专题 08 考前写作语料积累与范文必背(附范 5 篇)
请求帮助
一 经典句式背诵
1.开头常用语
①I am writing to ask for your help.
②I am writing in the hope of your assistance in ...
③I wonder whether I could ask you a favor.
④I wonder if you could spare some time to help me.
⑤I am anxious to get help from you.
2.正文常用语
①I have some difficulties in ...
②What I am worried about a lot is that ...
③I am poor in overcoming the difficulties in ...
④Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for help.
⑤I hope you could let me know if ...
⑥Would you like to do me a favor to ...?
⑦I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.
⑧In the meanwhile/At the same time, I beg you to ...so that ...Also, I would like you to ...
3.结尾常用语
①Thank you for your time and patience, and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
②I would like to thank you for your generous help in this case.
③Could you please help me ...?
④I’d appreciate it if you’d like to offer me a helping hand.
⑤Would you please be kind enough to offer me some advice?
二 实战演练与范文必背
Exercise 1
(全国新课标卷)假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中
心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定,你须书面预约,请按下列要点写一封信:
1.本人简介;
2.求助内容;
3.约定时间;
4.你的联系方式(Email:lihua@126.com;Phone:12345678)。
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.结束语已为你写好。
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文必背
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m_Li_Hua,_a_Chinese_student,_taking_summer_courses_in_your_university.I’m writing to ask for help.
I came here last month and found my courses interesting.But I have some difficulties with notetaking and I
don’t know how to use the library. I_was_told_that_the_Learning_Center_provides_help_for_students_and
_I’m_anxious_to_get_help_from_you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons.Please let me
know which day is OK with you.You may email or phone me.Here are my email address and phone number:
lihua@126.com; 12345678.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Exercise 2
假定你是李华。最近,你与父母之间关系紧张,甚至发生争吵。你决定给外国的笔友 Charlie 写一封信,
向他求助。内容包括:
1.谈谈你目前遇到的问题;
2.针对如何改善与父母的关系向他求助。
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Charlie,
How are you getting along?____________________________________________________
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I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文必背
Dear Charlie,
How are you getting along? Recently I have quarreled with my parents, which makes me very annoyed.I am
writing to ask you for help.
You know, my parents don’t allow me to go out and play with my friends at weekends.They think I should
make full use of every minute to work on my lessons.However, I think I need to play with my friends so that I can
relax myself after a week’s hard work at school and it is a good way for me to keep in touch with my friends.I know
it is wrong to quarrel with them, but I don’t know what to do to persuade them to change their mind and develop a
good relationship with them.Would you please offer me some advice?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Exercise 3
假定你是高中生李华, 想在高考后报考英语专业, 但目前你的口语偏差。偶然的一个机会, 你从网上发现
外籍教师 Hanna 在线辅导英语口语。请根据以下要点写一封求助信, 内容包括:
1. 介绍自己的情况;
2. 向外教求助;
3. 表示感谢并期盼回复。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Hanna,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
范文必背
Dear Hanna,
I’m Li Hua, a high school student from China. Learning by chance that you are tutoring oral English online,
I’m writing to ask you for help.
During the past ten years, I have acquired basic knowledge of English and developed a great interest in it.
Thus, I plan to major in English after graduating from high school. What bothers me most is that although I have
done well in English exams, I find my oral English so poor that I fail to communicate with others in fluent English.
That’s why I long for a tutor to help me improve my oral English. Would you please give me a hand?
I would deeply appreciate it if you could do me a favor. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Exercise 4
假如你是李华,还有一个月就要进入高三了,你现在的压力很大,身体状况越来越糟,现请你写信向自己在
美国的大学生笔友 Tom 求助:
内容:
1.你的健康问题;
2.你的压力;
3.请求帮助并感谢。
注意:
1.词数 100 词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
范文必背
Dear Tom,
I am Li Hua, a Senior 1 student. Recently, having met some difficulties which trouble me a lot, I’m writing to
ask you for help.
To begin with, I'm struggling to finish my tons of homework recently, which makes me confused and annoyed.
Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me feel stressed because I dislike it when I
disappoint them. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night, which has a bad
influence on my daily life.
Faced with the problems above, I have no choice but to turn to you for help. Could you please offer me some
advice on how to solve these problems? Your kind early reply will be highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
Exercise 5
假定你是李华,打算参加由 China Daily 举办的主题为 My Chinese Dream 的英语征文比赛,你写了一篇文
章,想要请你校外教 Henry 帮忙修改润色。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.提出请求;
2.表示感谢。
注意:
1.词数 80 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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范文必背
Dear Henry,
I'm writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
Encouraged by my parents and head teacher,I will take part in the English essay contest held by China Daily.
The theme of the contest is My Chinese Dream,which inspires us to give our own definition and interpretation of
the concept based on our own experiences. I have written an article and I need your help. Will it be convenient for
you to point out some possible grammatical mistakes and polish the article for me?
I would appreciate it if you could help me. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua