高考英语书面表达练习13
家庭、朋友和周围的人
1. pressure n. 压力 2.attitude n. 态度
3.confidence n. 自信 4.respect n. 尊重
5.ambition n. 雄心壮志 6.hobby n. 业余爱好
7. graduation n. 毕业 8. fail v. 失败
9. evaluate v. 评价 10. ignore v．忽视
11. perform v. 表现 12. admire v. 钦佩；欣赏
13. concern v. 关心；涉及 14. beneficial adj. 有益的
15. diligent adj. 勤奋的
16. outstanding adj. 杰出的17. merciful adj. 仁慈的
18. physically adv. 身体上
19. mentally adv. 精神上
常用单词 一、话题常用词汇必背
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常用短语
• turn out结果……
2. by no means 绝不
3. in conclusion 总之
4. after all 毕竟
5. make friends交朋友
6. be loyal to 对……忠诚
7. look down upon 看不起
8. be upset about 对……感到难过
9. devote oneself to 全神贯注于……；献身于……
过去分词作表语的一些固定搭配中。这类短语有：
(be) lost in ...迷失在……
(be) dressed in穿着
(be) struck by ... 被……感动
(be) based on依据
(be) absorbed in专心于
(be) astonished at ... 对……感到惊讶
(be) attached to 隶属于
(be) addicted to 迷恋；沉溺于
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连词成句并背诵(按括号中的要求，添加适当的
词连词成句)
1. punishment; by no means, a wise choice, help,
them, grow up, mentally and physically (用倒装
句式)
答案：
2. he, most, considerate, person, know, what, I,
need (用定语从句)
答案：
By no means is punishment a wise choice to
help them grow up mentally and physically.
He is the most considerate person who
knows exactly what I need.
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Deng Yaping, whose hobby is playing ping-
pong, has devoted herself to the sports after
graduation.
3. without, his, help, I, fail, exam (用虚拟语气)
答案：
4. Deng Yaping, hobby, ping-pong, devote oneself
to, sports, after graduation (用whose 引导的非限
制性定语从句)
答案：
Without his help, I would have failed in the
exam.
连句成篇并背诵(选用“after all, therefore, at the
same time”过渡词衔接成文)
As is known to us all, children spend less
time having heart--to--heart talks with their
parents when they grow older. Therefore,
children should let their parents know more
about what they are interested in. At the
same time, parents also should spend more
time talking with their children and sharing
opinions with them. After all, only in this
way can they better understand each other.
假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Tiger
Mom 的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请
你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长
回复。
I'm the mother of a fourteen--year--old. I
have a rule for my daughter: be among the
top 5 students or get punished in one way or
another. She has been doing very well in
school, but some friends of mine keep telling
me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I
wrong?
写作要点：1.表明自己的看法；
2.陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)；
3.提出至少两条建议。
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Hi, Tiger Mom，
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many
parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite
right for you to do so (表语从句)．
Although high grades are an important factor in
evaluating students and for their future university
admission (让步状语从句), development in wisdom,
emotion, health, and life attitude should never be
ignored. There are many examples around us.
Some all-A students in school have turned out not
to be as successful in society as they were
expected.
范例一
The reason is often that the pressure from
their parents allows them almost no time
for other activities (表语从句). Furthermore,
by no means is punishment a wise choice
to help them grow up mentally and
physically (倒装句式)．
So I suggest that you take your friends'
advice. More importantly, let her live like a
lovely girl; let her have more friends and
social activities; and let her make mistakes
of her own as we teenagers often do (方式状
语从句)．
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范例二
Hi, Tiger Mom，
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for
many parents in China. My idea is what you
have done is not quite right(你做的事并不是
很正确，含有主语从句的表语从句)
As a parent, you want your daughter to
perform better than others, which I can
understand (这一点我能理解，非限制性定语从
句). However, being too strict with the
teenagers (对青少年过于严格，动名词短语作
主语) is not probably beneficial at all.
On the contrary, it may bring about a worse result
finally. After all, grades are not everything and
students should develop in all aspects. They
should have their own time and deal with their own
activities. Seldom can one under much pressure
make a success (在强大的压力下能成为一名成功的人
士，倒装句式). What's more, punishment is not a
wise choice to make the students perform better.
In conclusion, give up the punishment and give
back your daughter's own time. If so, your
daughter will grow up well mentally and physically.
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(江苏高考)下面这幅照片展现了女儿为
回家的妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅
照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文
应包含以下内容：
1. 描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动
作，等等；
2.结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；
3.举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。
The burden of students has been a hot topic
for years, but the load of parents has received
little attention, especially from their own
children.
The picture shows us a touching moment
when a little girl comes to greet her working
mom. Realising her mom must be very tired
after a day's work (现在分词作状语), the girl
helps to remove the bag from her shoulders. In
response, the mom kneels down to show how
happy and thankful she feels.
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All this reminds me of my mother who has been
doing whatever she could to let me have the best.
But, totally engaged in my own study (过去分词短
语作状语), I seldom pay attention to what my
mother needs and feels, and always think
studying well is the only thing I could do in
return. Now I know I can do my bit to help with
the everyday washing (不定式作目的状语),
bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast
myself, so as to share my mother's daily burden
(目的状语). The picture convinces me it is even
more important to be a good daughter than a
“good” student.
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