上海浦东新区2016-2020年五年高考二模英语试题汇编 作文专题 含答案

1 上海浦东新区 2016-2020 年五年高考二模英语试题汇编-作文专题 2020 届上海市浦东新区高考二模英语试题 VI. Guided Writing 76. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 经过一段时间的网上学习之后，明启中学在高三学生中进行了一个题为”你最喜欢的在线上课模式”的调查， 调查结果如图所示。 A. 直播课并且有师生互动 B. 录播课并且之后有师生互动时间 C. 直播课但无师生互动 D. 录播课且之后也无师生互动时间 你可能会用到的词汇: 直播课:live streaming lesson 录播课: prerecorded lesson 请你根据该图标写篇作文，你的文中需包含以下信息: 1. 简要描述该图标； 2. 谈谈你的看法 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Chinese students have been taking online courses for more than two months. Mingqi middle school 2 has conducted a survey among its senior 3 students whose topic is “your favorite online class mode”. The results are as follows. From this chart, we can see that 50% of the students surveyed like live streaming lesson with teacher-student interaction while 30% students like prerecorded lesson with teacher-student interaction after it. Students who like online class without any teacher-student interaction only account for 5% respectively. Above all, students generally like online courses with teacher-student interaction. As a senior 3 student, I think interaction is necessary, for it can make the online teaching atmosphere more active and easily attract students' attention. Students can have their problems explained by the teacher in time. However, too much screen time causes eyestrain, and even a decline in vision. Therefore, students should be able to have a break regularly to relieve eye fatigue. 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达要求写一篇短文。经过一段时间的网上学习之后，明启中学在高三学生中进行了一个题为 “你最喜欢的在线上课模式”的调查， 请根据调查结果，写一篇短文来描述调查结果并谈谈你的看法。 【详解】动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。 根据内容提示和分析图表可知写作的关键点在于：1. 简要描述该图标，四种网课模式受学生喜欢的程度。 2. 就此问题谈谈你的看法。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟 悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步 确定文章可能使用到的词汇、短语及句子有：take online courses，conduct a survey among its senior 3 students， online class mode. The results are as follows. 50% of the students surveyed like live streaming lesson with teacher-student interaction，30% of the students like prerecorded lesson with teacher-student interaction after it， account for，I think interaction is necessary. make the online teaching atmosphere more active，attract students’ attention，have problems explained，in time，Too much screen time causes eyestrain, and even a decline in vision. have a break regularly。可以使用的衔接词：(1)表示选择关系或对等关系的连接词：either…or…，neither…nor， or，as well as…，both…and…。(2)表示因果关系的连接词：therefore，so，as a result，as a result of …，because of，due to …，owing to，thanks to 等。(3)表示时间顺序的连接词：then，later，meanwhile，at the beginning， in the end，before long，as soon as，at first ，for the first(second…)time，the minute，the moment 等。(4)表 3 示转折对比关系的连接词：yet，but，while，on the contrary，on the other hand，however 等。(5)表示解释 说明的连接词：that is，that is to say，in other words，such as，for instance，and so on 等。(6)表示递进关系 的连接词：not only…but (also)，what’s more， what’s worse，besides，in addition，worse still，moreover 等。 (7)表示总结的连接词：in a word，on the whole， in short， briefly， in brief，to sum up， in all 等。通过 词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。 作者在范文中使用了主从复合句： Mingqi middle school has conducted a survey among its senior 3 students whose topic is your favorite online class mode. 这句话运用了 whose 引导的定语从句。使用了一些固定词组， 如： as follows，account for，attract students’ attention。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭 英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 2019 届上海市浦东新区高考二模英语试题 Ⅵ. Guided Writing 76.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 近期你朋友 Sandy 打算来上海迪士尼乐园游玩，现就住宿场所（园区内酒店还是园区外民宿【B&B】） 的选择写信征询你的意见。假设你是李明，请回信。你的信必须包括： 1. 简述你对住宿场所选择的建议； 2. 说明你的理由（从价格、环境、便利性等方面进行对比）。 【答案】Dear Mr. Smith , I am Lihua ,chairman of the student union , from chenguang high school. I am very pleased to learn that you are coming to visit our school on June 26. I am writing to tell you what we have arranged for you. In the morning , there will be a forum in the school auditorium , where visitors and students from our school communicate with each other ,talking about school life and cultural differences . At noon, you are invited to have lunch in our school cafeteria with students from our school. You can taste dumplings ,noodles and other Chinese 4 foods .In the afternoon, the students in our school will show you around the Haihe river . How do you like the arrangements ? I hope you will have a nice time in Tian jing Yours sincerely , Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。 【详解】第 1 步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假设你程光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于 6 月 26 日接待来自美国的某中学的访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排其在天津的活动。请根据提示，给美国的 领队 Smith 先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动安排并简要说明理由，最后征求对方的意见。 1.上午与我校学 生座谈(如校园文化，文化差异)2.中午与我校同学共进午餐(饺子，面条等) 3.下午和我校学生游览海河。 第 2 步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：,chairman of the student union（学生会主席）；a forum in the school auditorium（学生礼堂的论坛）；talking about school life and cultural differences（谈论学校生活和文化 差异）；等。 第 3 步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第 4 步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美 观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很 高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I am writing to tell you what we have arranged for you.句中使 用 what 引导的宾语从句；there will be a forum in the school auditorium , where visitors and students from our school communicate with each other ,talking about school life and cultural differences .句中使用 where 引导的定 语从句，且句中现在分词做伴随状语。 2018 届上海市浦东新区高考二模英语试题 VI. Guided Writing—25 分 5 76.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 生活本来不容易，当你觉得容易的时候，其实…… 1. 请简要描述图片。 2. 谈谈由此引发的感想。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________ 【答案】As the picture vividly shows, the person behind silently helps the person in front share his burden so that he can move forward more easily. Life is not easy. As the saying goes that when you feel easy, someone is actually taking on your share. So we should learn to be grateful. This picture reminds me of our parents, who not only give us life and bring us up, but also give us encouragement and support when we run into difficulties and dilemmas. However, we always take what they do for us for granted. Not only don’t we show gratitude to them, but we often make them angry and even contradict them. In a word, the greatest kindness in the world is the kindness of parents, which is worth cherishing with our life, appreciating with our sincere heart, and repaying with practical actions. 【解析】 6 【分析】 本篇书面表达是开放性作文，要求结合一幅图谈谈自己的感悟。 【详解】第 1 步：根据提示可知，本文要求结合一幅图谈谈自己的感悟：生活本来不容易，当你觉得容易 的时候，其实……，要求：1. 请简要描述图片。2. 谈谈由此引发的感想。时态应为一般现在时。 第 2 步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； burden（重担），share（分担），grateful（感激的），dilemma （困境）， contradict（顶撞），cherish（珍惜），support（支持），encouragement（鼓励）及 repay（回报） 等。 第 3 步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第 4 步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的 整洁美观。 【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有 bring up（抚养长大），take…for granted（认为……理所应当），run into (遇到、遭遇)，be take on（承担），remind sb of …（让某人想起……）以及 be worth doing（值得做），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“This picture reminds me of our parents, who not only give us life and bring us up, but also give us encouragement and support when we run into difficulties and dilemmas.”及“In a word, the greatest kindness in the world is the kindness of parents, which is worth cherishing with our life, appreciating with our sincere heart, and repaying with practical actions.”，状语从句“As the picture vividly shows, the person behind silently helps the person in front share his burden so that he can move forward more easily.”，同位语从句“As the saying goes that when you feel easy, someone is actually taking on your share.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。 2017 届上海市浦东新区高考二模英语试题 VI. Guided Writing (25%) 生活中，我们或做过演讲，或通过电视广播、网络媒体、报纸期刊等渠道接触过演讲，请以“An Impressive Speech”为题，写一篇作文，文章须包含以下要点： 1. 简述该演讲的内容； 2. 谈谈该演讲令你印象深刻的缘由。 7 2016 届上海市浦东新区高考二模英语试题 II. Guided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 右图反映了一种常见的现象：拖延症（procrastination）。请写一篇作 文，内容包括： 1．给 procrastination 下定义； 2．用生活中的例子谈谈你对此现象的看法。