专题04 提出建议-2021年高考考前写作语料积累与范文必背

专题 04 考前写作语料积累与范文必背(附范文 8 篇） 提出建议 一 经典句式背诵 1．开头常用语 ①I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ... ②I’m very glad to receive your letter and it’s a pleasure to tell you something about ... ③You asked me for my advice on ...and I will try to make some suggestions. ④Thanks for trusting me.It’s my pleasure to give you some suggestions/advice. ⑤In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action. ⑥Here are some tips to help you./Here are a few suggestions. 2．正文常用语 ①It is important to do ... ②It should be a good idea to do ... ③If I were you, I would do ... ④Why not ...？/Why don’t you ...? ⑤Only in this way can you ... ⑥I think it would be more helpful if you could do ... ⑦First, you should do ... ⑧I would like to suggest you should do ... ⑨As far as I am concerned .../In my opinion ... ⑩You had better do .../You must .../You should ... 3．结尾常用语 ①I hope you’ll make great progress in ... ②I hope you will find these suggestions useful. ③I hope you will take my advice into account. ④I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. ⑤I would be ready to discuss this matter with you about further details. 二 实战演练与范文必背 Exercise 1 你的英国朋友 Jim 所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之 旅”。Jim 来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括： 1．你建议的线路； 2.你的理由； 3.你的祝愿。 注意：1.词数不少于 50； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 范文必背 Dear Jim, I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China. Of_the_two_trips_to_the_Yangtze_River_and_Mount_Tai,_both_are_highly_recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover,_the_scenery_along_the_river_is_amazing, with many well known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice. Hope you’ll have a good time in China. Yours， Li Hua Exercise 2 假定你是李华，最近你校正准备组织学生进行旅游活动，学校特向同学们征求意见，请你给林校长写 一封建议信，内容包括： 1．推荐一个旅游城市； 2．推荐理由(2～3 个)； 3．希望校长考虑。 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 范文必背 Dear Mr Lin， Knowing that our school is asking for our opinions about which city to enjoy, I would like to recommend a famous one — Guilin.The reasons are as follows. Lying along the Lijiang River, Guilin is a key tourist city which is famous for its beautiful scenery in the world.With clear water and green hills, it attracts thousands of tourists every year.Besides, it’s a charming city with rich culture and a long history, where you can enjoy a variety of caves and carvings.I’m sure you will have a good time when you are in Guilin. I will be extremely glad and honored if my recommendation is helpful! Yours， Li Hua Exercise 3 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。升学季将至,你的英国朋友 Jim 感到学习压力很大。请你给他写一封 电子邮件,内容包括: 1.深表理解; 2.具体建议。 注意: 1. 词数: 100 词左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ​ Yours, Li Hua 范文必背 Dear Jim, Don’t worry too much! It’s perfectly normal for candidates like you and me to feel a bit stressed as the examinations get closer. No one of us is having an easy time. But still we can do something to successfully get through the next few weeks. The most important thing I think is to take good care of ourselves: eat and sleep on time to keep healthy, and take exercise regularly to increase energy. Whenever you feel tired or depressed, spare some time to have fun with families and friends. As for school work, I think it’s essential to find out what needs to be done. Then make a schedule and set time for each subject, which will ensure us enough time to review. Anyway, don’t push yourself too hard. Just relax! Everything will be fine. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua Exercise4 假如你是李华。最近, 你的好友 Jane 开始了早恋, 为此, 你非常的担忧。请你根据以下要的提示, 给她 写封英文信。 1. 表示担忧; 2. 指出弊端(2 点); 3. 提出建议(2 点)。 注意: 1.词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 参考词汇: 开始早恋 start puppy love Dear Jane, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ​ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 范文必背 Dear Jane, On learning that you’ve started puppy love, I can’t but feel worried about you, which is why I’m writing to you so eagerly. Obviously, puppy love is harmful for you since you’re still a high school student. For one thing, once lost in puppy love, you will no longer be interested in studying attentively. What’s worse, you might be mentally hurt if the puppy love is gone. To get rid of the puppy love, you’d better turn to your parents or friends for some practical advice. More importantly, it’s helpful to take part in some activities so that you will be too busy to think about the puppy love. Hopefully, you’ll be free from puppy love soon enough.(共 118 词) ​ Yours sincerely, Li Hua Exercise5 假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Jason 写来邮件请你推荐几本介绍中国文化的书籍。请你给 他回一封邮件, 内容包括: 1. 推荐的书名及作者; 2. 书的内容简介; 3. 推荐理由。 注意:词数 100 左右。 Dear Jason, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 范文必背 Dear Jason, ​ I am delighted to know you are enthusiastic about Chinese culture, which is diverse and unique. Looking back on its long history, Chinese culture contributes enormously to the world. I strongly recommend three books. The first is Insights into Chinese Culture written by Ye Lang and Zhu Liangzhi, who explore the inner spirit and core value of Chinese culture. Another is Yu Qiuyu’s Chinese Culture Courses, popularizing Chinese traditional culture comprehensively. The third book is Lao Tzu’s Tao Te Ching, a classic of Chinese philosophical literature. I tend to buy a lot of books, and these three are among the ones that can particularly bring me knowledge and broaden my horizons. I hope they will add to your understanding of Chinese Culture. Yours, Li Hua Exercise6 假设你是李华,下面是你的笔友 Shirley 写给你的电子邮件,请结合你自己的实际情况给她回复,并提出合理 化的建议及理由。 注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Li Hua, I found myself addicted (痴迷;上瘾) to cell phone terribly. Every day, I spend so much time in playing my cell phone that I can’t devote myself to my homework. Worse still, my eyes sometimes feel painful after watching the small screen for a long time. Last, the relation (关系) between me and my families or friends are getting worse because we lack(缺乏) face-to-face talks. I know cell-phone addiction is harmful to me, but I just don’t know how to quit(停止) it. Could you please give me some advice on it? Yours Sincerely, Shirley Dear Shirley, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 范文必背 Dear Shirley, I’m sorry to learn that you suffer a lot from cell phone addiction and I’m writing to offer you some advice on how to quit it. Firstly, it is advisable to set a limit to the time spent on your phone, which can help you not to use the phone too much. Secondly, you can keep yourself busy by doing meaningful matters like homework, housework or sports. Not only can they keep you away from cell phone but also they are beneficial to your physical and mental health. Lastly, list all harmful effects about misusing a phone, which can strengthen you resolve on quitting your cell phone. I do hope my suggestions are useful and would be more than happy if you can lead as healthy and active a life as I have. Yours Truly, Li Hua Exercise 7 假定你是李华,你的美国朋友 Peter 想提高中文水平,进一步了解中国文化。请给他写一封信, 推荐学习 资源 (resource)。内容包括: 1. 学习资源:报纸、杂志及其他途径; 2. 推荐理由; 3. 表达祝愿。 注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 范文必背 Dear Peter, ​ I am glad to hear that you are eager to improve your Chinese and know more about Chinese culture. It’s my pleasure to recommend you some resources. Reading some popular newspapers and magazines, such as Southern Weekly and Readers, is the first choice, from which you can get lots of information about Chinese customs. Besides, there are other ways to experience the Chinese language and culture on the Internet, on TV or with some apps. The interesting news and stories in these resources are so amazing that you will never feel bored. You can benefit a lot from them. I sincerely hope that you can make more progress in learning Chinese and have a better understanding of Chinese culture. Yours, Li Hua Exercise 8 假如你是李华,你的朋友 Daniel 给你发邮件说他想在美国办个主题为“中国风”(Chinese-themed)摄影展。 他想来你的家乡收集素材。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括: 1.介绍家乡特色; 2.提出建议; 3.安排接机。 注意: 1. 词数 100 左右 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 范文必背 Dear Daniel, I am so glad to know that you will be coming to China soon. Regarding your Chinese-themed photography exhibition, you really don’t have to worry about collecting materials. I will plan it out for you. Above all, I will make a brief introduction on the characteristics of my hometown. Ganzhou, as a culturally advanced city, has a long history. Food and historical culture are the two main features. Besides, I hope to make some suggestions, which may be useful. I advise you to illustrate the theme from three aspects---ancient architecture, exotic food and traditional culture in Ganzhou. Thus you can not only satisfy your stomach but fulfill your shots’ needs. Let me know what you think as well. Also, don’t forget to send me the details of your flight so that I can pick you up at the airport on time. See you soon!