专题 12 读后续写
读后续写--讲•练•测---练案
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1. 【山东省烟台市 2021 年高考诊断性测试】读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a Saturday in June, 1988. Out of a 16-year-old's early summer boredom, I had set up a tent in our rural yard
and intended to sleep in it, but I stayed in the house to finish watching the Lakers' play-off game. It was almost
midnight and Dad had been asleep upstairs for hours when someone knocked at the front door. It never occurred to me
not to answer it.
To my surprise, it was a girl about my age with a bloody cut on her forehead. “Hi. I'm Maria. What's wrong with
you?” I asked her with concern. Awkward and embarrassed, she replied: “I'm Jane. I...”she hesitated and then asked me
carefully, “May I stay here for the night? I'll be off tomorrow morning.” Seeing her uneasiness, I comforted her, “Take
it easy, Jane. Stay with me tonight.” I invited her into the house.
Looking around, Jane appeared to have calmed down. “Let me treat your injury first,” I said and she agreed.
I cleansed and bandaged(包扎) her injured forehead and then gave her some bread and bacon to eat. “Want to
sleep in my tent?” I asked her and she nodded. Having left her in the bathroom, I went to look for another sleeping bag.
When I returned, Jane was seated on the sofa, her face clouded by sadness.
Walking across the dark yard, I accompanied Jane into the tent. We lay down side by side. Seized by curiosity and
concern, I constantly turned over, wondering what had happened to her and how she came here. Jane seemed to have
sensed that and started to speak.
Jane's father died of cancer years before. Her mother did odd cleaning jobs to raise her. Money was tight but her
mother tried to do what she could to satisfy Jane. Several weeks before, Jane accidentally saw fancy white dress in the
store window, which she fell in love with at first sight. She excitedly told her mother about that, who promised to buy it
as her birthday gift. From then on, Jane was looking forward to it.
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Jane's 16th birthday came but her mother didn't get home until the evening.
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Having told her story, Jane said she regretted being inconsiderate to her mom.
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【答案】Jane’s 16th birthday came but her mother didn’t get home until the evening. Thirsty for the dress, Jane got
extremely disappointed when seeing her mother back empty-handed. She stormed out before her mother could stop her.
Jane walked angrily and aimlessly only to find herself in an unknown place hours later. Worse still, she fell down in the
dark, hurting her forehead. Painful and hungry, she came to realize she shouldn’t have been so willful, but there was
nobody around she could turn to for help. So she had to move on until she saw the light from our house.
Having told her story, Jane said she regretted being inconsiderate to her mom. I kept comforting her until we fell
asleep. When Dad awoke us and was told the whole story the next morning, he said to Jane seriously, “It’s dangerous to
run away from home. Your mom must be anxious about your safety. I’ll drive you home immediately.” After an hour’s
ride, we reached Jane’s home, in front of which stood a worried woman. Jane rushed over and hugged her tightly,
saying tearfully, “Sorry, Mom.” Witnessing this, Dad and I breathed a sigh of relief.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者晚上在户外帐篷里睡觉时，遇到了与母亲赌气离家出走的简，收留了她，
第二天和爸爸送回家，母女和好的故事。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“简的 16 岁生日来了，但她的母亲直到那天晚上才回家。”可知，第一段可描写简因为母亲
没有给自己买喜爱的裙子而生气离家出走，最后来到作者的家里的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“了她的故事后，简说她后悔不体谅她的妈妈”可知，第二段可描写作者安慰简，告知爸爸
简的故事，送简回家，母女和好的经过。
2.续写线索：简与母亲生气——离家出走——来到作者家里——安慰——告知父亲——送回家——母女和好
——感到欣慰
3.词汇激活
行为类
①生气离开：stormed out/go out angrily
②.寻求帮助：turn to for help /ask for help/seek for help
情绪类
①.失望：disappointed/discouraged/frustrated/depressed
②.欣慰：relief/comfort/easy
【点睛】
[高分句型 1]. Thirsty for the dress, Jane got extremely disappointed when seeing her mother back empty-handed. 使用
了形容词短语作伴随状语和状语从句的省略结构
[高分句型 2]. Painful and hungry, she came to realize she shouldn’t have been so willful, but there was nobody around
she could turn to for help.使用了宾语从句和定语从句
[高分句型 3]. After an hour’s ride, we reached Jane’s home, in front of which stood a worried woman.使用了介词+关
系代词引导的定语从句
2. 【辽宁省辽阳市 2021 届高三一模】读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It's a shop I must have walked past a million times before, but have only noticed until now, and have never thought
to enter. It's a little brown brick building with a small window display offering various forgettable items that are of no
interest to me. But I have some extra time today and decide to take a quick look.
The interior (里面) of the shop is cool and dark，and it takes a moment for my eyes to ad- just. A strong rose smell
hangs thickly in the air, which is nearly enough to turn me away. In spite of this, I continue further into the store, eyes
scanning the shelves for anything interesting. Indeed, there are different items, and yet none appeals to me.
“Can I help you?”
I look up to see an elderly woman behind the counter. She looks a little surprised, and I wonder when she last saw
a customer enter her shop.
“Just looking casually,” I reply.
I make a full circle of the place and there is indeed nothing here I wish to purchase. I wonder how the old woman
manages to stay in business. I head towards the door, but pause when I notice a large old book on a wooden stand.
There is no visible title on the well-worn leather cover, and it is locked with a combination lock (密码锁). Beside
the book, there is a paper with numbers on it. The numbers read: 02-11-32.
I try the lock with the combination, but it does not open. I am now even more curious to discover what lies
between the book's pages. “What is this book about?” I ask the old woman, who has been staring at me quietly the
whole time. “Do you know the combination?”
“I do,” the woman replies, but adds nothing more.
I am annoyed by her response, and I've had enough of this place. I turn to leave and I am almost out the door when
I hear the woman say, “Try your birthday.”
I wander back over to the book. She's crazy, I think. With my index finger, I hit the numbers into place so that they
now show my birth month, day, and year.
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To my astonishment, the lock opens.
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Suddenly, I hear a voice, telling me I'm the shop assistant until I find the next customer.
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【答案】To my astonishment, the lock opens. I pull back the heavy cover and glance through the pages. “This can’t be
right,” I whisper in shock as I realize the book is a biography about me! I look up to question the woman, but she is
gone and the shop suddenly seems different and brighter. The shelves are now filled with all my favorite things. I
wander around the shop again. How did I miss this shop before? I would buy any of these items in it gladly!
Suddenly, I hear a voice, telling me I'm the shop assistant until I find the next customer. I sit behind the counter,
waiting for a customer to come in. However, they all walk past the window as though the place were invisible. The few
that do enter seem uninterested in what I have to sell, or complain that the smell in the air is too strong. Until one day, a
young woman takes an interest in the book. “It won't open,” she notes. “Try your birthday,” I say.
【解析】
本文讲述了主人公光顾了一家平平无奇的商店，就在准备离开的时候，他发现木架上有一本用密码锁锁着的旧
书，旁边的纸片上面还写着一串密码。在尝试用密码打开书失败后，他对这本书产生了更大的兴趣。这时店主
告诉他，真正的密码是他的生日。强烈的好奇心驱使他在密码锁上输入了自己的生日。果然，书打开了！但与
此同时，原来的店主消失了，他成为了新的守店人，直到下一位对书感兴趣的客人出现。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“令我吃惊的是，锁开了。”可知，第一段可描写锁开后我所看到的书中的内容和这一行为
引起的变化。
②由第二段首句内容“突然，我听到一个声音，告诉我我是店员，直到我找到下一个顾客。”可知，第二段可描
写我接替前任成为守店员后的工作和等待来下一个守店员的过程。
2.续写线索：打开书——店主消失——周围的变化——成为守店人——等待下一个顾客
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.注意到：noticed/see
②.看一看：take a quick look/have a look
情绪类
①.吃惊：surprised/astonished
②.好奇：curious/interested
【点睛】
[高分句型 1]“This can’t be right,” I whisper in shock as I realize the book is a biography about me!（as 引导时间状语
从句）
[高分句型 2]Suddenly, I hear a voice, telling me I'm the shop assistant until I find the next customer.（现在分词短语作
伴随状语、until 引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型 3]However, they all walk past the window as though the place were invisible. (as though 引导方式状语从
句)
3. 【江苏等八省市新高考 2021 届高三模拟试题】读后续写
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jenny was a bright-eyed，pretty five-year-old girl. One day when she and her mother were checking out at the
grocery store，Jenny saw a plastic pearl necklace priced at $2. 50. How she wanted that necklace，and when she asked
her mother if she would buy it for her，her mother said，“Well，it is a pretty necklace，but it costs an awful lot of money.
After all，I’ll buy you the necklace，and when we get home we can make up a list of chores that you can do to pay for
the necklace. And don’t forget that for your birthday，Grandma just might give you a whole dollar bill，too. Okay？”
Jenny agreed，and her mother bought the pearl necklace for her.
Jenny worked on her chores very hard every day，and sure enough，her grandma gave her a brand-new dollar bill
for her birthday. Soon Jenny had paid off the pearls. How Jenny loved those pearls！She wore them everywhere to
kindergarten，bed and when she went out with her mother to run errands (差事)．The only time she didn’t wear them
was in the shower. Her mother had told her that they would turn her neck green!
Jenny had a very loving Daddy. When Jenny went to bed，he would get up from his favorite chair every night and
read Jenny her favorite story.
One night when he finished the story，he said，“Jenny，do you love me？”
“Oh yes，Daddy，you know I love you，” the little girl said.
“Well，then，give me your pearls. ”
“Oh！Daddy，not my pearls！” Jenny refused. “But you can have Rosy，my favorite doll. Remember her? You gave
her to me last year for my birthday. And you can have her tea party outfit，too. Okay？”
“Oh no，darling，that’s okay. ” Her father brushed her cheek with a kiss. “Good night，little one. ”
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2．至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：
A week later，her father once again asked Jenny after her story.
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Paragraph 2：
Several days later，when Jenny’s father came in to read her a story as usual，he was surprised to find
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【答案】 Possible version:
A week later，her father once again asked Jenny after her story. “Do you love me，Jenny？” “Oh yes，Daddy，
you know I love you. ” “Well，then，give me your pearls. ” “Daddy，why must you ask for the pearls？” Jenny refused
again，“Not only did I finish all those chores，but also I spent the dollar bill given for my birthday just to pay for it. ”
They both fell into silence. Then her father smiled，comforting her with a warm hug. “That’s okay，darling. Good night，
my little one. ”
Several days later，when Jenny’s father came in to read her a story as usual，he was surprised to find something
under the story book，which turned out to be the necklace. “Daddy，now you can have it. ”Jenny raised her head，“You
know，I love you. ” Her father was moved beyond words. Slowly，he pulled something out of his pocket. It was a pretty
necklace with real pearls shining. “The more you are willing to give，the more you are likely to receive. That’s the real
meaning of sharing and giving. ” Her father helped Jenny put on pearls. “You know，I love you，little one. ”
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了珍妮在和妈妈逛街时看上了一条仿制的珍珠项链，她很喜欢，通过自己作杂务
付清了珍珠项链的钱，珍妮每天都戴着，一天晚上，爸爸给珍妮讲完故事后，问珍妮爱不爱自己，如果爱的话，
就把仿制的珍珠项链给他，珍妮拒绝了。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一周后，她的父亲讲完故事后再次问珍妮。”可知，第一段可描写珍妮爸爸再次问珍妮爱
不爱自己，如果爱的话，就把仿制的珍珠项链给他，珍妮再次拒绝了。
②由第二段首句内容“几天后，当珍妮的父亲像往常一样进来给她读故事时，他惊讶地发现”可知，第二段可描
写珍妮把仿制的珍珠项链给了爸爸，爸爸很感动，给了珍妮一条真的珍珠项链。
2.续写线索：询问——拒绝——安慰——给予——感动——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①要求：ask for / want
②拒绝：refused / turned down
③安慰：comforting / consoling
情绪类
感动：moved / touched
【点睛】
[高分句型 1]. Not only did I finish all those chores，but also I spent the dollar bill given for my birthday just to pay for
it.（Not only 置于句首，使用部分倒装结构）
[高分句型 2]. Then her father smiled，comforting her with a warm hug.（用了现在分词短语作状语）
[高分句型 3]. Several days later，when Jenny’s father came in to read her a story as usual，he was surprised to find
something under the story book，which turned out to be the necklace.（用了由 which 引导的非限制性定语从句）
4. 【福建省莆田市 2021 届高中毕业班下学期（3 月）第二次教学质量检测】读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once upon a time the colors of the world started to quarrel. All claimed that they were the best. They most
important. The most useful. The favorite.
Green said, “Clearly I am the most important .I am the sign of life and of hope. I was chosen for grass, trees and
leaves. Without me, all animals would die.”
Blue interrupted: “You only think about the earth but consider the sky and the sea. It is the water that is the basis of
life. The sky gives space and peace. Without my peace, you would all be nothing.”
Yellow chuckled, “You are all so serious. I bring laughter and warmth into the world. The sun is yellow, the moon
is yellow, the stars are yellow .Every time you look at a sunflower, the whole world starts to smile. Without me there
would be no fun.”
Orange started next. “I am the color of health and strength .I am precious for I serve the needs of human life. I
carry the most important vitamins. When I fill the sky at sunrise or sunset, my beauty is so striking that no one gives
another thought to any of you.”
Then Red shouted out, “I am the ruler of all of you. I bring fire into the blood. I am the color of passion and of
love. Without me, the earth would be as empty as the moon.”
Purple rose up to his full height, “I am the color of royalty and power. Kings, chiefs, and bishops have always
chosen me for I am the sign of authority and wisdom. People do not question me! They listen and obey.”
Finally, Indigo spoke, “Think of me. I am the color of silence. You hardly notice me, but without me you all
become superficial. I represent thought and reflection, twilight and deep water.”
And so the colors went on boasting，each convinced of his or her own superiority. Their quarreling became louder
and louder.
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位作答。
Suddenly there was a flash of bright lightening, thunder rolling and booming.
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Doing as they were told, the colors united and joined hands.
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【答案】Para 1:
Suddenly there was a flash of bright lightening, thunder rolling and booming. Rain started to pour down
relentlessly. The quarrel came to an abrupt stop, panic enveloping these colors. They crouched down in fear, drawing
close to one another for comfort. Right then, a voice pierced through the midst of the clamor,” You foolish colors,
fighting amongst yourselves, each trying to dominate the rest. Don’t you know that you were each made for a special
purpose, unique and different? Join hands with one another.”
Para 2:
Doing as they were told, the colors united and joined hands. Together they formed a rainbow across the
sky ,driving off the thunder and the rain .The run slowly rose with rays of golden light scattering on the earth. All the
colors smiled at each other, brightening the whole world, with hopeful green, peaceful blue, cheerful yellow, energetic
orange, passionate red, powerful purple and thoughtful indigo. From then on, whenever a good rain washes the world, a
rainbow will appear in the sky ,reminding people the unity can work miracle.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了从前，世界上的各种颜色进行过一次争吵。所有人都声称自己是最好的。他们
最重要的、最有用的和最受人喜欢的，且各自陈述了理由，最后突然打起了雷，一个声音说他们都是独一无二
的，应该彼此携手。最后颜色们按照声音说的那样团结在一起，手牵手。它们一起形成了一道横跨天空的彩虹，
驱散了雷声和雨水。金色的光芒慢慢地洒向大地。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“突然，一道闪电闪过，雷声隆隆，轰隆轰隆。”可知，第一段可描写是什么终止了颜色们
的争吵。
②由第二段首句内容“颜色们按照声音说的那样团结在一起，手牵手。”可知，第二段可描写颜色听了这个声音
的话后，团结在一起形成了美丽的彩虹。
2.续写线索：颜色争吵——开始打雷——有一个声音告诉颜色它们都很特别——颜色团结在一起——形成一道
彩虹
3.词汇激活
行为类
突然停止：come to an abrupt stop/ break off
靠近：draw close to / get close to
驱散：drive off / dispel
情绪类
无情：relentlessly / heartless
愚蠢：foolish / stupid
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] Don’t you know that you were each made for a special purpose, unique and different? (运用了 that 引导
宾语从句)
[高分句型 2] Together they formed a rainbow across the sky, driving off the thunder and the rain. (运用了现在分词作
状语)
5. 【河北省 2021 届高三二轮复习联考（一）新高考 II 卷】读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。
Far up in the mountains of Canada, there is an old abandoned wooden house. Once it was occupied by a young
couple who wanted to distance themselves from the troublesome affairs of this modern world. Here they were miles
away from the nearest town. Bob, the husband, made the occasional trip into town to buy supplies whereas Jan, his wife,
spent her free time by the fire, sewing. Their life was simply peaceful. Then, one midwinter’s day, Jan woke up from
bed with a strange ache in her bones. Putting it down to overwork, Bob asked her to bed and made sure she rested.
Though Jan was impatient to get to her chores (杂活), Bob comforted her, “Relax, Sugar. You’re overdoing things. All
these chores will be here when you recover.”
However, Jan seemed to be getting worse instead of recovering. By evening, she was running a high fever and in
greater pain. In spite of his best efforts, Bob could not manage to ease her suffering. And then suddenly, she started to
get into unconsciousness. It was then obvious that she was seriously ill. What could Bob do? He had no experience in
treating the sick and Jan was getting worse by the minute. He knew that there was an old doctor in town but he lived
three miles away, downhill. Heavy and fat, there was no way the doctor could make it up to their house.
Something had to be done quickly! Bob racked his brains but had no idea at all. The only thing left to do was to go
to the doctor. In Jan’s condition, she could never walk that far in the waist-deep snow. Bob would have to carry her!
Bob searched his mind for a way to move poor, sick Jan. Then, he remembered. He had once made a sledge (雪橇)
so that they could ride together over the mountain. They never got around to using it though, because the whole
mountain was thickly covered with rocks and trees. He had never found a safe way down.
However, he decided to have a try in spite of those risks.
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At last, the town came into view but the sledge gave strange sounds.
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【答案】However, he decided to have a try in spite of those risks. He found the sledge. Then, Bob gently carried Jan
into the sledge, got in the front, and pushed off. He drove the sledge with all his heart. Trees came up in front of him
quickly by his side. He controlled the sledge carefully not to touch any of them. All he could do was not to scream as
falling over and hitting seemed so near.
At last, the town came into view but the sledge gave strange sounds. Barely slowing down, he went through the
icy streets, avoiding anything that could met the sledge. And the sledge only stopped as he neared the doctor's house.
The sledge, survived through the journey, broke down finally. Bob picked up his Jan eagerly and gently and made his
way into the doctor's house. Luckily, Jan recovered fully from her fever. Love always makes miracles.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一对年轻夫妻住在加拿大遥远的山区的一座废弃的老木屋里。一天，妻子简感
到骨头怪痛，丈夫鲍勃认为是劳累过度造成的，让简好好休息，然而简的病情变得更糟了。鲍勃思考如何把简
带去 3 英里外的镇上看医生。终于，经过艰辛的努力，鲍勃用雪橇把简带去看了医生。简完全从发烧中恢复过
来了。这就是爱创造的奇迹。
1.段落续写：
①.由第一段首句内容“然而，他决定不顾这些风险试一试。”可知，第一段可描写鲍勃用雪橇带着简去镇上求医
的艰辛过程。
②.由第二段首句内容“最后，小镇映入眼帘，但雪橇发出奇怪的声音。”可知，第二段可描写他们到了医生那里，
简完全从发烧中恢复过来了。
2.续写线索：找到雪橇——驾驶雪橇——到达镇上——雪橇报废——看了医生——简恢复了
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.前往某处：make one’s way to/walk towards/ sheer off
②.康复：recover from/ come to life
情绪类
①.一心一意：with all one’s heart/ devotedly/ heart and soul
②.焦虑地：eagerly/ anxiously/ worriedly
【点睛】
[高分句型 1]. All he could do was not to scream as falling over and hitting seemed so near.（使用了省略了 that 引导
的定语从句）
[高分句型 2]. Barely slowing down, he went through the icy streets, avoiding anything that could meet the sledge.（使
用了现在分词作状语和由 that 引导的定语从句）
[高分句型 3]. Luckily, Jan recovered fully from her fever.（使用了副词放句首，作状语）
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