2021届高三英语江苏省全真模拟 读后续写汇编

2021 年高三英语江苏省全真模拟语法填空汇编 2021 年高三英语江苏省全真模拟 1 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Once there was a ship travelling on the tough sea and on the ship there was a pair of couple. All of a sudden, the ship met with an accident and the couple had no choice but to run to the life boat without delay. After reaching there, they realized that there was space only for one person. At that very moment, the husband pushed his wife behind him and jumped onto the lifeboat himself, leaving his wife standing on the sinking ship, shouting something desperately to her husband eyes filled with tears.” The teacher stopped her story-telling and asked her students, “Guys, guess what it was that she shouted.” Most students answered. “I hate you!” After listening to all this reply, the teacher glanced through the whole class again and noticed that there was a boy sitting silently throughout. Then she asked him the same question. The boy answered, “I believe she would have shouted-Take care of our child.” Listening to his remarks, the teacher was surprised and asked the boy doubtfully. “Have you heard of this story before?” Shaking his head, the boy said softly and sadly, “No, I haven’t. But that’s what my mother said to my father before she died of a deadly disease.” Moved and feeling sad, the teacher replied. “Your answer is absolutely right!” Then she continued, “Let’s take up the story. The ship sank eventually and the husband went home and brought up their daughter alone. Many years later after the death of the man, their daughter was tidying up all his belongings when she found his diary. In his diary she found that when her parents were on the ship, her mother had already been diagnosed (诊断) with advanced illness and at the critical moment, the father rushed to the only chance of survival.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 In his diary, the man mentioned he wished to sink to the ocean with his wife but for their daughter he had to live. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ The story was finished and the class was silent. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: In his diary, the man mentioned he wished to sink to the ocean with his wife but for their daughter he had to live. Without him, their baby daughter would become an orphan. After drowning himself in sorrow for a short time, he uplifted himself and learned how to raise baby. Whenever faced with hardships, he would inspire himself with his wife’ words—“Take care of our child.” Seeing the little girl grow into a sunny, pretty girl with double love from both parents, the man knew he made it to keep his promise. The story was finished and the class was silent. Nobody talked or laughed as usual. Instead, it seemed that every student was lost in deep thought, tasting the moving life story. The teacher was sure that the students were reflecting on their replies and that they had understood the moral of the story. Of the Good and Evil in this world, there are hidden secrets behind them. So we should not really focus on the surface and judge anyone without understanding them first. Put yourself in others’ shoes and then you can really understand their behavior. 【解析】 【分析】 这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给文章可知，文章主要讲述了老师在课堂上给学生们讲 了一个故事：故事的大致内容是一对夫妇在海上遇到事故，但是救生艇只能容纳一个人，最 后，丈夫推着身后的妻子，自己跳上了救生艇，留下妻子站在正在下沉的船上，绝望地对着 丈夫喊着什么。老师让学生猜想妻子说了什么，大多数学生的回答是“我恨你！”，但是一 位学生却回答说妻子让丈夫照顾好孩子。老师继续说故事，多年以后，他们的女儿在整理遗 物时发现了父亲的日记，原来母亲已经被诊断出病情严重，在关键时刻，父亲冲向了唯一的 生存机会。 【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：在他的日记中，他提到他希望和妻子一起沉入 大海，但为了他们的女儿，他必须活下去。接下来可以写没有他，他们的宝贝女儿会变成孤 儿。在短暂的悲伤之后，他提升了自己，学会了如何抚养孩子。每当遇到困难时，他都会用 妻子的话激励自己——“照顾好我们的孩子。”看着小女孩成长为一个阳光明媚、漂亮可爱、 受到父母双爱的女孩，这个男人知道他这样做是为了履行自己的诺言。第二段的开头是：故 事讲完了，全班安静下来。接下来可以写没有人像往常一样说话或大笑。相反，每个学生似 乎都陷入了沉思，品味着动人的人生故事。老师确信学生们正在反思他们的回答，并且他们 已经理解了这个故事的寓意。这个世界上的善与恶，背后都隐藏着秘密。所以我们不应该只 关注表面，在不了解任何人之前就对他们进行评判。设身处地为别人着想，你就能真正理解 他们的行为。 【点睛】续写内容得当，使用了固定短语和高分句型。如：be faced with；take care of；make it；keep one’s promise；reflect on；focus on；put oneself in others’ shoes 等固定短语。①Seeing the little girl grow into a sunny, pretty girl with double love from both parents, the man knew he made it to keep his promise.中使用了现在分词 seeing 作状语；②The teacher was sure that the students were reflecting on their replies and that they had understood the moral of the story.中 that 引导的是宾语从句。 2021 年高三英语江苏省全真模拟 2 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的 词数应为 150 左右。 When the employees at the Domino’s pizza place in Salem, Oregon, hadn’t received any order from Kirk Alexander for more than 2 weeks, they knew something wasn’t right. Kirk was a loyal customer and the staff all knew him. So it was natural that they got worried when they had no news about him. Their concern saved his life. Sarah Fuller, the general manager at the Domino’s branch, said that Kirk, who was 48 years old, had been a loyal customer since 2009. “He orders every day, or every other day,” Sarah said. Normally, his order came up on the screen because he ordered online. So we saw it came across the screen and we were thinking, “Oh, Kirk’s order.” After a few days without a single order, Sarah and the staff started to worry. A few Domino’s drivers had mentioned that they hadn’t seen his order come across their screen in a while. Sarah checked the system and saw that no order had come in 11 days. So they decided to investigate. Sarah decided to send Tracy Hamblen, a deliver driver, to Kirk’s place. When he got there, he immediately knew something was wrong. While the lights and TV were on, Kirk did not come to the door. Additionally, his phone went directly to voicemail. So Tracy immediately called 911. Para.1: When the police arrived at the place, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________ Para.2: A few days later, Kirk was released from the hospital. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________ 【答案】Para1: When the police arrived at the place, they heard a cry for help from the inside of the house. Inside, they found Kirk, who was in need of immediate medical help. Due to the quick actions of Tracy, Kirk is in stable condition at the Salem Hospital. The Domino’s employees received a lot of praise online for their unbelievable thoughtfulness. But they said that it was just part of their job and they were just doing their job. Para2: A few days later, Kirk was released from the hospital. He came to the Domino’s personally with some homemade cookies to say thank--you to Sarah and the Domino’s staff. The Domino’s mentioned that “Caring for customers should not be taken at face value. We should remember that the customers determine the success of our company and in turn we can also have an impact on their lives, small or big.” Kirk’s story has made this pizza shop even more popular in the community, and it has received more orders ever since. 【解析】 【分析】 文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个披萨店的员工，细心地发现近期没有收到来自老顾客 Kirk 的订单，于是派人前去查看，发现 Kirk 生病并及时报警就医，确保了 Kirk 的安全。员 工的善举为披萨店赢得了更多的称赞和订单。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“当警察赶到现场时，”可知，第一段可描写警察将 Kirk 送到医院的经 过。 ②由第二段首句内容“几天后，Kirk 出院了。”可知，第二段可描写 Kirk 出院后去披萨店感 谢员工们拯救了他的生命以及该披萨店因为善意举动而为自己赢得更多的订单和顾客。 2.续写线索：呼救——成功被救助——感谢——店员表达观点——披萨店更受欢迎 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①大声求救：cry for help /shout for help /scream for help ②受到赞扬：received a lot of praise / be praised greatly ③照顾，护理： caring for/taking care of/ 情绪类 ①.感谢：say thank--you / express appreciation / show appreciation /show his gratitude/be grateful ②.体贴：thoughtfulness /being considerate 【点睛】 [高分句型 1]. Inside, they found Kirk, who was in need of immediate medical help.(由关系代词 who 引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词 Kirk。) [高分句型 2]. We should remember that the customers determine the success of our company and in turn we can also have an impact on their lives, small or big.(that 引导宾语从句作 remember 的 宾语。) 2021 年高三英语江苏省全真模拟 3 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 When I arrived at 6 a.m. in the large hospital kitchen，Rose was already checking name tags on the trays(托盘). “Hi，I'm Janet. ”I tried to sound cheerful，although I already knew Rose's reputation for being impossible to work with. "I'm scheduled to work with you this week." Rose stopped what she was doing and peered over her reading glasses. I could tell from her expression she wasn't pleased to see a student worker. “What do you want me to do？Start the coffee？"I asked. Rose coldly nodded and went back to checking name tags. I filled the 40-cup pot with water and began making the coffee when Rose yelled，“That's not the way to make coffee. ”She stepped in and took over. Nothing I did pleased her. All morning，her eagle eyes missed nothing and her sharp words hurt. Totally exhausted，I trudged the six blocks home late that June afternoon. As a third year university student working my way through school，I had never before met anyone like Rose. Fighting back tears，I wrestled with my dilemma alone in my room. "What shall I do？”The answer caught me completely by surprise. I needed to love Rose. Working with Rose the next morning，I ignored the hurtful remarks thrown in my direction and did things Rose's way as much as possible. As I worked，I silently began to surround Rose with a warm blanket of love. Over the next few days，an amazing thing began to happen. My focus shifted from what she was doing to me and I started seeing Rose as the hurting person she was. Then her icy tension began to melt away. Throughout the rest of the summer，we had numerous opportunities to work together. Each time，she seemed truly happy to see me. Her bitterness gave way as she started opening up. As I worked with this lonely woman，I listened to her， something no one else had done. I learned that she was burdened by elderly parents who needed her care and her own health problems. The days slipped by quickly as I finished the last several weeks of my summer job. I soon would be returning as a full-time university student and say goodbye to Rose. 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右 3 2. 应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: "One day，while I was working alone in one of the hospital kitchens，Rose entered the room. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________ Paragraph 2： Although I never saw Rose again，I still remember her vividly. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________ 【答案】One day，while I was working alone in one of the hospital kitchens，Rose entered the room. Instead of her blue uniform, she was wearing street clothes. I looked at her in surprise. “Aren’t you working today?” “I’ve got another job and won’t be working here any more,” she said as she walked over and gave me a quick hug. “I just come here to say goodbye. You are the one person I will truly miss. You are the one person I wish I could take with me.” Then she turned abruptly and walked out of the door. Although I never saw Rose again，I still remember her vividly. That summer, I learned a lesson I’ve never forgotten. The world is full of people like Rose: annoying demanding, unlovable on the outside, yet hurting inside. Just as the saying goes every rose has its thorn, and every man’s character has a part of you that you can’t stand. I’ve found that a warm blanket of love is the best way to nurture a rose. 【解析】 【分析】 这是一篇读后续写。 【详解】续写时要求使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟 悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；续 写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。 通过阅读所给文章可知，作者讲述了自己的暑期兼职经历，领悟到要善待不好相处的人。续 写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：一天，当我一个人在医院的厨房里工作时，罗斯走进了房 间……所以后文应该写作者和罗斯相见的情况。第二段开头是：虽然我再也没有见过罗丝， 但我仍然清楚地记得她……从而描述记得罗斯的原因。写作时需要注意谋篇布局的顺序，运 用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。 【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表 达方式, 如 she said as she walked over and give me a quick hug.运用了时间状语从句；That summer, I leaned a lesson I’ve never forgotten.运用了定语从句；Just as the saying goes every rose has its thorn, and every man’s character has a pat of you that you can’t stand.运用了方式 状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路 清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。 2021 年高三英语江苏省全真模拟 4 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。 Twenty years ago, I was at a party, talking to a man whose name I have long since forgotten. Sometimes I think this man came into my life for the unique purpose of telling me this story, one about how brave, creative and trusting his brother was, which has delighted and inspired me ever since. For the purpose of this story, let's call the little brother Little Brother. Little Brother, a young painter, went to France to surround himself with beauty and inspiration. He lived on the cheap, painted every day, visited museums, traveled to picturesque places, bravely spoke to everyone he met, and showed his work to anyone who would look at it. One afternoon, he struck up a conversation at a cafe with a group of charming young people who turned out to be some fancy nobles. They took a liking to Little Brother and invited him to a party that weekend in a castle in the Loire Valley. They said this was going to be the party of the year. It would be attended by the rich and famous and by several crowned heads of Europe. Best of all it was a masquerade ball(化妆舞会)where nobody would hesitate in their spending on the costumes. “Dress up,” they said, “and join us!” Excited, Little Brother worked all week on a costume that he was certain would be highly impressive. He held back on neither the details nor the imagination of this creation. Then he rented a car and drove three hours to the castle. He changed into his costume in the car and went up the castle steps. Little Brother entered the ballroom, head held high. Upon arrival, he immediately realized his mistake. This was indeed a costume party—his new friends had not misled him there—but he had missed one detail in translation: This was a themed costume party. The theme was “a medieval (中世纪的)court”. And Little Brother was dressed as a lobster(龙虾). All around him, the wealthy and beautiful were dressed in fancy clothes, wearing sparkling jewels. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ He took a deep breath and walked onto the dance floor. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 【 答 案 】 All around him, the wealthy and beautiful were dressed in fancy clothes, wearing sparkling jewels. Little Brother, on the other hand, was wearing a red coat, red tights, red ballet slippers, and giant red claws. Also, his face was painted red. He stood at the top of the steps for one long, frightful moment. Running away in shame seemed like the easiest response. But he didn't run. Somehow, he found his determination. He'd come this far, after all. He'd worked really hard to make this costume, and he was proud of it. He took a deep breath and walked onto the dance floor. As he moved into the crowd, a silence fell.“I am the court lobster," Little Brother bowed deeply and announced. Then: laughter. Not ridicule- -just joy.They loved him. They loved his sweetness, his weirdness (怪诞)，his giant red claws, and his skinny legs in his bright tights. He made the party. Sometimes its like that. What you absolutely must not do is walk out; otherwise you will miss the party. 【解析】 【分析】本文是一篇记叙文。作者从朋友口中得知 Little Brother 的一次舞会经历。Little Brothe, 一位年轻画家不怕出丑，扮成搞笑龙虾，参加富人的化妆舞会，勇敢地调侃幽默，化尴尬为 快乐的故事。 【详解】本文属于记叙文。全文的结构上分为 5 个自然段。第一段：讲述我在 20 年前从朋 友处听到了一个关于他哥哥是多么勇敢，多么有创造力，多么信任他的故事，这个故事一直 激励着我。第二段介绍 Little Brother,一个年轻的画家，在和一群年轻人攀谈后，发现他们都 是些高贵的贵族。这些贵族邀请他参加那个周末在卢瓦尔河谷的一座城堡里举行的化装舞会 派对。第三段讲述 Little Brother 对于这次受邀很认真的做了准备：他花了一周时间，设计了 一套服装， 然后他租了辆车，开了三个小时到了城堡。 他在车里换上戏服，走上了城堡的 台阶。 第四段讲述在他进入到舞池后，他才意识到自己的错误。第五段描述主 题舞会的内容。朋友之前给他讲述此次舞会时漏掉了一个细节: 这是一个以”中世纪宫廷”为 主题的化妆舞会。续写的第一段的开头讲到：他周围的富人和美女都穿着华丽的衣服，戴着 闪闪发光的珠宝。由上文可知，Little Brother 进入到舞池后，已经知道他的穿着和此次舞会 的主题不符合，据此可知，在接下来的论述中，将会提及 Little Brother 的装扮，这样可以和 周围的富人、美女形成对比，同时描写 Little Brother 对此情景自己的心里感受；续写的第二 段 开 头 提 到 ， 他 深 吸 了 一 口 气 ， 走 上 舞 池 。 所 以 接 下 来 的 情 节 中 要 描 述 Little Brother 如何化解自己的尴尬处境。 【点睛】读后续写作为语言表达能力测试的表现形式，写作中要结合所给出的语篇，以理解 文章的细节为根据，利用已有的文章线索，想象并描述接下来可能提及的内容。所以，在写 作要求上，续写内容要符合语境，同时也要和已有的段落形成自然连接，逻辑要清楚。本文 的续写承接了上文的内容，细致地描述了故事主人公在面临尴尬的处境时，处理危机的机智。 语言得体，句式紧凑，逻辑清晰。文章中的高分句型如下：动名词短语做主语：Running away in shame seemed like the easiest response. 主语从句：What you absolutely must not do is walk out. 2021 年高三英语江苏省全真模拟 5 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Just after New Year's,before school vacation ended.I went out for a walk.It was a walk I’d been meaning to take ever since we moved to the house. I took my camera-the first time I'd taken my camera out since we came to the country-and went, dressed in my down jacket and wearing heavy boots.I walked toward the seemingly abandoned house that I could see across the fields from the upstairs window. A truck was parked at the end of the road,beside a tiny.weather-beaten house.There was smoke coming out of the chimney,and curtains in the two little windows on either side of the door.A dog was in the yard,who barked when he saw me coming.And beside the truck-no,actually in the truck,or at least with his head inside it,was a man. “Hi,"I called.It would have been silly to turn around and start walking home without saying anything,even though I've promised my parents all my life that I would never talk to strange men. He lifted out his head,a gray head,smiled-a nice smile-and said,"Miss Chalmers.I'm glad you've come to visit." “Meg,"I said.I was puzzled.How did he know who I was? ＂For Margaret?"he asked,coming over and shaking my hand."Forgive me.My hands are very dirty.My battery dies in this cold weather." ＂How did you know my name was Chalmers?" He wiped his hands on a towel that was hanging from the door handle of the truck."My dear,I apologize.I have not even introduced myself.My name is Will Banks.And it's much too cold to stand out here.Your feet must be frozen,even in those boots.Come inside,and I'll make us each a cup of tea. And I'll tell you how I know your name.” I stood unmoved.He saw me hesitate,and smiled."Meg,"he said,“I'm seventy years old. Completely harmless,even to a beautiful young girl like you.Come on in and keep me company for a bit,and get warm." I laughed,because he knew what I was thinking,and very few people ever know what I'm thinking. Then I went in his house. 注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 He took my jacket and hung it up with his,and poured tea into two thick pottery mugs. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________ It's nice to have a new friend,like Will.. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________ 【答案】One possible version: He took my jacket and hung it up with his.and poured tea into two thick pottery mugs.After we sat at the table,Will told me the whole story.The house my family was living in was actually built by his grandfather.He was born,raised and married in that house.Alter his Margaret died,he moved to this small house.When he heard my parents were looking for a place,he offered the house to them.He thought it was a perfect place for a writer like my father-the peace there stimulated imagination.He said again that he was glad I'd come to visit. It's nice to have a new friend,like Will. I suggested taking pictures of him."My dear,"he said, straightening his shoulders and buttoning the top button of his shirt."I would be honored."The soft light was coming in through the kitchen window onto his face.He sat right there,smiling and talking.I just shot quickly.Years later,those pictures still brought back the warm memories of that day. 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者搬家后第一次出去散步，在一个小 木屋遇见了 70 多岁的 Will Banks，Will Banks 在打招呼时喊出了作者的名字，但是作者却不 认识他，Will Banks 邀请作者进屋喝杯茶，顺便讲述他为什么知道作者的名字。 【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：他拿着我的夹克衫和他的挂在一起，向两个厚 陶杯里倒茶……，所以应该写进屋后的情况，即 Will Banks 向作者讲述是如何得知作者的名 字的；第二段开头是：有一个像 Will 这样的朋友还不错……，本段应该作者听了 Will 讲述的 故事后，把 Will 当成在这个陌生国家的朋友，提议给他拍些照片，多年后，这些照片仍能 让作者想起那些温暖的回忆。续写时要注意所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右。按要求完成写 作任务。 【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：look for，suggest doing sth.， bring back 等高级词汇；After we sat at the table, Will told me the whole story.中 After 引导的时 间状语从句，He said again that he was glad I'd come to visit.中 that 引导的宾语从句等高级句 式。