书面表达专题
广西 2018-2019 学年高一英语下学期期中试题
第二节:书面表达(满分 25 分)
71.假设你是李华,五一节放假期间你和爸妈一起到杭州旅游。请根据图示,写一篇游记。
Day 1 Day 2
The West Lake China National Tea Museum Xixi Wetland Park
西湖 中国茶叶博物馆 西溪鸟类湿地
参考词汇:Leifeng Temple 雷锋塔;preserve 保护。
要求:1、适当增加细节,使文章流畅;
2、注意卷面整洁,书写工整;
3、字数为 110 词左右。
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【答案】 My parents and I had a great trip to Hangzhou during the Labor Day holiday, which was full of
surprises.
Our first delight on our first day was going to the West Lake. The lake was clear, reflecting the sky like an
amazingly drawn painting. In the far distance stood the Leifeng Temple, which had remained standing for hundreds
of years. Then followed a tour of China National Tea Museum, where we learned the history of tea making.
The second day, we drove to Xixi Wetland Park. What surprised us most was that people are doing a great deal
to preserve the wetland. There, we saw lots of birds and plants that couldn’t be found anywhere else. The park was
so big that at one time we thought we were lost. The day ended wonderfully.
All in all, the trip was fun and even educational. We all enjoyed it.
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇记事类记叙文。文中要求记述五一假期期间去杭州旅游的情况。本文的时态应当用一般过去时,
人称应当用第一人称为主,第三人称为辅来写此文。从整篇布局上应当分为三个段落,第一段落简要的记
述五一假期的旅行;第二段落描述第 1 天旅行的情况;第三段落描述第 2 天旅行的情况。
【详解】The Labor Day holiday 五一假日,have a visit to/visit 参观,The West Lake 西湖,be full of surprise
处处都有惊喜,reflect 反映,in the distance 远处,China National Tea Museum 中国茶叶博物馆,remain standing
座落,learn the history of 学习历史,drive to 开车到,Xixi Wetland Park 西溪鸟类湿地,Leifeng Temple 雷锋
塔,preserve the wetland 保护湿地,meaningful and educational 有意义的并且有教育意义的。在上述词汇的基
础上,为避免错误先写简单句:1. My parents and I had a great trip to Hangzhou during the Labor Day holiday2.
We visited the West Lake on our first day3. The Lake was very clear 4.the Water reflect the sky like an amazingly
dawn painting5. There stands the Leifeng Temple6. It has the history of hundreds of years 7. The second day we
drove to Xixi Wetland Park8. People there are doing a great deal to preserve the wetland9. The day ended
wonderfully10. The trip was fun , meaningful and educational
【点睛】对上面写的简单句进行信息整合,尽量多使用一些高中所学的句型语法知识。如,第一句句子结
构完整句意写完,但我们可以加一个非限定语从句以补充说明 My parents and I had a great trip to Hangzhou
during the Labor Day holiday, which was full of surprises.2. We visited the West Lake on our first day.第 3 句话和
第 4 句话都是描述湖水干净的可以用分词做状语 进行整合:The Lake was very clear , reflecting the sky like an
amazingly dawn painting.第 5 句和第 6 句都是描述雷峰塔的,可以用非限定性定语从句进行整合:There stands
the Leifeng Temple in the distance, which has the history of hundreds of years 7. The second day we drove to Xixi
Wetland Park.第 8 句可以加入表达我们的感情句子,加一个主语从句 what surprised us most was that people
there are doing a great deal to preserve the wetland.9. The day ended wonderfully10. The trip was fun , meaningful
and educational 完成上述步骤之后,就已经形成了文章的初稿。然后,我们再次阅读全文,检查文中是否存
在拼写或语法错误,并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇,如 to begin with,moreover,as for me,at last, all in all
等,使全文衔接自然,语义流畅。
广西桂林市中山中学 2018-2019 学年高一英语下学期期中试题
第二节:书面表达 (25 分)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友琳达正在你市某所中学作交换生。她发来邮件说她正因为
不知道该给好友买什么生日礼物而苦恼。请用英语给她回一封邮件,要点如下:
1. 你对生日及生日礼物的看法; 2. 给她提建议。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾以给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I am sorry to hear that ________________________________________________________
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I hope you find my ideas helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
书面表达:
Dear Linda,
I am sorry to hear that you are unhappy about not knowing what birthday gift to buy for your friend. For me,
a birthday is a time when I can share good times with my family and friends. Whatever gifts I receive from them, I
will be satisfied as they show their care for me.
In fact, I would prefer handsome gifts rather than ready-made ones. It is not necessary for us to buy our
friends an expensive gift because friendship is not valued by the price of a gift. From my point of view, a handmade
birthday card or your favourite book is all that is necessary to express your love for your friend.
I hope you find my ideas helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
广西 2018-2019 学年高一英语下学期期中试题
第二节 书面表达(满分 25 分)
假设你是李华,你校拟举办茶文化讲座。请你给留学生朋友 Robert 写封邮件邀请他参加。
内容包括:
1.讲座的时间、地点
2.活动安排
3.喝茶的好处
注意:
1.词数 100 左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
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Dear Robert,
As is scheduled, our school will hold a lecture on the history of Chinese tea. The lecture will be
addressed/delivered in the lecture hall of our school on June 8th next Saturday afternoon, beginning at 3 and lasting
about two hours. Professor Wang will give us a lecture about the history of Chinese tea and its main types, followed
by a performance of Chinese tea show.
It has been a tradition for us Chinese people to drink tea for ages. And drinking tea is of great benefit to our health,
contributing to keeping us slim and refreshed. I’m sure you’ll be fascinated about it during your stay here. Will you
be available to attend the lecture?
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封信。
第 1 步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封信:你是李华,你校拟举办茶文化讲座。请你给留学生朋友 Robert 写
封邮件邀请他参加。全文时态应为一般现在时。
第 2 步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),例如 a lecture on the history of Chinese tea(中国茶历史的讲座),
be of great benefit to(对….有好处), the lecture will be addressed/delivered in…(讲座将在……举行),等。
第 3 步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第 4 步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,并保持整洁
美观的卷面。
【点睛】
范文内容完整,语言规范优美,过渡自然。范文的最大亮点是非谓语动词的使用。比如 The lecture will be
addressed/delivered in the lecture hall of our school on June 8th next Saturday afternoon, beginning at 3 and lasting
about two hours. 分句使用了现在分词做伴随状语;followed by a performance of Chinese tea show 为过去分
词做伴随状语。除了非谓语动词的使用,该范文也是使用了定语从句:As is scheduled, our school will hold a
lecture on the history of Chinese tea.考生可以模仿该范文中非谓语动词的使用,为自己的范文增光添彩。
广西龙胜中学 2018-2019 学年高一英语下学期期中试题
第二节 书面表达(25 分)
假定你是李华,你们学校要举办“汉服文化节”活动,旨在宣传汉服礼仪,宣扬华夏文化。得知你的
英国朋友 Mary 对汉服感兴趣,请根据以下内容给 Mary 写一封邀请信,内容包括:
1. 写信的目的;
2. 活动的时间、地点和意义;
3. 活动的内容。
参考词汇:汉服文化节 Hanfu Cultural Festival 礼仪,规矩 etiquette n.
注意:1. 词数 100 左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
广西柳江中学 2018-2019 学年高一英语下学期期中试题
第二节 书面表达(满分 25 分)
我们都知道,阅读使人明智,阅读使人充实。阅读的好处很多,但是,目前许多中学生都不重视阅读。
请你根据下表内容写一篇 120 词左右的英语短文,对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。文中不能出现真实的
人名,校名和地名。
内容要点如下:
1.不重视阅读的原因 1.作业多,课时多…… 2.时间花在……
2.阅读的好处
3.你的建议
开头已经给出,不计入词数
At present only a few students do some reading. Here are some reasons.