专题05 应用文写作（第04期）-2021届高三江苏新高考英语好题速递分项汇编（解析版）

专题 05 应用文写作（第 04 期）-2021 届高三江苏新高考英语好题速递分项汇编 【江苏省连云港市 2021 届高三 1 月适应性演练模拟】 假如你是李华，你的笔友 Mike 对中国的春节很感兴趣，请你给他写一封回信，介绍相关情况，内容如下： 1. 春节的意义； 2. 春节期间的传统习俗； 3. 欢迎 Mike 来中国体验。 注意：1. 字数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mike, I am very glad to know you are interested in the Spring Festival of China. The Spring Festival is to Chinese people what Christmas is to you. It falls on the first day of lunar new year. Most of us will try our best to return home for a family reunion. On the New Year Eve, we will enjoy different kinds of food, especially Jiaozi and Tangyuan, meaning good luck. Besides, we will appreciate beautiful fireworks. I sincerely invite you to join us this year. I’m sure you will have an unforgettable experience. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给笔友 Mike 写封信，给他介绍中国的春节。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 春节的意义； 2. 春节期间的传统习俗； 3. 欢迎 Mike 来中国体验。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） be interested in; the Spring Festival; fall on; try one’s best to do sth.; family reunion; different kinds of; appreciate; invite sb. to do sth.; unforgettable 第三步：连词成句 1. I am very glad to know you are interested in the Spring Festival of China. 2. The Spring Festival is to Chinese people what Christmas is to you. 3. It falls on the first day of lunar new year. 4. Most of us will try our best to return home for a family reunion. 5. On the New Year Eve, we will enjoy different kinds of food, especially Jiaozi and Tangyuan, meaning good luck. 6. Besides, we will appreciate beautiful fireworks. 7. I sincerely invite you to join us this year. 8. I’m sure you will have an unforgettable experience. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 表并列补充关系：Besides 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】 [高分句型 1] On the New Year Eve, we will enjoy different kinds of food, especially Jiaozi and Tangyuan, meaning good luck. (运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型 2] I’m sure you will have an unforgettable experience. (运用了省略关系词的宾语从句) 【江苏省 2020-2021 学年百校联考高三第二次考试】 假定你是李华，你校正在举办英语作文竞赛。请你以“Music and Me”为题，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 音乐对你的重要性； 2. 你喜欢的音乐类型及原因。 注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Music and Me ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Music and Me I like sharing the saying with others that music is to me what air is to life. I always think music is the most beautiful language in the world. It is an important part of my life, which offers me energy and power when I am busy studying or get stuck in difficulties. Among so much music, I like pop music most. I can listen to it anywhere in the world. It makes me happy when I feel upset and helps me face my challenges with a peaceful mind. Most importantly, I feel confident when singing a pop song. 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“Music and Me”为题，写一篇短文投稿。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 音乐对你的重要性； 2. 你喜欢的音乐类型及原因。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） share sth. with sb.; part of; offer sb. sth.; be busy doing; be stuck in; help sb. do sth. 第三步：连词成句 1. I like sharing the saying with others that music is to me what air is to life. 2. It is an important part of my life, which offers me energy and power when I am busy studying or get stuck in difficulties. 3. It makes me happy when I feel upset and helps me face my challenges with a peaceful mind. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】 [高分句型 1]：I like sharing the saying with others that music is to me what air is to life.这句话运用了名词性从 句。 [高分句型 2]：It is an important part of my life, which offers me energy and power when I am busy studying or get stuck in difficulties.这句话运用了关系代词 which 引导的非限定性定语从句。 [高分句型 3]：Most importantly, I feel confident when singing a pop song.这句话运用了现在分词作状语。 【江苏省苏州市八校联盟 2021 届高三第二次适应性检测】假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Chris 听说中国的 太极拳申遗成功了，他对这项独特的中国功夫很感兴趣，请给他回一封电子邮件，为他介绍一下太极拳的 相关信息。内容包括： 1. 太极拳的特点（动作、呼吸等）； 2. 练习的好处。 注意：1.词数 80 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：太极拳 Tai Chi Chuan 联合国教科文组织非物质文化遗产名录 the UNESCO List of Intangible Cultural Heritage Dear Chris, Glad to hear from you! ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________ Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Chris, Glad to hear from you! I’m also thrilled to know Tai Chi Chuan has been included in the UNESCO List of ICH, which means this unique martial art gets global recognition. Having been practiced for centuries, Tai Chi combines slow movements, deep breathing and meditation, representing the traditional Chinese philosophy—harmony. Owing to these features, one can strengthen the body, relieve the pressure and cultivate the mind through practicing Tai Chi. Therefore, I strongly recommend you have a go since you are fascinated by it! Looking forward to your rely! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友 Chris 写封邮件，为他介绍一下太极拳的相关信息。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 太极拳的特点（动作、呼吸等）； 2. 练习的好处。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） thrilled; Tai Chi Chuan; the UNESCO List of Intangible Cultural Heritage; unique martial art; global recognition; for centuries; combine; meditation; philosophy; owing to; strengthen; relieve the pressure; strongly recommend; look forward to 第三步：连词成句 1. I’m also thrilled to know Tai Chi Chuan has been included in the UNESCO List of ICH, which means this unique martial art gets global recognition. 2. Having been practiced for centuries, Tai Chi combines slow movements, deep breathing and meditation, representing the traditional Chinese philosophy—harmony. 3. Owing to these features, one can strengthen the body, relieve the pressure and cultivate the mind through practicing Tai Chi. 4. Therefore, I strongly recommend you have a go since you are fascinated by it! 5. Looking forward to your rely! 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 表因果关系：Therefore 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】 [高分句型 1] I’m also thrilled to know Tai Chi Chuan has been included in the UNESCO List of ICH, which means this unique martial art gets global recognition. (运用了宾语从句和 which 引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型 2] Having been practiced for centuries, Tai Chi combines slow movements, deep breathing and meditation, representing the traditional Chinese philosophy—harmony. (运用了现在分词作状语) 【江苏省苏锡常镇四市 2021 届高三教学情况调研】假定你是李华，星期六晚上学校要放映电影《丝绸之路》 (The Silk Road)，你想请在学校学习的外国朋友 Peter 一起观看。请给他写一封邀请函。内容包括: 要点: 1.时间和地点; 2.简单介绍丝绸之路: 3.建议他先了解相关的历史。 注意: 1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 2.词数 100 词左右: 3.信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, How are you doing recently? ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________- Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter, How are you doing recently? I’m glad to tell you that a film named The Silk Road will be shown at eight p.m. in our school hall this Saturday, so I’m writing to invite you to join us. The Silk Road, dating back to the Han Dynasty, was the most famous trade route connecting China and the western world. It not only promoted the trade of goods but also spread religions and technology between countries. Undoubtedly, it’s a good opportunity to learn about Chinese history. Given that the film is open to the whole school, I advise you to get there earlier and read some relevant history books about it so that you can understand it better. See you then. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生邀请 Peter 一起观看星期六晚上学校放映的电影《丝绸之路》。 第一步: 审题 体裁: 应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构: 总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.时间和地点; 2.简单介绍丝绸之路: 3.建议他先了解相关的历史。 第二步: 列提纲 (重点词组) be glad to；invite to；date back to；advise sb to do 第三步: 连词成句 I’m glad to tell you that a film named The Silk Road will be shown at eight p.m. in our school hall this Saturday, so I’m writing to invite you to join us. The Silk Road, dating back to the Han Dynasty, was the most famous trade route connecting China and the western world. It not only promoted the trade of goods but also spread religions and technology between countries. Undoubtedly, it’s a good opportunity to learn about Chinese history. Given that the film is open to the whole school, I advise you to get there earlier and read some relevant history books about it so that you can understand it better. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词) 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand,while,as for 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步: 润色修改 【点睛】 范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范 文中使用了 not only…but also…的固定句型，如：It not only promoted the trade of goods but also spread religions and technology between countries.使用了 not only…but also…的固定句型，意为“它不仅促进了商品贸易，而 且促进了各国之间宗教和技术的传播。”。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。 另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 【江苏省南京 29 中、南菁中学等四校 2021 届高三 12 月联考】 假如你是李华，是某国际学校的学生会主席。你发现有些同学迫于同伴间的压力，在过生日时经常攀比谁 买的生日礼物好。请你用英语写一封倡议信，发表在你校校园网上，呼吁同学们不要攀比。 内容包括： 1. 互相攀比的危害； 2. 对生日礼物的建议； 3. 向同学们发出倡议。 注意：1. 词数 80 词左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear students, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ The Students’ Union 【答案】Dear students, There is a disturbing trend in our school that some students are forced to spend lots of money buying expensive birthday gifts for their friends. This results from peer pressure. It is really a waste of time and money to compare whose gift is the most fashionable or expensive. In fact, teenagers have many ideas about creative but inexpensive birthday gifts. For example, we can take a cycling trip, which will be for sure a good memory in our life. Therefore, boys and girls, please save your money and use it properly when you are deciding to buy an expensive gift. The Students’ Union 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生一封倡议信，发表在你校校园网上，呼吁同学们不要攀比。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 互相攀比的危害； 2. 对生日礼物的建议； 3. 向同学们发出倡议。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） disturbing; spend lots of money doing sth.; peer pressure; a waste of; fashionable; take a cycling trip; memory; save money; properly; decide to 第三步：连词成句 1. There is a disturbing trend in our school that some students are forced to spend lots of money buying expensive birthday gifts for their friends. 2. This results from peer pressure. 3. It is really a waste of time and money to compare whose gift is the most fashionable or expensive. 4. In fact, teenagers have many ideas about creative but inexpensive birthday gifts. 5. For example, we can take a cycling trip, which will be for sure a good memory in our life. 6. Therefore, boys and girls, please save your money and use it properly when you are deciding to buy an expensive gift. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 表因果关系：Therefore 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】 [高分句型 1] For example, we can take a cycling trip, which will be for sure a good memory in our life. (运用了 which 引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型 2] Therefore, boys and girls, please save your money and use it properly when you are deciding to buy an expensive gift. (运用了 when 引导时间状语从句) 【江苏省南京市六校联合体 2021 届高三上学期 11 月联考】新高考全国卷中题型变化很多，不少学生感到 新作文题型——读后续写（continuation writing）很具挑战性。请你以高三学生李华的身份给外教 Helen 写 一封信，咨询她的建议。内容包括： 1. 写信原因； 2. 题型简介； 3. 你的困难。 注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 【答案】Dear Helen, I’m writing to ask for your advice on my English study. Our new writing task, called “continuation writing”, requires us to write a reasonable ending to an incomplete story we’re given. Obviously, this is a very open-ended task with multiple possibilities. While I enjoy the creativity of this task, I find it challenging to identify the plot points of interest and to give my version the best possible ending. I also have trouble expressing my ideas accurately due to my limited vocabulary. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教 Helen 写一封信，向她咨询如何写好读后续写作文的建议。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。 结构：总分法 要求： 1. 写信原因； 2. 题型简介； 3. 你的困难。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） ask for advice; require sb. to do sth.; open-ended task; challenging; have trouble doing sth.; suggestions; look forward to 第三步：连词成句 1. I’m writing to ask for your advice on my English study. 2. Our new writing task, called “continuation writing”, requires us to write a reasonable ending to an incomplete story we’re given. 3. Obviously, this is a very open-ended task with multiple possibilities. 4. While I enjoy the creativity of this task, I find it challenging to identify the plot points of interest and to give my version the best possible ending. 5. I also have trouble expressing my ideas accurately due to my limited vocabulary. 6. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. 7. Looking forward to your reply. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second（供参考） 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore（供参考） 3.表转折对比关系：while+ clause(从句) 4.表因果关系：Because, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供参考） 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】 [高分句型 1] While I enjoy the creativity of this task, I find it challenging to identify the plot points of interest and to give my version the best possible ending.运用 while 引导让步状语从句。 [高分句型 2] I also have trouble expressing my ideas accurately due to my limited vocabulary.运用动名词短语作宾语。 【江苏省如皋如东丹阳三校 2021 届高三 12 月联考】 随着手机及其他电子设备的普及，“低头族”到处可见，大街上，公交车上……，以年轻人为主，针对这一问 题，请写一篇倡议书，呼吁人们尽量抬起头来…… 注意: 1. 行文连贯流畅； 2. 参考词汇:低头族:phubber 3. 词数:80 词左右 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The mobile phone and other electric devices have been part of our life, bringing us much convenience. However, more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around. Obviously, while people are riding on a bus, crossing the street, or lying on the bed, etc., phubbing can be harmful to their physical health, their eyes in particular. Therefore, I call on everyone to pay more attention to this and hold your heads up to enjoy your surroundings. 【解析】 本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求写一篇倡议书。 第 1 步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇倡议书：随着手机及其他电子设备的普及，“低头族”到处可见，大 街上，公交车上……，以年轻人为主，针对这一问题，请写一篇倡议书，呼吁人们尽量抬起头来……，时 态应为一般现在时。 第 2 步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； phubber（低头族），electric devices（电子设备），convenience （方便），especially（特别是），everywhere（到处），obviously(明显地)及 harmful（有害的）等。 第 3 步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第 4 步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的 整洁美观。 本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭 英语的能力。 【点睛】 范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有 be part of（成 为……的一部分），care about（关心），be harmful to (对……有害)，in particular（尤其），call on（号召）以 及 pay more attention to（关注），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“However, more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around.”，时间状语从句“while people are riding on a bus, crossing the street, or lying on the bed, etc., phubbing can be harmful to their physical health, their eyes in particular.”，非谓语动词“The mobile phone and other electric devices have been part of our life, bringing us much convenience.”及“Therefore, I call on everyone to pay more attention to this and hold your heads up to enjoy your surroundings.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。 【江苏省泰州市 2021 届高三上学期期末】假定你是校英文报记者李华，报纸“Heroes in Harm's Way(身边的 抗疫英雄)”一栏拟介绍你校张医生，请你写一封电子邮件，邀请他接受你的采访，内容包括: 1.写邮件目的； 2.邀请原因； 3.采访计划。 注意: 1.写作词数应为 80 左右； 2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr.Zhang, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________ Yours sincerely 【答案】Dear Mr. Zhang I am Lihua, a reporter for the English Newspaper on campus. I extend a warm invitation for you to be interviewed by our newspaper so that we could carry your story in the “Heroes in Harm’s way” column. Considering your fearless state and cool manners when combating against the daunting virus that rampaged through the nation last year, we could feel your bravery, levelheadedness and professionalism, which will inspire our readers to follow in your footsteps and keep up a high spirit in their own arduous academic pursuit. As for the proceeding of the interview, firstly, you can share what the situation was like in Wuhan last February. Then, what was your biggest challenge and how you conquered it. Finally, what is the biggest lesson for you and what is your blessing for our readers. I do hope you could squeeze time from your busy schedule and make it to the interview. Wish to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely Lihua 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于邀请信，要求考生以校报记者李华的身份，就“Heroes in Harm's Way”这一栏目，写封电子 邮件邀请本校张医生接受采访。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时,少量一般将来时。 结构：点明写信目的——阐述邀请原因——具体的采访规划——盼望应邀之情 要求： 1. 点明邮件目的； 2. 解释邀请原因； 3. 详述采访计划。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） so that；extend a invitation for…；combat against；follow in one’s footsteps；keep up a high spirit；as for；the proceeding of；blessing for；squeeze time from…；hear from…。 第三步：连词成句 1. I extend a warm invitation for you to be interviewed by our newspaper so that we could carry your story in the “Heroes in Harm’s way” column. 2. Considering your fearless state and cool manners when combating against the daunting virus that rampaged through the nation last year, we could feel your bravery, levelheadedness and professionalism, which will inspire our readers to follow in your footsteps and keep up a high spirit in their own arduous academic pursuit. 3. You can share what the situation was like in Wuhan last February. 4. What was your biggest challenge and how you conquered it. 5. What is the biggest lesson for you and what is your blessing for our readers. 6. I do hope you could squeeze time from your busy schedule and make it to the interview. 7. Wish to hear from you soon. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly，then，Finally； 2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition As well as，not only…but (also)， including；（供参考） 3.表转折对比关系：However，On the contrary，but，Although+clause(从句)，In spite of+n/doing，On the one hand…，On the other hand… Some…，while others…，as for， so…that… （供参考） 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考） 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 【点睛】 [高分句型 1] I extend a warm invitation for you to be interviewed by our newspaper so that we could carry your story in the “Heroes in Harm’s way” column.（使用了 so that 引导的目的状语从句） [高分句型 2] Considering your fearless state and cool manners when combating against the daunting virus that rampaged through the nation last year, we could feel your bravery, levelheadedness and professionalism, which will inspire our readers to follow in your footsteps and keep up a high spirit in their own arduous academic pursuit.（使 用了非谓语动词以及 which 引导的非限制性定语从句） [高分句型 3] As for the proceeding of the interview, firstly, you can share what the situation was like in Wuhan last February.（使用了 what 引导的宾语从句） 【江苏省、南京师范大学附属中学、海安中学 2021 届高三 12 月联考】假定你是李华，你的英国 好友 Jim 在申请大学过程中，就专业选择产生了困惑，写信向你求助。请根据以下要点提示，给 Jim 写一 封回信： 1.对 Jim 的困感表示理解； 2.给 Jim 提出建议（至少两条）； 3.表达祝福。 注意：1.词数 80 左右； 2.开头结尾已给出，不包含在字数内； 3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, Knowing that you are faced with the dilemma of deciding on proper college major, I am writing to offer some advice. You must feel as if you were all at sea, which I can, definitely, relate to. Calm down and clear your head. To begin with, list your possible choices and give priority to what you are really interested in. Furthermore, never should you ignore career prospects, which will affect your future employment. Last but not least,seeking advice from your parents makes sense. I hope my advice will be of help and you will choose a desired major. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友 Jim 写封邮件，对他在申请大学过程中，就专业选择产生 的困惑提供建议。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般将来时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.对 Jim 的困感表示理解；2.给 Jim 提出建议（至少两条）；3.表达祝福 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） be faced with; offer some advice; calm down; to begin with; give priority to; are interested in; ignore career prospects; seek advice from; make sense; be of help 第三步：连词成句 1.You must feel as if you were all at sea, which I can, definitely, relate to. 2.Calm down and clear your head. 3.To begin with, list your possible choices and give priority to what you are really interested in. 4.Furthermore, never should you ignore career prospects, which will affect your future employment. 5.Last but not least,seeking advice from your parents makes sense. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考) 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including(供参考) 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… （供参考） 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考） 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 【点睛】 [高分句型 1]Knowing that you are faced with the dilemma of deciding on d proper college major, I am writing to offer some advice.运用了现在分词作状语。 [高分句型 2]Furthermore, never should you ignore career prospects, which will affect your future employment.运 用了非限制性定语从句，和部分倒装。 【江苏省扬州市 2020-2021 学年高三上学期期末考试适应性练习】2020 年 12 月 19 日上午，学校组织全体 同学在电视上观看了嫦娥五号工程月球样本交接仪式，同学们观看后心潮澎湃，倍感自豪，决心认真学习， 今后报效祖国,……。请你为校报英文专栏写一篇新闻报道，内容包括： 1. 观看时间、方式、内容； 2. 同学们的感想。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Students Watching Chang’e 5 Samples Handover ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________ 【答案】Students watching Chang'e 5 samples handed-over All the students in our school watched the live broadcast of Chang'e 5 samples being handed over for research on the morning of 19th December 2020, Saturday. Scientists are reported to carry out the storage, analysis and research of the country's first samples from the moon. Every boy and every girl is inspired and encouraged, feeling proud of our great country. They are determined to work heart and soul from now on and contribute to our motherland in the future. （80 words） 【解析】 本文是一篇应用文，要求写一篇关于嫦娥五号工程月球样本交接仪式的观后感。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 观看时间、方式、内容； 2. 同学们的感想。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） broadcast; hand over; carry out; feel proud of; contribute to 第三步：连词成句 1. All the students in our school watched the live broadcast of Chang’e 5 samples being handed over for research on the morning of 19th December 2020, Saturday. 2. Scientists are reported to carry out the storage, analysis and research of the country's first samples from the moon. 3. Every boy and every girl is inspired and encouraged, feeling proud of our great country. 4. They are determined to work heart and soul from now on and contribute to our motherland in the future. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover（供参考） 2.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but（供参考） 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】 [高分句型 1] Scientists are reported to carry out the storage, analysis and research of the country's first samples from the moon. (运用了被动语态) [高分句型 2] Every boy and every girl is inspired and encouraged, feeling proud of our great country. (运用了现在 分词作状语)