高考英语三轮复习作文满分写作策略课件29张

一组数据 据笔者所在省份统计，2020年河南省书面表达平均分为12.21分 0分作文 8.25% 第一档（1-5分）16.08% 第二档（6-10分）17.72% 第三档（11-15分）28.57% 第四档（16-20分）24.68% 第五档 （21-25分）4.79% 高考书面表达评分原则： 1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。(21-25分；16-20分；11-15分；6-10分；1- 5分) 2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡 量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。 4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上 下文的连贯性及语言得体性。 5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考 虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6、如书写较差，以致影响到交际，可将分数降低一个档次； 7、内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分. 第五档作文的评分标准： 第五档(21-25分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预 期的写作目的 ——覆盖所有内容要点。 ——应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 ——语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构 或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。 ——有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 Content: 要点完整-认真审题 Structure:结构清晰、布局合理-列提纲、注意连接词的使用 Language:语言准确、得当、地道、富于变化-积累高级词汇、使 用高级句式 Handwriting: 卷面整洁，书写赏心悦目 好作文的共同特点 五档优秀作文欣赏 第二节 书面表达（满分25分） 你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题, 写一篇短文参赛, 内容包括： 1. 人物简介； 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。 23分优秀作文欣赏 There are many respectable people around us. As for me, the person I respect most is my mother. My mother, graduated form a famous normal university, is an English teacher. Also, she is a caring and loving mother. The reason why I respect her most is that, although no longer young, she stays curious about the ever-changing world and keeps learning and enriching new language and information to be a capable teacher. In daily life, it is her great effort and- -enormous love that makes me become an outgoing and positive girl. This is the person I respect and admire most. My mom will inspire me to keep right and grow into a better person in my future. (120词) 【评价】本文语言清新自然，文笔流畅，上下文衔接紧密，结构紧凑。 语篇适中，句式结构丰富，展示了考生扎实的语言功底和较强的语言 驾驭能力。遗憾的是文章出现了个别错，如“My mother, graduating form a famous normal university, is an English teacher. ”,在该定语从句中 遗漏了关系代词who。但瑕不掩瑜，盖文仍不失为一篇非常好的文章。 文章得分：23分。 24分优秀作文欣赏 There are many respectable people around us. Among them, our English teacher is regarded as my favourite one. To begin with, my English teacher is a typical charming lady as you can imagine, slim figure, fair skin as well as infectious beautiful smile. But most importantly, far behind her outstanding appearance, it is her fabulous teaching ability and empathetic feature that make her respectable. She has a talent for teaching, always making her class lively. Following her steps, we can learn English with great pleasure while receiving good - grades. Meanwhile, she is the one that you can rely on, can turn to and can share everything with. She is not only a respectable teacher who does huge benefit to you, but also a lifetime friend you ought to cherish. That is my English teacher, my most respectable person. She is the star glowing with high school experience. She is the fragrant rose that beautifies my life. (155词) 【评价】本文要点齐全，内容充实，语言流畅，多度自然，结构合理。此外， 文章长短句结合，使用了fabulous、infectious、cherish等较高级的词汇以及现 在分词、定语从句、强调句型等较丰富的语法结构，增强了文章的表现力，反 映了该考生扎实的语言功底和较强的语言驾驭能力。文字数量超过了规定范围。 本文得分：24分。 第一段：交代主题，明确写作目的； 第二段：主题句短小精悍 1 2 3 第三段：总结深化。 英语写作的框架架构： 1.紧扣主题 2.常识性 3.合理性 4.修饰性 5.补充性 6.内容具体性 7.不为增加内容增加无意义内容 合理发挥的原则： 1.紧扣主题 2.常识性 3.合理性 4.修饰性 5.补充性 6.内容具体性 7.不为增加内容增加无意义内容 合理发挥的原则： 假定你是李华，正在英国接受培训，住在一户英国人家。今天你 的房东Mrs Milson 不在家，你要外出，给Mrs Wilson 写一张留 言条，内容包括： 1.外出购物； 2.替房东还书； 3.Tracy 来电留言：1）咖啡屋 （Bohon Coffee）见面取消 2） 此事已告知Suan 3）尽快回电 要求：1.字数在100字左右 2. 可适当添加细节，使情节完整 如何增加细节 Mrs Wilson, I’m going out shopping, and won’t back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me two books that you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at the Bohon Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. 【试题分析 】这是一篇留言条作文。假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语 培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家，你准备 外出，请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：1.外出购物 2.替房东 还书 3.Tracy 来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消2）此 事已告知Susan 3）尽快回电。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们 翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准 确运用时态，使用合适的连词使上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出 现文章脱节问题。所给出的内容要全部写到，缺一不可。尽量使用自己熟 悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意 要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。 1.英语思维、拿来主义 2.得体流畅 3.词语优化意识：短语优先/晚词优先原则 4.直奔主题 5.主题句 6.长短句结合 7.句式丰富 8. 书写美观整洁 写作的基本原则 原则一：晚词优先 difficult 困难的-challenging 有挑战性的 important 重要的-vital 至关重要的/essential 必不可少的; significant 有重要意义的/be of importance/significance 重要的 beautiful 美丽-appealing 动人的/attractive 吸引人的/charming 迷人的 /fascinating 迷人的 高考书面表达词汇升级技巧 原则二：短语优先 活用短语是一个考生能力的体现。因此，我们可以掌握一些将某些 常见单词转化为短语的用法，如： join in v. 参加-take part in/participate in 参加 use v. 使用-make good use of/ make the best of 充分利用 visit v. 拜访-pay a visit to/go to sp for a visit 拜访... 高考书面表达词汇升级技巧 原则三：具体化原则 请先对比以下几组句子： 1: I go to school everyday. I ride to school everyday. I go to scholl on foot everyday. 2: Mr Wang is a good teacher. Mr Wang is a kind, patient and knowledgeable teacher. 高考书面表达词汇升级技巧 原则三：具体化原则 3. learn 学习-research 研究；pick up偶然学到，顺便学到，轻松学到; master 掌握/精通 4. I ride to Zhongshan park yestaerday. I，together with Tom and Jerry, rode to the Zhongshan park yesterday， feeling rather excited. 高考书面表达词汇升级技巧 1. 定语从句 Last Sunday, our school held a 5km cross-country running race, which attracted many enthusiastic participants, including both students and teachers. 上周日，我 们学校举办了5公里越野跑比赛，吸引了许多热情的参与者，包括学生和老师。 Last Saturday, the Students’ Union of our school organized a voluntary activity whose theme is environment protection, which turned out to be a great success. 上 周六，我们学校学生会组织了一次活动主题为环境保护的志愿者活动，这次活动 取得了巨大成功。 高考书面表达句式升级技巧一、简单句升级成复合句 2. 名词性从句 What impresses me most is her negative and optimistic attitude towards life. 最令 我印象深刻的是他对生活的积极乐观的态度。 The reason why I show respect for her is that she never loses temper but instead always encourages me. 我尊敬她的原因是她从不发脾气而是总是鼓励我。 I am convinced that you will make great progress in English learning. 我确信你会 在英语学习上取得巨大进步。 高考书面表达句式升级技巧一、简单句升级成复合句 3. 状语从句 She is so patient with each student that we all like her. 她对每个学生都很有耐心， 所以我们都很喜欢她。 The reason why I show respect for her is that she never loses temper but instead always encourages me. 我尊敬她的原因是她从不发脾气而是总是鼓励我。 As soon as/The moment/Immediately we arrived at the farm, we saw plenty of apples hanging on branches. 我们一到农场，就看到大量苹果挂在枝头上。 高考书面表达句式升级技巧一、简单句升级成复合句 1. 倒装句 Only then did I realize my mistake. 直到那时我才意识到我的错误。 So significant is the game that it is required that everyone should present themselves on time. 这个游戏是如此重要，要求每个人都应准时参加。 Not only did picking apples give us relaxation, but also it got us closer to nature. 摘苹果不仅让我们放松，也让我们亲近自然。 Challenging as the activity was, every participant enjoyed it and benefited a lot from it. 尽管活动很有挑战性，每个参与者都很喜欢它并且从中获益良多。 高考书面表达句式升级技巧二、普通句式升级特殊句式 2. 强调句: It is her humorous and unique way of teaching that attracts me most. 正是她幽默 独特的教学方式最能吸引我。 We do hope that you can participate in the activity. 我真的希望你能参加这个活动。 高考书面表达句式升级技巧二、普通句式升级特殊句式 3. 简约不简单的It 句式: In fact, it is no use complaining that you don’t have an opportunity to get an ideal job. 事实上，你抱怨没有机会找到理想的工作是没有用的。 It is high time that we should take immediate action to protect the environment. 该 是我们立刻采取行动保护环境的时候了。 It is a pity that many people don’t realize the importance of environmental protection. 可惜很多人没有意识到保护环境的重要性。 高考书面表达句式升级技巧二、普通句式升级特殊句式 4. 非谓语动词的使用: In order to enrich our school life and improve our spoken English, the Student Union is planning to set up an English Corner. 为了丰富我们的学校生活，提高我 们的英语口语，学生会计划成立英语角。 Knowing that you are fond of classical music, I’d like to invite you to participate in a Chinese classical music concert. 了解到你喜欢古典音乐，我想邀请你参加一个 中国古典音乐会。 Located/Situated/Lying at the south-west corner of our school, the botanical garden covers an area of approximately 1000 square meters.位于我们学校的西南 角， 植物园占地大学1000平方米。 高考书面表达句式升级技巧二、普通句式升级特殊句式