专题05 应用文（第01期）-2021届全国3+1+2模式高三名校英语好题速递分项汇编（解析版）

专题 05 应用文（第 01 期） -2021 届全国 3+1+2 模式高三名校英语好题速递分项汇编（解析版） 【2021 年湖北省八市高三（3 月）联考】 假如你是李华，上周日下午在你校排球场上举行了排球比赛决赛(the volleyball final)，请你为校英语报写一 份报道，内容如下: 1.赛程回顾: 2.赛后反响。 注意:1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯: 2.词数 80 左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数。 The Volleyball Final ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Last Sunday afternoon witnessed the competitive volleyball final on the playground, which sparked students’ burning passion for sports. On the volleyball court, all the students in Grade Three got actively involved in the game. With cheerleaders and volleyball fans enthusiastically cheering around, players were fiercely competing for the championship. Finally, the champion team was presented with an award and the leader addressed a speech which boosted the morale of all the volleyball teams. Most students thought highly of the volleyball games which not only provided a platform for us to relieve our pressure and add spice to our dull routine but also facilitated our learning105 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为校英语报写一份有关上周日下午在校排球场上举行的排球比赛决赛 (the volleyball final)的报道。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一过去时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.赛程回顾； 2.赛后反响。 第二步：列提纲 （重点词组） witness the competitive volleyball final; spark students’ burning passion; get actively involved in; cheer around; compete for the championship; be presented with an award; address a speech; think highly of 第三步：连词成句 1. Last Sunday afternoon witnessed the competitive volleyball final on the playground, which sparked students’ burning passion for sports. 2. With cheerleaders and volleyball fans enthusiastically cheering around, players were fiercely competing for the championship. 3. Finally, the champion team was presented with an award and the leader addressed a speech which boosted the morale of all the volleyball teams. 4. Most students thought highly of the volleyball games which not only provided a platform for us to relieve our pressure and add spice to our dull routine but also facilitated our learning. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：Finally 2.表并列补充关系：and, not only…but (also) 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary（供参考） 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So（供参考） 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 【点睛】 [高分句型 1] Last Sunday afternoon witnessed the competitive volleyball final on the playground, which sparked students’ burning passion for sports.（which 引导的非限制性定语从句） [高分句型 2] Finally, the champion team was presented with an award and the leader addressed a speech which boosted the morale of all the volleyball teams.（which 引导的定语从句） [高分句型 3] Most students thought highly of the volleyball games which not only provided a platform for us to relieve our pressure and add spice to our dull routine but also facilitated our learning.（which 引导的定语从句） 【福建省福州市 2021 届高中毕业班 3 月质量检测】 假定你是李华，上周你校举办了主题为“最受尊敬的劳动者”的艺术作品展。请你为校英文电台写一篇报道， 词数 80 左右，内容包括： 1.参加人员； 2.展览内容（摄影，绘画，手工作品等）； 3.展览反响。 参考词汇：最受尊敬的劳动者：Most Honored Worker 【答案】Our school held an art show entitled “Most Honored Worker” last week, to which our students and teachers gave an active response. The works submitted came in different forms of photos, paintings and handcrafts. All of them told vivid stories of the beauty of diligence and persistence in different walks of life. Those present at the show all gave a big applause to the works on display, saying that they learnt a lot from these ordinary but honorable workers. 【解析】 本篇睡眠表达为应用文。要求考生给学校英文电台写一篇报道，报道上周学校主题为“最受尊敬的劳动者” 的艺术作品展览。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时,少量一般现在时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.参加人员； 2.展览内容（摄影，绘画，手工作品等）； 3.展览反响。 第二步：列提纲 （重点词组） give an active response; in forms of; tell vivid stories; walks of life; on display 第三步：连词成句 1. Our school held an art show entitled “Most Honored Worker” last week, to which our students and teachers gave an active response. 2. The works submitted came in different forms of photos, paintings and handcrafts. 3. All of them told vivid stories of the beauty of diligence and persistence in different walks of life. 4. Those present at the show all gave a big applause to the works on display, saying that they learnt a lot from these ordinary but honorable workers.. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】 [高分句型 1] Our school held an art show entitled “Most Honored Worker” last week, to which our students and teachers gave an active response.这句话运用了非限制性定语从句。 [高分句型 2] The works submitted came in different forms of photos, paintings and handcrafts. 这句话运用了过 去分词作定语。 [高分句型 3] Those present at the show all gave a big applause to the works on display, saying that they learnt a lot from these ordinary but honorable workers. 这句话运用了现在分词作状语。 【福建省泉州市 2021 届（3 月）高三质量监测（三）】假定你是李华，上周末你们班在附近社区的老年人活 动中心组织了一次义工活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： 1.陪伴老人，教老人智能手机的生活应用等； 2.活动反响。 注意： 1.写作词汇应为 80 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答案卡的相应位置作答。 A Significant Voluntary Activity 【答案】A Significant Voluntary Activity Last weekend, our class attended a voluntary activity in a community senior center nearby. Some of us entertained the elderly by singing Nanyin and doing magic tricks. Others chatted with them. They were overjoyed for our coming and the senior center was full of laughter. Besides, we also taught them how to use smartphones in everyday life, such as showing the health QR code, calling a taxi and making an appointment with the doctor. They were impressed by the convenience technology brings. The activity is so meaningful that we all feel rewarded and determined to visit them regularly. 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，报道上周末你们班在附近社区的老年人活动 中心组织了一次义工活动。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时,少量一般现在时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.陪伴老人，教老人智能手机的生活应用等； 2.活动反响。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） attend a voluntary activity; chat with sb.; be full of; such as; make an appointment; be impressed by; so … that … 第三步：连词成句 1. Last weekend, our class attended a voluntary activity in a community senior center nearby. 2. Others chatted with them. 3. They were overjoyed for our coming and the senior center was full of laughter. 4. Besides, we also taught them how to use smartphones in everyday life, such as showing the health QR code, calling a taxi and making an appointment with the doctor. 5. They were impressed by the convenience technology brings. 6. The activity is so meaningful that we all feel rewarded and determined to visit them regularly. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of+ n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】 [高分句型 1] Some of us entertained the elderly by singing Nanyin and doing magic tricks.这句话运用了动名词 结构。 [高分句型 2] Besides, we also taught them how to use smartphones in everyday life, such as showing the health QR code, calling a taxi and making an appointment with the doctor. 这句话运用了“动词+ 疑问词 + to do”结构 和动名词结构。 [高分句型 3] The activity is so meaningful that we all feel rewarded and determined to visit them regularly. 这句 话运用了 so… that …引导的结果状语从句。 【福建省厦门市 2021 届高三下学期第一次质量检测】 46．假定你是李华，昨天下午你班举办了一场主题为“报纸是否会消失”的英语辩论赛。请你为校英语广播站 写一篇报道，内容包括： 1．参赛人员； 2．比赛情况； 3．活动反响。 注意： 1．写作词数应为 80 左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 An English Debate Contest ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Yesterday there was an English debate contest held in our class with the theme of "Will Newspaper Disappear One Day in the Future". Divided into two groups, we made a heated discussion. Group One was in favor of the view that newspaper would disappear. They thought that with the development of computer technology, our life was changing rapidly. The Internet could spread the information more quickly and more easily. Group Two held the opposite view. They argued the newspaper seemed to be much more precise. After that debate, we realized every cion had two sides. No matter what happened, we should learn to think critically and try to find a way that suits us better. 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇报道，介绍昨天下午班级举办的一场主题为“报纸是否会消失” 的英语辩论赛。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1．参赛人员；2．比赛情况；3．活动反响。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） with the theme of ; made a heated discussion ; in favor of ; With the development of computer technology ; think critically 第三步：连词成句 1. Yesterday there was an English debate contest held in our class with the theme of "Will Newspaper Disappear One Day in the Future". 2. Divided into two groups, we made a heated discussion. 3. Group One was in favor of the view that newspaper would disappear. 4. With the development of computer technology, our life was changing rapidly. 5. The Internet could spread the information more quickly and more easily. 6. They argued the newspaper seemed to be much more precise. 7. After that debate, we realized every cion had two sides. 8. No matter what happened, we should learn to think critically and try to find a way that suits us better. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 【点睛】 [高分句型 1]It can keep us updated, which is better than newspaper.（which 引导的非限定性定语从句） [高分句型 2] No matter what happened, we should learn to think critically and try to find a way that suits us better. （No matter what 引导的让步状语从句） 【广东省梅州市 2021 届高三总复习质检试卷（一模）】上周你校组织开展了为期一周的“劳动周”活动。作为 校英文报记者，请你写一篇报道，内容包括: 1. 活动目的； 2. 活动内容（如：农场劳动、义工活动、做家务等）； 3. 你的收获。 注意：1.写作词数应为 80 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：劳动周 Labor Week 【答案】Last week our school carried out a Labor Week activity, aiming to raise the students' awareness of the significance of labor and arouse our passion for labor. The activity lasted for one week. Firstly, our school organized us students to work in the nearby farm. The task involved planting trees, weeding, and watering vegetable. What's more, we were asked to participate in some voluntary work after class, such as helping the elder do the cleaning. Besides, we shared housework with our parents, relieving their burden. Through this activity, we have not only realized the value of labor but also learned to respect all laborers. Meanwhile, our physical health has been greatly improved. 【解析】 本篇书面表达是一篇记叙文，要求考生为上周学校组织开展的“劳动周”活动写一篇报道。 第一步：审题 体裁：记叙文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量现在完成时。 结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 介绍活动目的； 2. 介绍活动内容（如：农场劳动、义工活动、做家务等）； 3. 说明你的收获。 第二步：列提纲（重点词组） raise the students' awareness of the significance of labor; arouse our passion for labor; last for one week; work in the nearby farm; participate in some voluntary work; help the elder do the cleaning; share housework with our parents; realize the value of labor; respect all laborers 第三步：连词成句 1.Last week our school carried out a Labor Week activity, aiming to raise the students' awareness of the significance of labor and arouse our passion for labor. 2.The activity lasted for one week. 3.Firstly, our school organized us students to work in the nearby farm. 4.The task involved planting trees, weeding, and watering vegetable. 5.What's more, we were asked to participate in some voluntary work after class, such as helping the elder do the cleaning. 6.Besides, we shared housework with our parents, relieving their burden. 7.Through this activity, we have not only realized the value of labor but also learned to respect all laborers. 8.Meanwhile, our physical health has been greatly improved. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly/First 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, not only…but (also) 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】 [高分句型 1]Last week our school carried out a Labor Week activity, aiming to raise the students' awareness of the significance of labor and arouse our passion for labor.（现在分词作状语） [高分句型 2]Through this activity, we have not only realized the value of labor but also learned to respect all laborers.（not only…but also…固定句式） 【河北省保定市 2020-2021 学年高三上学期期末】假定你是李华，上星期天你班组织了一次环城骑自行车活 动。请你为班里的英语角写一篇短文介绍这次活动，内容包括： 1．活动的目的和意义； 2．同学们的体验和感受； 3．同学们的期许。 注意：1．词数 80 左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 Go cycling ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Go cycling Last Sunday, we participated in a memorable cycling around our city. In this activity all of us felt relaxed and had great fun. Apart from this, we fully realized the significance of the cycling, which is not only good to our body building but also very environmentally friendly. What’s more, this activity deepens our friendship and helps us understand each other better. So we all expect that we can take part in more such kind of activities in future. 【解析】 本篇书面表达是一篇记叙文，要求考生为班里的英语角写一篇短文介绍一次班级组织的环城骑自行车活动。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。 结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 介绍活动的目的和意义； 2. 说明同学们的体验和感受; 3. 说明同学们的期许。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） memorable cycling around our city; have great fun; the significance of the cycling; our body building; environmentally friendly; deepen our friendship; in future 第三步：连词成句 1.Last Sunday, we participated in a memorable cycling around our city. 2. In this activity all of us felt relaxed and had great fun. 3. Apart from this, we fully realized the significance of the cycling, which is not only good to our body building but also very environmentally friendly. 4.What’s more, this activity deepens our friendship and helps us understand each other better. 5. So we all expect that we can take part in more such kind of activities in future. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表并列补充关系：What is more 2.表因果关系：So 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】 [高分句型 1]Apart from this, we fully realized the significance of the cycling, which is not only good to our body building but also very environmentally friendly. （which 引导的定语从句） [高分句型 2]So we all expect that we can take part in more such kind of activities in future.（that 引导的宾语从句） 【河北省石家庄市 2021 届高三年级第一次质检】假定你是李华，春节里你的美国朋友 Michael 发邮件祝你 新年快乐，并询问你的新年计划，请你给他回邮件，内容包括： 1. 感谢他的祝福； 2. 你的新年计划； 3. 询问他的新年计划。 注意： 1. 词数 80 词左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Dear Michael, Thank you for your best wishes and wish you a happy Chinese New Year, too. Actually I have so many plans in the coming year. My top priority is to make maximum efforts to have an outstanding performance in my college entrance examination. And I am also determined to build up my body by eating less junk food and taking regular exercise. I intend to continue learning French, too. Hopefully I can follow the plan and have a fruitful year. How about you? I can’t wait to know your new year plan. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友 Michael 回封邮件，感谢他的新年祝福，并说明自己的新年 计划，同时询问 Michael 的新年计划。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。 结构：并列式 不分主次、并列平行地叙述事件，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 感谢他的祝福； 2. 你的新年计划； 3. 询问他的新年计划。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） my top priority; make maximum efforts; be determined to do sth.; build up; intend to 第三步：连词成句 1.My top priority is to make maximum efforts to have an outstanding performance in my college entrance examination. 2.And I am also determined to build up my body by eating less junk food and taking regular exercise. 3.I intend to continue learning French, too. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 【点睛】 [高分句型 1] My top priority is to make maximum efforts to have an outstanding performance in my college entrance examination.（不定式作目的状语） [高分句型 2] And I am also determined to build up my body by eating less junk food and taking regular exercise. （动名词作介词宾语） 【河北省唐山市 2021 届高考一模】假定你是李华。你校阅读俱乐部定于下周三举办英文阅读交流会。请你 写封邮件，邀请你校外教 Adam 参加。内容包括： 1.活动时间、地点； 2.活动目的； 3.活动安排。 注意： 1.词数 80 左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Adam, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Possible Version Dear Adam, I am writing to invite you to join in the read-and-share activity by our school reading club. The activity is to be held in the lecture hall at 3 p.m. next Wednesday. It is intended to awake the students’ interest in English literature and broaden their mind. In the activity, the club members will take their turns to share their favorite classic English books and some effective reading methods. We sincerely hope that you can join us and give us some guidance on English reading. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教 Adam 写封邮件，邀请他参加下周三学校阅读俱乐部举办的英 文阅读交流会。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 告知活动时间、地点； 2. 说明活动目的； 3. 介绍活动安排。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） to be held; be intended to do; awake the students' interest; broaden their mind; take their turns to do sth.; effective reading methods; give us some guidance on English reading 第三步：连词成句 1. I am writing to invite you to join in the read-and-share activity by our school reading club. 2. The activity is to be held in the lecture hall at 3 p.m. next Wednesday. 3. It is intended to awake the students’ interest in English literature and broaden their mind. 4. In the activity, the club members will take their turns to share their favorite classic English books and some effective reading methods. 5. We sincerely hope that you can join us and give us some guidance on English reading. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：（供参考）Firstly, Secondly, And then, Finally 2.表并列补充关系：（供参考）Furthermore, In addition, not only…but (also) 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】 [高分句型 1]The activity is to be held in the lecture hall at 3 p.m. next Wednesday. （不定式的被动形式作句子的 表语） [高分句型 2]We sincerely hope that you can join us and give us some guidance on English reading.（that 引导宾语 从句） 【湖北省七市（州）教科研协作体 2021 届高三 3 月联考】植树节来临之际，你校学生会在上周日组织了植 树活动，请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： 1.参加人员：高三师生； 2.活动目的； 3.活动感想。 注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 左右； 2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 【答案】 With Tree Planting Day approaching, Senior Three teachers and students took the chance to plant trees last Sunday. In order to raise students’ awareness of green lifestyle as well as beautify our school, Student Union organized the activity, in which all the teachers and students from Senior Three took an active part. To make the earth a better place to live in, it is the duty of every student to realize the importance of protecting the environment and living a green life. Take action right now, and we can make a difference.92 【解析】 本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇关于学生会在上周日组织的植树活动的报道。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。 结构：总分法 总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.参加人员：高三师生； 2.活动目的； 3.活动感想。 第二步：列提纲（重点词组） in order to；raise awareness of；as well as；take an active part；live a green life. take action；right now；make a difference. 第三步：连词成句 1.With Tree Planting Day approaching, Senior Three teachers and students took the chance to plant trees last Sunday. 2.In order to raise students’ awareness of green lifestyle as well as beautify our school, Student Union organized the activity, in which all the teachers and students from Senior Three took an active part. 3.To make the earth a better place to live in, it is the duty of every student to realize the importance of protecting the environment and living a green life. 4.Take action right now, and we can make a difference. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（仅供参考） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】 [高分句型 1] In order to raise students’ awareness of green lifestyle as well as beautify our school, Student Union organized the activity, in which all the teachers and students from Senior Three took an active part. （in which 引导非限制性定 语从句） [高分句型 2] To make the earth a better place to live in, it is the duty of every student to realize the importance of protecting the environment and living a green life.（it 为形式主语，to realize 为真正的主语） 【辽宁省铁岭市六校 2021 届高三下学期第一次模拟】假设你是李华。你校英语报专栏征稿，主题为临近毕 业的感言。请写一篇文章投稿。具体内容如下： 1 .毕业心情； 2.高中收获； 3.表达决心。 注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 左右； 2.开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Graduation is around the comer. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Graduation is around the corner. However exciting it may seem, I have a sense of loss, for I have to say goodbye to my three years of high school life. Looking back, I've harvested a lot. Not only have I made some true friends who share the same interests with me, but I'v also become better-informed through hard work. In addition, I took part in various after-school activities where I gained many hands-on skills and satisfaction of helping others. University is like a new chapter of my life, where more opportunities lie ahead. Therefore, I am determined to lead a more meaningful life and make myself a well-rounded person. 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生给英语报投稿，表达临近毕业的感言。 第一步：审题 体裁：提纲类作文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时。 结构：总分总法 要求： 1 .毕业心情； 2.高中收获； 3.表达决心。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） a sense of；say goodbye to ；share the same interests with；take part in；lie ahead；lead a more meaningful life 第三步：连词成句 1. However exciting it may seem, I have a sense of loss, for I have to say goodbye to my three years of high school life. 2.Looking back, I've harvested a lot. 3.Not only have I made some true friends who share the same interests with me, but I'v also become better-informed through hard work. 4. In addition, I took part in various after-school activities where I gained many hands-on skills and satisfaction of helping others. 5.University is like a new chapter of my life, where more opportunities lie ahead. 6.Therefore, I am determined to lead a more meaningful life and make myself a well-rounded person. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表并列补充关系：In addition, not only…but (also) 2.表因果关系：Therefore 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 【点睛】 [高分句型 1] However exciting it may seem, I have a sense of loss, for I have to say goodbye to my three years of high school life.(however 引导让步状语从句) [高分句型 2] Not only have I made some true friends who share the same interests with me, but I'v also become better-informed through hard work.(not only 置于句首，全句用部分倒装，who 引导定语从句) [高分句型 3] In addition, I took part in various after-school activities where I gained many hands-on skills and satisfaction of helping others.(where 引导定语从句)