How to do
Proof-reading
高
中
英
语
短
文
改
错
考 查 目 标
1)识别错误 并正确校正语篇的能力
2)综合运用英语知识的能力
3)准确理解语篇,掌握内容及行文逻
辑的能力
1. I can go to home now.
2. I like playing piano.
3. I am fond at English.
the
Wrong word
∧Missing word
of
toUnnecessary
word
高考短文改错的考察方式
短文改错题设错为:多一个词(约1题)、少一个词(约1题)、错一个词(约8题)。
短文改错设错的基本原则
短文改错题设错为:
多一个词(1题)(虚词)
少一个词(1题) (虚词)
错一个词(8题)
添加和删除的词通常是虚词
1. 单词拼写
2. 大小写
3. 单词词序
4. 标点符号
"四不改"
解题步骤
1.(浏览全文,掌握大意)
2.(分句阅读,逐行找错)
3.(检查核对,攻克难点)
Task 1完成下列短文改错练习。然后参照表格,
标出考点,考查内容以及考查方式。
2018年高考英语试卷(新课标III卷)
It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just
begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be
called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some
of us were confident and eager take part in the class
activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done
myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to
speak in front of a larger group of people. At that
moment, I remembered that my father once said, “The
classroom is a place for learning and that include
leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well.”
Immediate, I raised my hand
2018年高考英语试卷(新课标III卷)
It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just
begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be
called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some
of us were confident and eager to take part in the class
activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done
myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to
speak in front of a larger group of people. At that
moment, I remembered that my father once said, “The
classroom is a place for learning and that include
leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well.”
Immediate, I raised my hand
2017年高考英语试卷(新课标III卷)
When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how
fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also
mentally in the past few years. About one month after
this photo was took, I entered my second year of high
school and become a new member of the school music
club. Around me in the picture are the things they were
very important in my life at that time; car magazines
and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference
kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and
collecting the late music albums. This picture often
brings back to me many happy memories of your high
school days.
动词形,名词数.
还要注意形和副.
代词格,细领悟
介词短语须关注.
冠词连词常光顾.
A
Limerick
非谓语,细辨别.
句子成分多分析.
习惯用法要记住.
逻辑错误需关注
Task 2考点总结:
Task 3: 刚刚过去的10月份,最令人同(ha)情(ppy)
的事莫过于“懂王”川普感染上了新冠病毒,真
是让人感叹命运的轮回与人生的无常...... 为了鼓
励川普,David给他写了一封信。但是在信寄出
前,请你帮忙修改其中的语言错误(共10处),
并完成后面的任务。
1. 请在信件原文中修改语言错误(共10处)。
2. 这封信中的语言错误都涉及到哪些考点呢?请
在下表中打勾:(每题对应一个考点)
3. 如果这封信作为短文改错的题目出现在2021年
高考全国III卷中(这当然是不可能的...),那么
它的题目设置上有什么不合理的地方吗?
Task 4 2021年高考命题组邀请你参与短文改错命
题,材料如下,请设置改错题目。
My mom is really concerned with the health
of everyone in our family. In order to make sure
all of us are in good health, she makes specific
plans for us. For example, every morning, my
dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have
to eat an apple. My dad doesn’t like the soup and
I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re
forced to eat things, we may become ill.
But she insists on us eating healthy food.
Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the
food that is provided by Mom with appreciation.
2020全国卷3原版
My mom is really concerning with the health of
everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of
us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for
us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the
bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad
don’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my
mom that if we’re forced eat things, we may become ill.
But he insists on us eating healthy food.
Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food
what is provided by Mom with appreciation.
一、动词形
1.动词的时态和语态错误.
2. 主、谓不一致的错误。
高考链接1:
When the air move, we have wind.
moves
1.Water pollution often bring on disease.
2.So far, he made a living by picking up
wastes.
3.The church burned down yesterday
date from the 18th century.
4.Compare to 1992, the price of grain
was increased about 50%.
5.Judge From his accent, he is a
southerner.
6.With a boy led the way,they started
towards the village.
brings
has
dates
Judging
leading
动 词 返回
Compared
二、名词数
指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。
高考链接2:
We write to each other all the times.
time
1.Don’t lose hearts, you’ll be
successful in time.
2.I need some more informations.
3.These machines look the same,but
they are of different kind.
名词和数词 返回
heart
information
kinds
三、还要注意形和副
1.修饰名词,be动词,系动词要用形容词
2.修饰动词,形容词,过去分词,整个句子用
副词
3.比较级和最高级的使用
高考链接3:
It is still hardly for me to write in English.
hard
1.The bad news made us feel
sadly.________
2.The children learn to read and
write,they play games as good.
________
3.It’s not good to keep children
busily with their studies all day long.
________
形容词和副词
返回
sad
well
busy
四、 代词格,细领悟
• 人称代词,物主代词的使用.
2.反身代词oneself 的使用.
3.人称代词的主格和宾格 4.不定代词的使用.
5.Both, all, either, neither, none的使用.
6. Whose 和who’s, its和 it’s的区别.
高考链接4:
I heard that Mr. Wang would teach our
English this term. us
1.Knowing is one thing; doing is
other._______
2.I also enjoyed the days when we
spent together. ___________
3.He drove too fast, and the police
stopped her and handed him a ticket.
_______
代 词
返回
another
(that/which)
him
五、介词短语须关注,
习惯用法要记住.
主要考查固定短语,固定介词的搭配。
高考链接5:
The man is sitting next his son.
to
∧
1.Don’t get into the habit at
smoking. ___________
2.He called on Jenny on the hope of
getting help from her. ___________
3.A great many of students would
like give up drinking. ___________
介 词 返回
of
in
of
1. 冠词a, an和the的用法错误.
2.连词but,and,or, so和although的
用法错误.
高考链接6:
• What a good news we’ve heard.
2. I’m sorry, and I won’t be able
to come tonight . but
六、冠词连词常光顾
a
1.You can’t consider him a honest man.
_____
2.In China,children usually start school
at an age of seven. 2_______
3.It is necessary for the teachers to add
the art to their teachings. 3_______
冠 词
an
the
the
1.Though it was cold, but he went out
without a cat. _________
2.Whatever you do, and I’ll be right here
waiting for you. _________
3.This kind of car costs a lot of money, and
he can afford it. _________
连 词
but
and
but
Four points that you should pay attention to
①标点符号不改.
②大小写不改.
③词序错误不改.
④在纲外生词不改(带汉语注释的词).
小 结
做短文该错应采取三个步骤
1.通读短文,掌握大意
2.细读全文,逐一作答
3.复读全文,验证答案
At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
1._____
father to choose a Christmas tree. They
choose
2._____
a big one. It was almost as taller as the
room!
3._____
They put them in the corner of the sitting
4._____
on
chose
tall
it
动词形
介词短语常常考,习惯用法要记住
还要注意形和副
代词格,细领悟
room. Kate was covered it with a lot of
5._____
Christmas light. The sitting room looked
6. ____
really beautifully at the moment. There
was
7. ________
a fire burning in the fire place, but the
Chistmas
8. ____
tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and
9. ____
hisparents singing and dancing happily.
10.____
\
was\
_______
lights
_____________
beautiful
_____
and
√
∧were
动词形
还要注意形和副
动词形
名词数
冠词连词须关注
巩固练习
Another problem is that good soil is gradual lost.
1_________
When trees is cut down,there is nothing to hold
2_________
the soil in the place on the hillside. So when it
3_________
rained,the soil is washed down the hills and into
4_________
the rivers.Strong winds can also blow out the
5_________
valuable soil lies on the top of the fields.
6________________
gradually
are
the
rains
away
which/that
考点剖析:
(1) 英语和汉语在某些方面的表
达差异是常考点之一 .
(2) 某些从句引导词的误用.
(3) 某些固定表达结构的误用.
解决方案:
(1) 培养用英语思维的良好习惯,
避免汉语影响.
(2) 分析句子成分,把握句子结 .
(3) 结合上下文,完整领会短文内
容 .
纵观近年高考英语短文改错题,
学生和老师都 认为难度不大,
然而,每年高考中还是有不少考
生对此题深感头痛,主要原因是:
一 .考生的英语基础知识 不扎实.
二.考生缺乏对短文改错命题 特
点的了解和做题 规律方法的总
结.
那么,做短文改错题 有哪些规律和方
法呢?
平时学习应注意做到以下几点:
1. 广泛阅读,增强语感,提高语言知
识运用的准确性 .
2. 规范使用常用的词语和习语.
3. 训练敏锐的观察力,努力发现细微
差错.
4.改错训练和书面表达训练结合.
5.多接触正确的内容,练习改错时
间应适量 .
做题 时应注意以下几点:
1. 通读全文,了解文章大意.
2. 细读每个完整句子,前后联
系 .
3. 注意改错题符号标注的统一要
求,不能使用汉语说明 .
4. 注意分析句子结构,发现语法
上或逻辑上的错误 .
5. 复读全文,看语法和意思是否
都 正确.
临场应试技巧 :
做短文改错时只要记住“三
歩”,“六原则和“四不改”就
能提高得分率。
1. 通读全文,掌握大意 .
2. 逐句推敲,审查,改正错误 .
3. 复读全文,修订答案 .
六原则:
1. 在有错行改动一词。
2. 改变实词形式,不能将一个实词换成
另一个实词.
3. 最小限度地改变单词形式 .
4. 添加或删除虚词(如冠词,介词等).
5. 多改正,少添加或删除.
6. 最大限度地保持句子和短文原意.
四不改:
1. 单词拼写不改 .
2. 大小写不改 .
3. 词序不改 .
4. 标点符号不改 .