2021届新高考英语“中国元素”之书面表达 话题四 传统节日 含答案及解析

2021 届新高考英语“中国元素”之书面表达 话题四 传统节日 一、 假如你是校英语报编辑，请为你报月底将举办的“我最喜欢的中国节日”英语演讲比赛 写一个通知。 内容包括： 1. 比赛时间及地点； 2. 每班推荐一人参赛； 3. 裁判组成及奖励。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Notice _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________ 二、 假如你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将举办一次以“元宵节”为主题的英语沙龙(salon)。请 给你校英国交换生 George 写封邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括： 1.沙龙的目的； 2.时间和地点； 3.活动安排。 注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear George, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________ Yours, Li Hua​ 三、 假如你是李华，你的笔友 Mike 对中国的春节很感兴趣，请你给他写一封回信，介绍相 关情况，内容如下： 1. 春节的意义； 2. 春节期间的传统习俗； 3. 欢迎 Mike 来中国体验。 注意： 1. 字数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。 Dear Mike, I am very glad to know you are interested in the Spring Festival of China. ________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________ ​ Yours, Li Hua 四、 根据所给要点用英语写一篇短文介绍 Dragon Boat Festival。 1. date； 2. origin； 3. story； 4. how people celebrate it； 注意： 1. 词数 80 以上； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________ 五、 假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友 Mike 写信告诉你，他将参加他所在城市举行的“我 所了解的中国传统节日”的演讲比赛，希望你能为他推荐一个中国传统节日，请你给他回信， 要点包括： 1.收信时的感想； 2.推荐并介绍中国节日； 3.预祝对方取得好成绩。 注意： 1.词数 80 左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________ 答案以及解析 一、 答案： Notice The English speech contest, “My Favorite Chinese Festival” held by our newspaper, will be at the speech hall on 28th this month in the school lecture hall. Here is some information you need to know. To make the contest more competitive and time-saving, only one contestant will be recommended by each class. The judges will include 2 English teachers and a member of our staff. The first 3 winners will be given a special reward, with their speech draft printed in our paper. 二、 答案： Dear George, Aimed at providing a better communication platform for English lovers, our English club plans to hold a salon with the theme of “the Lantern Festival”. I’m writing to invite you to join us. Scheduled for February 25th, this salon is to be held in the school hall. A variety of activities will be organized, ranging from a free talk about the festival to some interesting English games. I bet you’ll have a wonderful time then. You are warmly welcome to participate in the salon. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 解析： 本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国交换生 George 写封邮件,邀请他参加以“元宵节” 为主题的英语沙龙。【详解】第一步:审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时 和一般将来时。结构:总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安 排所写内容。要求:1.沙龙的目的;2.时间和地点;3.活动安排。第二步:列提纲(重点词组)aimed at...; a better communication platform; hold a salon; with the theme of; a variety of ; range from; have a wonderful time; participate in 第 三 步 : 连 词 成 句 1. Aimed at providing a better communication platform for English lovers, our English club plans to hold a salon with the theme of “the Lantern Festival”. 2. I’m writing to invite you to join us. Scheduled for February 25th, this salon is to be held in the school hall. 3. A variety of activities will be organized, ranging from a free talk about the festival to some interesting English games. 4. I bet you’ll have a wonderful time then. You are warmly welcome to participate in the salon. 5. Looking forward to your early reply.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇(衔接 词)1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考)2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,(供参考)3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause( 从 句 ), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… (供参考)4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result (供参考)连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规 范清晰,【点睛】[高分句型 1]Aimed at providing a better communication platform for English lovers, our English club plans to hold a salon with the theme of “the Lantern Festival”. (非谓语动 词作目的状语)[高分句型 2] A variety of activities will be organized, ranging from a free talk about the festival to some interesting English games.(非谓语动词作伴随状语) 三、 答案： Dear Mike, I am very glad to know you are interested in the Spring Festival of China. The Spring Festival is to Chinese people what Christmas is to you. It falls on the first day of lunar new year. Most of us will try our best to return home for a family reunion. On the New Year Eve, we will enjoy different kinds of food, especially Jiaozi and Tangyuan, meaning good luck. Besides, we will appreciate beautiful fireworks. I sincerely invite you to join us this year. I’m sure you will have an unforgettable experience. Yours, Li Hua 四、 答案： The Dragon Boat Festival is an important festival in Chinese culture. It is held on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. It was started in honour of Qu Yuan, who was an important political figure and poet in the state of Chu. He drowned himself in the Miluo River when the capital of his country was taken by the enemy state Qin. It is said that people raced in their boats to try to save him from the river and when they could not, they dropped rice dumplings into the river so that the fish would eat them instead of Qu Yuan’s body. Nowadays, we celebrate the festival in many different ways. For example, we hold dragon boat races and eat rice dumplings. It is a really fun festival! 五、 答案： Dear Mike, I'm so proud that your city is going to hold such a speech competition to promote Australians' awareness of Chinese culture. I'm writing to recommend the Lantern Festival among so many traditional festivals. The Lantern Festival falls on the 15th of the first month in the lunar calendar, which marks the end of Chinese New Year celebrations. During the festival, children go out at night carrying red lanterns symbolizing good fortune and solve riddles on lanterns. As early as the Western Han Dynasty, it started to become a festival of great significance. Nowadays, the festival has become popular in Western countries, especially in the cities with large Chinese communities. If you need more information about the festival, just feel free to ask me. Wish you success in the competition. Yours, Li Hua 解析： 【写作指导】一、审题:根据题干的要求,我们可以确定以下方面:1. 人称和时态:以第一人称 为主;涉及比赛用一般将来时;涉及节曰介绍以一般现在时为主。2. 根据要点划分段落:书信 的主体仍用三段式结构。第一段——收信时的感想;第二段(写作的重点)一推荐并介绍中国节 曰,考生可在春节、元宵节、端午节、中秋节、清明节、重阳节等中选择自己比较熟悉的一 个节日进行写作;第三段——预祝对方取得好成绩。二、遣词用句:收信时的感想(proud, excited, glad 等);推荐并介绍中国节日(recommend, celebrate, symbolize, mark, popular 等); 预祝对方 取得好成绩(wish, good luck 等)。【名师点评】1.范文覆盖了所有的内容要点(感想,推荐并介绍 节日,祝愿),并合理地划分了要点所归属的段落。2.应用了较多高级结构和句式。如 so... that... 句型;现在分词短语作状语(marking the end of Chinese New Year celebrations);现在分词短语作 后置定语(symbolizing good fortune)等。