Day 15
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
续写的词数为 150 左右。
In July 2019, to celebrate his 45th birthday, Colin Dowler booked off a week from his job as
a maintenance manager for the Vancouver Island Health Authority. He planned to spend two days
on his own, finding a route he would eventually use to climb Mount Doggie Dowler.
His wife Jenifer didn't like the sound of her husband's latest plan. She was used to Dowler
going on adventures by himself, but this time he'd boat to an unknown bay, bike an unpopulated
road , hike through grizzly bear country, and camp overnights alone. There was too much room
for disaster.
The night before his journey Colin packed the necessities. He filled the remaining pockets of
his bag with a handheld GPS, hiking poles, his homemade sausage, and a few other essentials.
Instead of his usual Swiss Army knife, he took a three-inch stainless steel pocket knife given to
him by his dad.
The weather that Sunday, July 28 was nice. Colin pulled his car into the Campbell River port
and quickly launched and set off in his motorboat with a mountain bike on board. About eight
o'clock in the morning, he arrived at Ramsay Arm, and found a spot to tie the boat near a logging
（伐木）camp where he chatted with some logging workers.
One of the workers , Vito, gave him a ride in his truck until the forest got too thick. Colin
took off his bike and backpack from the truck and started his hiking and route searching. In order
not to lose the way back, he marked his trail with blue ribbons （布条）.
As he made his seven-kilometer marker, he came around a bend and suddenly put on the
brakes—a dirty grizzly bear stood right in the middle of the narrow road, 30 meters away. Colin
calculated his chances of turning around for a quick escape, but the bear could easily catch up and
stop him before he picked up speed.
Paragraph 1:
The bear suddenly stood up in a threatening way.
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Paragraph 2:
After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself.
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【答案解析】
One possible version
Paragraph 1:
The bear suddenly stood up in a threatening way. Meanwhile, Colin threw the sausages in his
backpack towards the bear, hoping the flavor would attract it. Unfortunately, the bear rushed to
him. Colin was pushed to the ground and bit in the left leg. “Ah!” he screamed with the
unbearable pain. Blood flowing out, Colin suddenly remembered the knife in his pocket. He
stabbed the bear’s neck as fast and strong as possible. The bear roared with pain and ran away.
Losing much blood, Colin lost his consciousness afterwards.
Paragraph 2:
After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself. He found himself surrounded by the
logging workers in the camp. He was being cared for by a doctor. It was Vito who saved Colin.
When he drove back, he spotted the bleeding bear and sensed that something terrible must have
happened. With the blue ribbons leading his way, he finally found Colin. “You are so lucky,
Colin.Without being noticed, you could have been killed for loss of blood. God help those who
help themselves.” said the doctor.
【分析】本文以冒险旅行为线索展开，讲述了 Colin Dowler 为庆祝生日计划骑自行车穿
过无人行走的道路上，然后徒步穿越灰熊的领地，最后可以攀登 Doggie Dowler 山，结果在
灰熊领地，路遇灰熊，与灰熊搏斗，受伤，最终被人发现并获救的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“那只熊突然站了起来，以一种威胁的姿态。”可知，第一段可描写
Colin 和灰熊搏斗，结果负伤。
②由第二段首句内容“似乎过了好几个小时，科林才清醒过来。”可知，第二段可描写 Colin
苏醒后被照顾的获救过程。
2.续写线索：搏斗——不幸负伤——幸运——获救
3.词汇激活
行为类
①搏斗：struggle with the bear/fight the bear/ be pushed to the ground
②.负伤：be injured /be hurt/be bit
③.获救：be saved/be cared for/ be rescued
情绪类
①.不幸：unfortunately /unluckily
②.幸运：so lucky /good fortune
【点睛】
[高分句型 1]. Blood flowing out, Colin suddenly remembered the knife in his pocket.（独立
主格结构作状语）
[高分句型 2]. Losing much blood, Colin lost his consciousness afterwards.（现在分词作状语）
[高分句型 3]. It was Vito who saved Colin.（强调句运用）
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