高三新题型读后续写不同主题分析--亲情类（母子亲情） 含答案

高三新题型读后续写不同主题分析--亲情类 板块一--例文（母子亲情） 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was dark and freezing cold outside though it was four o'clock in the afternoon. The wind kept blowing. At that time, the bell rang loudly, and everybody packed their schoolbags and got ready to go home. The teacher dismissed the students, and they walked orderly to the school gate. David was in Class One, Grade Seven. His mother would come and pick him up from school but today she was absent. David wondered what had happened, but he was not worried at all. It usually took only ten minutes for his mother to get to school by riding an electric bike. David saw his best companion, Tommy, who was his deskmate. Tommy was waiting patiently for his mother as well. They began to talk freely and happily. David congratulated Tommy on his excellent performance in the last math exam. At the same time, Tommy thanked David, without whose help he couldn't have made such rapid progress. Five minutes later, Tommy's. mother picked up Tommy and they said goodbye to each other. David had to put up with his moments of solitude. He had no choice but to wait until his mother came into his sight. However, half an hour passed, and there was no sign that his mother would come. David was determined to walk home. On his way home, David could hardly see any passers-by. The trees shook with the wind and the leaves fell from them without making any noise. David was lost in thinking what was wrong with his mother. Some terrible thoughts jumped out of his mind. “Maybe an accident happened to her. Maybe she got hurt by some robbers. Maybe she was seriously ill. ”Little David burst into tears and quickened his step. He did not dare to think over the results. What he could do was pray for the safety of his mother and wish everything was all right. Time slipped away like an arrow. 2 In the short distance, it was his beautiful house with a garden. “This must, be the worst experience in my life," David thought to himself and felt scared. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 David stood in front of the door and opened it hurriedly. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________ Suddenly, there was a knock on the door and came a familiar voice. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: David stood in front of the door and opened it hurriedly. He turned on the lights without hesitation. Everything was in order. . The floor was clean. The sofa was neat. It seemed nothing special. David pushed all the doors and was eager to look for his mother. Still, he couldn't find her anywhere. There was no doubt that his mother was not at home right now. It was hard for him to control his nervous emotion. He ran to the telephone and began to make a phone call to his mother. Suddenly, there was a knock on the door and came a familiar voice. It was his mother. He hurried to the door and opened it excitedly with a tremendous sense of relief. His mother wore a big smile, saying, “I just want you to be independent. And I followed you along the way. You made it. I am proud of you. " David hugged his mother tightly, making a promise that he would never worry her and he would become brave and spare no effort to maintain independence. 【解析】 【分析】 本文以人物为线索展开。讲述了 David 放学后在等待着妈妈来接他回家，通常妈妈骑电瓶车 只要 10 分钟就能到达，但是今天却迟迟没有到来，直到同桌 Tommy 的妈妈接走他后，David 决定自己走回家，在回家的路上，David 担心妈妈的安危并祈祷妈妈平安。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“David 站在门前，匆忙地把门打开。”可知，第一段可描写 David 回 家后发现妈妈不在家后的心理活动以及所做的事情。 ②由第二段首句内容“突然，传来了敲门声，一个熟悉的声音传来。”可知，第二段可描写 妈妈回来了，并解释了没有接 David 的原因。 2.续写线索：到家后发现妈妈不在——感到紧张——妈妈回家——妈妈解释原因并表扬 David——David 承诺会继续独立 3.词汇激活： 行为类 毫不犹豫打开灯：turn on the lights without hesitation/ make no bones about turning on the nights 急切地寻找：be eager to look for sb./search for sb. in a hurry 微笑：wear a smile/smile at 做到：make it/manage to do sth./be succeeded in doing sth. 紧紧拥抱：hug sb. tightly/embrace sb. tightly 保证：make a promise/promise to do sth. 不遗余力地保持独立：spare no effort to maintain independence/try one’s best to keep independence 情绪类 紧张的：nervous/tense 兴奋地：excitedly/delightedly 【点睛】[高分句型 1] There was no doubt that his mother was not at home right now.(that 引导同位语的从句) [高分句型 2] David hugged his mother tightly, making a promise that he would never worry her and he would become brave and spare no effort to maintain independence.(making a promise 为现在分词短语 作状语) 版块二---读后续写精彩词句集锦 一．表达心情词汇 难以形容地开心：indescribably wild joy 极为感动：be overwhelmingly moved 几乎无法掩饰他的兴奋的心情：can hardly conceal his excitement 既兴奋又开心：a mixture of excitement and delight 激发某人的激情：kindle sb. with/to passion 显示出极大的意愿：show a greater readiness 被强烈地吸引：be powerfully attracted to 心情愉快：in cheerful spirits 振作精神：keep up one’s spirits 满意的表情：a satisfied look 对...感到满意：be content with 对...很高兴：be delighted at 为成功而欣喜：be excited with joy at the success 被...场面所吸引：be fascinated by the spectacle of 被她的美貌所吸引：be fascinated with her beauty 因...而高兴：be joyful over/about 喜爱，对...着迷: be keen on 快乐至极：be overwhelmed with 高兴地跳起来：dance/jump for joy 欣喜若狂：be wild with delight —个令人鼓舞的表情：an encouraging expression 过一个愉快的假日：have a pleasant holiday 心满意足，非常幸福：on the top of the world 对...感到非常高兴：overjoyed at/to do 流下幸福的泪水：tears of happiness flowing down 乐得大叫：yell with delight 使某人心情愉快：brighten sb’s heart 使某人安心：set one ’ s heart at rest 感到鼓舞的：feel inspired/encouraged 精神高涨：be in high spirits 二．表达心情句子 1. The last word went like a bullet to my heart. 最后一句话像一颗子弹击中了我的心。 2. A ripple of sadness welled up inside him. 他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤 3. He felt the warmth surging through his body. 他感到身体里涌动着一股暖流。 4.The loneliness and grief comes in waves. 孤独和悲伤不断涌上心头。 5.So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face. 她是如此羞愧以至于脸如充血般发烫。 6.Her eyes misted over as she immersed herself in their good memories. 当她沉浸在他们之间的美好回忆时，双眼蒙上了一层水雾。 7.Her brain quickened and all her senses were alert. 她的大脑快速运转，所有的感官都处于戒备状态。 8. At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. 一看到那只凶猛的狼，我就被深深地恐惧感所控制,手心出汗. 9. When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. 当主持人宣布她获奖时，她激动得心砰砰跳。 10. Her rage swept through her like a tidal wave, surrounding her like a foul stench. 她的愤怒像潮水一样席卷了她，像恶臭的气味将她包围。 11. “Here!” Alice jumped up, forgetting how large she had grown, and knocked over a basketful of apples just picked from the tree. “在这儿！”爱丽丝激动地一跃，忘记了自己已经长得很大了，结果撞翻了一大篮刚摘的 苹果。 12. She thought of the flowers glittering in the sunshine and the mountains turning rosy in the setting sun. And every night she cried into her pillow as though her heart would break into pieces. 她想起了阳光里闪耀的花儿，落日下慢慢变成玫瑰色的山脉。每一个夜晚，她把头埋在 枕头里哭，肝肠寸断。 13. “In no way will I go back to that hell-like place. Never will anything to do with her disturb me any more.” he roared in his heart like a lion. 他在心里怒吼着：“我绝不回到那个鬼地方。我要忘却一切和她有关的人与事。” 14. “I’m up here,” said a cross little voice above them. “My head hurts.” Mowgli, still in a temper, came sliding down a tree trunk. “我在上面呢。”他们头上传来微弱的声音。“我头疼”毛克利说，他从树上滑了下来，还 生着气。 15. Tears welled up in Mowgli’s eyes as the memory of running wildly in the flowering field with Baloo and Bagheera sparkled into his mind. Would he ever see them again? 想到和巴洛和巴格希拉在开满鲜花的田野里疯跑的那些日子，毛克利的泪水夺眶而出。 他还能见到他们吗？ 板块三--能力提升（现学现用） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Doing things with my father was always fun due to his rich imagination. With his personality, it was amazing how patient Dad could be. I don't recall a time when he stood across my path; he always walked beside, guiding me with__his__own__steps. When, at 10, I announced that I was going to Africa to bring back wild animals, my mother and sisters pointed out my age, the problems of transportation and all such ordinary and unimportant facts. But not Dad. He brought home books about Africa, train and boat schedules for us to study, and even some iron bars which we used to build cages for the animals I was to bring back. When the departure day approached and I was becoming anxious, my father brought home a newspaper that told of an accident on the railroad that was to take me to Baltimore. This postponed my trip and, by the time the train tracks were repaired, he and I were off on a new and more exciting project. When a neighbor's dog killed my dog Bounce, I was determined to kill that dog. I thought it day__after__day,__almost making myself ill with my own hate. “Let's get it done，” my father stated unexpectedly in a__whisper one evening after dinner. I followed him, to discover that he had tied the dog. He gave me a gun, and then stepped back for me to do my work. The dog and I looked at each other. He shook his tail to express friendship. Suddenly the gun was too heavy for me to hold and it dropped to the ground. The dog came up and kissed my hand. The three of us walked home together, the dog jumping in front. No word was ever said about what had happened. None was needed. When President Harding died, the__funeral__train was scheduled to pass through a town about 20 miles from ours. I wanted desperately to go and see this train, but Mother pointed out that there would be school the next day and that it would be a long trip. That ended the discussion. 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1： But when the day arrived, ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： Dad put two pennies into my hand and asked me to put them on the rails.________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ One possible version： But when the day arrived, Dad did not forget. He came to me and, in a voice as near a__whisper as his nature would allow, said, “Jim, boy, it's time to see the__funeral__train．” We drove along to the town without talking much. When we came to the railroad station, a half dozen people were talking in soft tones and looking down the tracks. Suddenly the funeral train was coming! Dad put two pennies into my hand and asked me to put them on the rails. I did as told and jumped back to hold his hand as the train went past. I could hardly breathe. So exciting were the sight and sound. After the train had left, I got back the two pennies from the tracks. Dad put one in his pocket and I kept the other. For years, Dad and I carried those coins pressed by the weight of history. And the knowledge of what we shared made me feel very close to him.