如何写好活动类作文
技法点拨
(1)段首常用语
I have many travelling experiences in my life, but the most unforgettable
one is the trip to an organic farm. 在我一生中有许多旅行经历，但最难忘的
/印象深刻的是一次有机农场之旅。
Last month, I together with my parents went to a farm for sightseeing,
which turned out to be impressive and interesting. 上个月我和父母一起去
一个农场观光，这次观光非常有趣且令人印象深刻。
(2)正文常用语
On/Upon arrival, what impressed me most was its fresh air and beautiful
scenery.
一到达，给我印象最深的是它的新鲜空气和美丽景色。
Attracted by the beautiful scenery, we couldn’t help taking pictures,
capturing the precious moment forever. 被美景所吸引，我们迫不及待地拍
照，将这精彩的瞬间永久保存。
句式积累
(3)段尾常用语
T i r e d a s w e w e r e , w e h a d g r e a t f u n a n d a s e n s e o f
achievement. 尽管我们很累，但是我们玩得很开心并且有一种成
就感。
The reasons why the trip is the most unforgettable are as
follows. For one thing.... For another,...我认为这个旅行最难忘
的原因如下。一方面...；另一方面...。
The trip came to an end, but it has a farreaching influence
on me. Thanks to the trip, not only have I had a better
understanding of how hard the farmers are, but (also) I have
realized how precious/valuable the food is. （倒装句）
旅行结束了，但是它对我产生了深远的影响。多亏这次旅行，我们不仅更加
理解农民是多么辛苦，而且意识到食物的珍贵。
（2020年全国Ⅱ卷）上周末，你和同学参加了一
次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介
绍这次活动，内容包括：1. 农场情况; 2. 采摘过
程; 3. 个人感受。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 题目已为你写好。
My Weekend
首段：总述事情的时间、地点、人物、事件
Last weekend, our class took part
in/participated in an interesting picking
activity on a modern farm, which turned out to
be(证明是/结果是) extremely fruitful and
meaningful.
正文：叙述农场情况和采摘过程及结果
The farm is far from the city, so we set off at 6:00
am, and it took us around/about two hours to get there
by bus. On/Upon arriving at the farm（一到达农场）,
what came into sight （进入眼帘的东西）were varieties
of（各种各样的） fresh vegetables and fruit trees.
Then we were divided into(被分成) two groups for a
picking competition. One group was responsible for
（负责） picking tomatoes and the other was in charge
of(负责) picking apples. After one and a half hours’
hard work, both groups picked/harvested(收获) a lot,
with our group being the winner.（with的复合结构表伴
随结果）
结尾段：表达个人感受及活动意义
Tired as we were, we had great fun and a
sense of achievement. Through this activity, we
have a better understanding of how hard the
farmers are and how precious/valuable the
food is. Therefore, we should treasure/value
the food and make efforts to make the world
better.
(2018·北京高考) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先
后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周接待外国学生，带领他们体验中国
茶文化的全过程。
注意：词数不少于100字。
[精彩范文]
Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the
authentic (纯正的) tea culture in a tea house, which turned out to be(结果是/
证明是) extremely rewarding. (总述事情的时间、地点、人物、事件)
On arriving at the tea house（一到达茶舍）, I showed them around and
gave them a vivid and informative introduction of Chinese tea culture.
With their interest greatly aroused(随着他们的兴趣被极大唤起), I then began
to teach them how to make tea in detail. Next came the moment when I
asked them to have a try themselves/on their own. At the end of the activity,
we took a picture together to memorize the unforgettable day. The tea
house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us. （体验过程）
Through this activity, It suddenly hits me that（我突然想起) Chinese
traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. And
I was more than proud to spread our own culture to people all over the
world. （个人感受）
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