广州一模作文
• 第一节 (满分15分)
• 假定你是李华,上周你校举办了首届生活技能云端展示活动,主题为“劳动
创造美好生活( Work Creates a Better Life)”。请你为校英文报写一篇报
道,内容包括：
• 1.活动主题；
• 2.展示内容(烹任、急救等)；
• 3.活动反响。
• 注意：
• 1.写作词数应为80左右；
• 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The First Online Life Skills Show
• 写作的内容是为校英文报写一篇报道，回顾校首届生活技
能云端展示活动。
• 本题题材源于生活，但略显新颖，审题需要仔细考虑。在
构思内容的时候，建议考生关注：
• ①关于活动的时间地点，考生需根据“云端展示”设置合
理的情景。
• ②活动反响要紧扣活动主题及展示内容。
• ③报道体裁的相关结构和常见句式，都应 该仔细斟酌。
• The first online life skills show,whose theme was Work
Creates a Better Life,was held by our school last Friday.
• With the theme of……,sth was held in our school.
• It draw the attention of teachers and students .
• Teachers and students interested in it were required to
display their life skills of cooking, first aid as well as
washing clothes.
• This activity turned out to be a great success. Not only
does it ...but also it...
The First Online Life Skills Show
• With the theme of Work Creates a Better Life, the first online
life skills show was held in our school last Friday, which turned
out to be a great success.
• The online show was broadcast live through the school
website. Contestants/Participants were required to display their
life skills of cooking, first aid or repair with tools prepared by
themselves. Directly following participants’ performances, we
audience voted and the one making Zongzi was rated the best.
• Through this activity, not only could we show/ demonstrate
our life skills but also we appreciated the life from a new angle.
这篇文章关于孩子撒谎，最后承
认错误。
题目：
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It took place in a teachers family. One day, Ben was playing basketball in the living room after school, when he
accidentally threw the ball at a vase sitting on the shelf. The vase dropped to the floor and a large piece broke off.
What made Ben more upset was that the vase was not a common decoration but an antique, which was handed down
through generations from the 18th century. It was also his mother's favourite possession. To cover his terrible action,
the terrified boy glued the pieces together hastily and put the vase back to its place.
As the mother herself dusted the vase every day, she naturally noticed the cracks(裂纹) that evening. To her surprise,
the repair work was actually very good. At dinner time, she asked her boy if he broke the vase. Fearing punishment,
the suddenly inspired boy said that a neighbour’s cat jumped in from the window and he couldn’t drive it away no
matter how hard he tried. It raced around the living room and finally knocked the vase off its shelf. His mother was
quite clear that her son was lying, for all the windows were closed before she left for work each morning and opened
after she returned. However, in the face of her son’s nervous eyes and the suspicious looks of the other family
members. Ben’s mother remained calm. She realized she shouldn’t just simply blame and punish her son for lying.
She came up with another idea.
Before going to bed, the boy found a note from his mother in his room, asking him to go to
the study at once. The boy thought he would now be punished but, as he had already lied, he was determined to deny
everything to the end, no matter how angry his mum became.
In the study, calmly bathed in the light, his mothers face showed no sign of anger. On seeing her son push open the
door and cautiously enter, she took a chocolate box out of a drawer and gave him one.
1.续写词数应为 150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The mother said, "This chocolate is a reward for your imagination: a window-opening cat!"
Now with some chocolates in hand, the boy's bad attitude disappeared.
写作指导
写作指导：
第一步：在搞懂文章的characters, plot, setting的基础上，把所有可能的线索全
部列出来：
his mother's favourite possession
glued the pieces together hastily
the cracks（裂纹）
the repair work was actually very good
Fearing punishment
a neighbour's cat
His mother was quite clear
Ben's mother remained calm.She realized she shouldn't just simply blame and
punish her son for lying.
he was determined to deny everything to the end,no matter how angry his mum
became.
In the study,calmly bathed in the light his mother's face showed no sign of anger.
a chocolate box out of a drawer
第二步：首句解读
The mother said, "This chocolate is a reward for your imagination: a
window-opening cat!"
Now with some chocolates in hand, the boy's bad attitude
disappeared.
衔接句:give him more chocolates
第三步：构思场景,紧扣主题。
本文主题毫无疑问是属于change类，即：男孩从撒谎变成诚实的孩子。我们要续写的
就是：到底妈妈做了什么让孩子改变的？/妈妈给他巧克力的原因？
The mother said, "This chocolate is a reward for your imagination: a window-opening
cat!"
场景一：the boy’s puzzle and embarrassment
场景二：the mother’s smile and explanation
(是否可以照应线索：the cracks, good repair, close the door, why? Need more
imagination)
场景三：the boy felt shameful
衔接句:give him more chocolates
Now with some chocolates in hand, the boy's bad attitude disappeared.
场景一：boy’s regret and admit his mistake
场景二：mother’s response
场景三：theme; the boy got the chocolates and understand what mother said
妈妈先奖励他，然后惩罚他。先
奖励，是消除他的警戒和抵抗心
理；后惩罚他的撒谎。这样就是
奖惩分明，让孩子明白他要为他
的所有行为负责，而且真实意识
到诚实的重要性。
The mother said, "This chocolate is a reward for your imagination: a window-opening
cat!" Scratching his head in confusion, the boy felt the chocolate was a hot potato. Did she
find some holes in my excuse? “You know, all the windows were shut close.” Mother
seemed to see him through but continued calmly, “Aren’t you imaginative to tell me that
cat’s amazing ability?” The boy hung his head in shame. How he wished the ground to
open up and swallow him! The mother pulled him close and pressed two chocolates into his
hands, “These are a reward for your gluing.”
Now with some chocolates in hand, the boy's bad attitude disappeared. His conscience
forced him to make a decision. “Mom, it was I who broke the vase....” he stammered out
the truth but suddenly felt like being relieved of tons of burden. “Good. But you deserved
punishing for lying.” The mother said as calmly as usual, “Just give me the three
chocolates.” The boy did it. “Now, my boy. This box of chocolates are a award for your
honesty.” The mother stared at him with admiration, “Honesty is the best policy.” （186
words)
说明：
这篇文章我综合用到了前面文章说道地技巧：
1.如何表示内心地想法
疑问句：Did she find some holes in my excuse?
虚拟句：How he wished the ground to open up and swallow him!
2.如何在结尾表达主题
在对话里把主题凸显：The mother stared at him with admiration, “Honesty is the best policy.”
3.对人物性格刻画地统一
原文：
However,in the face of her son's nervous eyes and the suspicious looks of the other family
members, Ben's mother remained calm.
我地照应：
Mother seemed to see him through but continued calmly,
The mother said as calm as usual...
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