询问信“金纲”
高考英语作文之“任务写作”
● (1)吸引阅卷人开头句
● ①I have seen your advertisement and I'd like to know something more about your six-week
English course.
● 我看了你们的广告,我想更多地了解你们为期六周的英语课程的情况。
● ②I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information
regarding/concerning ...
● 我写信想看看你是否能提供一些关于……的具体信息。
● ③I am ... I wonder if you could provide some specific information about ...
● 我是……我想知道你是否能提供一些关于……的具体信息。
● ④I wonder/am wondering if you could/would let me know something about ...
● 不知道你是否能够告知有关……的情况。
● (2)吸引阅卷人篇中句
● ⑤I would like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether
accommodation is included.
● 我想知道我上这个课程需要付多少钱,是否提供食宿。
● ⑥Another point I am not certain about is ...
● 我还不确定的另外一点是……
● (3)吸引阅卷人结尾句
● ⑦Could you be so kind as to send me some ... on the above-mentioned aspects?
● 能否针对上述问题寄些相关的……给我?
● ⑧Thank you for your kindness, and your timely attention to this letter will be highly
appreciated.
● 谢谢你的好意,你对这封信的及时关注我将不胜感激。
● 假定你是李华,打算在高考结束后去美国参加夏令营,正好你从网上看到了Stanford
University的一则相关消息。请你给负责人Mr Smith发一封电子邮件询问有关事宜。要
点如下:
● 1.简单介绍自己的情况;
● 2.询问活动详情;
● 3.提出相关建议。
● 注意:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
● 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
● [精彩范文]
●Dear Mr Smith,
● I'm Li Hua, a Senior 3 student from China. I'm planning to take part in a
summer camp in the USA after the College Entrance Examination in June
so that I can have a further understanding of the American society,
especially college education. I'm delighted that your university happens to
offer such a good chance.
●
● I'm writing to know about the details about the arrangements involved in
the accommodation, transportation as well as the specific schedules of
some major activities in order to make some preparations in advance. In
addition, I'd appreciate it if you could arrange some visits to some famous
universities during the summer camp.
● Looking forward to your reply.
● Yours,
● Li_Hua