上海杨浦区2016-2020年五年高考二模英语试题汇编 写作专题 含答案

1 上海杨浦区 2016-2020 年五年高考二模英语试题汇编-写作专题 上海市杨浦区 2020 届高三二模英语试题 VI. Guided Writing 56.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学学生张华，你的朋友李明来信。在信中他提到他母亲不论在旅游时还是在生活中，总是 未经许可就把他的照片发到微信朋友圈（WeChat Moments),这让他十分烦恼。请你写一封回信，给李明提 一些具体的建议并说明理由。 【答案】Dear Li Ming， Thank you for your email and I think you should not worry about this matter too much. You mentioned that your mother would post your photos on WeChat Moments without your permission. However, you did not tell me what exactly annoys you. In my opinion, whatever the reason is, you should try to communicate with your mother. Tell her about your feelings and you should be able to work this out together. For example, if you feel insecure about having your pictures shared, you can kindly ask her to post those photos after speaking to you. As teenagers, it is normal to feel upset when your parents are doing something you do not like. The key to the issue is always communication. That's all. Please let me know if you have further questions. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Zhang Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回信，就李明的烦恼，给李明提一些具体的建议并说明理由。 【详解】第一步：审题 2 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求：1. 说明写信目的：提建议 2. 具体内容： 1）建议与妈妈交流 2）要求妈妈在征求你的意见后在传照片 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） worry about；without your permission；in my opinion；communicate with；be able to； for example；ask sb. to do 第三步：连词成句 1. Thank you for your email and I think you should not worry about this matter too much. 2. You mentioned that your mother would post your photos on WeChat Moments without your permission. 3. You did not tell me what exactly annoys you. 4. Whatever the reason is, you should try to communicate with your mother. 5. Tell her about your feelings and you should be able to work this out together. 6. If you feel insecure about having your pictures shared, you can kindly ask her to post those photos after speaking to you. 7. As teenagers, it is normal to feel upset when your parents are doing something you do not like. 8. The key to the issue is always communication. 9. Please let me know if you have further questions. 10. Looking forward to your reply. 3 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。 作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：However, you did not tell me what exactly annoys you.这句话运用 了 what 引导的名词性从句，In my opinion, whatever the reason is, you should try to communicate with your mother.这句话运用了 whatever 引导的让步状语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如 worry about；without your permission；in my opinion；communicate with；be able to；for example；ask sb. to do 等。全文中没有中国 式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文 章增色添彩。 上海市杨浦区 2019 届高三二模英语试题 VI. Guided Writing 76.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 下图是关于高中生运动的原因。请描述图表所呈现的内容，介绍你开始运动的动机、所从事的运动项 目及其带来的影响。 4 【答案】With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need. Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is sit in front of their computers and click the mouse. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly. However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain. 【解析】 【分析】 本文是一篇谈论“网上购物利与弊” 的话题。 【详解】第 1 步：根据提示可知：随着互联网的发展和普及，网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了，甚至 已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了。相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了，比如淘宝 5 网等，但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢? 请写一篇短文，谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。 第 2 步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers（随着互联网的发展和普及）；waste a lot of their energy and precious time（浪费大量的精力和时 间）；go to the shops in person（亲自去商店）；can't see the goods or try them on personally（不能亲眼看到物 品和试穿）；等。 第 3 步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第 4 步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美 观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】本文内容完整，“网上购物的利与弊”分析的透彻，且语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文 中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life.动名词作主语；Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience.句中使用非限制性定语从句；The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally.句中 that 引导表语从句。 上海市杨浦区 2018 届高三二模英语试题 VI. Guided Writing 56.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 请根据下图内容，结合生活实例，谈谈你的看法。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 6 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Life is not always full of smiles and flowers. Every person has his own difficulties no matter who he is. Some people feel so upset that they fall into pessimism; others are frightened by difficulties and give up halfway. The positive method is to strengthen your mind to clear away your difficulties that appear in your way of life rather than run away from them. I remembered I had some math homework problems last summer vacation. I was so worried, because the vacation was coming to its end but I had no way out. I decided to ask my math teacher for help. So, I made up my mind and encouraged myself to call my math teacher. And she was so patient that I understood more. See, it is the way and a strong will that make a difference between you won’t do it and you did it. To conclude, you should overcome difficulties with great determination, take action and then you will find you are strong to do everything. 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于图画类作文 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：议论文，图画类作文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时 结构：分为三段。第一段描述图画反映的内容，提出你的观点；第二段结合生活实例支持你的看法；第三 段，再次总结你的观点。 要求：根据图画内容，结合生活实例，谈谈你的看法 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） be full of；difficulties；upset；so that；pessimism；give up；halfway；clear away；appear；rather than；summer 7 vacation；come to its end；decide to；ask sb. for help；make up one’s mind；make a difference 等 第三步：连词成句 1. Life is not always full of smiles and flowers. 2. Some people feel so upset that they fall into pessimism; others are frightened by difficulties and give up halfway. 3. The positive method is to strengthen your mind to clear away your difficulties that appear in your way of life rather than run away from them. 4. Because the vacation was coming to its end 5. I decided to ask my math teacher for help. 6. I made up my mind and encouraged myself to call my math teacher.等 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 表并列关系：and 表转折关系：but 表因果关系：so 等 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。 作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Every person has his own difficulties no matter who he is.使用了 no matter who 引导让步状语从句；Some people feel so upset that they fall into pessimism; others are frightened by difficulties and give up halfway.使用了 some…others…句式例举对比事物；The positive method is to strengthen your mind to clear away your difficulties that appear in your way of life rather than run away from them.使用了 that 引导的定语从句；And she was so patient that I understood more. 使用了 so…that…句式；See, it is the way and a strong will that make a difference between you won’t do it and you did it. 使用了强调句等。 全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句 8 转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 上海市杨浦区 2017 届高三二模英语试题 Guided Writing Directions : Writing an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 请根据下面的图片，结合你个人的经历 ，谈谈你的想法。 上海市杨浦区 2016 届高三二模英语试题 II. Guided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 智能手机通常被认为是对学习的干扰，但现在很多学生把它作为学习的工具。请结合你自身或身 边同学利用手机进行学习或阅读的经历，谈谈你对这种新的学习方式的看法。 9