2021届高三英语江苏省全真模拟 应用文汇编 有答案

2021 年高三英语江苏省全真模拟应用文汇编 2021 年高三英语江苏省全真模拟 1 新高考全国卷中题型变化很多，不少学生感到新作文题型——读后续写(continuation writing) 很具挑战性。请你以高三学生李华的身份给外教 Helen 写一封信，咨询她的建议。内容包 括： 1. 写信原因； 2 题型简介； 3. 你的困难。 注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 【答案】Dear Helen, I’m writing to ask for your advice on my English study. Our new writing task, called “continuation writing”, requires us to write a reasonable ending to an incomplete story we’re given. Obviously, this is a very open-ended task with multiple possibilities. While I enjoy the creativity of this task, I find it challenging to identify the plot points of interest and to give my version the best possible ending. I also have trouble expressing my ideas accurately due to my limited vocabulary. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教 Helen 写一封信，向她咨询如何写好读后续写 作文的建议。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。 结构：总分法 要求： 1. 写信原因； 2. 题型简介； 3. 你的困难。 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组) ask for advice; require sb. to do sth.; open-ended task; challenging; have trouble doing sth.; suggestions; look forward to 第三步：连词成句 1. I’m writing to ask for your advice on my English study. 2. Our new writing task, called “continuation writing”, requires us to write a reasonable ending to an incomplete story we’re given. 3. Obviously, this is a very open-ended task with multiple possibilities. 4. While I enjoy the creativity of this task, I find it challenging to identify the plot points of interest and to give my version the best possible ending. 5. I also have trouble expressing my ideas accurately due to my limited vocabulary. 6. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. 7. Looking forward to your reply. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇(衔接词) 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second(供参考) 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore(供参考) 3.表转折对比关系：while+ clause(从句) 4.表因果关系：Because, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考) 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】[高分句型 1] While I enjoy the creativity of this task, I find it challenging to identify the plot points of interest and to give my version the best possible ending.运用 while 引导让步状语从句。 [高分句型 2] I also have trouble expressing my ideas accurately due to my limited vocabulary.运用动名词短语 作宾语。 2021 年高三英语江苏省全真模拟 2 假定你是李华，你校将在每周进行中国民族舞蹈培训。请你用英语给你班的美国交换生 Mike 写一封邮件，告诉他相关信息。内容包括： 1. 介绍培训的相关安排; 2. 说明培训的目的; 3. 表达希望对方参加的愿望。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：中国民族舞 Chinese national dance，指导 guidance Dear Mike, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mike, I’m writing to share a piece of good news with you. Our school will hold the Chinese national dance training class for exchange students on weekends, which will start from September 22nd and end on December 22nd, lasting three months. Some famous dancing teachers will offer basic guidance. The reason why our school holds this training class is that foreign students should know more about Chinese culture in order to learn Chinese well, and Chinese national dance plays an important role in Chinese culture. I do hope you’ll take this chance. Join the training class and know more about China! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国交换生 Mike 写一封邮件，告诉他关于学校即将 进行中国民族舞蹈培训的相关信息。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：三段式 第一段写来信目的；第二段写培训的相关信息及目的；第三段表达希望对方参加的愿望。 要求： 1. 介绍培训的相关安排; 2. 说明培训的目的; 3. 表达希望对方参加的愿望。 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组) share sth. with sb., a piece of good news, Chinese national dance, basic guidance, play an important role in sth. 第三步：连词成句 1. I’m writing to share a piece of good news with you. 2. Our school will hold the Chinese national dance training class for exchange students on weekends. 3. The class will start from September 22nd and end on December 22nd. 4. The class will last three months. 5. Some famous dancing teachers will offer basic guidance. 6. Foreign students should know more about Chinese culture in order to learn Chinese well. 7. Chinese national dance plays an important role in Chinese culture. 8. I do hope you’ll take this chance. 9. Join the training class and know more about China! 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇(衔接词) 1.表并列补充关系：and 2.表因果关系：The reason why…is that… 3.表目的关系：in order to 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，确保句式的多样性。 【点睛】[高分句型 1] Our school will hold the Chinese national dance training class for exchange students on weekends, which will start from September 22nd and end on December 22nd, lasting three months.该句是一个复合句。which 引导非限制性定语从句，先行词是 the Chinese national dance training class。 [高分句型 2] The reason why our school holds this training class is that foreign students should know more about Chinese culture in order to learn Chinese well, and Chinese national dance plays an important role in Chinese culture.该句中 why 引导定语从句修饰 reason，that 引导表语从句， in order to 作目的状语。 2021 年高三英语江苏省全真模拟 3 假定你是李华，星期六晚上学校要放映电影《丝绸之路》(The Silk Road)，你想请在学校学 习的外国朋友 Peter 一起观看。请给他写一封邀请函。内容包括: 要点: 1.时间和地点; 2.简单介绍丝绸之路: 3.建议他先了解相关的历史。 注意: 1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 2.词数 100 词左右: 3.信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, How are you doing recently? _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________- Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter, How are you doing recently? I’m glad to tell you that a film named The Silk Road will be shown at eight p.m. in our school hall this Saturday, so I’m writing to invite you to join us. The Silk Road, dating back to the Han Dynasty, was the most famous trade route connecting China and the western world. It not only promoted the trade of goods but also spread religions and technology between countries. Undoubtedly, it’s a good opportunity to learn about Chinese history. Given that the film is open to the whole school, I advise you to get there earlier and read some relevant history books about it so that you can understand it better. See you then. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生邀请 Peter 一起观看星期六晚上学校放映的电影《丝绸 之路》。 【详解】第一步: 审题 体裁: 应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构: 总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.时间和地点; 2.简单介绍丝绸之路: 3.建议他先了解相关的历史。 第二步: 列提纲 (重点词组) be glad to；invite to；date back to；advise sb to do 第三步: 连词成句 I’m glad to tell you that a film named The Silk Road will be shown at eight p.m. in our school hall this Saturday, so I’m writing to invite you to join us. The Silk Road, dating back to the Han Dynasty, was the most famous trade route connecting China and the western world. It not only promoted the trade of goods but also spread religions and technology between countries. Undoubtedly, it’s a good opportunity to learn about Chinese history. Given that the film is open to the whole school, I advise you to get there earlier and read some relevant history books about it so that you can understand it better. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词) 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand,while,as for 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步: 润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符 合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了 not only…but also…的固定句型，如：It not only promoted the trade of goods but also spread religions and technology between countries.使用了 not only…but also…的固定句型，意为“它不仅促进了商品贸易，而且促进了各国之间宗教和技 术的传播。”。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章 思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 2021 年高三英语江苏省全真模拟 4 假定你是李华，原定周六你要去拜访以前的班主任张老师，可是由于某种原因你不能前往了。 请给他写一封电子邮件，向他说明取消此次拜访的情况，内容包括： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 陈述原因； 3. 另约时间。 注意：1. 次数 80 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr. Zhang, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Possible version 1: Dear Mr. Zhang, I am excessively sorry for being unable to visit you this Saturday afternoon because I will be attending a lecture about garbage classification on behalf of my class at that time. So important is the lecture that I can’t afford my absence from it. Consequently, I have to cancel my visit to you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my apology. I will visit you on Sunday morning if it is convenient to you. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封取消拜访信。假定你是李华，原定周六你要去拜 访以前的班主任张老师，可是由于某种原因你不能前往了，请写邮件说明取消此次拜访的情 况。写作时首先进行道歉，再详细说明无法赴约的理由，最后提出另约时间。需侧重注意语 气和词汇的选用。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：一般现在时和一般将来时 结构：总分法 要求： 1. 表示歉意 2. 陈述原因 3. 另约时间 第二步：列提纲(重点词组) excessively sorry；unable to visit； attending a lecture；garbage classification；on behalf of sb； can't afford；absence；Consequently；cancel；would appreciate it if；convenient 第三步：连词成句 1. I am excessively sorry for being unable to visit you. 2. I will be attending a lecture about garbage classification on behalf of my class. 3. So important is the lecture that I can’t afford my absence from it. 4. I have to cancel my visit to you. 5. I would appreciate it if you could accept my apology 6. I will visit you on Sunday morning if it is convenient to you. 第四步：连句成篇(衔接词) 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition ;including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), On the one hand… 4.表因果关系：Consequently , Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰 第五步：润色修改。 【点睛】文章条理清晰，理由描述恰当，态度诚恳，行文流畅。准确地使用了较多高级句式， 如：I am excessively sorry for being unable to visit you this Saturday afternoon because I will be attending a lecture about garbage classification on behalf of my class at that time.这句使用了 because 引导原因状语从句；So important is the lecture that I can't afford my absence from it.这 句使用了 so…that(太……以至于)的倒装句式引导结果状语从句；以及 I will visit you on Sunday morning if it is convenient to you.这句使用 if 引导条件状语从句。同时运用高档词汇， 例如 excessively sorry；garbage classification；on behalf of sb；can’t afford；absence； Consequently；convenient 等。范文内容符合题目要求，原因合理，运用的语言和句式合乎 英语的表达规范，是一篇值得参考的作文。 2021 年高三英语江苏省全真模拟 5 假定你是李华，你校下周二将邀请 Green 教授做一个关于西方礼仪的讲座。请你以学生会 的名义用英文写一份通知，内容包括： 1.讲座的主题； 2.时间和地点； 3.听讲座时的注意事项。 参考词汇：西方礼仪 western etiquette Notice _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________ The Students’ Union 【 答 案 】 Notice There will be a lecture on western etiquette by Professor Green, who comes from a famous British university. The lecture will be given in the Meeting Hall from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon next Tuesday. All the students in our school are to attend it. Everyone must keep quiet and make notes while listening to the lecture attentively. After the lecture, Professor Green will answer the questions raised by the teachers and students. Be sure not to be late. The Students' Union 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一则通知。 【详解】第 1 步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你校下周二将邀请 Green 教授做一个关 于西方礼仪的讲座。请你以学生会的名义用英文写一份通知，内容包括：1.讲座的主题；2. 时间和地点；3.听讲座时的注意事项。 第 2 步：根据写作要求，确定关键词(组)：western etiquette (西方礼仪)；come from(来自)； attend(参加)；keep quiet(保持安静)；make notes(做笔记)；listen to(听)；be sure not to do sth.(一 定不要做某事)；be late(迟到)等。 第 3 步：根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应 用一般将来时。 第 4 步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表 达方式，如 There will be a lecture on western manners by Professor Green, who comes from a famous British university.运用非限制性定语从句；Everyone must keep quiet and make notes while listening to the lecture attentively.运用省略句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很 高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。