记叙文专题 02 日记
【话题导入】
我们生活中会经历这样那样的事情,或看到,或听说,或亲身经历亦或是自己的思考,把一些值得记
录的记录下来,作为一种记忆的收藏。
【写作指导】
日记是以记叙一天的生活中所见、所闻、所做或所思为内容的一种文体,故写日记多用第一人称。日
记一般记叙当天发生的事情,因此多用过去时态,但如果谈论个人感悟或说明客观事实,普遍真理时,可
以用现在时态。要注意英语日记的格式, 英语日记通常由两部分组成,既书端和正文。书端用于记载写日
记的日期,星期和天气情况,它位于正文上面的第一行,顶格写起。日期和星期写在第一行的左上角,天
气情况写在第一行的右上角。
写作步骤: 1.书端 2.正文 3.感受
增色语料
精彩句型:
1. I had an unforgettable experience in Guangzhou today
2. We had such a good time that we didn't realize it was very late
3. From this experience, I learned that….
4. They were very grateful to me for my help.
5. They showed much gratitude to me for my help.
6. They appreciate my help quickly.
7. Seeing them go on the bus, I felt very happy.
8. With candles lit, we sang happy birthday out loud and clapped.
9. L led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No.20, which could take them there directly.
范文赏析
假定你是学校志愿者团队的学生李华,为维护城市自然环境,本周六你班到中山公园参加了环保志
愿者活动,请用日记的形式,记叙此事。内容包括:
1.活动内容,捡垃圾,分发传单……2.你对本次活动的感想。
参考词汇: 传单 leaflet
任务分析:本篇是以日记的方式记录活动,要注意日记的格式。记述时要交代清楚活动的相关信息,要点
明活动的意义和自我感受。
补句成文: 请根据汉语提示使用恰当的单词、短语或句子补全下面范文中所缺的内容,补全后请通读全文
并建议记诵。
Saturday. Fine
Today, we took part in a meaningful activity by the Voluntary Service Club of our school to protect the natural
environment of the city.
In the morning, we went to Zhongshan park by bus, talking and laughing all the
way__________________________(我们一到就立即着手工作). Some picked up rubbish and threw it into the
dustbins, while some distributed the leaflets to raise people's awareness of the damage littering can cause.
The residents who live in the community all agreed that what we have done is very meaningful and of vital
importance to the environment there. Personally, we have learned much from the voluntary activity,
________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________(活动不仅使我们能为社会做贡
献,也使我们意识到保护自然环境的重要性).
答案:1.as soon as we get to work 2.Activities not only enable us to contribute to society, but also make us aware
of the importance of protecting the natural environment
【且学且练】
假定你是李华,昨天你参加了你校举办的以"我最喜欢的一本书"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇
英语日记,要点如下:1.描述当时比赛的情况;2.你的表现和感受。
注意:1.词数 100 左右(开头已经给出,但不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Friday 2nd May 2014 Fine
Yesterday afternoon,I attended the English speech contest held by my school. The topic of it is "The book I
like best".it is "The book I like best"When I knew that the first five candidates performed very well, l felt a little
worried.
At the thought of the words "I can do it", I became calm a lot. Soon it was my turn,when I "The book I like
best is Three Days to See written by Helen Keller. From the book, realize that it would be an excellent rule to live
happily each day as if we should tomorrow." my teachers and classmates cheered for me. I gained much confidence
and went on to do my best.Finally I won first prize.
Be happy every day and try my best to do everything. I'll keep it in my mind and make it come true.