读后续写语料积累1 (2020年1月浙江卷）课件16张

读后续写语料应用（一） 2021.01 浙江卷 • Pumpkin (南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage-I carried an 85-pounder back last year. • This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time. • With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders. • My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight，I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space. • Paragraph 1 •It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer. The air inside the hollow vegetable was full of my anxious breath. I could hear my sister’s laughter and Jason’s muffled voice talking about cutting the giant thing open. “No! Not my precious pumpkin!” I protested. Eventually, Dad helped me adjust my body to a more relaxed position, and pulled the pumpkin gently off my head. Hair in knots, nose and chain covered in pumpkin flesh, I let out a sigh of relief. That’s when I realized the camera had been rolling the whole time! • Paragraph 2 •The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. I looked just like a pumpkin head in it. Embarrassed and a little annoyed, I fled to my room, but Mom stopped me. “You haven’t read the comments yet.” I scrolled down the screen and marveled at the stories the viewers shared about Halloween. One girl recalled celebrating it with her brothers and sisters, and thanked us for “bringing her home”. The words brought warmth to my heart and tears to my eyes. I felt lucky to be a part of this mischievous yet loving family. (171 words) It was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. It was hard to tell It was hard to tell whether he told a lie or not. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. Unfortunately Unfortunately , she failed to manage the company. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. I was determined to Knowing that the chance was too small, I was still determined to send my resume to the company. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. It was only when...that I realized... It was only when she was racing to the airport that she realized she hadn't brought her ID card with her. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space. “...!” sb shouted, sb’s voice sounding... “Come on! Come on!”, she shouted, her voice sounding extremely excited. The air inside the hollow vegetable was full of my anxious breath. be full of The air in the bus was full of silence. Hair in knots, nose and chain covered in pumpkin flesh, I let out a sigh of relief. I let out a sigh of relief Seeing her sister sleeping soundly in her bed, she let out a sigh of relief. Embarrassed and a little annoyed, I fled to my room, but Mom stopped me. V-ed and V-ed, I fled to... Disappointed and heart-broken, she slammed the door and drove away without saying anything. The words brought warmth to my heart and tears to my eyes.