层次一 写正确地道的语句
渐进写作 ①
想要写好英语作文，就要养成良好的写作意识。
1. 要养成用英语思维写句子的意识。
2. 要养成正确使用谓语动词的意识。
“某人做了某事在什么地方
什么时候。”
1. 这个星期五，我们将在阶梯教室（lecture hall）上汉语课。
_________________________________________________
2.在过去几年里，这座小镇发生了很大的变化。
_______________________________________________
We'll have the Chinese lesson in the lecture this Friday.
Great changes have taken place in the past few years.
正确地道的语句
一、谓语错误
谓语是句子的核心成分，谓语错误属于“重大错误”。通常
每错必扣分。谓语错误通常分为以下两类：
1. 谓语动词选用错误
2. 谓语的时态、语态、一致性错误
1. 误：Doing a parttime job can effect your studies. 正：Doing a
parttime job can _____________________ your studies.affect/ have an effect on
2. 误：He opened the light after he entered the room. 正：He
____________ the light after he entered the roomturned on
1. 谓语动词选用错误
4. 误：He was like ice cream even though in winter. 正：He
_____ ice cream even though in winter.liked
5. 误：The sports meet will held in our school next Friday. 正：
The sports meet ___________ in our school next Friday.will be held
3. 误：He fond of pop music while his brother likes raps. 正：
He _________ pop music while his brother likes raps.is fond of
2. 误：Children who raise in poor families can generally deal
with problems more effectively in their adult years.
are raised
bicycled
2. 谓语时态、语态、一致性错误
1. 误：In the morning, we had bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees.
正：In the morning, we ___________ to the suburbs to plant trees.
误：Children who _________ in poor families can generally deal
with problems more effectively in their adult years.
3. 误： I have a wide range of hobbies, which includes drawing,
collecting stamps and so on.
正： I have a wide range of hobbies, which ________ drawing,
collecting stamps and so on.
include
主语which 指hobbies,为复数
二、单词拼写错误
很多考生因为基础词汇没掌握好，在写作时经常会出现单
词拼写错误。拼写错误一般是每三个错词扣一分。但拼写错误
过多的考生肯定是得不了好分数的。
误： Compared with others, this country pays little attention to
the polution.
正： Compared with others, this country pays little attention to
the __________.pollution
误：With the development of transportation, the world seems to
be geting more and more smaller.
正：With the development of transportation, the world seems to
be __________ smaller and smaller.getting
三. 非谓语错误
写作中使用非谓语动词时要注意非谓语与句子主
语或所修饰名词的谓语关系和被动关系。这是很容易出
错的点。
误： With his attention fixing upon his cellphone, he didn’t
notice the teacher was standing by him.
正： With his attention ______ upon his cellphone, he didn’t
notice the teacher was standing by him..
fixed
fix his attention upon是固定搭配
误： Seating on the bench, she buried herself in her thought.
正： _________ on the bench, she buried herself in her thought.Seated
改正下列句子中的错误。1．People throwed cans, paper, bags
and so on into the river.
threw
2．It's high time we do something to reduce the number of traffic
accidents.
3．There have been more and more road accidents happened in
recent years.
4．Dr. Smith, together with his wife, are to arrive by taking an
evening flight.
did
happening
is
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