2021 年高三二轮复习英语精品资料【讲】
专题 13 概要写作
【考纲解读】
考试大纲 要求 考纲解读
选 材 上 ， 提 供 一 篇
350 词以内的短文，一般
以说明文、议论文和记叙
文为主，要求考生写出一
篇 60 词左右的内容概要
（注意：少于 40 或多于
80 词扣两分）。
概要
写作是一
种“阅读+
写作”的复
合型任务,
测试学生
的阅读理
解、概括归
纳和书面
表达方面
的综合能
力。
写的新语篇，既要做到在结构、衔接和连贯
性等方面与原文保持一致，又要做到简明扼要、
意义完整、结构严密和语句通顺。
【剖析全国高考真题】——预测高考命题方向
概要写作
2021 年命题解读和近年考点再现
【2019·浙江】读后续写(满分 25 分)
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。
Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident
Kids, says, "We've gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict." By giving
kids a lot of praise, parents think they're building their children's confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite.
Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that's insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a
risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents' praise has put them.
Still, don't go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging gas giving too much.
Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for
their accomplishments.
So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If
praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that
deserves a verbal reward." We should especially recognize our children's efforts to push themselves and work hard to
achieve a goal, "says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really
Matters. "One thing to remember is that it's the process not the end product that matters."
Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he's out there every day and playing hard, you
should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also
mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But
whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的)to the amount of effort your
child has put into it.
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【思路点拨】作为概要写作，要注意每段归纳主题句和关键词，然后通过词汇替换，句式转变等多种方式，
改写要点，要注意一定要用自己的语言，不可以完全照搬照抄。然后，添加衔接词，使得逻辑上要点之间能
够通顺、流畅。最后要注意单词拼写不要出现错误，大小写和标点符号也是关键，还要注意字数的控制，不
要少于 40 字或多于 80 字。
【参考范文】
Nowadays, parents tend to offer considerate praise to their children, hoping to boost their confidence, but it
may produce the opposite effect. （ 要 点 1 ） However, no praise from parents also does harm to their
self-confidence. （要点 2） Therefore, experts claim that sincere praise should be given for the process not for
the result. Meanwhile, kids do deserve praise if they strive to do their duty. （要点 3） Anyway, the amount of
praise you have depends on how hard they work. （要点 4）
2017 年高考试题
（2017·浙江卷）概要写作
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。
It’s a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites can all start to look and sound the same.
Nothing will give you the sense of what it will actually be like to live on a college campus(校园) like visiting and
seeing for yourself the dorms, classrooms and athletic equipment and, of course, the students. It seems a little crazy
once senior year hits to find the time to visit college campuses, and it can also be pricey if the schools you are applying
to happen to be more than a car ride away. But keep in mind that you are making a decision about the next four years of
your life, and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right one.
There’s no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area. In fact, a lot of college applications even ask if you have
visited campus, and obviously, if you live across the country that won’t be as much of a possibility, but if you live
nearby, go check it out!
If campus visits aren’t going to happen before you apply, at the very least you should find some time between applying
and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools you’d like to attend. It can save you a lot of heartache if you rule
out now the things that you don’t like about certain campuses, things that you wouldn’t know unless you actually visit.
Now, if time and money are making it impossible, then check out the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive. It’s a
chance to chat online with admissions officers, students, and college counselors (顾问), and it won’t cost you a penny!
You can register for its online college fair at collegeweeklive.com. While visiting an online college fair can’t take the
place of an actual campus visit, it can be a very useful tool that along with all your other research will help you make an
informed decision about which colleges or universities you’d like to attend.
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【答案】It’s really worthwhile to pay a visit to their desired colleges personally before applying. Undoubtedly, students
should visit their local colleges, which may be included in applications. At least, they should visit the school and figure
out its real conditions in advance. For students who are short of money and time, registering for the online college fair
is a good alternative to help them better understand schools.
【解析】本文要求阅读短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要，即用尽可能少的词汇集中展现原材料的
主要思想和观点。这主要是考查学生把握文章主旨大意和段落大意的能力以及总结概括能力，熟练掌握从句、
非谓语动词等语法知识和遣词造句的能力。
1. 要先读懂、读透原作。这是准确再现原文、写好概要的前提。动笔前多读两遍原文，直至弄懂读透。
2. 抓住文中的关键句，确定写作主题。开头 It's a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply 点明了本文主
题；But keep in mind that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life, and do all the research you
can to make sure you are making the right one. There’s no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area.说明了去大
学看看的必要性和可行性；If campus visits aren’t going to happen before you apply, at the very least you should find
some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools you’d like to attend.在时间上提供
了更多选择；if time and money are making it impossible, then check out the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive.
为不能亲自去大学看的学生提供了另外一种方法。
3.拟好提纲。有了提纲，写概要时就会有章法，也不会遗漏原作中的要点。
4.快速成文，反复推敲。按照文章要求和拟好的提纲一气呵成，写完初稿。
5.对照修改润色，再读原文，查看是否漏掉了重要信息或主要内容。用词是否恰当，可有可无的删掉。注意词
类、时态、语态的适当调整。
【点睛】
范文观点明确，重点突出，语言简练，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如定语从句 which may
be included in applications.和 who are short of money and time.动名词 registering online 作主语，显示了很高的驾驭
英语的能力。
【精讲研法】——课堂讲解突破核心考点
概要写作
一．概要写作的步骤 ：
（一）细读每段文章，画主题句，圈关键词，辨别主次信息
在阅读原文时，首先找到该段的主题句或中心句，并圈出重点信息词汇，分清主要信息和次要信息，
把修饰成分、细节内容、举例说明等次要信息删掉。
（二）用自己的语言，写出该段要点
概要写作要求学生用自己的语言准确地转述作者的要点，因此，不要整句抄原文，可以采用以下表
达方式：
1.替换法：同义词替换；单词替换短语；短语替换句子等
2.转换法：词性转换；句式转换；语态转换等
3.合并法：把几个信息合并在一个句子中表达；将原文多个简单句整合成一个句子等
（三）选用恰当的衔接词，把每段要点串连成篇
概要写作要求学生有效地使用语句间的连接成分,使所完成的概要逻辑连贯，衔接自然，结构紧凑。
常用的衔接词有：
表递进关系 besides, moreover, furthermore , in addition, what’s more,
what’s worse, worse still
表因果关系 therefore, thus , consequently, due to， owing to， thanks to
表转折关系 however, otherwise, anyway/ anyhow, although，even though
表对比关系 similarly, instead, on the contrary, on the other hand
表时间顺序关系 eventually, finally, gradually , immediately ， afterwards,
meanwhile/ meantime, in the meanwhile/meantime
表总结关系 in a word, in short, in conclusion, in brief, in
summary, in general, to sum up, on the whole
表情感关系 luckily, unfortunately, to one’s great joy/satisfaction/surprise
二．概要写作的注意事项 ：
（一）准确性：对原文信息理解准确，不能乱写
（二）完整性 ：概要是原文的浓缩，涵盖全部要点，不能遗漏
（三）概括性 ：语言精练，概括要点，不能超字数
（四）客观性：忠于原文，不能加自己的观点（以“第三人称”或“无人称”来概括）
【变式演练】
1．（2021·浙江宁波市·高三月考）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。
It is important that you teach your baby to read at an early age. Why? Obviously, being able to read is the basis for
any successful education, so the earlier they start, the better. All too often, parents leave educating their children up to
schools, which probably explains why the United States is currently ranked 18th in its rate of reading and writing.
Teaching your baby to read provides brain exercise and it has also been shown to increase the baby’s IQ because
there is simply no better time in a person’s life for learning than when they are babies. During this time, their brains are
developing rapidly. The sooner they begin to read, the sooner they can begin to learn other subjects. This way, by the
time your children begin school, they will already know what’s being taught, and will be put on the fast track. Maybe
they will even skip a grade down the road. One of the cases was 17-month-old Elizabeth Barrett who drew public’s
attention. She was given a series of words and even sentences that she could read quite well. Her parents had been
reading to her since she was born and had provided her with a very early education.
Reading is the most important thing to teach babies at a young age. It doesn’t have to be stressful or difficult for
your child. Learning can be fun at such an early age, and it can be accomplished so easily that they won’t have to
struggle in order to learn.
If you’re interested in teaching your baby to read，the best way to start is by spending just a few minutes every day.
Flash cards are a helpful tool. Simply show your baby matching picture on the opposite side. There are also videos that
help to teach babies to read. There is no better time to teach your baby to read than the present.
【答案】Teaching your baby to read as young as possible is crucial owing to the necessity of obtaining good education.
(要点一) It needs starting as soon as possible because babies’ intelligence will be improved when their brains develop
fast. (要点二)Important as it is, relaxation and easiness could be brought into the learning process. (要点三)Therefore,
for people keen on teaching babies to read, it is high time to begin with sparing some time regularly with effective
teaching materials. (要点四)
【解析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，为了获得良好的教育，让你的孩子从小就学会阅读是非常重要的。这需要尽
快开始，因为婴儿的智力会随着大脑的快速发展而提高。重要的是，放松和轻松可以被带入学习过程。因此，
对于那些热衷于教宝宝阅读的人来说，现在应该从定期抽出一些时间来阅读有效的教材开始。
1.要点摘录
①It is important that you teach your baby to read at an early age. Why? Obviously, being able to read is the basis for
any successful education, so the earlier they start, the better.
②Teaching your baby to read provides brain exercise and it has also been shown to increase the baby’s IQ because
there is simply no better time in a person’s life for learning than when they are babies.
③Learning can be fun at such an early age, and it can be accomplished so easily that they won’t have to struggle in
order to learn.
④If you’re interested in teaching your baby to read，the best way to start is by spending just a few minutes every day.
⑤There is no better time to teach your baby to read than the present.
2.缜密构思
要点二和要点三之间形成因果关系，整合四、五要点
3.遣词造句
①Teaching your baby to read as young as possible is crucial owing to the necessity of obtaining good education.
②It needs starting as soon as possible because babies’ intelligence will be improved when their brains develop fast.
③Important as it is, relaxation and easiness could be brought into the learning process.
④Therefore, for people keen on teaching babies to read, it is high time to begin with sparing some time regularly with
effective teaching materials.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1]
Teaching your baby to read as young as possible is crucial owing to the necessity of obtaining good education.
（teaching 为动名词作主语，用一个简单句总结了原文第一段的内容）
[高分句型 2]
Important as it is, relaxation and easiness could be brought into the learning process.（用 as 引导让步状语从句，总结
文章第三段的内容）
2．（2021·浙江宁波市·镇海中学高三月考）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。
Parents always want the best for their children and giving them; the best education is always on top of the list. But
if you think education is all they need, maybe you should think twice. Sure, you learn a lot of things in school, but there
are important lessons and skills you will need in life that one can only learn at home. Therefore, teaching the children to
do household chores is very helpful in their growth. Most families nowadays hire housemaids to do the chores, so
children don’t get to experience doing it anymore. But studies argue that it’s still necessary to let children do them.
Helping at home can be a training place for your children to whatever responsibilities they may have in the future.
By doing so, they can learn what might be of their advantage when they grow up. “Performing chores offers kids a
feeling of self-sufficiency, helps them develop a work ethic, is tied to academic success in school, makes them feel
useful and teaches them the importance of helping others and contributing to the greater good.”
Although, most parents can also argue that it is not easy to force their children to do chores. It is a nature for the
children to refuse to do chores when they are told to. But there are ways that can turn household chores into a more
likely activity for the children. First, start them young. This doesn’t mean that you let your children do huge tasks at an
early age. You can gradually increase the level of tasks as they grow old but never ever push them too hard. Second,
appreciate every little achievement. Praise them or give them something. Children love rewards and it drives them to do
better.
Most importantly, let them know that asking them to help-out is not a punishment. Chores should never be used as
a punishment. They might get done in the short term, but the effects won’t last. This approach does not give the child
the feeling of doing something because it is the right thing to do. It only makes them hate chores and hoping out even
more. Chores should be used as a sense of purpose. Explain to them that it is for their benefit and everything they learn
from it is for their advantage.
【答案】Teaching children to do household chores is very helpful in their growth, which can make home a training
place for your children to whatever responsibilities they may have in the future. Although it’s hard to force children to
do chores, there are ways that can turn household chores into a more likely activity for the children. But most
importantly, chores should be used as a sense of purpose instead of a punishment.
【解析】
本文是一篇议论文。文章主要论述了让孩子学做家务对于孩子成长的重要性，它可以培养孩子的责任心，同时，
要运用合理的方式鼓励孩子学做家务，而不是将做家务作为惩罚，要让做家务成为一种使命感。
1.要点摘录
①Therefore, teaching the children to do household chores is very helpful in their growth.
②Helping at home can be a training place for your children to whatever responsibilities they may have in the future.
③Although, most parents can also argue that it is not easy to force their children to do chores.
④But there are ways that can turn household chores into a more likely activity for the children.
⑤Most importantly, let them know that asking them to help-out is not a punishment.
⑥Chores should be used as a sense of purpose.
2.缜密构思
将第①、②两个要点进行整合；将第③、④两个要点进行整合；将第⑤、⑥两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
Teaching children to do household chores is very helpful in their growth, which can make home a training place for
your children to whatever responsibilities they may have in the future.
Although it’s hard to force children to do chores, there are ways that can turn household chores into a more likely
activity for the children.
But most importantly, chores should be used as a sense of purpose instead of a punishment.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] Teaching children to do household chores is very helpful in their growth, which can make home a training
place for your children to whatever responsibilities they may have in the future.运用一个复杂的主从复合句对原文第
一段和第二段进行了概括。其中 which 引导的非限制性定语从句等表达高级。
[高分句型 2]：Although it’s hard to force children to do chores, there are ways that can turn household chores into a
more likely activity for the children. 用 although 引导让步状语从句对第三段进行了概括，且句中“that”引导定语从
句修饰先行词“ways”，表达非常高级。
3．（2021·上海杨浦区·高三期末）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main
point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
What Is Zero Waste?
The goal of the “zero waste” movement is to get rid of all waste from products. “Zero waste” means using every
part of a product. Today, the zero waste idea can be found everywhere from food to fashion.
Creating a zero waste restaurant is a challenge. It is very difficult to use every part of produce and leave nothing
behind. Creating a soup from unused ingredients is a popular way to use up extra food items. Other ways are more
advanced. Some restaurants use coffee grounds（咖啡渣）to flavor dishes. Some cooks also crush shrimp shells and
reuse them in sauces. While it’s challenging, zero waste restaurants appear to be on the rise.
In the fashion industry, zero waste isn’t a new idea. But in today’s world of fast fashion, zero waste is growing
more popular. Usually, cutting cloth creates lots of waste. In zero waste fashion, designers try to avoid this. One way to
do so is by adding these extra pieces of cloth to the final design. Another way is to design clothing without wasteful
cuts.
Beyond restaurants and fashion, there are many other possibilities for zero waste products. All restaurants need
utensils（器皿）. Bakey’s is a company that is developing edible（可食用的）utensils. After using them, you can eat them!
Their spoons are made of flour and come in all kinds of flavors. While these spoons are not hard enough to cut meat,
they are perfect for rice dishes. Meanwhile, Air New Zealand is experimenting with edible coffee cups that are made by
the company Twice. They have already introduced a line of flavored cups. After you finish your coffee, you eat the cup,
just like a cookie!
Whether products are made to be edible or reusable, hopefully the movement will help reduce waste all over the
world.
【答案】Zero waste means eliminating all the wastes from a product and the movement is gaining popularity. Some
restaurants are using creative ways to use unused ingredients or food leftovers. Fashion designers either avoid
unnecessarily cutting cloth or finding new uses for extra cuts. Besides, Many companies are creating edible products
especially utensils. Hopefully, zero waste campaign can help reduce waste worldwide.
【解析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章讲述了什么是零浪费。零浪费意味着从一个产品中消除所有的浪费，这个运动越来越
流行。一些餐馆正在创造性地使用未使用的配料或食物残羹剩饭。时装设计师要么避免不必要的裁剪布料，要
么寻找额外布料的新用途。此外，许多公司正在创造食用产品，特别是餐具。希望零浪费运动可以帮助减少全
球的废物。
1 要点摘录
1）“Zero waste” means using every part of a product. Today, the zero waste idea can be found everywhere from food to
fashion.
2）Some restaurants use coffee grounds（咖啡渣）to flavor dishes. Some cooks also crush shrimp shells and reuse them
in sauces. While it’s challenging, zero waste restaurants appear to be on the rise.
3）One way to do so is by adding these extra pieces of cloth to the final design. Another way is to design clothing
without wasteful cuts.
4）Beyond restaurants and fashion, there are many other possibilities for zero waste products.
5）Whether products are made to be edible or reusable, hopefully the movement will help reduce waste all over the
world.
2.缜密构思
将第 1、2、3、4、5 五个要点分别概括。
3.遣词造句
Zero waste means eliminating all the wastes from a product and the movement is gaining popularity.
Some restaurants are using creative ways to use unused ingredients or food leftovers.
Fashion designers either avoid unnecessarily cutting cloth or finding new uses for extra cuts. Besides, Many companies
are creating edible products especially utensils.
Hopefully, zero waste campaign can help reduce waste worldwide.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] Some restaurants are using creative ways to use unused ingredients or food leftovers.运用动词不定式作
定语修饰 way，对第二段进行概括。
[高分句型 2]：Fashion designers either avoid unnecessarily cutting cloth or finding new uses for extra cuts.用 avoid 加
动名词作宾语，用 either …or 连接并列成分，对第三段进行概括，表达非常高级。
4．（2021·上海长宁区·高三一模）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main
point(s)of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
If you’re like most of the world, you make time for following friends on social media. That is not a bad thing at all.
Positive posting and communication can help improve your confidence and sense of connection to others. It can be
surprisingly easy, though, to unconsciously slip into less healthful behavior on social media, and that can lead to
anxiety and depression. New research has identified which habits can lead to troubles.
Do you feel jealous every time you read on social media about your cousin’s beautiful new home or you boss’
exciting European vacation？ “Surveillance” of those you know in order to get an inside look of their material success
is a potentially destructive behavior, according to researchers at the University of Missouri. Measuring material or
lifestyle achievements of someone you know can lead to negative feelings, and can easily lead you to create tension in a
relationship where there was none.
A second study by the University of Missouri found that people who post often- about anything and everything
they are doing- experience more troubles in their marriages and romantic relationships than those who don’t post about
their lives in detail. Another study by researchers at Boston University also found that heavy social media users are
32% more likely to think about leaving their husbands or wives.
This is most likely because over-sharing your life with others by direct messaging and posting images can create
relationship conflict. Not only are you potentially developing bonds with new people, but also that bonding may deepen
and affect your own relationship, according to the study of a doctoral student, Russell Clayton.
【答案】It’s normal to follow others on social media. Positive behaviors on it help improve your confidence and sense
of connection to others while inappropriate behaviors may make you feel anxious and depressed. Reading too much of
others’ material success may cause negative feelings and over-sharing your life with others may also create relationship
conflicts.
【解析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，在社交媒体上关注别人很正常。积极的行为有助于提高你的信心和与他人的
联系，而不恰当的行为会让你感到焦虑和抑郁。过多地阅读别人的物质成就可能会导致消极的感觉，过多地与
他人分享你的生活也可能会造成关系冲突。
1.要点摘录
①If you’re like most of the world, you make time for following friends on social media. That is not a bad thing at all.
②Positive posting and communication can help improve your confidence and sense of connection to others. It can be
surprisingly easy, though, to unconsciously slip into less healthful behavior on social media, and that can lead to
anxiety and depression.
③Measuring material or lifestyle achievements of someone you know can lead to negative feelings, and can easily lead
you to create tension in a relationship where there was none. This is most likely because over-sharing your life with
others by direct messaging and posting images can create relationship conflict.
2.缜密构思 将第 1 个要点进行总说，将第 2、3 两个要点进行分说。
3.遣词造句
It’s normal to follow others on social media.
Positive behaviors on it help improve your confidence and sense of connection to others while inappropriate behaviors
ma make you feel anxious and depressed.
Reading too much of others’ material success may cause negative feelings and over-sharing your life with others may
also create relationship conflicts.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] Positive behaviors on it help improve your confidence and sense of connection to others while
inappropriate behaviors ma make you feel anxious and depressed.运用 while 连接并列句，表示前后的对比，对原文
第一段进行了概括。
[高分句型 2] Reading too much of others’ material success may cause negative feelings and over-sharing your life with
others may also create relationship conflicts.运用了动名词短语作主语，对第二段和第四段进行了概括。
5．（2021·上海浦东新区·高三一模）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main
point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Solving the Problem of E-Waste
One of the problems damaging our planet is the number of things we throw away. A more recent addition to the list
of things we chuck away is e-waste - electronic items that are broken and not recycled.
Tonnes of televisions, phones, and other electronic equipment are discarded chiefly because we lack the skills to
repair them. Fortunately, now solutions are being found to give e-waste a new life.
There's a growing trend for repair events and clubs which could be part of a solution to the growing amount of
electrical and electronic junk. A Restart Project in London, is one that many found around the world. One of its
volunteers, Francesco Calo, said that "this project allows you to reduce waste, extend the life of objects, and it helps
people who cannot afford to get rid of items that have developed a fault.
As many electrical items contain valuable metals, another idea is e-waste mining. An experiment at the University
of New South Wales involves extracting these materials from electronic appliances. It's thought that doing this could be
more profitable than traditional mining.
These projects make total sense --- collections of e-waste for recycling are depressing or even decreasing"
according to Ruediger Kuehr, of the United Nations University. And in countries where there is no laws, much of it just
gets dumped. However, the European Union, for example, is trying to tackle the problem by insisting manufacturers
have to make appliances longer-lasting and will have to supply spare parts for machines for up to 10 years.
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【答案】One of the problems destroying our planet is the stuff we throw away, especially broken and not recycled
electronic items. Fortunately, people are finding solutions to give e-waste a new life. Repair events as well as club
could be of help, and e-waste mining is also a new way to deal with the problem of e-waste. Besides, there are even
laws insisting manufacturers make appliances longer-lasting in some countries.
【解析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，破坏人类地球环境的问题之一是我们扔掉的东西太多了。近年来，在我们扔
掉的东西清单上又增加了一项——坏了、无法回收的电子产品。本文介绍一些用来处理电子垃圾问题的新方法。
1 要点摘录
①One of the problems damaging our planet is the number of things we throw away..
② now solutions are being found to give e-waste a new life.
③There's a growing trend for repair events and clubs which could be part of a solution to the growing amount of
electrical and electronic junk.
④As many electrical items contain valuable metals, another idea is e-waste mining.
⑤the European Union, for example, is trying to tackle the problem by insisting manufacturers have to make appliances
longer-lasting
2.缜密构思 将第 1、3 两个要点进行重组，将第 2、3 两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
One of the problems destroying our planet is the stuff we throw away, especially broken and not recycled electronic
items.
Fortunately, People are finding solutions to give e-waste a new life.
Repair events as well as club could be of help, and e-waste mining is also a new ways to deal with the problem of
e-waste.
Besides, there are even laws insisting manufacturers make appliances longer-lasting in some countries.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] One of the problems destroying our planet is the stuff we throw away, especially broken and not recycled
electronic items. 运用一个定语从句对原文第一段进行了概括。
[高分句型 2]： Repair events as well as club could be of help, and e-waste mining is also a new way to deal with the
problem of e-waste. 用并列句对三四段内容进行概括。
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