读后续写语料应用(三)
2020.06 全国新高考卷(山东)
• The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the
economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost
their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends
meet. People were trying to help each other meet the
challenges.
• Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She
spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they
had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she
had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.
• One morning she told her children about a family she had
visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife,
who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their
little boy. The little boy - his name was Bernard - had
interested her very much.
• “I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and
Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some
money, but I don't see what he can do.”
• After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I
wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering
so much.”
• “So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”
• For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet
and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help
accomplish (完成).”
• The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it
was sure to be a good one. I’ll tell you what we can do,” said John. “You
know that big box of com Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn
(爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the
houses and sell it.”
• Paragraph 1
•When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she
thought it was a good one, too. So, they went to
the local supermarket together. They bought a
bag of corn and some special bags for popcorn.
When they got home, they made a lot of popcorn
and put it in the special bags. With the popcorn,
they went to Bernard’s home. They told Bernard
how to sell the popcorn. Bernard and his parents
were very grateful. And the Meredith family also
felt very happy to help this family.
• Paragraph 2
•With everything ready, Bernard started out on his
new business. He took the popcorn around to the
houses and sold all his popcorn. He earned a lot
of money. Then, he wanted to be self-dependent.
Therefore, he asked Mrs. Meredith to teach him
how to make popcorn. After that, not only did he
sell popcorn, but he also added cream and salt to
the popcorn to make it taste better. Bernard grew
up to be a remarkable man. He did not forget the
help of Meredith’s family, and he also did what he
could to help those in need.
Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet.
他们家庭中的许多人都在努力维持着收支平衡。
struggle to do sth. 挣扎做某事;努力做某事
He struggled to hold back his tears and
continued to communicate with his son。
She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor.
她花了大量时间去探望穷人。
spend +时间+(in)doing sth…花费时间做某事
The students spend a great deal of time
doing their homework every day.
学生们每天都花费大量的时间来做作业。
For some moments, Jone said nothing,but,suddenly,he sprang to
his feet and cried,‘’I have a great idea.‘’
好一阵子,Jone 都没有说一句话,突然,他一跃而起并大喊到:
“我有一个好办法。”
spring to one’s feet 突然站起,一跃而起
Seeing his mother, the baby sprang to his feet and ran
towards her.看到妈妈后,小宝宝一跃而起,向妈妈
跑去。
With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new
business.
一切准备就绪后,Bernard 开始于他的新生意。
with复合结构:
with +n.+ adj./adv/介词短语/doing/done/to do)
Spotting the puppy, Poppy jumped with joy, with her
eyes becoming mellow and affectionate.
Not only did he sell popcorn,but he also added cream
and salt to the popcorn to make it taste better.
他不仅卖爆米花,而且他还增添了奶油和盐在爆米花上,以使它更加美味。
not only…but also…不仅…而且…
not only 所在的句子位于句首时,所在的句子用部分倒装.
Not only did he express his sincere apology, but also he showed his deepest love
to her.
他不仅向她表达了他最诚恳的歉意,而且向她展示了他最深的爱意。