专题 10 作文
一、（山东省泰安 2021 届高三模拟）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。北京冬奥组委会正在招募志愿
者，其职责为接待各国运动员及宣传中国文化，组委会要求志愿者能够熟练运用英语，请你用英文写一封
申请信。内容包括：
1.申请原因；
2.你的优势；
3.相关经历。
注意：1. 词数不少于 100；2. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madame,
I have learned that volunteers for Beijing Winter Olympic Games are needed.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madame,
I have learned that volunteers for Beijing Winter Olympic Games are needed. I’m writing to apply for this
position.
As a Beijinger, I think it is a privilege and duty for me to offer the best voluntary service to our foreign guests
and meanwhile promote Chinese culture.
I believe I’m qualified for the job. I have a good command of English and I’m confident in giving players
guidance and help as required. What’s more, I have an extensive knowledge of winter sports, which will prove
helpful in communicating with players. In addition, I have been involved in several international exchange
programs, and enjoyed spreading our culture to foreigners.
I would appreciate it if you could offer me the opportunity. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文写一封申请信，申请成为北京冬奥会志愿者。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
提供：provide→offer
促进：boost→promote
大量的：massive→extensive
另外：in addition=besides
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I believe I’m qualified for the job. I have a good command of English and I’m confident in giving
players guidance and help as required.
拓展句：I believe I’m qualified for the job because I have a good command of English and I’m confident in
giving players guidance and help as required.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] I have learned that volunteers for Beijing Winter Olympic Games are needed. (运用了 that 引导
宾语从句)
[高分句型 2] What’s more, I have an extensive knowledge of winter sports, which will prove helpful in
communicating with players.(运用了 which 引导非限制性定语从句)
二、（福建省龙岩市 2021 届高三质检）
假定你是李华，准备参加高校专项招生面试，请你就个人未来生涯规划用英语进行简短的介绍内容包
括：
1.你想成为怎样的人；
2.选择此大学及专业的理由；
3.你的决心与愿望。
注意：
1.词数 80 左右；
Good morning! I'm Li Hua.
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【答案】One possible version：
Good morning! I’m Li Hua. Thanks for your offer. I feel greatly honored to talk about myself here.
I have always been meaning to be a person useful for our nation and the society. It’ s because I have grown up
to be healthy and happy due to my family’s great care and love as well as the devotion of our government and the
teachers. All this also accounts for why I choose Xiamen University, where I can major in Environmental
Engineering. Another reason is my constant concern about the environmental protection and the improvement of
people’s living conditions.
I definitely hope I will be lucky enough to be admitted and I know I will try hard to shape myself into what I
want to be.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就个人未来生涯规划用英语进行简短的介绍。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
打算：plan→mean
由于：because of→due to
说明：explain→account for
当然： surely/certainly→definitely
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I have always been meaning to be a person useful for our nation and the society. It’ s because I have
grown up to be healthy and happy due to my family’s great care and love as well as the devotion of our government
and the teachers.
拓展句：The reason why I have always been meaning to be a person useful for our nation and the society is
that I have grown up to be healthy and happy due to my family’s great care and love as well as the devotion of our
government and the teachers.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] It’ s because I have grown up to be healthy and happy due to my family’s great care and love as
well as the devotion of our government and the teachers. (运用了 because 引导的表语从句)
[高分句型 2] All this also accounts for why I choose Xiamen University, where I can major in Environmental
Engineering. (运用了 why 引导的宾语从句；where 引导的非限制性定语从句)
三、（福建省三明市 2021 届高三质检）
假定你是学生会主席李华，请用英语给全体同学写一封主题为"Building a Healthy New Life"的倡议书。
要点如下:
1.倡议目的；
2.倡议内容。
注意:
1.词数 80 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Building a Healthy New Life
Dear fellow students,
I'm Lihua, president of the Student Union of our school.
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Student Union
【答案】Building a Healthy New Life
Dear fellow students,
I'm Li Hua, president of the Student Union of our school. With the purpose of increasing our learning
efficiency, I hope everyone can take an active part in building a healthy new life.
We should be convinced that progress or success depends on good health, so taking exercise after school is
necessary. What's more, developing a healthy eating habit can build up our strength. Only in this way can we have
enough energy to study. Finally, it goes without saying that getting up early and going to bed early is of great
benefit to our health.
Action speaks louder than words. Just do it.
Student Union
【分析】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生用英语给全体同学写一封主题为"Building a Healthy New Life"的
倡议书。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
积极参与：actively participate in→take an active part in
相信：have a strong belief that→be convinced that
有益的：be beneficial→be of great benefit
养成：form→develop
2.句式拓展
简单句变复杂句
原句：What's more, developing a healthy eating habit can build up our strength.
拓展句：What's more, developing a healthy eating habit is very important, because it can build up our strength.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1]
We should be convinced that progress or success depends on good health, so taking exercise after school is
necessary.句中 that 引导宾语从句。
[高分句型 1]
Only in this way can we have enough energy to study.句中使用了部分倒装。
四、（福建漳州市 2021 届高三质检）
假定你是李华，你的外教 Eric 在疫情停课期间提供了丰富多彩的线上课程，如今她任教期满，请你给
她写一封感谢信。
内容包括：
1. 学习收获；
2. 表达感谢；
3. 期待与祝愿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Eric,
I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude for you.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Eric,
I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude for you. You have taught me a variety of online lessons during the
outbreak of Covid-19. I’ve learned a lot from those lessons.
Thanks to your encouragement, I am no longer afraid to speak English for fear of making mistakes. Instead, I
take every chance to speak English. Through practice in oral class, I’ve made a lot of progress in spoken English,
which makes me confident in English speaking. You also told me something about western culture, which benefited
me a lot. I’m very thankful for your help with my English learning. I hope that you come to my city and have a visit.
I will show you around.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教 Eric 写一封信，感谢她在疫情停课期间提供了丰
富多彩的线上课程。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
幸亏：thanks to→owing to
练习：practice→exercise
感激的：thankful→grateful
参观：have a visit→pay a visit
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：You have taught me a variety of online lessons during the outbreak of Covid-19. I’ve learned a lot from
those lessons.
拓展句：You have taught me a variety of online lessons during the outbreak of Covid-19 in which I’ve learned
a lot.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] You also told me something about western culture, which benefited me a lot. (运用了 which 引
导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型 2] I hope that you come to my city and have a visit. (运用了 that 引导的宾语从句)
五、（广东省梅州市 2021 届高三质检）
上周你校组织开展了为期一周的“劳动周”活动。作为校英文报记者，请你写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动内容（如：农场劳动、义工活动、做家务等）；
3.你的收获。
注意：1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】 Last week our school carried out a Labor Week activity, aiming to raise the students' awareness of
the significance of labor and arouse our passion for labor. The activity lasted for one week. Firstly, our school
organized us students to work in the nearby farm. The task involved planting trees, weeding, and watering
vegetable. What's more, we were asked to participate in some voluntary work after class, such as helping the elder
do the cleaning. Besides, we shared housework with our parents, relieving their burden.
Through this activity, we have not only realized the value of labor but also learned to respect all laborers.
Meanwhile, our physical health has been greatly improved.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇报道，介绍学校为期一周的“劳动周”活动。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
实施：perform→carry out
重要性：importance→significance
减轻：ease→relieve
参加：take part in= participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last week our school carried out a Labor Week activity, aiming to raise the students' awareness of the
significance of labor and arouse our passion for labor.
拓展句：Last week our school carried out a Labor Week activity, whose aim is to raise the students' awareness
of the significance of labor and arouse our passion for labor.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] What's more, we were asked to participate in some voluntary work after class, such as helping
the elder do the cleaning. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型 2] Besides, we shared housework with our parents, relieving their burden. (运用了现在分词作状
语)
六、（广东省珠海市 2021 届高三模拟） 假定你是李华，计划和同学们去敬老院（nursing home）陪老
人们过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。 请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：
1.出发及返回时间；
2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。
注意：1.词数 120 词左右
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
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【答案】Dear Lucy,
My classmates and I intend to go to the nursing home to spend the Double Ninth Festival with the old people
there. I am writing to invite you to go with us.
According to our schedule, we will leave from our school at 8 o'clock in the morning and return at around 4
o'clock in the afternoon. On arriving there, we will give them an excellent performance, which I believe will bring a
lot of happiness to them. After that, we will do some other meaningful activities, including doing a thorough
cleaning and making dumplings. Accompanied by us, the old people will surely enjoy themselves and feel very
happy.
Therefore, I really hope you can join us if it is convenient to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Lihua
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类作文。文章比较贴近学生生活。考生应该根据要点叙述清楚活动的时间和内容等信息。
文章应该以一般将来时态为主。
【亮点说明】所给范文内容清楚，条理明确，要点齐全。语言流畅。长短句结合使用。适当使用了一
些较好的词汇或句式：1. 定语从句 which I believe will bring a lot of happiness to them 2. 非谓语动词
including doing a thorough cleaning and making dumplings
七、（河北省张家口市 2021 届高考三模）假定你是李华，上周末你和家人参观了附近的一个美丽村庄，
请给你的朋友—交换生 Jim，写一封电子邮件，内容包括:
1.参观经历;
2.参观感受。
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
Hi! I'm writing with delight to share with you my family tour to a nearby village called Lizhuang.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jim,
Hi! I 'm writing with delight to share with you my family tour to a nearby village called Lizhuang. Early
summer is a great season for an outing to the countryside. We approaching Lizhuang, plants of a thousand shades of
green and flowers of all bright colors came into our sight. Down the wide, treelined roads, rows of red-roofed
houses sit side by side.
We enjoyed warm sunshine and fresh air hiking on country trails and we tasted local food in a farmer 's house,
chatting about the history of this village, local customs as well as the great changes in recent years. We really had a
relaxing and refreshing day.
Hopefully, next time you can join us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生 Jim 写一封电子邮件，介绍上周末你和家人参
观附近的一个美丽村庄的经历。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
接近：approach→be close to
映入眼帘：come into one's sight=jump into one's sight
聊天：chat→talk
最近几年：in recent years=over recent years
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We enjoyed warm sunshine and fresh air hiking on country trails and we tasted local food in a farmer 's
house, chatting about the history of this village, local customs as well as the great changes in recent years.
拓展句：We enjoyed warm sunshine and fresh air hiking on country trails, after which we tasted local food in a
farmer 's house, chatting about the history of this village, local customs as well as the great changes in recent years.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] We approaching Lizhuang, plants of a thousand shades of green and flowers of all bright colors
came into our sight. (运用了独立主格结构)
[高分句型 2] We enjoyed warm sunshine and fresh air hiking on country trails and we tasted local food in a
farmer 's house, chatting about the history of this village, local customs as well as the great changes in recent years.
(运用了现在分词作状语)
八、（湖北省黄冈市 2021 届高三一模）
你校为期一周的“校园音乐节”刚结束了，请给学校英语报写一篇短文，介绍本次音乐节，内容包括：
1.音乐节时间；
2.音乐节主题；
3.音乐节活动。
注意： 1.词数 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Campus Music Festival Held
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【答案】Campus Music Festival Held
Our school held a campus music festival, which started with an opening ceremony on April 7. The festival was
aimed at making our cultural life colorful, providing opportunities of showing our talents and relaxing ourselves
with the theme "Music Makes Us Happy". After all, we senior high students are too tired with long periods of
learning, so we need to get relaxed. At the festival there were musicals and singing contests. There were also music
instrument playing contests. The school music festival was a great success.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生给学校英语报写一篇短文，介绍学校为期一周的“校园音
乐节”。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
开始：begin→start
提供：offer→provide
机会：chance→opportunity
主题：subject→theme
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The festival was aimed at making our cultural life colorful, providing opportunities of showing our
talents and relaxing ourselves with the theme "Music Makes Us Happy".
拓展句：The festival was aimed at making our cultural life colorful, which provides opportunities of showing
our talents and relaxing ourselves with the theme "Music Makes Us Happy".
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] Our school held a campus music festival, which started with an opening ceremony on April 7.
(运用了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型 2] After all, we senior high students are too tired with long periods of learning, so we need to get
relaxed. (运用了 so 引导的结果状语从句)
九、（湖北省襄阳四中 2021 届高三二模）
假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友 Chris 写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：
1. 参加者；
2. 时间、地点；
3. 活动：登山、野餐等。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Chris,
How are you doing? I am writing to invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will
leave by bus at 7:00 am at the school gate. About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will
have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.
Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team. I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is
such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a great time. However, if you don’t have spare time for this trip, it
is fine. It’s just up to you.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是邀请信。
【解析】
本应用文贴近学生实际生活，虽然是命题作文，但还是保持一定的开放程度，形式是邮件，符合当今
人们常见的信息交流方式。根据提示要求，本文要涵盖以下三点内容，1. 参加者；2. 时间、地点；3. 活动：
登山、野餐等。考生需要认真谋篇，紧扣提示，准确全面地表达所要求的内容，在合适的地方拓展细节，
使行文连贯。作为邀请信，要求语言得体，邀请的语气诚恳，有礼貌。时态可以用一般现在时和一般将来
时。人称以第一人称为主，第二人称为辅。
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】
I’m very honored to invite you to join us touring to the Green Hill this Saturday. 我非常荣幸邀请您加入这
周六我们到绿山的旅行。I’m very honored to...非常荣幸做某事
【高分句型 2】
I hope you can take my advice into consideration. 我希望你能考虑一下我的建议。运用宾语从句，
take…into consideration 顾及；考虑到……
十、（江苏省南京大学附中 2021 届高三模拟）假定你是李华，你的美国笔友 Charlie 对中国文化很感
兴趣。他和家人将于今年农历春节来中国旅游，请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 欢迎他们来中国；
2. 旅行前的准备；
注意：1.词数 100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Charlie,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Charlie,
I’m delighted to know you are coming to China with your family during the Chinese Spring Festival, which is
a great chance for you to experience Chinese culture personally. Here I am writing to offer you some advice.
It would be a good idea if you could make some preparations before your travel. First of all, learn some simple
Chinese, especially the daily expressions, which makes it easier for you to communicate with the locals wherever
you go. Besides, to get yourself familiar with some Chinese local customs and traditions may help you behave
properly during your stay. What’s more, you can learn how to use chopsticks beforehand so that you can taste
different varieties of Chinese food more conveniently.
I hope you will find my advice helpful. Wish you a pleasant journey in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。要求以李明名义给美国笔友 Charlie 写一封电子邮件。
【解析】
首先审题，这篇文章要求假定你是李华，你的美国笔友 Charlie 对中国文化很感兴趣。他和家人将于今
年农历春节来中国旅游，请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 欢迎他们来中国；2. 旅行前的准备。
其次选用正确的时态，然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，
要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的
谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时
注意准确运用时态，上下文章思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词
句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文
章增色不少，如：be delighted to，First of all，What’s more，so that。还大量使用了定语从句 I’m delighted to
know you are coming to China with your family during the Chinese Spring Festival, which is a great chance for
you to experience Chinese culture personally.和 First of all, learn some simple Chinese, especially the daily
expressions, which makes it easier for you to communicate with the locals wherever you go.等多种句式结构 ，增
加了文章的可读性。
十一、（江苏省南通如皋中学 2021 届高三模拟）
学校学生广播正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（科学技术、兴趣爱好、文学艺术）中去除一个，
并从三个备选栏目（旅行、环保、健身）中挑选一个纳入该电视台节目。假设你是该校学生李华，给广播
台长写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：
1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；
2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。
【答案】Dear Present，
I’m writing to express some of my opinions towards our school’s broadcast which intends to change one of the
programs from science technology, interest hobby and literature art and select one of them from travelling,
environmental protection, fitness.
From my perspective, I would choose “interest hobby” to be the one to be eliminated. Not only is this topic out
of date, but also students’ interest varies a lot. Therefore, they may be indifferent about others’ interest and hobbies.
As for the column to be added, I highly recommend is fitness. As senior high students, so busy are we with our
study that we often forget to do some physical exercise and even don’t know how to keep fit to avoid getting ill. If
the school broadcast can provide us some useful advice on how to keep fit in a good way, which will benefit us a lot
and as a result I believe that it will be more popular among students.
I’d appreciate it very much if you could follow my advice, and I’m looking forward to hear from you as soon
as possible.
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给广播台长写一封电子邮件，表明自己对于栏目删减
的看法。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
打算：intend to do→plan to do
挑选：select→pick out
健康的：fit→healthy
结果：as a result→consequently
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：From my perspective, I would choose “interest hobby” to be the one to be eliminated.
拓展句：From my perspective, I would choose “interest hobby” to be the one that will be eliminated.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1]
I’m writing to express some of my opinions towards our school’s broadcast which intends to change one of the
programs from science technology, interest hobby and literature art and select one of them from travelling,
environmental protection, fitness.（运用了 which 引导定语从句）
[高分句型 2]
Not only is this topic out of date, but also students’ interest varies a lot. Therefore, they may be indifferent
about others’ interest and hobbies.（否定副词置于句首，运用了部分倒装）
十二、（ 2021 届高三模拟）
假设你是晨光中学的李津。下周你校将与英国友好校举办一场在线会议, 探讨如何利用网络学习英语,
请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿：
（1）介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的（至少写出两点）
（2）简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法
（3）请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。
注意：
（1）词数不少于 100；
（2）可适当加入细节, 使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn
English on the Internet.
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【答案】Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about how I
learn English on the Internet.
First, there are a lot of free resources related to English on the Internet, so I learn English by reading books or
news, listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film. Besides, the Internet gives me the
chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums,
which improves my spoken and written English.
Based on my own experience, learning English online is really a great way for English learners. But I have to
remind that not everything on the Internet is right and we should learn to identify the wrong information. In the end,
I sincerely hope that you can share your experience of learning English on the Internet.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于如何利用网络学习英语的发言稿。
【解析】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：（1）介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的（至少写出两点）
（2）简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法
（3）请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
resource; be related to; in real-time; native speaker; instance messaging; video calling; online forum; a great
way; identify; wrong information; share。
第三步：连词成句
There are a lot of free resources related to English on the Internet, so I learn English by reading books or news,
listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film.
The Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging,
video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English.
Based on my own experience, learning English online is really a great way for English learners.
I have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right and we should learn to identify the wrong
information.
I sincerely hope that you can share your experience of learning English on the Internet.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but
(also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one
hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。范文
句式复杂，如：the Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant
messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English.这句话既运用了现在
分词做方式状语，又使用了 which 引导的非限定性定语从句； learning English online is really a great way for
English learners.使用了动名词做主语；But I have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right 使用了部
分否定。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
十三、（ 2021 届高三模拟）最近你班将举行一场题为 Life in the future 的讨论会，请根
据以下要点，写一篇一百词左右的发言稿。
1.随着医学的发展，人类的平均寿命将会达到 120 岁。
2.由于新能源的出现，污染问题将得到控制。
3.人们的日常生活也将有很大的变化。如机器人可以为你做家务；椅子的颜色能够随着你所穿的衣服而
改变；人们可以到月球上去度假。
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【答案】In the future,man's life will be very different form that of today.First,with the development of
medicine,on the average,a person will live to the age of about 120.Second,because of the discovery of new
energy,the environmental pollution will be under control.Third,people's daily life will change greatly,too.For
example,robots will do all your housework for you;your chair will change its color to match what you're wearing;
Perhaps some people will go to the moon for a holiday.
【分析】本文属于提纲类作文。
【解析】
本文属于提纲类作文，要求写一篇发言稿。要注意发言稿的格式和特殊用词。未来的事情，用一般将
来时来写。要点：1.随着医学的发展，人类的平均寿命将会达到 120 岁。2.由于新能源的出现，污染问题将
得到控制。3.人们的日常生活也将有很大的变化。如机器人可以为你做家务；椅子的颜色能够随着你所穿的
衣服而改变；人们可以到月球上去度假。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇
布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意
准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量
使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】
本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不
少，如:be different from 与……不同， on the average 一般来说。还使用了宾语从句 For example,robots will do
all your housework for you;your chair will change its color to match what you're wearing 等多种句式结构，增加
了文章的可读性。
十四、（辽宁省 2021 届高三联考）
假定你是李华，你校留学生朋友 David 对中国书法(calligraphy)感兴趣，想加入书法社，故向你咨询书
法社的相关情况。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 创建书法社的目的；
2. 书法社的活动内容；
3. 欢迎加入。
注意：1.词数应为 80 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version
Dear David,
Hearing that you are interested in Chinese calligraphy, I take great pleasure in introducing the Calligraphy
Club in our school.
The aim of the Calligraphy Club is to attract students to develop an interest in Chinese culture. What’s more,
various activities are held regularly in the club, like appreciating famous calligraphy works and holding meetings
on calligraphy. All of these activities are warmly welcomed by students.
All in all, I feel delighted to invite you to join us. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【写作指导】本篇书面表达是一封回信。写作时，人称应以第三人称为主，第一、二人称为辅；时态
应用一般现在时。文章第一段应开门见山地表明写信目的；第二段是文章主体，需要阐明两个要点：1.创建
书法社的目的；2. 书法社的活动内容；第三段发出邀请，欢迎对方加入书法社。同时，考生可适当使用一
些高级词汇和句式，以提高作文的得分档次。
十五、（辽宁省朝阳市 2021 届高三模拟）
假定你是李华，上周六你校组织参观了野生动物园。请就此给校英语报写一篇征文，内容包括：
1.参观的时间和地点；
2.参观的过程和感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Visit to the Wildlife Park
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【答案】Last Saturday, my school organized a visit to the wildlife park. I've learnt a lot. First, we went to see
the wolves, which were kept outdoor. In case of being hurt, we sat in a jeep. Then we met some lovely deers and
squirrels. They were so friendly that we couldn't help feeding and playing with them. After saying good-bye to
those lovely things, we watched a wonderful animal performance, applauding and cheering for the funny and great
behaviors of the animals. Finally, we visited the display of those endangered animals, realizing that if we don't stop
polluting nature and killing the lives, we will lose more.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生就参观了野生动物园写一篇征文。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
友好的：friendly→kind
再见：say good-bye→wave good-bye
精彩的：wonderful→marvelous
展览：display→exhibit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In case of being hurt, we sat in a jeep.
拓展句：We sat in a jeep in case we get hurt.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] First, we went to see the wolves, which were kept outdoor. (运用了 which 引导的非限制性定语
从句)
[高分句型 2] After saying good-bye to those lovely things, we watched a wonderful animal performance,
applauding and cheering for the funny and great behaviors of the animals. (运用了现在分词作状语)
十六、（辽宁省大连市 2021 届高三二模）
假设你是校英文报主编，打算在校报上发表一则关于成立“跑团”的通知。内容包括：
1. 成立目的；
2. 形式：跑步时间自定，每周日上传记录到群里；
3. 欢迎报名。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
A Running Group is scheduled to start on May 15th.
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The Students’ Union
【答案】Notice
A Running Group is scheduled to start on May 15th. It is aimed to involve more students into running and
developing a good habit of physical exercise. Each participant can choose the running time flexibly but is required
to record the time or distance every day. The weekly record needs to be uploaded to the Wechat group each Sunday
so that all the runners can monitor each other’s training progress and get motivated as well.
If you are interested, please sign up and join us. You will surely get fitness and fun.
The Students’ Union
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一则关于学校成立“跑团”的通知。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
激励：encourage→motivate
培养：cultivate→develop
好的：healthy→good
打算：be aimed to = intend to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Each participant can choose the running time flexibly but is required to record the time or distance every
day.
拓展句：Although each participant is required to record the time or distance every day, they can choose the
running time flexibly.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] The weekly record needs to be uploaded to the Wechat group each Sunday so that all the runners
can monitor each other’s training progress and get motivated as well. (运用了 so that 引导目的状语从句)
[高分句型 2] If you are interested, please sign up and join us. (运用了 if 引导条件状语从句)
十七、（辽宁省 2021 届高三四模）
假如你是英华国际学校学生会主席李华，你在食堂发现有浪费粮食现象，打算向全校师生作"FOOD FOR
LIFE"的演讲，请你用英文写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1.演讲的主题；
2.演讲的原因；
3.你的倡议。
注意：
1.词数 80 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Good morning, respected teachers and dear fellow students!
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Thank you for your listening!
【答案】One possible version:
Good morning. respected teachers and dear fellow students!
I feel so honored/privileged to deliver a speech themed at food for life. The past years have witnessed the
severeness of food crisis worldwide. However, some of us haven't attached great importance to the issue. Food
waste is still a common sight, especially in the canteen.
Facing the stern reality, I think it's high time that we stopped it. Not only are we expected to raise the
awareness of saving food, but also go into action immediately. Do remember, every bit of effort counts in the
process of saving food for a better life.
Thank you for your listening!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇题为“"FOOD FOR LIFE"”的演讲稿，号召同学们
珍惜粮食。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
发表演讲：maker a speech=deliver a speech
重视：pay attention to=attached great importance to
严峻的：serious → severe
行动：take action= go into action
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Food waste is still a common sight, especially in the canteen.
拓展句：It is especially in canteen that Food waste is still a common sight.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1]：Not only are we expected to raise the awareness of saving food, but also go into action
immediately.这句话运用了倒装句。
[高分句型 2]：Do remember, every bit of effort counts in the process of saving food for a better life.这句话运
用了强调句。
十八、（ 2021 届高三模拟）
假定你是李华，你的笔友 Chris 想申请加入学校的汉语俱乐部，需要展示一项中国特色的才艺，他写信
向你求助，希望你能推荐一项中国特色的才艺展示。请给他写一封回信。内容包括：
1. 推荐才艺；
2. 推荐理由；
3. 表达祝福。
注意：1. 词数 80 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I know that you want to participate in our Chinese club in our school, which needs to show talents with
characteristics. And I am writing to advise you to take up a cooking course full of the Chinese taste, which can
arouse Chinese people’s great awareness to Chinese food. As we all know, our Chinese people attach great
importance to eating. If you can introduce a dish, l believe they can be attracted a lot. Moreover, learning to cook is
an amazing thing for all of us.
Best wish to you ! I hope you can achieve it successfully.
Yours,
Li hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，笔友 Chris 想申请加入学校的汉语俱乐部，需要展示一项中国特色
的才艺。要求考生给笔友写封回信，推荐一项中国特色的才艺展示。
【解析】
词汇积累
参加：take part in→participate in
开始学：start to learn→take up
特点：features→characteristics
对……重视：pay attention to→ attach great importance to
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I know that you want to participate in our Chinese club in our school, which needs to show talents with
characteristics. And I am writing to advise you to take up a cooking course full of the Chinese taste.
拓展句：Knowing that you want to participate in our Chinese club in our school, which needs to show talents
with characteristics, I am writing to advise you to take up a cooking course full of the Chinese taste.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] I know that you want to participate in our Chinese club in our school, which needs to show
talents with characteristics. (运用了 that 引导的宾语从句以及 which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型 2] And I am writing to advise you to take up a cooking course full of the Chinese taste, which can
arouse Chinese people’s great awareness to Chinese food. (运用了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
二十、（ 2021 届高三模拟）
假定你是某某中学校学生会主席李华，针对目前同学们逐渐返校，但是新型冠状病毒仍然没有得到完
全的控制，于是你受学生会委托，面向全校学生写一封倡议信，号召同学们在学校一定要做好自我保护。
内容包括：
1. 养成良好的个人卫生习惯；
2. 避免同学之间的密切接触，遵守学校公共秩序。
注意：1. 字数 100 字左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：新型冠状病毒 novel coronavirus
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【答案】Dear students,
Welcome back to school! Over the past few months, the novel coronavirus has made its way around China. It
has such a strong impact on our life and study. Although the virus has been under control temporarily, it is still
necessary to call on everybody to do a good job in personal protection.
First of all, wash you hands frequently and drink more water. When talking to others, you ‘d better keep a safe
distance and don’t take your face mask off, which is beneficial to yourself and others. What’s more, avoid going to
crowded places. If you go to the dinning hall or the bathroom, it’s essential to obey the orders and line up. Last but
not the least , don’t believe rumors, don’t panic.
As a famous saying goes, “winter is coming, can spring far behind?”As long as we work together to
scientifically prevent and cut off the transmission channels, we will be perfectly healthy. Let’s join hands and
prepare for a promising future.
Yours,
LiHua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封倡议信。
【解析】
第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假定你
是某某中学校学生会主席李华，针对目前同学们逐渐返校，但是新型冠状病毒仍然没有得到完全的控制，
于是你受学生会委托，面向全校学生写一封倡议信，号召同学们在学校一定要做好自我保护。
内容包括：
1. 养成良好的个人卫生习惯；
2. 避免同学之间的密切接触，遵守学校公共秩序。
第二，人称以第三人称为主称。第三，时态以一般现在时为主。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，新型
冠状病毒仍然没有得到完全的控制，发出号召。第二段，养成良好的个人卫生习惯；避免同学之间的密切
接触，遵守学校公共秩序。第三段，表达期望。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: impact on our life and study，under control, call on, keep a safe distance, be
beneficial to ,cut off.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子:although 引导的让步状语从句 Although the virus has been under control
temporarily, it is still necessary to call on everybody to do a good job in personal protection. which 引导的非限制
性定语从句 When talking to others, you ‘d better keep a safe distance and don’t take your face mask off, which is
beneficial to yourself and others. if 引导的非限制性定语从句 If you go to the dinning hall or the bathroom, it’s
essential to obey the orders and line up.
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:First of all，What’s more, Last but not the least.
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:although
引导的让步状语从句 Although the virus has been under control temporarily, it is still necessary to call on
everybody to do a good job in personal protection. which 引导的非限制性定语从句 When talking to others, you ‘d
better keep a safe distance and don’t take your face mask off, which is beneficial to yourself and others. if引导的条
件状语从句 If you go to the dinning hall or the bathroom, it’s essential to obey the orders and line up. 高级句式的
应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
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