2021 年全国高考重难点冲刺套卷（一）解析版
第一部分 语言运用 （共 80 分）
一、阅读理解（共 15 小题；每小题 2.5 分，满分 37.5 分）
请认真阅读下列短文，从短文后各题所给的 A、B、C、D 四个选项中，选出最佳选项。
A
Nashville Sail Camp offers sailing instruction in week-long sessions. It's a learn-to-sail camp
for all levels of experience from beginners to the advanced. Along with sailing, your child will
learn valuable problem-solving and creative thinking techniques. 6\
Place: Week-long Day Camp at Percy Priest Lake
Time: Monday-Friday, 9: 00 am-4: 00 pm
Ages: 7-17
Fee: $350/week
Extended Care Available: 7: 45 am-5: 15 pm. $50/ week
Opti 1
Our youngest and smallest campers will take the helm(舵柄) for the first time in the Opti
fleet(舰队) learning the basics of sailing safety and maneuvers(机动动作) in pairs on board their
boats. Campers will learn basic boating safety, steering and control, and teamwork.
Opti 2
Beginning sailors aged 9 and up as well as Opti 1 graduates will increase their skill level at
the helm of an Opti sailboat. Campers are encouraged to single-hand after mastering sailing in
pairs. Campers will learn single-handed sailing.
Laser
Sailors aged 12 and up learn to sail on sporty lasers, which are used in Olympic sailing.
Starting off in pairs to increase confidence, campers are encouraged to try single-handing the boat
by the end of the week. Laser campers spend most of their time on the water throughout the week
with both morning and afternoon sailing sessions and a group raft-up.
Vanguard
The oldest and most advanced campers will set sail on the Vanguard 15, learning teamwork，
and sail trim with both a jib(船首三角帆) and main. Vanguard campers will participate in fleet
races and other activities with the Laser fleet. Vanguard campers will also have the opportunity to
try other boats available at Sail Camp.
What to bring every day
● CGA Class III life jacket
● Sack lunch and water bottle
● Athletic swimwear, hat and closed-toe water shoes
All campers are required to wear life jackets in and around the boats and water.
1. What is the promise of the organizer of Nashville Sail Camp?
A. Kids will be able to sail alone in the future.
B. Kids will become a creative problem-solver.
C. Kids will learn how to sail in three days.
D. Kids will learn how to solve problems.
2. What would you learn if you are 15 years old and not good at sailing?
A. How to sail on sporty lasers.
B. How to participate in fleet races
C. Steering and control
D. Teamwork and basic boating safety.
3. What does camper have to bring to join in activities?
A. Closed-toe water shoes and biscuits.
B. Sportswear and hat.
C. Life jackets and snacks.
D. Life jackets and water bottles.
【语篇解读】Nashville Sail Camp 提供的为期一周的航海夏令营既能让孩子们学习驾舵航行，
又能提高孩子们解决问题与创造性思维的能力。
1. D 细节理解题。根据第一段最后一句 Along with sailing, your child will learn valuable
problem-solving and creative thinking techniques.可知，该夏令营 am 的组织者承诺孩子们能学
到解决问题及创造性思维的技巧，故选 D
2. A 细节理解题。题干关键词是 15 years old，所以根据 Laser 部分第一句 Sailors aged 12 and
up learn to sail on sporty lasers，which are used in Olympic sailing.及 Vanguard 部分第一句 The
oldest and most advanced campers will set sail on the Vanguard 15, learning teamwork and sail
trim with both jib and main.可知选 A。
3. D 推理判断题。根据 What to bring everyday 部分中的·Sack lunch and water bottle 及 All
campers are required to wear life jackets in and around the boats and water.可知，营员需要携带
救生衣及水瓶，故选 D。
B
Joe Rogan‘s career has been anything but tunnel-visioned (井蛙之见). In fact, his success
comes not from being singularly focused but rather multi-passionate.
Joe practiced multiple types of martial arts all through middle school and high school. He
even won the US Open Championship Tackwondo tournament at the age of 19. Joe then went on
to become a Tackwondo instructor but retired from that life path at the age of 21 as he feared
injuring himself long-term. Joe tried to do the typical thing at that point and go to college, but it
wasn’t for him and he dropped out. After his short college adventure, Joe tried his hand at
stand-up comedy -- a far cry from the world of martial arts, but another thing he was deeply
passionate about.
One of the most fascinating lessons Joe learnt is that the struggle is good. Through the
struggle ，Joe‘s comedy career as well as his acting began to gain momentum( 势头). He had
consistent roles on different sitcoms that allowed him to have the financial freedom to dedicate
more time to his comedy, and became regular at many comedy clubs in the LA area. MMA was
something Joe had enjoyed since an early age and he often attended matches. When Dana White,
UFC network producer, asked Joe to be a commentator(解说员) he accepted the job and spent
nearly ten years in it, winning awards for his work. At the same time, he accepted a job hosting
Fear Factor.
Once leaving commentating and game show hosting，Joe launched multiple comedy specials
and had roles in major motion pictures. He also began putting significant passion behind his blog.
Joe had been blogging since the early 2000s ， but now it really kicked up a notch. He also
journeyed into a new medium, launching his successful The Joe Rogan Experience podcast(播客).
Joe's journey goes to show the importance of acknowledging all that you are. Honor all the
parts of you. Do all the things you want.
4. Why did Joe Rogan give up his first career?
A. He couldn't get along with the instructor.
B. He wanted to earn more.
C. He preferred to go to college.
D. He was afraid of being injured.
5. What does the underlined phrase "kicked up a notch" in Paragraph 5 probably mean?
A. Took part in a match.
B. Made greater progress.
C. Joined an interesting club.
D. Played an important part.
6. Which of the following can best describe Joe Rogan?
A. Loyal, creative and humorous. 3B. Perseverant, sincere and smart.
C. Realistic, aspiring and all-round.
Ambitious positive and energetic
7. Where is the text probably from?
A. A guidebook. B. A biography. C. A news report. D. A book review.
【语篇解读】 Joe Rogan 在 19 岁时获得了美国跆拳道公开赛的冠军，之后他从事了许多职
业，如喜剧演员、UFC 评论员、主持人等。他的人生经历告诉我们：认识自己，成就自己。
4. D 细节理解题。难度较小。根据第二段第三句中的 as he feared injuring himself long-term
可知，Joe 放弃第一个职业是因为他担心受伤，故选 D。
5. B 词义猜测题。难度中等。根据前文可知，Joe 把他的热情投入到撰写博客之中，从 2000
年开始他一直在写博客; 再根据后文他开办独家播客节目，由此可知，Joe 真正地 kicked up a
notch“更上一层楼”(换言之：取得了巨大进步)，故选 B。
6. C 推理判断题。难度较大。根据第二段“Joe tried to do the typical thing at that point and go to
college, but it wasn't for him and he dropped out.”及最后一段“Joe‘s journey goes to show the
importance of acknowledging all that you are. Honor all the parts of you. Do all the things you
want.”及文中提到的 Joe 的成就可知，Joe 实事求是、多才多艺; 根据第三段第一、二句 One
of the most fascinating lessons Joe learnt is that the struggle is good. Through the struggle，Joe’s
comedy career as well as his acting began to gain momentum.可知，Joe 有抱负，故选 C。
7. B 文章出处题。难度中等。纵观全文可知，本文介绍了 Joe Rogan 精彩的职业生涯，由此
推知，本文很可能出自一本传记，故选 B。
C
Want to get your package delivered via robots? Now there's an app for that. If you live in
Washington, D. C., or Redwood, you may have glimpsed a small, boxy robot rolling along a local
sidewalk, minding its own business, but attracting the attention of many curious onlookers.
The autonomous machines were part of a pilot program last year by Starship Technologies
focusing on delivering meals from local restaurants in dozens of cities around the world. This
week, the company unveiled plans to broaden its delivery service beyond food to include packages,
a move that led it to declare itself "the world's first robot package delivery service". The next time
you order food, this cute robot might roll up to deliver it. The package delivery service is not
available to everyone yet.
The wheeled robots have a top speed of 4 mph and can detect obstacles from30 feet away."
The robot can operate through anything," Nick Handrick, head of operations for Starship's D. C.
office, said, "If you have something in the way --- a stick --- it's able to climb over it."
To sign up for the service, which costs little more than 10 per month, customers need to
download the company's app. Customers then create a “Starship Delivery Address”, a unique
address inside a Starship facility, where they can have packages sent from some places. Once a
package is delivered to the Starship address, customers receive a text notification that allows them
to schedule a home delivery via robots. The robots are opened by customers via a mobile phone
code.
Barriers exist for robotic ground delivery, with many states requiring that humans be in
control of delivery robots. Those regulations haven’t stopped Starship Technologies from
accumulating experience on streets around the globe ahead of the company’s latest launch. The
company says its robots have covered more than 125.000 miles in more than 100 cities in 20
countries.
8. What can we know about the robotic delivery?
A. It is part of a trial project by Starship Technologies.
B. The robotic delivery is available to everyone at present.
C. You can use the service free of charge via smart phones.
D. The robots are opened by customers with a text notification.
9. What does the underlined word "unveiled" in Paragraph 2 probably mean?
A. Revised. B. Released C. Restored. D. Reset.
10. What is the last paragraph mainly about?
A. The good news of the service.
B. How the robotic delivery works.
C. The disadvantages of the robotic delivery.
D. Robotic delivery develops despite challenges.
11. What can be the best title for the text?
A. A New Robot Was Invented
B. Wheelless Robots Are on the Way
C. How Robots Deliver Packages
D. Packages Will Be Delivered by Robots
【语篇解读】本文主要介绍了 Starship Technologies 公司推出的机器人送包裹这服务的相关
内容。
8. A 考查细节理解。根据第二段中的“The autonomous machines were part of pilot program last
year by Starship Technologies 可知，机器人送包裹的服务是 Starship Technologies 公司试验项
目的一部分，故选 A。
9. B 考查词义猜测。根据画线词后的“plans to broaden... to include packages 并结合选项和语
境可知，此处表示本周该公司透露了他们会把快递服务从食品拓宽到包裹的计划由此可知画
线词 unveiled 的词义应该为(首次)透露(新计划)”，B 项 Released 的词义与其最为接近。
10. D 考查段落大意。通读最后一段可知，该段主要介绍了当前机器人送包裹这一服务仍存
在一些障碍，但是该公司的机器人送包裹的服务一直在发展中，故 D 项正确。
11. D 考查最佳标题。通读全文可知，本文主要介绍了 Starship Technologies 公司推出的机器
人送包裹的服务的相关内容，故 D 项适合作全文的标题。
D
China is one of the first countries to breed a medical culture. In comparison with Western
methods traditional Chinese medicine (TCM) adopts a vastly different approach. For thousands of
years, Chinese people have accumulated rich experience in fighting all sorts of diseases, therefore
forming a unique medical theory under the guidance of ancient Chinese philosophies.
The core behind TCM is that the human body's life is the consequence of the balance
between yin and yang. Yang functions to safeguard us against outer harm and yin is the inner base
to store and provide energy. When the balance between the two aspects is disturbed, people fall ill.
One of the traditional techniques of TCM，acupuncture(针刺疗法) means insertion of needles
into superficial structures of the body --- usually at acupoints(穴位) --- to restore the yin--yang
balance. It is often accompanied by moxibustion(灸法)，which involves burning the mugwort on
or near the skin at an acupoint.
The first known text that clearly talks about something like acupuncture and moxibustion as
it is practiced today is Yellow Emperor's Inner Canon. It is the earliest and most important written
work of TCM and is considered the most representative medical text in China.
Acupuncture and moxibustion have aroused the interest of international medical science
circles. And TCM is gradually gaining worldwide recognition. The WHO issued document 2002
that appealed to more than 180 countries to adopt TCM as an alternative in their medical policies.
In 2010, acupuncture and moxibustion of traditional Chinese medicine were added to the
Representative List of the Intangible Cultural Heritage of Humanity by the UNESCO. Presently,
TCM has been back in the news for its effectiveness in improving the cure rate of the COVID-19
since its outbreak in January 2020.
12. What does the underlined word "It" in Paragraph 3 refer to?
A. TCM. B. Acupuncture. C. Yin –yang balance. D. Moxibustion.
13. What can we learn about Yellow Emperor's Inner Canon from the text?
A. It distinguishes acupuncture from moxibustion.
B. It' 's foundation of world medical research.
C. It stresses the importance of using acupoints.
D. It greatly boosts the development of TCM.
14. What is the writer's purpose of writing the passage?
A. To introduce TCM to the world.
B. To review the development of TCM.
C. To tell TCM and Western medicine apart.
D. To comment on TCM in fighting COVID-19.
15. What might be talked about in the paragraph following the text?
A. Why TCM gets recognition from WHO.
B. Why TCM is gaining popularity.
C. How TCM helps in the current situation.
D. How other countries adopt TCM well.
【语篇解读】本文首先介绍了中医独特的理论和疗法，随后指出中医正在获得世界范围内的
认可，且因其在提高新冠肺炎治愈率上的有效性而重新出现在新闻中。
12. B 考查代词指代。第三段第一句讲的是针刺疗法的相关内容，根据语境可知，此处表示
针刺疗法经常伴随灸法，故 It 指的是 Acupuncture。
13. D 考查推理判断。根据第四段内容可知第一部明确谈到针刺疗法和灸法的文献就是《黄
帝内经》，它是最早和最重要的中医书面著作，并被认为是中国最具代表性的医学文本，故
选 D“它极大地促进了中医的发展”。
14. A 考查写作目的。文章前半部分介绍了中医独特的理论和疗法，后面说中医正逐渐受到
世界范围内的认可，由此可知，作者写这篇文章的目的是向世人介绍中医。
15. C 考查推理判断。由最后一段最后一句可知，自 2020 年 1 月新冠肺炎疫情爆发以来，因
其在提高治愈率上的成效，中医再次出现在新闻当中，故可推知下面一段内容将围绕中医如
何帮助解决目前情况而展开，故选 C。
二、七选五 (共 5 小题；每小题 2.5 分，满分 12.5 分)
根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。
Creating a healthy balance between work and home is no simple task, especially in today's
fast-
paced work environment. _____16______ If you spend more time at work, you will ignore your
family and personal life. Similarly, if you spend more time facing the challenges of your personal
life, you are unable to concentrate on the job.
_____17______ So it's necessary to strike work-life balance. But the competitive world
makes it difficult. So, what should we do?
● Learn the art of time management. Time management is not only for office work.
_____18______ Keep a weekly calendar of family to-do lists. Try to involve your wife or
husband and kids in some daily chores.
● _____19______ Take out time to do things that you enjoy doing, such as going for walks,
listening to music, practicing yoga, reading, etc. Set aside one night a week for your family.
Switch off your cellphone and TV. Find activities that will interest you and your family.
● Ensure enough sleep. _____20______ This will not only affect your productivity, but also
cause you to commit potentially/dangerous and costly mistakes.
In the end, sometimes at the crossroads, you need to decide what is more important in your
life --- spending time with your family, or concentrating just on your work life?
A. Find ways to release stress.
B. Set aside some flexible hours.
C. Manage your time at home as well.
D. Seek help if you find your life too difficult to manage.
E. There is nothing more stressful than a lack of enough rest at night.
F. Without balance between them, stress is running high in most families
G. Whether you focus too much on your home, or work, the outcome is the same, that is, stress.
【语篇解读】本文就如何保持工作和家庭平衡给出了一些方法。
16. F 空后两个 if 从句从两方面阐述了 F 项 “如果两者(工作和生活)之间不平衡，压力就会
在多数家庭中出现”，同时反证了首句“在工作与家庭间创建健康的平衡绝不是件容易的事”，
故选 F。
17. G 由 So 可知，此句和下句是因果关系，G 项“无论你太专注于家庭或是太专注于工作，
结果都是一样的，那就是压力”和下句“所以保持工作和生活之间的平衡是很有必要的”构成
因果关系，故选 G。
18.C C 项中的 Manage your time 贴合本段主题句 Learn the art of time management.，且上句
中的 not only，office work 分别对应 C 项中的 as well，at home，故选 C。
19. A 本段主要讲要做自己喜欢做的事，例如散步、听音乐等等，同时每周还要抽时间和家
人一起玩耍。可知，这些都是释放压力的方式，故本段的主题应该是寻找释放压力的方法。
A 项概括本段内容，故选 A。
20. E 本段的主题是保证充足的睡眠，E 项与本段大意贴合，下句中的 This 指代 E 项中的 lack
of enough rest at night，后文论证缺乏睡眠所带来的不良后果，故选 E。
三、完形填空：（共 15 题；每题 1 分）请认真阅读下面短文，从各题所给的 A、B、C、D
四个选项中，选出最佳选项，
Last week, a thing occurred in the classroom of a 4th-grade at Chino valley Unified School. It
was Autism(自闭症) Awareness Month and every _____21_____ had been asked to have each
student _____22_____ a paper puzzle piece and hang it on their classroom doors. When Ms Lisa
Moe _____23_____ the puzzle pieces, most of her students were familiar with the idea of autism.
However, they did not know autism was _____24_____ within their own classroom in their fellow
classmate: Jackie.
With _____25_____ Jackie raised his hand and said, "May I please say something?" Moe
nodded but never could she have imagined what was to _____26_____. She explained in a blog
post, "Jackie has _____27_____ challenges and barriers beyond what any of us will ever be able
to fully _____28_____. But today, he stood in the front of the classroom with full _____29_____
and showed us that no challenge or barrier can_____30_____. He brought to life the meaning of
“Yes, I can!””
Both the teacher and students were _____31_____ on his every word. For a(n)
_____32_____ time, Moe never thought of getting out her phone to _____33_____ this moment,
but finally she realized it.
Jackie's mother was _____34_____ by the video and told Moe, “Watching Jackie so bravely
speak about autism is beyond what I can _____35_____ express. Thank you!”
21. A. school B. family C. classroom D. court
22. A. decorate B. stick C. wind D. cast
23. A. handed in B. handed up C. handed over D. handed out
24. A. shy B. present C. hidden D. clear
25. A. disappointment B. surprise C. excitement D. anxiety
26. A. tolerate B. spread C. construct D. follow
27. A. created B. doubted C. faced D. launched
28. A. express B. complete C. understand D. explain
29. A. ambition B. confidence C. strength D. power
30. A. hold him back B. give him up C. set him apart D. keep him away
31. A. calling B. taking C. holding D. hanging
32. A. certain B. long C. instant D. rapid
33. A. remember B. sculpture C. recall D. shoot
34. A. scared B. thrilled C. shocked D. ashamed
35. A. properly B. patiently C. carefully D. attentively
【答案】21-25 CADBC 26-30 DCCBA 31-35 DBDBA
【语篇解读】曾经患有自闭症的 Jackie 在同学面前勇敢地讲述自己的经历，引起了同学热烈
的反应。莫伊老师拍摄了这一时刻，并上传至网上。
21. C 根据上句中的 a thing occurred in the classroom of 4th-grade 可知, 故事发生在教室
(classroom)里，故选 C。
22. A 根据语境可知，应自闭症宣传月的要求，每个教室里每个学生装饰(decorate)一幅纸质
拼图，并将它挂在教室门上，故选 A。
23. D 老师把拼图分发(handed out)给孩子们，让孩子们按要求去做，故选 D。
24.B 根据 However 可知，此句和上句语意之间存在转折关系，大部分学生对自闭症的概念
很熟悉，但是并不知道在场的(present) Jackie 就患有自闭症，故选 B。
25. C 根据语境可知，同学们并不知道有自闭症，他是带着激动的(excitement)心情要求讲述
自己的自闭症经历，故选 C。
26. D 根据下句中的 Jackie has _____27_____ challenges and barriers beyond what any of us
will ever be able to fully _____28_____. But today, he stood in the front of the classroom with full
_____29_____ and showed us that no challenge or barrier can_____30_____.可知，当 Jackie 想
要发言的时候，Ms Lisa Moe 并不知道接下来(follow)他会说什么，故选 D。
27. C 根据语境可知，作为自闭症患者，Jackie 肯定经历了很多困难，面临(faced)很多挑战和
障碍，故选 C。
28. C 此处与上文，However, they did not know autism was _____24_____ within their own
classroom in their fellow classmate: Jackie.呼应，Jackie 经历的困难和挑战是常人所不能理解
(understand)的，故选 C。
29. B 根据下句 He brought to life the meaning of “Yes, I can!”以及下文 Watching Jackie so
bravely speak about autism is beyond what I can _____25_____ express.可知，Jackie 是充满信心
(confidence)地勇敢地站在同学面前讲述他的故事，故选 B。
30. A 根据 Moe 对 Jackie 的评价 He brought to life the meaning of “Yes, I can!”可知，没有困难
可以阻碍(hold back) Jackie，故选 A。give up 放弃；set sb. apart 使某人与众不同；keep sb. away
远离某人。
31. D 根据下句中的 For a(n) _____32_____ time, Moe never thought of getting out her phone to
_____33_____ this moment 可知，当 Jackie 在讲述自己的自闭症过往时，老师和学生都全神
贯注地聆听。 hang on sb’s every word 是习语,意为“专心致志地听某人讲话”，故选 D。call on
拜访；take on 呈现；雇佣；承担；hold on 坚持下去；别挂断(电话)。
32. B 根据上句 Both the teacher and students were _____31_____ on his every word.及空后的
but finally she realized it.可知，老师和学生都全神贯注地听着他讲的每一个字，以至于 Ms
Lisa Moe 过了很长时间(long)才想起要用手机拍下这一时刻，故选 B。
33. D 根据语境及第 14 空后的 video 可知，Ms Lisa Moe 用手机拍下(shoot)这一场景，故选
D。
34. B 根据 Jackie 妈妈所说的话“Watching Jackie so bravely speak about autism”可知，当看到
Jackie 勇敢地谈论自己的自闭症过往的视频时，他妈妈很激动(thrilled)，故选 B。
35. A Jackie 的妈妈太激动了，不知道该如何恰当地(properly)表达此时此刻的心情，故选 A。
四、语法填空：（共 10 小题；每题 1.5 分，满分 15 分）
阅读下面短文，在空白处填入 1 个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
Earthquakes are quite common. In fact, thousands of earthquakes happen each day. Most of
them ____36____ (be) too weak to feel. During a big earthquake, there is often a big noise first.
Then the earth shakes ____37____ (terrible) and many houses collapsed.
As one of the most deadly ____38____ (nature) disasters in the world, earthquakes often
result ____39____ many people being injured or killed. In 2008, a severe earthquake hit China's
Sichuan Province, ____40____ killed more than 80 000 people there.
Besides the great damage and deaths caused by the earthquake ____41____ (it), other
accidents such as fires often follow. More buildings may be damaged and more deaths may be
caused.
For centuries, man have been making studies of earthquakes. About 2, 000 years ago, for
example, ____42____ Chinese scientist named Zhang Heng ____43____ (invent) a machine,
which could find out from which direction the earthquake waves came. With the rapid
____44____ (develop) of modern science and technology, we now know a lot more about
earthquakes. However, scientists still have difficulty ____45____ (predict) exactly when and
where an earthquake will happen, and can't stop it from happening.
【语篇解读】本文是则说明文，为我们讲述了地震的一些基本信息。
36. are 考查时态。句子陈述事实应用一般现在时， most of them 表示复数意义，指“大多数
地震”，故填 are。
37. terribly 考查副词。修饰动词，作状语，用副词。
38. natural 考查形容词。作名词 disasters 的定语，用形容词，意为“自然的”。
39. in 考查介词。此处表示“地震通常导致…”，填 in。 result in“导致，造成”，是固定短语。
40. which 考查从句。引导非限制性定语从句的关系代词在从句中作主语，先行词是 severe
earthquake，故用 which。
41. itself 考查代词。所填词作 the earthquake 的同位语，故用反身代词 itself。
42. a 考查冠词。泛指“一位中国科学家”，用不定冠词。
43. invented 考查时态。句子讲述过去发生的事，用一般过去时。
44. development 考查名词。作介词 with 的宾语，空前有形容词修饰，故填名词。with the
development of...“随着的发展”。
45. predicting 考查非谓语。have difficulty(in) doing sth.“做某事有困难”，是固定短语。
第二部分 写作(共两节,满分 40 分)
第一节 (满分 15 分)
假定你是李华，请你为某英语报社写一篇新闻报道， 内容包括:
时间 2020 年 9 月 8 日
人物 钟南山(Zhong Nanshan)
事件 荣获"共和国勋章" (the Medal of the Republic)
先进事迹 2003 年抗击非典型性肺炎(SARS)，2020 年抗击新冠病毒肺炎
(COVID-19)
社会反响 …………
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
On September 8, 2020, Zhong Nanshan, China’s renowned medical expert was awarded the
Medal of the Republic, the highest state honor, for his outstanding contribution to fighting the
COVID-19 epidemic.
Zhong, who led the fight against SARS in 2003 was again put under the spotlight due to the
outbreak of the COVID-19. Dangerous as the disease was, the outspoken and responsible doctor
stood on the front line of epidemic prevention and control to save numerous lives.
Admittedly, Zhong has handed over a perfect answer sheet to the Party and the people and he
is a heroic figure fully deserving the honor.
【分析】
本文是一篇新闻报道，报道钟南山院士在防疫中的主要事迹。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：新闻报道
时态：根据提示，时态应为主要用一般过去时和少数评论句用一般现在时或现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要点：被授奖；杰出贡献；领导对抗 SARS，又一次一线抗疫；全民关注；拯救生命；名至
实归。注意：适当增加细节或用形容词副词增强情感。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be awarded the Medal of the Republic; outstanding contribution to; fight (against) the COVID-19
epidemic; lead the fight against…; be put under the spotlight；save numerous lives; deserve the
honor
第三步：连词成句
1. On September 8, 2020, Zhong Nanshan, China’s renowned medical expert was awarded the
Medal of the Republic.
2. Zhong was again put under the spotlight due to the outbreak of the COVID-19.
3. He stood on the front line of epidemic prevention and control to save numerous lives.4.
Looking forward to your reply.
4. He is a heroic figure fully deserving the honor.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly, And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as,
including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+ clause(从句), In spite of+ n/doing
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关
系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Zhong, who led the fight against SARS in 2003,
was again put under the spotlight due to the outbreak of the COVID-19.这句话使用了 who 引导
的非限制性定语从句。此外 Dangerous as the disease was, the outspoken and responsible doctor
stood on the front line of epidemic prevention and control to save numerous lives.这句话则使用
as 引导的让步状语从句，属于高难句型。文章最后一段在看似普通的并列句中使用了非谓
语动词，对钟南山院士作了高度评价。此外文章还使用了一些形容词副词的增强了积极的情
感感染力，如 renowned；the highest state honor；outstanding; again; outspoken and responsible;
heroic 等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路
清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
第二节 (满分 25 分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成- -篇完整的短文。续
写的词数应为 150 左右。
Lily was cleaning windows, and it was what she must do for her family’s new Chinese
restaurant. Everything had to be absolutely perfect: unique decorations, skillful employees, and
delicious traditional food. Then customers would love the place, making the business a success.
Lily's family had just moved here from San Francisco, having bought a small restaurant,
which was opened yesterday. She was new in the neighbor and had few friends. The first few days
at her new school hadn’t been easy, either. She found it hard to talk to people she didn’t know and
it seemed like the students hadn’t even noticed her. She was eager for a friendship, though.
Lily shifted her vision to look outside the restaurant as a girl about her age, with abundant red
hair, walked up the street. The girl paused to study the sign announcing their opening and then
looked directly at Lily with a friendly smile. Lily smiled back shyly and lifted a hand, accidentally
waving with the cleaning cloth. The girl smiled at her amusement and waved back happily.
Lily hesitated, not accustomed to starting friendship, but she felt courageous, so she opened
the door. “Hello,” she said, adding the first thing that entered her head, “do you like Chinese
food?”
“I don't know, but I like to try new things,” the girl remarked, and then she introduced herself as
Gabriela.
Lily could not think of additional conversation until she had a sudden
idea._________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
______________________
The following day, Lily was doing her restaurant routine when she heard an unexpected
knock.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________
【参考范文】
Lily could not think of additional conversation until she had a sudden idea. She ran into the
kitchen and came back with a small package. “Some Chinese candy for you to try,” she explained.
“If you enjoy it, I hope you’ll return and tell me.” “Excellent, I’ll see you around soon.” Gabriela
headed down the street, glancing back with a cheerful wave. Lily spent the remaining afternoon
hoping Gabriela really would return and not think Lily’s gift was strange.
The following day, Lily was doing her restaurant routine when she heard an unexpected
knock. It was Gabriela with a plate covered with plastic wrap. Lily grinned with enthusiasm and
opened the door with an excited greeting. Gabriela presented the plate and said, “I brought biscuits
made from my grandmother’s recipe to thank you for the delicious candy.” “Come in, and we can
have some biscuits right now,” Lily stammered, happy inside. Lily was now positive that the
restaurant would make a wondrous impression on the customers and that she was going to enjoy
her life here immensely.
【分析】
本文是则记叙文，讲述了女孩 Lily 搬到新学校新地方后渴望友谊，并在课余为父亲新餐馆
打扫时，偶遇陌生女孩 Gabriela，克服自身害羞开始一段友情的故事。
【详解】
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“莉莉突然想到了一个好主意，才想起了其它的话题。”以及她在父亲
新餐馆帮忙可知，第一段可描写 Lily 以可能有的中餐点心开启对话，邀请 Gabriela 尝吃。“好
吃再来”，生意的套路也是友谊合理的开端。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天，Lily 正在餐馆里做她的日常工作，突然听到一声敲门声。”
可知，第二段可描写 Gabriela 到访，可以是带食品回赠，也可以是在店内就餐，有对话有交
流，美好的友谊使 Lily 心生欢喜。
2.续写线索：赠点心——请品尝——好吃再来——回赠食品——快乐对话——新生活展望。
3.词汇激活
行为类: 跑进去再回来：run into and come back; 递过去 hand sth over to …
再来：come around soon; 走了 head down the street; 回头看: glance back
带来：bring sth.； 感谢: thank you for …
情绪类: 开心的 cheerful；咧嘴笑：grin； 热情 enthusiasm； 激动的 excited
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] If you enjoy it, I hope you’ll return and tell me. （if 引导条件状语从句）
[高分句型 2] Gabriela headed down the street, glancing back with a cheerful wave.（glancing back
with a cheerful wave.非谓语短语作伴随状语。）
[ 高 分 句 型 3] “I brought biscuits made from my grandmother’s recipe to thank you for the
delicious candy.” (made from my grandmother’s recipe 过去分词短语作后置定语；to thank you
for the delicious candy 不定式作目的状语)
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