上海市 2021 年高考英语冲刺模拟试卷分类汇编
书面表达专题
2021 届上海高考英语冲刺模拟试卷 1
V. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given
below in Chinese.
如今，电子支付（electronic payment）成为潮流，现金的使用频率越来越低。请你简要说明
电子支付在生活中的具体应用，并谈谈你时电子支付是否会取代现金的看法。你的文章 必
须包括：
1.简要说明电子支付在生活中的具体应用；
2.电子支付是否会取代现金？为什么？
【答案】There is a growing trend that electronic payment has dominated our lives, and we are
gradually stepping into a cashless society.
Take a quick look at your daily life, and you will find e-payment has covered every aspect of
life today.It’s hard to imagine without Alipay how you can make online purchases on Taobao with
a few simple clicks.Without WeChat, how can you unlock a shared bike and pay for the fee? E-
payments are also almost universally accepted by brick-and-mortar stores.In one sense, we now
literally have everything at our fingertips thanks to electronic payment.
Eventually, I believe, e-payment will replace cash.For one thing, it stands out for its
incomparable convenience.Not only does it spare us the trouble of carrying cash everywhere, but
it also saves us enormous amounts of time that would have otherwise been wasted, for example,
in long queues.For another, it eliminates the necessity to worry about whether the banknotes
you’ve received are real of fake.E-payment also makes it easier for the government to supervise
the circulation of money by offering a transparent environment for electronic payments.
Admittedly, e-payment has its own drawbacks, such as potentially severe consequences if
one’s account is hacked or stolen.But with the improvement of relevant law and regulations, the
problem is sure to be kept at bay.
To put it in a nutshell, electronic payment can simplify daily affairs, regulate the flow of
money and will ultimately dominate our everyday life.I am looking forward to a convenient,
time-saving and safe cashless society.
2021 届上海高考英语冲刺模拟试卷 2
VI. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given
below in Chinese.
假设你是李华，学校学生会有四个社团正招募新人（如下图所示），你希望加入其中一个。
请你写一封应征信，谈谈你的想法。内容必须包括：
1.你希望加入的社团
2.选择该社团的原因
3.你可以为该社团做些什么
注意：请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Sir,
I am Li Hua , a senior high school student from Class one Grade three. Hearing the news
that the student union is recruiting new members for four communities including Science club,
English theatre club, Eco club and sports club in my school, which has attached many students’
attention. Now I can hardly wait to forward a formal application , hoping to join a
community that l am keen on after class
As far as l am concerned, l am eager to join Sports club because of the following reasons.
First and foremost,not only should we go to all lengths to study hard in order to acquire more and
more knowledge, but we also should do exercises to strengthen physical fitness. In the second
place, the reason why l prefer Sports club is that doing sports is one of the most useful ways to
have a relaxation after studying for a long period. Last but not least, doing sports that are in need
of cooperation among students such as football, basketball and volleyball can cultivate our team
spirit so that we are aware that union is strength and know the importance of cooperation. All
these reasons make me be absorbed in joining Sports club. If l am elected to be a member of
Sports club, l will take active part in all activities.What l can devote myself to the construction of
the community is that l can convey the positive theories of sports to my friends and classmates and
awaken them to the realization that joining Sports club is the best choice.l am fascinated by being
a member of Sports club.
I’d appreciate it so much if you could possibly consider my application. Looking forward
to you reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求谈谈自己对于加入社团的选择及内心想法。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应征信（夹叙夹议）
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法（或总分总）
要求：
1.你希望加入的社团
2.选择该社团的原因
3.你可以为该社团做些什么
第二步:列提纲（重点词组）
join Sports club
do exercises to strengthen physical fitness
one of the most useful ways to have a relaxation
cultivate our team spirit
第三步：连词成句
1.As far as l am concerned,l am eager to join Sports club because of the following reasons.
2.we also should do exercises to strengthen physical fitness.
3.In the second place,the reason why l prefer Sports club is that doing sports is one of the most
useful ways to have a relaxation after studying for a long period.
4.Last but not least,doing sports that are in need of cooperation among students such as
football,basketball and volleyball can cultivate our team spirit.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
用词参考：
As far as l am concerned
not only…but also…
First and foremost
In the second place
Last but not least
【点睛】[高分句型 1] First and foremost,not only should we go to all lengths to study hard in
order to acquire more and more knowledge, but we also should do exercises to strengthen physical
fitness.(not only 位于句首的部分倒装)
[高分句型 2] If l am elected to be a member of Sports club,l will take active part in all activities.
（if 引导的条件状语从句）
[高分句型 3] What l can devote myself to the construction of the community is that l can convey
the positive theories of sports to my friends and classmates and awaken them to the realization that
joining Sports club is the best choice.（what 引导的主语从句）
2021 届上海高考英语冲刺模拟试卷 3
VII. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given
below in Chinese.
现在中国购物网站非常繁荣，很多人选择网上购物而不是去商场实体店购物，你更倾向于哪
种购物方式，并说出你的理由。
注意：请勿出现真实的学校及姓名。
Nowadays, online shopping has become an irreversible trend. Some people claim that online
shopping has more advantages while others maintain that physical stores are better.
From my perspective, I prefer online shopping for three reasons. First of all, its super
convenience is of vital importance to me because it enables me to save more time and energy for
my work. Secondly，more choices and more different kinds of commodities are offered on the
Internet so that I can compare prices，types，qualities and can even refer to people's comments
before choosing the appropriate one for me. Last but not least, online shopping enables me to buy
things across different countries without travelling around the world, which is of great
convenience on a daily basis.
All in all, online shopping is more appealing to me and will definitely keep accompanying
me in the future.
2021 届上海高考英语冲刺模拟试卷 4
V. Guided Writing （25 分）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given
below in Chinese.
假如你是 Tom,在网上订了一款 MP3 作为生日礼物送给好朋友，但收到的 MP3 却存在
质 量问题。请你给销售经理写一封投诉信。内容包括：
1. MP3 有质量问题；
2. 给你造成的损失；
3. 你的合理要求.
Dear manager，
I’m writing to tell you about the MP3 I bought last week from your company on the Internet,
which was intended for my good friend as a birthday gift.
When I opened the delivery, I was surprised to find the wrapping paper broken. What was
worse, I find the MP3 doesn’t work, no matter how many measures I have taken.
With reference to my order No. 1314, there is no doubt that the MP3 you delivered really
comes from your company, whose poor quality made me very disappointed, and it is the poor MP3
that made me suffer a great loss from it. Anyway, it cost me 200 yuan, which I saved for nearly
half a year. To some extent, the broken MP3 has not only brought me great economic loss but also
lessened my trust as a consumer.
As my friend’s birthday is drawing near, I am anxious to know whether a new MP3 can be
redelivered as soon as possible. Please take my case into deep consideration rather than turn a
blind eye to my requirement. I would appreciate it very much if much attention could be paid to
my requirement!
Yours truly,
Tom
2021 届上海高考英语冲刺模拟试卷 5
VIII. Guided Writing （25 分）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given
below in Chinese.
学校学生广播正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（科学技术、兴趣爱好、文学艺术）
中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（旅行、环保、健身）中挑选一个纳入该电视台节目。假设
你是该校学生李华，给广播台长写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：
1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；
2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。
参考范文：
Guided Writing
Dear Present，
I’m writing to express some of my opinions towards our school’s broadcast which intends to
change one of the programs from science technology, interest hobby and literature art and select
one of them from travelling, environmental protection, fitness.
From my perspective, I would choose “interest hobby” to be the one to be eliminated. Not
only is this topic out of date, but also students’ interest varies a lot. Therefore, they may be
indifferent about others’ interest and hobbies.
As for the column to be added, I highly recommend is fitness. As senior high students, so
busy are we with our study that we often forget to do some physical exercise and even don’t know
how to keep fit to avoid getting ill. If the school broadcast can provide us some useful advice on
how to keep fit in a good way, which will benefit us a lot and as a result I believe that it will be
more popular among students.
I’d appreciate it very much if you could follow my advice, and I’m looking forward to hear
from you as soon as possible.
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
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