第一次调研考试短文改错成绩
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短文改错
学习目标
When I am young, I’d listen to the radio, wait for my favorite
songs. When they played I’d sing along，it made me to smile.
Those were so happy times, and not so long ago. How I wondered
where they’d gone but we are back again, just like long lost
friend. All the song I love so well. Every sha-la-la-la every
wo-wo still shines. Every shing-a-ling-a-ling that they’re starting
to sing is so fine. When they get to the part which he’s breaking
her heart, it can real make me cry just like before. It’s yesterday
one more.
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such
they
songs
where
really
once
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Rules :
短文改错规律：
一篇文章共 处错误。一句话中最多 处错误。
一般错/改词有 个；缺/加词 个；多/去词 个。
每处错误及其修改均仅限 词。
*注意格式规范*
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ，并在下面写
出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线 ，并在该词下
面写出修改后的词。
10 2
8 1 1
1
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Steps :
1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .
(浏览全文，掌握大意）
2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the
mistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错）
3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers
and correct the difficult ones.（检查核对，攻克难点）
一、When I am young
1.Last summer I went to London for a holiday and spend just a week there.
2. I have told one more worker will be needed.
3. What I like best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.
4.Great changes have been taken place in our country.
5.I ,who is a student, put all my energy into study.
Group work （10 mins）
一、When I am young
1.Last summer I went to London for a holiday and spend just a week there.
2. I have told one more worker will be needed.
3. What I like best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.
4.Great changes have been taken place in our country.
5.I ,who is a student, put all my energy into study.
错误类型：
总结：
spent
was
am
been
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二、All the song I love so well. / but we are back again
1. Mum taught me some basic step of baking.
2. Looking back on the progresses that I have made, I really appreciate your
support.
3. I have many books and I like it.
4. They were both very tired, but none of them would stop to take a rest.
5. He is too young to look after him.
二、All the song I love so well. / but we are back again
1. Mum taught me some basic step of baking.
2. Looking back on the progresses that I have made, I really appreciate your
support.
3. I have many books and I like it.
4. They were both very tired, but none of them would stop to take a rest.
5. He is too young to look after him.
错误类型：
1）可数名词表复数概念时要用复数，可被many; a number of; a great
many ;(a)few 等修饰，谓语动词复数。
2）不可数名词没有复数形式，不被a/an修饰，可被much ; a great
amount of ;a great deal of;(a )little 等修饰,谓语动词用单数，用代词it指代。
3) 代词指代要一致，主语与宾语一致时，宾语用反身代词代词。
4）常考不定代词 both , all // neither, none//either；~thing；~body
总结：
steps
progress
them
neither
himself
三、just like a long lost friend.
• Last weekend I met a old lady on the way to school.
2. Jim has no room to live.
3. My soccer coach retired in last week.
4. Tony saw a toy on a shop window.
三、just like a long lost friend.
• Last weekend I met a old lady on the way to school.
2. Jim has no room to live.
3. My soccer coach retired in last week.
4. Tony saw a toy on a shop window.
错误类型：
1）第一次提到的名词前加冠词a/an，辅音开头用a,元音开头用an。特
指时用the; 最高级前用the; the+序数词 表顺序；a +序数词 表再、又
2)学科/球类/三餐前不加the; 表头衔的词在句中作同位语/补语/表语 时
不加the;
3) 介词注意固定搭配
总结：
an
in
in
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四、it can real make me cry.
1. He is a careful person and he always does things careful.
2. This book is beautiful than that one.
3. Lucy is friendly to others and she always works hardly.
4. They went back home, tiring and hungry.
5. His father looks much more happier today.
四、it can real make me cry.
1. He is a careful person and he always does things careful.
2. This book is beautiful than that one.
3. Lucy is friendly to others and she always works hardly.
4. They went back home, tiring and hungry.
5. His father looks much more happier today.
错误类型：
1）形容词用来作表语或定语（用来修饰名词）;
另：形容词还可作 状语用来修饰主句中主语的状态。
2）副词用来修饰形容词、副词、动词以及整个句子。
总结：
carefully
hard
tired
more
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五、~~, wait for my favorite songs./ it made me to smile.
1. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake.
2. I couldn’t do my homework with the noise go on.
3. Climb the mountain is hard work.
4. The bike belonged to me was stolen yesterday.
5. I went to the supermarket, buying some apples and hurried home.
五、~~, wait for my favorite songs./ it made me to smile.
1. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake.
2. I couldn’t do my homework with the noise go on.
3. Climb the mountain is hard work.
4. The bike belonged to me was stolen yesterday.
5. I went to the supermarket, buying some apples and hurried home.
错误类型：
1）对非谓语动词的考查主要涉及不定式符号 to 的有无。
2）介词后该使用Ving形式（动名词）。
3）一句话中无连词连接时只能有一个谓语。
4）动词用作主语时常用动名词（谓语动词单数）。
5）作定、状、补语时
to do表将来/目的; Ving 表主动/进行; Ved 表被动/完成。
总结：
Felling
going
Climbing
belonging
bought
六、they get to the part which he’s breaking her
1.Peter is an American and he can’t speak English well.
2. Though he is a little child, but he knows a lot.
3. They were deeply moved, most of them were with tears in their eyes.
4.We were about to leave while the telephone rang.
六、they get to the part which he’s breaking her
1.Peter is an American and he can’t speak English well.
2. Though he is a little child, but he knows a lot.
3. They were deeply moved, most of them were with tears in their eyes.
4.We were about to leave while the telephone rang.
错误类型：
1）并列连词and/or /but/so。
2) 连词but与副词however的区分。
3）状语从句连词常考if/ unless ; when/while ; as。
主从句连接只能有一个连词,though不与but连用,because 不与so连用。
4）定语从句关系词要在从句中做成分；介词后+whom(人)/which(物)；
逗号后不用that引导定语从句。
5) 名词性从句what做成分有意思/that不做成分没汉语意思; 是否if/whether
总结：
but
whom
when
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七、
1.This is the book that I am looking for it.
2.I feel easy to speak English.
3. I fell in love with the book for the first time I saw it.
4.One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher.
5. The boy, a senior three student, studying harder and harder.
七、
1.This is the book that I am looking for it.
2.I feel easy to speak English.
3. I fell in love with the book for the first time I saw it.
4.One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher.
5. The boy, a senior three student, studying harder and harder.
错误类型：
studies
it
∧
it
∧
\
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八、It’s yesterday one more/ Those were so happy times
1.The stone is too heavy that I can't lift it up.
2. When we met difficulties, we helped every other.
3. Some of us like singing and dancing, other go in for sports.
4. I will do all I can help you.
八、It’s yesterday one more/ Those were so happy times
1.The stone is too heavy that I can't lift it up.
2. When we met difficulties, we helped every other.
3. Some of us like singing and dancing, other go in for sports.
4. I will do all I can help you.
错误类型：
1）too +adj./adv.+ to do 太…而不能…
so + adj./adv.+ that +句子 如此…以至于…
2）one… the other …另一个（两者） one… another另一个（三者）
some …others/ other + n.(复) 一些…另一些
总结：
so
each
others
to
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动词形；名代数；
冠介缺错省；
留意形和副；
非谓动词细辨别；
逻辑连词要留意；
句子成分须分析；
习惯用法切牢记。
When I was a teenager，I dreamed becoming a writer.
However，when I told my friend about my dream，most of
them laughed on me，telling me it was out of my reach. I was
real upset after I heard those words. But I choose to believe in
myself. I didn’t give up and kept writing. I knew it was difficult
on a way to success，and I never gave up. I'm a best-selling
writer now. I want to suggest those which have dreams believe
in them. As long as you don’t give up，your dream will be
come true one day.
When I was a teenager，I dreamed becoming a writer.
However，when I told my friend about my dream，most of
them laughed on me，telling me it was out of my reach. I was
real upset after I heard those words. But I choose to believe in
myself. I didn’t give up and kept writing. I knew it was difficult
on a way to success，and I never gave up. I'm a best-selling
writer now. I want to suggest those which have dreams believe
in them. As long as you don’t give up，your dream will be
come true one day.
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of
friends
at
really chose
the but
who
themselves
o The summer holiday is coming. My
classmates and I are talking about how to do
during the holiday. We can chose between
staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at
home, it is comfortable but there is no need to
spend money. But in that case, we will learn
little about world. If we go on a trip abroad,
we can broaden your view and gain
knowledges we cannot get from books. Some
classmates suggest we can go to places of
interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea.
It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a
lot.
o Several years ago, some tourists paid no attention
to protect the environment . They throw waste
things about, like plastic bag, fruit skins and waste
paper. Sometimes they broke trees, picked flowers
and killed birds; some even made fires in the woods
to cook for picnics. What dangerous it was!
Fortunate, great changes have been taken place here.
All the tourists have got used to putting their
rubbish into dustbins. But they are making great
efforts to protect birds and plants as well. They
bring our own meals prevent any accidental fire. All
this should be appreciated.
Let’s find mistakes carefully.
Correct them and make great progress!
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