如何写高考英语作文 五步法解决 学案

如何写高考作文，五步写作法轻松解决 高考英语作文是大部分同学头疼的题型，平时背了不少范文，但考试时还 是写不出来，下面我们就利用 2020 年全国卷高考作文来用五步写作法来总结阐 述一下写作方法，同学们可以模仿写自己的作文，非常高效。 2020 全国卷 2 书面表达（满分 25 分） 上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介 绍这次活动，内容包括： 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 题目：My Weekend My Weekend organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend.The farm was situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky was blue and the air was fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery.There were different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals. On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree.Using baskets and ladders, We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft . I couldn’t wait to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat. l was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would l be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness! 【解析】【详解】第一步：仔细审题 体裁：应用文。 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。 结构：总分法。 要求： 1.农场情况； 2.采摘过程； 3.个人感受 第二步：列提纲（重点短语） 根据写作要求确定关键词(组)，如:pick peaches, is situated, beautiful scenery, fuit trees ,a variety of animaks,Using baskets and ladders, take a bite, be grateful for, get close to nature, feast on the sweetness. 第三步：连词成句∶根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致 和时态问题。本文用一般现在时和一般过去时。 第四步∶连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定 要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使 用了较多高级表达方式，如 Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend.和 Using baskets and ladders 运用了非 谓语动词;We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft.运用了定语从句;Not only would l be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness! 第五步：润色修改.运用了连词 not only..but.和倒装句等结构。全文 中没有 中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次 分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 习作 2 My weekend Last weekend, my classmates and l took part in a fruit picking activity on Xikang Farm. Located in the surburb of our city, Xikang Farm is a famous organic farm, which attracts lots of people to pick fruits and vegetables and enjoy beautiful scenery as well. On arriving there , we received a warm welcome and were shown around the farm by the owner. Under his guidance , we gradually learned about the skills of picking fruits and vegetables. Divided into differnt groups , we began our picking activity and had a competition.Although we were exposed to the sun, we were excited and couldn't feel tired. About two hours later, with the baskets full of different kinds of fruits, we ended our tasks. As a reward , the group who picked the greatest amount of fruits could taste their picking outcome for free.In return , we also put on several performances to the owner and the other tourists. What an unforgettable experience! Not only have l got an opportunity of getting close to nature but l also have had a better understanding of the significance of labour and teamwork. How I wish l could get another chance! 2020 全国卷 1 你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短 文参赛，内容包括： 1. 人物简介； 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。 【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题， 写一篇短文参赛。 【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文。 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。 结构：总分法。要求：1.人物简介：2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。 第二步：列提纲（重点短语）As for me；deserve more than ; devote to ; heart and soul; in particular; delight so much as to inspire me to overcome ;spare some time；listen to me patiently; 第三步：连词成句 1. As for me, of all the people I admire2. none deserves my respect more than my prestigious and gentlemanly father 3. He devotes all his time and energy to educational cause heart and soul, in particular his students. 4 My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态 问题。 第四步：连句成篇 1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因 2.表示并列补充关 系： As for; and;of course; In addition; Therefore, as far as I ‘m concerned 第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词 数适当，上下文意思连贯符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了丰富的高端句式， 如成语 heart and soul； 定语从句：who is an outstanding teacher；强调句：it is my father that is just like my angel in my life who lifts me to my feet when my wings have trouble remembering how to fly.；状语从句：Whenever I come across the challenge of learning in my study,等。长短句结合，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换 自然。 例文 1 We have a lot of respectable people around us.. As for me, of all the people I admire ,none deserves my respect more than my prestigious and gentlemanly father ,who is an outstanding teacher. He devotes all his time and energy to educational cause heart and soul, in particular his students. In addition, I know,nothing in the world can delight him so much as to let him see his students make progress. He regards students as his own children. Of course,he loves me a lot,too. Every weekend he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work. Whenever I come across the challenge of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and inspire me to overcome the difficulties bravely. As a matter of fact ,it is my father that is just like my angel in my life who lifts me to my feet when my wings have trouble remembering how to fly. Therefore, as far as I ‘m concerned , my father is the person I respect most in my mind and I love him so deeply. 例文 2 There are many respectable people around us. Among them, the person I res pect most is Zhong Nanshan, who has become a household name for his gr eat contributions to defeating virus. Zhong Nanshan, a medical scientist, is a leading figure in the battles against SARS in 2003 and COVID in 2019, winning him the worldwide respect. Every time I see the pictures, in which he is fighting to save people’s lives, I canno t help being moved by him. What impresses me most is that aged 84, he ru shed to the front line of the epidemic area without hesitation at the beginni ng of the outbreak of COVID-19 epidemic. Dangerous though it was, Zhong N anshan and his workmates worked hard day and night to treat the patients i nfected with COVID-19. With their great efforts, remarkable results were achie ved and the COVID-19 was finally under control. His dedication to work and to people is admirable, which truly inspires me t o become a man like him in the future. He sets a good example to us teenagers and he is really an excellent scientis t who deserves my admiration and respect. 2020 全国卷 3 假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教 Miss Evans 写封 邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括： 1. 剧情简介； 2. 指导内容； 3. 商定时间地点。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 结束语已为你写好 Dear Miss Evans, How is everything going! l am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook. We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play.The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy.However, the adaption is quite a challenge.Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play.So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may l pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? Given your busy schedule,I d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice.Look forward to your early reply.Best regards! Yours truly, Li Hua 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans 对于 《the Steamboat》改编短剧的支持。 【详解】第一步∶审题 时态︰根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。 结构∶总分总法 第一段说明写这封邮件的目的;第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内 容细节问题;第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。 第二步:列提纲（重点词组） write to ; according to ; combine ; adaption ; challenge ; attached to ; convenient 第三步∶连词成句 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步∶连句成篇（衔接词） 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范 清晰。 第五步∶润色修改 [点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文 意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合 句，如:lf it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? 全文表达方式地道，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次 分明，上下句转换自然，是一篇佳作。 Dear Miss Veans, I was wondering if you could help me revise a short play adapted from our English textbook. The plot of the tragic story is about Lady Meng jiang and her husband, who lived more than 2000 years ago in ancient China.At their wedding,her husband was taken away forcefully to bulid the Great wall.Meng jiang went to look for her husband, only to learn of his death. Then she cried at the Great Wall,causing it to fall apart. Could you kindly give me guidance on two aspects? First of all, could you check the language for us? Secondly, if you could please give us some direction on our acting and use of tone? If possible, could I meet you in your office at 10 am? We are looking forward to your reply.