07 活用高分亮点词替换法-冲刺2021年高考英语书面表达满分技巧

活用高分亮点词替换法，高考写作 23+！ 在高考英语作文的评分标准里，一直有叫做“应用词汇数量”的一项，意 在考查考生对英语词汇的掌握。 唯有用词尽量多样化，避免重复使用同一单词或短语，并尽量使用“高 级词汇”，才能在这一项评分标准中得到高分。 首先我们先来看看使用高分词的四大原则。 01 原则一：晚词优先 老师偏爱“学得晚”的单词，因为使用学得比较晚的单词，可以体现一个 人“学以致用”的意识。如果一个意思既可以用初中单词来表达，又可以用高 二、高三单词来表达，那尽量选择高二、高三的单词，如： adj.困难的 简单词：difficult 高分亮点词：challenging 有挑战性的 adj.重要的 简单词：important 高分亮点词：vital 至关重要的;essential 必不可少的;significant 有重要 意义的; adj.美丽的 简单词：beautiful 高分亮点词：appealing 动人的;attractive 吸引人的 ;charming 迷人 的;fascinating 迷人的 注：这五个词既能修饰人，又能修饰物，非常好用，务必记熟! 02 原则二：短语优先 在阅卷老师看来，活用短语是一个考生能力的体现。因此，我们可以掌 握一些将某些常见单词转化为短语的用法，如： v. 参加 简单词：join 高分亮点词：take part in v. 使用 简单词：use 高分亮点词：make good use of v. 拜访 简单词：visit 高分亮点词：pay a visit to 最常见的换词手段：形容词=of+同根名词 03 原则三：“具体化”单词优先 请先对比以下几组句子： 例句 1: I go to school everyday. 例句 2: I ride to school everyday. 在课堂上，老师经常以这两个句子为例，讲解“具体化”的重要性。很多 同学都能感觉到例句 2 要比例句 1 好。 究其原因，是例句 2 中的 ride 比例句 1 中的 go 更加具体：go 只表达了“去” 的意思，而 ride 不但表达出“去”的意思，还能表达出具体的交通方式。也 就是说，例句 2 表达的信息量比例句 1 更加丰富。 再如： 例句 3: Mr Wang is a good teacher. 例句 4: Mr Wang is a kind, patient and knowledgeable teacher. 例句 3 只表达出 Mr Wang 是一个“好”老师，而到底“好”在哪些方面， 却没有具体说清楚;例句 4 则清楚地告诉读者，Mr Wang 好在三个方面： 和蔼(kind)、耐心(patient)以及知识丰富(knowledgeable)。因此，我们必须 学会换用更为具体的单词表达我们的思想，如： v. 学习 简单词：learn 高分亮点词：research 研究;pick up 偶然学到，顺便学到，轻松学到;master 掌握 n. 好老师 简单词：a good teacher 高分亮点词：a kind, patient and knowledgeable English teacher 一个善良、 耐心、博学的老师。 当然，除了替换某些表意抽象的单词，我们还可以通过增加细节成分， 使表达更为具体，如，例句 2 可以加上同伴、心情等信息，进一步改写成： 例句 5: I，together with Tom and Jerry, rode to the Zhongshan park yesterday， feeling rather excited. 同样的，例句 4 也可以加上一个定语从句，写出 Mr Wang 到底擅长哪 些事情，如： 例句 6: Mr Wang is a kind, patient and knowledgeable teacher who knows how to enlighten us students. 可以看到，例句 5 和例句 6 两个句子采用“具体化”的手段，将原本毫无 生气的句子顿时变得生动形象了。 综上所述，想让你的表达“具体化”，一共有两种常用方法，其一，是换 掉某些表意不明确的单词，换上表意更加明确具体的单词;其二，是在句 中适当增加细节成分。 “具体化”的好处，是让句子的含义更加丰富，让读者更容易由句子展开 丰富的联想，随着作者一起经历、一起思考、一起感动。在平时的学习、 训练中，与其生硬地使用超纲词汇，不如好好熟悉大纲单词，用好“具体 化”的两种方法，为你的作文增光添彩。 事实上，“具体化”在汉语写作中也有同样的体现。比如，要表达“惜别” 的感情，光说“再见”是不够的，应该像诗人那样，用具体化的细节带动感 情，写出梦幻般的文字：“让我与你握别/再轻轻抽出我的手/ 知道思念从 此生根/ 浮云白日/ 山川庄严温柔...” 这就是“具体化”的作用，你体会到了吗? 04 原则四：大纲词汇的衍生词优先 在高中英语中，我们已经涉及到了词根词缀的知识。运用这些知识，可 以将很多高中词汇衍生为四六级词汇甚至托福、雅思词汇。如果能够熟练 使用一两个这种词汇，你的作文肯定能让阅卷老师眼前一亮! 举例如下： adv. 当然地 简单词：certainly 高分亮点词：obviously 明显地;undoubtedly 毫无疑问地;evidently 显然 地; adj. 不开心的 简单词：sad 高分亮点词：discouraged 气馁的;depressed 沮丧的;downhearted 垂头丧 气的;low-spirited 意志消沉的; 这里为大家整理了 20 组阅卷老师看了就想给高分的好词、句子替换 练习题和写作替换练习题。大家一定要学会使用哦~ ◆高分亮点词汇 01 首先 常见简单词：first ，firstly 高分亮点词：first of all, to start with, to begin with, in the first place 例：To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. 首先，做兼职是我们的梦想，同时，我打算做一个销售人员是因为不仅可 以养活自己，还能扩展眼界。 02 其次 常见简单词：second，secondly 高分亮点词：in addition, then, next, in the second place 例：In addition, it is a choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation. 其次，它是一次机会可以在假期中参观一些名胜古迹，如泰山。 03 再次 常见简单词：third，thirdly 高分亮点词：what is more, in the third place 例：What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life. 再次，我认为做志愿者工作，可以丰富自己的人生，也是对社会的贡献。 04 最后 常见简单词：finally，at last 高分亮点词：in conclusion, in the end, last but not least 例：In conclusion，let's work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass. 最后，让我们齐心协力去节约能源，保护我们的自然环境，保护动物，树 木，花草。 05 解释 常见简单词：explain 高分亮点词：account for 例：There exist two reasons, which may account for the difference. 这里有两点原因可以解释这个差异。 06 打算 常见简单词：plan 高分亮点词：intend，mean 例：I intend to join in a Dragon Boat Training Camp. 我打算参加一个龙舟训练营。 07 变成 常见简单词：become 高分亮点词：turn into，change into 例：Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel. 然后他们开始喊叫，最终变成了一场可怕的争吵。 08 告诉 常见简单词：tell 高分亮点词：share with 例：I'm writing to share with you some details. 我现在给你写信来告诉你一些细节。 09 对……感到惊讶 常见简单词：be surprised at 高分亮点词：be amazed at 例：I'm amazed at the progress you've made. 我对你取得的进步感到惊讶。 10 集合 常见简单词：meet 高分亮点词：gather 例：We'll gather at the Students' Club at 8 p.m. this Friday. 这周五的下午八点，我们将在学校俱乐部集合。 11 各种各样的 常见简单词：different kinds of 高分亮点词：a wide variety / range of 例：We have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.我们有更多的选择，像旅行，拜访亲朋好友。 12 帮忙 常见简单词：help 高分亮点词：do sb. a favor, give sb. a hand, help sb. out 例：I'd like you to do me a favor. 我想要你帮个忙。 13 确信 常见简单词：I'm sure / certain that 高分亮点词：I am convinced that 例：I am pretty convinced that a wise choice makes perfect. 我确信一个明智的选择会促成完美的结果。 14 考虑 常见简单词：consider 高分亮点词：think over， give sth. careful / full / serious consideration， take account of， take... into account / consideration 例：We would have to give careful consideration to environmental issues. 我们必须要认真考虑环境问题。 15 以……自豪 常见简单词：be proud of 高分亮点词：take pride in 例：He took pride in having contributed to the world. 他以对世界的贡献自豪。 16 对……感兴趣 常见简单词：be interested in 高分亮点词：have an interest in 例：The girl has a great interest in sport and has been taking badminton classes twice a week over the last three years. 这个女孩对体育感兴趣，并且在过去的三年里，每周都会参加两次羽毛球 课。 17 认为/相信 常见简单词：think, believe 高分亮点词：consider, assume that, maintain, argue that 例：Some argue that humans and machines can coexist as long as they work in teams. 一些人认为，只要人类和机器以团队的方式工作，它们就可以共存。 18 解决 常见简单词：solve 高分亮点词：resolve, deal with, cope with, settle, work out 例：We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. 我们可以有很多种方式来处理这种情况。 19 努力 常见简单词：work hard 高分亮点词：spare no effort 例：Let's start fight now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute! 让我们开始奋斗，每天，每小时，每一分钟都努力一点。 20 获得 常见简单词：get 高分亮点词：gain, acquire, obtain, achieve, attain 例 1：To gain a bright future, you might have to work hard. 为了获得一个光明的未来，你应该要努力学习。 例 2：No pians no gains. 一分耕耘，一分收获。 ◆句子替换练习 请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加粗部分：1．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表 达) So, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty, which will help you prepare for your class. 替换词：Therefore; make preparations for 2．(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)The craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot. 替换词：various/a range of 3．(2016·北京高考书面表达) Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials. 替换词：came up with 4.(2016·四川高考书面表达)The reasons are the following. 替换词：As follows 5.(2015·湖南高考书面表达)At the same time, I decided to study harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things ... 替换词：made up my mind 6. As high school students, we should be neatly dressed when at school. 替换词：are supposed to 7. There's no harm in your staying up late sometimes. 替换词：occasionally/once in a while 8. The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses. 替换词：challenging 9． So far as I know, every one of them wants to be a model student. 替换词：intends to ◆写作提升练习 假定你是中学生李华，家住泉州。你的英国笔友 Jason 来信谈到了他的 家乡伦敦，并希望了解你的家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文写一封回信。 回信必须包括以下内容：1．自然情况：地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等； 2．发展成就：经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等；3．存在问题：交通拥堵 现象、空气污染问题等；4．对泉州发展的看法：内容由考生自己拟定。注 意：1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：高 层建筑 highrise building 【考生作文】 Dear Jason， I'm ①very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou. Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing ②fast during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been ③ built, highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city.④More and more schools and hospitals are ⑤useful for the native people. It is developing into a modern and ⑥beautiful city. ⑦But there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and ⑧serious air pollution, which have a bad ⑨ effect on people's daily life. ⑩I think Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future. Yours, Li Hua ◆【替换后作文】 Dear Jason， I'm ①more than happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou. Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing ② rapidly during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been ③ set up, highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city. ④ An increasing number of schools and hospitals are ⑤available for the native people. It is developing into a modern and ⑥attractive/charming city. ⑦However, there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and ⑧severe air pollution, which have a bad ⑨influence/impact on people's daily life. ⑩ In my opinion/As far as I am concerned, Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future. Yours, Li Hua