高考英语复习课件 英语写作 扩句23张

LOGO 英语写作----扩句 Writing ---- lengthening sentences LOGO 中考满分作文 1 信息完整 （充足的 词汇量） 2 漂亮的书 写。 3 无语言错 误，有亮 点句子。 满分作文的三要素 www.themegallery.com LOGO § I like reading interesting books that are about history . § I like reading interesting books. § I like reading interesting books about history . § I like reading books. 1.用形容词等修饰，置于 所修饰名词前面。 2.用短语修饰名词，置于所修饰名词的后面。 3.定语从句 LOGO 3.用定语从句修饰名词。 定语从句最基础的就是连接词做主语。 Jenny is my sister. My sister is very beautiful. 共同点是sister,前后相连把第二个my sister用who连接， 变成： Jenny is my sister who is very beautiful. 秘诀在于：出现名词以后，马上以此名词为主语再造一个 句子，按照上面步骤变成定语从句。 LOGO 第一步：找名词 名词是高中写作中出现频 率最高的词。为了让作文更加 丰满，我们应该首先让名词丰 满起来。一般名词的扩词方法 有三种： LOGO 名词扩词 1.用形容词等修饰， 置于所修饰名词前面。 2.用短语修饰名词， 置于所修饰名词的后面。 3. 用定语从句修饰名词。 对物的修饰：颜色、形状、位置、作用、所属关系等等； 对人的修饰：职业、年龄、高矮胖瘦、性格等。 LOGO 请用名词扩词法，扩写下面的句子。 ①LuHan is a singer.( lovely/ dance well) LuHan is a lovely singer____________________ Exercise 1 LuHan is a _______ singer .lovely who can dance well. LOGO 第二步 ：添加时间，地点，原因等状语 § I like reading interesting books that are about history. § I like reading interesting books that are about history in the morning at school. § I like reading interesting books that are about history in the morning at school, because reading can make us grow up and make me clever. 时间状语 地点状语 原因状语从句 in the morning. LOGO _______________________________________ _______________________________________ 第二步 ：添加时间，地点，原因等状语 ②I play sports.(with/because/be good for) I like playing sports with my friends at 8:00 at school,because it is good for my health. Exercise 2 LOGO 第三步：找动词，添加副词 § I like reading interesting books that are about history in the morning at school, because reading can make us grow up happily and make me clever. § I like reading interesting books that are about history in the morning at school, because reading can make us grow up more and more happily and make me cleverer and cleverer. 如果出现了形容词或副词，我们的脑子就要浮现出 比较级或最高级的使用。比如： LOGO 第四步： 运用句型 我们背诵了很多诸如 so that， not only ,but also ， it is+adj+to do, 等的句型，但是很少有学生可以在作 文中运用自如。如： § I like reading interesting books that are about history in the morning at school, because reading can make us grow up more and more happily and make me clever. § I like reading interesting books that are about history in the morning at school, because reading can not only make us grow up more and more happily but also make me clever. 可以替换为： LOGO § I walk to school .( in order to/ it is adj.for sb. to do sth.) § I walk to school in order to exercise. § It is healthy/good for us to walk to school. Exercise 3 运用句型 LOGO 第五步：linking words连接词 1.表示并列关系的：and, also, as well , or, at the same time, besides… 2.表示转折关系的：but, yet, however 3.表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4.表示因果关系的：so, therefore(因此） ,as a result…（结果） LOGO 5.表示目的的: in order to（为了）, so that…（以便于） 6.表示列举的： for example , such as… 7.表示总结性的；in general(总之,一般而言) in short(总之，简言之）, in a word（总之，简言之）, all in all（总而言之） LOGO 请用 not only…but also…, because , and填空 (2015,泸州）Reading is very important in our life. We can get knowledge through reading. It can _______ open our minds _______ make us more intelligent. Besides ,it is also one of the most important ways to improve our reading ability. Books ,newspapers, webs ______ other kinds of reading materials can help us know more about the outside world and help us grow into intelligent person. At the same time, it is necessary for us to have a plan and make notes. I’ll spend more time reading every day in class or after class, and even on holiday. _________I think reading can make us grow up happily and have a bright future. not only but also and because Exercise 4 www.themegallery.com LOGO 扩句中可添加----英语谚语 平时多积累些英语谚语 § Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者,事竟成。 § A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难中的朋友，才是真正的朋友。 § Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。 § Knowledge is power.知识就是力量。 § An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一日一苹果，医生远离我。 LOGO 平时多积累些英语谚语 § Each coin has two sides事物都有两面性。 § Knowledge comes from questioning.知识源 于质疑。 § The early bird catches the worm.早起的鸟儿 有虫吃。 § Money is not everything.金钱不是万能。 扩句中可添加----英语谚语 LOGO 请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇短文，向你的朋友 们简述你在学校一天的学习和生活情况。 要点提示： 1.早上：起床，晨练，早餐； 2.上午：上课时间，节数，午餐； 3.下午：上课时间，节数，课后体育活动； 4.晚上：读书，写作业，睡觉。 注意： 1.词数110词左右，短文的首句已给出，不计入总词数； 2.要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容； 3.字迹工整，卷面整洁，文意连贯，语言流畅。 4.不用真实姓名，校名，地名。 LOGO 英语书面表达写 作 步 骤 1.审: 2.列: 3.连: 4.查: 5.抄: 人称,时态,文体 开头,主体,结尾 连接并拓展,美化.(连接词,谚语,高级词 汇,经典句式) 人称,时态,句型,拼写,标点,字数 书写工整,卷面整洁,布局合理. LOGO My School Day Now let me tell you something about my everyday school life. ① I get up at 6:00, then I do exercise. ②At 7:00 , I have breakfast. ③I go to school at 7:30. ④I have four classes in the morning , I eat lunch at school. ⑤From 2:30 to 5:40 I have four classes in the afternoon. ⑥After school ,I play sports with my friends. ⑦After that, I go home and do my homework. ⑧I go to bed at 9:30. (Words:65) 请对下面的文章选择两三个要点进行扩句。 Exercise 5 LOGO My School Day Now let me tell you something about my everyday school life. ① I get up at 6:00, my mother always says to me , “ The early bird catches the worm.” Then I do exercise. I think it is good for my health.②After that , I have breakfast. ③Next,I go to school at 7:30. when I get to the class ,I can hear most of the students reading books.④I have four classes in the morning , I eat lunch at school. ⑤From 2:30 to 5:40 I have four classes in the afternoon. ⑥After playing sports with my friends，I go home. It takes me 20 minutes to get home by bus. ⑦ And do my homework. ⑧I go to bed at 9:30. All in all,my school life is busy but interesting. (Words:120) 请对下面的文章选择两三个要点进行扩句。 Exercise 5 LOGO Homework 暑假将至，我们都应该制定合理的假期计划。请你根据以下 要点提示，以“My Summer Vacation Plan”写一篇短文。要 点提示： 　1．放松自己　2．陪伴家人 3. 做志愿者 4. 努力学习 5. 个人观点：··· 要求：1.词数110词左右； 2.要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加 内容； 3.字迹工整，卷面整洁，文意连贯，语言流畅； 4. 不用真实姓名、校名，地名。 　 　 LOGO