9. adj. 感激的 ______________ 10. v. 感激；欣赏 ______________
anxious instruction / guidance
bother trouble
confused confusing
difficulty upset
grateful / thankful /
appreciative
appreciate三、求助信关联词汇和短语
11. (做)某事有困难 ______________
12. 设法(成功)做某事 ______________
13. 请某人帮忙 ______________
14. 帮某人一个忙 ______________
15. 遇到几个问题 ______________
have difficulty/trouble/problems (in) doing sth
manage to do sth / succeed in doing sth
ask sb a favour / ask sb for help
do sb a favour / lend sb a hand
encounter some problems / meet with some problems三、求助信关联词汇和短语
16. 面临这些问题 ______________
17. 因某事感激某人 ______________
18. 提供一些有建设性的指导 ____________
19. 灰心，气馁 ______________
20. 向某人求助 ______________
(be) faced with these problems
be grateful to sb. for sth
offer some constructive guidance
lose heart
turn to sb (for help)四、求助信锦句
1. 我写信是想问您能否帮助我。
____________________________________________________________________________
2. 很抱歉打扰您，但我有些困难需要得到您的帮助。
____________________________________________________________________________
3. 我想知道我是否能问您一些与……相关的话题。
____________________________________________________________________________
4. 我发现我的问题主要在两个方面。一方面……另一方面……
____________________________________________________________________________
5. 我在...方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。
____________________________________________________________________________
I’m writing (to you) to ask whether you could do me a favour.
I’m sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and I need your help.
I am wondering if I could ask you some questions regarding ...
I find my problem lies chiefly in two aspects. For one thing, .... For another ...
I have some difficulty in ..., which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to
turn to you for help.四、求助信锦句
6. 由于我是一个新手，我在处理这样的情况方面几乎没有什么经验。
____________________________________________________________________________
7. 面对那么多的问题，我感到担心，希望你能帮助我。
____________________________________________________________________________
8. 我渴望得到你及时的帮助。
____________________________________________________________________________
9. 我肯定/相信在你的帮助下我能在...方面取得进步。
____________________________________________________________________________
10. 对于你提出的建议我将不胜感激。
____________________________________________________________________________
Hardly do I have any experience in coping with the situation due to the fact
that I am a green hand.
Faced with those problems, I feel very anxious and I hope that you will be kind
enough to help me.
I’m eager to get your timely help. / I’m eager for your timely help.
I’m sure/convinced that with your help I can make great progress in ...
I would be grateful/thankful if you could give me some advice/help.五、求助信示例分析（以2016全国卷I为例）
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。
给外教Ms
Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：词数100左右
；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
（一）审题立意
1. 文体：求助信 2. 主题：请求帮助
3. 要点：说明兼职意向+请求帮忙修改
4. 要求：词数100左右，增加细节以使文章充实、连贯
5. 人称：第一、第二人称为主 6. 时态：一般现在时为主五、求助信示例分析（以2016全国卷I为例）
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。
给外教Ms
Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：词数100左右
；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
（二）技巧点拨
1.
本试题并非提纲作文，首先需要理清写作思路，总结要点内容，从而整理作文框架结
巧；
2. 适时地采用丰富的时态、语态以及复杂句型表达；
3. 注意语句间的衔接适当使用过渡性词语或独立结构。五、求助信示例分析（以2016全国卷I为例）
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。
给外教Ms
Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：词数100左右
；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
（三）要点整合
1. 铺垫陈述：为了获得假兼职的机会，需要写申请书和个人简历；
2. 碰到问题：第一次写申请书和个人简历，对文字和格式不太了解；
3. 请求帮忙：提出让对方帮忙检查修改申请书和个人简历，自己将不胜感激。五、求助信示例分析（以2016全国卷I为例）
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。
给外教Ms
Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：词数100左右
；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
（四）框架构建
第一段：自我介绍，开门见山。提出写信目的：寻求对方的帮助。
第二段：简要间述想要得到兼取的机会，井写好了申请书和个人简历，顺着话题，提
出构建拿不准申请书和个人简历的文字和格式是否正确，希望对方能够帮忙检查修改。
第三段：提前感谢对方的帮助。五、求助信示例分析（以2016全国卷I为例）
（五）满分范文
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I’m Li Hua, a student from your English writing class. I’m writing to ask for your
help.
In order to get some practical experience, I’m planning to apply for a part-time
job at a famous foreign company during the summer vacation, which I think will
completed my application letter and resume. However, as this is the first time prepare
these. I’m not quite sure of the language and format I’ve used. I know you have a
very busy schedule, but I’d be very grateful if you could spare some time to go
through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and
resume in the letter.
Thanks in advance for your help. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua六、求助信写作建议
在熟知体裁规范的前提下，
1.
抓住所给要点，把所有要点用规范地道的语言表达出来，切忌汉语式英语。要点顺序
可按照行文需要作出调整，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，所提示的英语词汇一定要
出现在作文中。
2.
行文要语篇连贯。所有要点内容要用适当的词、短语或句子恰到好处地过渡、衔接起
来以使文章流畅、连贯、优美。
3.
语言要简明扼要。不使用生僻的单词，也不使用结构过于复杂的长句。字数应该控制
在规定字数的+15%。六、求助信写作建议
（一）首段：问候+自我介绍+写信背景+写信目的
1. I’m writing to ask for some help.
2. I’m writing to ask whether you can give me help.
3. I’m writing to ask you a favor. / I am writing to ask you to do me a favor.
4. Now I wonder whether I could ask you a favor.
5. I am wondering whether you could ...
6. I’m afraid that I have to seek help from you.
7. What bothers me is that I don’t know what to do.
8. I’m eager to get your timely help. / I’m eager for your timely help.
9. Facing so many difficulties / Faced with so many difficulties, I have to turn to you
for help. 六、求助信写作建议
（二）中间：讲述自己遇到的困难，再提出请求
1. But I have met some difficulties with ... / in doing ...
2. But unfortunately, I’m facing difficulty in ...
3. Faced with / Facing so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help.
4. I need your help because ...
5. I don’t feel quite accustomed to the life here. 我觉得我没有完全习惯这儿的生活。
6. I long to learn English well, but I don’t know how, which makes me upset.
我渴望学好英语，但我不知道怎么学，这使我很烦恼。
7. I can’t concentrate on my lessons these days, and I failed in the last exam, which
worries me a lot. 这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这使我很着急。六、求助信写作建议
（二）中间：讲述自己遇到的困难，再提出请求
8. With too much homework to do, I have no time to do some sports.
有如此多的作业要做我都没有时间做运动。
9. I don’t know if there is anything to pay attention to, as this is the first time that I
have written an application and personal resume.
我不知道是否有一些要注意的地方，因为这是第一次写申请和个人简历。
10. But unfortunately, I encounter some difficulty in preparing the English competition.
不幸的是，我在准备英语竞赛的时候遇到了一些困难。
11. Not only do I have some difficulty in reading but also I am poor at writing.
不仅在阅读而且在写作方面也有问题。
12. So difficult is the situation that I don’t know how to face it.
情况是如此的复杂以至于我都不知道怎么去面对。六、求助信写作建议
（三）结尾：诚恳地提出希望，表达需要得到帮助的迫切心情并表示感谢
1. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
2. I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties.
3. I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor.
4. Could you please help me to solve these problems?
5. I’m sure I can make great progress with your help.
6. Looking forward to/Hoping for your early reply.
7. Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.
8. I will be very grateful if you could help me ... / I would appreciate it if you could do
me a favor.
9. I would be grateful/thankful if you could give me some advice/help.
10. I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
11. Hopefully, your kind and timely help would be offered to me. I am looking forward
to your earliest reply.七、求助信模板推荐
【模板一】
Dear __________,
My name is _______; I am writing to ask whether you could do me a favour.
(说明自己身份，提出写信目的).
I have had much difficulty / trouble in __________(交代自己面临的困难). The
reason for __________ is that ____________ (给出原因). Besides, I’m very upset
that __________ (进一步说明自己的困境). In the meantime / At the same time, I beg
you to __________ so that (再次请求对方的帮助). I am sorry for any inconvenience I
have caused.
I would appreciate if you could give me some advice. Looking forward to a
favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 七、求助信模板推荐
【模板二】
Dear __________,
I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. I have some difficulty in
(某方面的困难), which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for
help .
To begin with, I have great difficulty in (困难1). Besides, I find it too challenging
for me to (困难2) What’s more, (困难3) is also a big headache for me. Finally, it has
been troubling me for a long time that I have no idea how to (困难4).
Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like
to ... so that ... ?(请求一）In the meanwhile, I beg you to ... (请求二）Also, I would
like you to ... (请求三）
I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor. Looking forward for your early
reply.
Yours,
Li Hua八、求助信巩固练习
假定你是李华，最近，你在英语学习上遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Alex写一封
邮件，向他求助。内容包括：1. 你的困难；2. 寻求帮助。
（一）细节构思：
1. I’m not good at English.
2. I’m not good at remembering English words.
3. I don’t know how to use English words properly.
4. I’m afraid to talk to foreigners in English.
5. My listening skill is very poor.
6. I feel difficult to understand English grammar.
7. My English exam results are not good.
8. I hope you can help me.
9. Thank you very much for your help.八、求助信巩固练习
假定你是李华，最近，你在英语学习上遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Alex写一封
邮件，向他求助。内容包括：1. 你的困难；2. 寻求帮助。
（二）句式提升：
1. I find it difficult/challenging/demanding to learn English well. So I’m writing to ask
you for help.
2. I find it really a challenge/headache for me to learn English well. So I’d like to turn
to for help and guidance.
3. These days I have been struggling with my English learning. Therefore, I badly
need your help.
4. Faced with the challenge of learning English well, I’m writing for your generous
help and assistance.
5. I have difficulty in remembering English words, which accounts for my limited
vocabulary. 八、求助信巩固练习
假定你是李华，最近，你在英语学习上遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Alex写一封
邮件，向他求助。内容包括：1. 你的困难；2. 寻求帮助。
（二）句式提升：
6. I often fail to manage the proper use of English words, putting me in an
embarrassing situation.
7. Though having learned English for years, I find communicating with native
speakers in English remains a big headache to me.
8. I really have no idea how to improve my listening skills.
9. What troubles me most is that I often perform poorly in English exams,
however hard I work.
10. I would be very appreciative/grateful/thankful if you could reply to me
at your earliest convenience. Thank you in advance.八、求助信巩固练习
假定你是李华，最近，你在英语学习上遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Alex写一封
邮件，向他求助。内容包括：1. 你的困难；2. 寻求帮助。
（二）句式提升：
11. I would appreciate it if you could give me a hand and I’m looking forward to
your earliest reply.
12. I would highly appreciate your timely/prompt reply. / Your timely/prompt reply
would be highly appreciated.八、求助信巩固练习
（三）组句成篇：
例文1：
Dear Alex,
How’s everything going? These days I have been struggling with my English
learning. Therefore, I badly need your help.
I have difficulty in remembering English words, which accounts for my limited
vocabulary. Though having learned English for years, I find that communicating with
native speakers in English remains a big headache to me. And what troubles me
most is that I often perform poorly in English exams, however hard I work.
I would be grateful if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience. Thank
you in advance.
Yours,
Li Hua八、求助信巩固练习
（三）组句成篇：
例文2：
Dear Alex,
With the college entrance examination approaching, my anxiety about the
English learning is increasing, so I am writing to seek some guidance on how to
improve it.
English writing is really a big challenge for me. First of all, my vocabulary is not
large, which makes it impossible for me to choose right and authentic words and
phrases. Besides, English grammar becomes a bottle-neck of my English writing, the
sentences I construct being much more like a Chinese sentence than an English one.
Should you be kind enough to give me any help, I would be grateful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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