专题10 说明文 新旧对比-2021年高考英语书面表达精讲精练

说明文 说明文专题 01 新旧对比 【话题导入】 随着经济的飞速发展，我们周围每天都在发生着变化。对比过去，现在的我们有着更坚定的信心去建 设更加美好的未来。 【写作指导】 新旧对比介绍类写作，属于说明文范畴。在进行对比类写作时，首先，我们需要将某一人或事物的过 去和现状进行比较，找出变化所在；然后，进一步说明这些变化带来的影响；最后，做出总结或展望未来。 在写作中多用现在时态和过去时态，在展望给未来时可用将来时态。  写作步骤 1.Introduce as a whole; 2.Make comparisons and explain changes; 3.Introduce the influence or differences of the changes; 4.Make a summary or express an expectation.  增色语料 精彩句型： 1.Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five years. 2.In the past,there weren’t... in our city but now we are enjoying ... duo to... 3.Instead,more buildings have been built in the suburb area where there used to be ... 4.Not only can we enjoy the beautiful scenery but we can also enjoy... 5.Compared with traditional...,the new type of ... is more... 6.I believe our city/school/town will become more and more popular among...in the future.  范文赏析 假定你是高中生李华。三年前在你校做交换生的 Tom 最近和你取得了联系，他想了解你现在的情况。 请你给他写份邮件，内容包括: 1.你的变化:外貌、兴趣、学习等方面； 2.询问他最近的情况。 注意:1.词数 100 左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 任务分析：本写作任务是一篇人物说明类作文。要求学生用英语给好友写一封邮件，从外貌、兴趣及学习 等方面告知自己的变化，并询问对方最近的情况。在描述变化时，切忌面面俱到你，只需选取具有代表性 的几个方面来陈述即可。写作时注意使用恰当的衔接手段，提高各要点之间的连贯性。 补句成文： 请根据汉语提示使用恰当的单词、短语或句子补全下面范文中所缺的内容，补全后请通读全文 并建议记诵。 Dear Tom, Glad to get in touch with you again.I’m writing to tell you 1.__________________________（我身上发生了 多 么 大 的 变 化 ） in the last three years.To begin with, I now have grown much taller but heavier.2.__________________________（我过去留着长发，而现在留着短发）. Do you still remember my hobbies?I still keep practicing the piano and I want to become a pianist after graduating from college.I have given up my hobby of dancing because I found I didn’t enjoy it as I had imagined. As for my study,3.____________ ________________________________(我在英语口语方面取得了很大的进步). I’ve taken part in several speech contests and won a few prizes. How are you getting on recently? Are you still doing volunteer work?4.__________________________（关于 你，我有很多事情想了解），so please write to me. Yours Li Hua 答案：1.How great the changes have happened to me 2. I used to have long hair but now I have short hair 3. I've made great progress in my spoken English 4. There is much I want to know about you 【且学且练】 假定你是高三学生李华，你读高时在你校任教的外教 Smith 来信询问你和学校近两年来的变化。请你 据此用英文给他回一封信。 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr Smith, It's so great to hear from you again. Now I’d like to tell you something about myself and our school. Our school has witnessed great changes during the past' two years. Firstly, another two teaching buildings have been built because the old one couldn't hold the increasing number of students. Secondly, the stadium has been enlarged, which can accommodate about three thousand people now. Besides, there came three foreign language teachers, all of whom are popular among us students, just like you. As for me, I have b een studying hard and I have made great progress in English. What's more, I have built very good relationships with my classmates and teachers. How are things going with you? Please write and tell me. Yours, Li Hua