高考八大满分评分标准
1.覆盖全部要点
2.结构合理
3.详略得当
4.过渡自然
5.高级词汇
6.复杂句式
7.语法正确
8.合理想象
写人满分范文素材
When I began studying at my middle school three years ago, I was introduced to
Sara Smith, the school’s headmistress.
Her smart appearance and warm, friendly expression made me like her
immediately. She is a small-boned, smiling woman in her early fift ies, with
twinkling blue eyes and soft, silver curls. Although she dresses simply, she
always manages to look elegant.
She is a very fair-minded person who treats everyone at the school with equal
respect. Despite clasping her hands nervously when she is upset, she is usually
very calm, which is shown by her ability to keep her temper in the most difficult
situations. Her quiet voice and gentle, caring manner make her popular with the
children.
Ms Smith had no children of her own; however, she says that she
feels like a mother of the children in her school. In fact, she has no
time for family life, since she dedicates her life to her job. Besides
taking care of various administrative tasks every day, she always
takes time to talk to the teachers and parents.
To my mind, Sara Smith is a dedicated professional who is a
wonderful role model, not only for the children but also for the
teachers as well.
Describing a Person
掌握五大常见写作技法：
structure
1.Introduction
2.Main body
3.Conclusion
1.introduction:
1)Who the person is
2)How/Where did you know him
第一段模板：
When I began studying at my middle school three years ago, I was
introduced to Sara Smith, the school’s headmistress.
When I …years ago, I was introduced to Sara Smith, …
When I moved to the new neighborhood 6 years ago, I was
introduced to Mr Smith, a carpenter living opposite to my house
2.main body
1.physical appearance
2.personalities
3.lifestyle
3.conclusion
feelings about the person
Structure:
第一段：who the person is
how you first met him
第二段：physical appearance (general-specific)
第三段： personalities(thesis-proof)
第四段： lifestyle(habits/interests/jobs/beliefs）
第五段： comments/feelings about the person
时态---活人现在；死人过去
Physical Appearance
如何生动地描写外貌？
重点句型1：Have A,B and C
A (broad, hooked, flat) nose
X (bloodshot, twinkling, sunken, protruding) eyes
A (clean-shaven, tanned, fine-featured) face
X (silver, blonde, receding, curly) hair
A (athletic, portly, average, slender) build
X (fair, swarthy) skin
A (warm, friendly, hostile, amusing) expression
1.Jobs has a hooked nose, fair skin and
sunken eyes.
2.The boy has a flat nose, thick eyebrows and a
happy and amusing expression.
黄金句型：
The girl is tall and slim.
She has an average build, a hooked nose and a fine-featured face.
=
The girl is tall and slim, with an average build, a hooked nose and a
fine featured face.
描写顺序：
总原则：从一般到具体
1）长相，年龄，服装，身材…
2）鼻子，眼睛，头发，面庞…
例如：
She is a gorgeous girl in her early twenties.
She has an athletic build, fair skin and straight blonde hair.
She is a gorgeous girl in her early twenties，
She has an athletic build, fair skin and straight
blonde hair.
He is short and medium-weight.
He has blond hair, twinkling blue eyes and a happy
expression.
重点句型2：
熟练运用定语从句:who,whose,which
My neighbor is slightly eccentric .
He has dozens of filthy cats.
My neighbor, who has dozens of cats, is slightly eccentric.
Tom is a tall and slim boy.
He is unattractive but smart.
He likes playing football very much.
Tom, who is unattractive but smart and who likes playing football
very much, is a tall and slim boy.
1)My little brother is a naughty child.
2)My little brother’s clothes are always dirty.
My little brother is a naughty child whose clothes are
always dirty.
My P.E. teacher has strong arms.
That makes him look like a boxer.
He has strong arms, which makes him look like a boxer.
练习：
Kevin is very tall.
Kevin is athletic.
Kevin plays basketball for our school team. .
This makes him an excellent player.
Kevin is very tall and athletic, who plays basketball for our school
team, which makes him an excellent player.
重点句型3：学会制造矛盾冲突
1）but,yet,however,nevertheless
2）although/though/even though (if)/while
3）in spite of/despite
______ HH is fat, _______ I like her very much.
练习：请用who;which;despite
The postman is 56.
He has thick black hair.
He has swarthy skin.
This makes him look younger than he is.
He works from 5 to 10 every day.
He loves his profession.
Mrs Li is very short and slim.
Her flat is next to mine.
She has white hair.
She has deep wrinkles.
She is already in her late nineties.
She is always dressed in a red sweater.
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